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--->'''Emerson''': I don't mean to stereotype but my guess is an attractive man who bakes pies for a living shouldn't even spend a short amount of time in prison.
--->(Chuck gives a look of hilarious dismay)
--->(Chuck gives a look of hilarious dismay)
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--->(Chuck
(Chuck gives a look of hilarious dismay)
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---> '''Ned''': His plane was hijacked.
---> '''The Coroner''': How did ya figure that out?
---> '''Ned''': (''pause'') DNA... ish.
* In "Bad Habit", Chuck hires someone to trace her family tree, but so he doesn't recognise her, puts on a blonde hairpiece. Later, Emerson is worried that Chuck might have given herself away by doing this, and Ned says "no, she disguised herself with a hooker wig."
---> '''The Coroner''': How did ya figure that out?
---> '''Ned''': (''pause'') DNA... ish.
* In "Bad Habit", Chuck hires someone to trace her family tree, but so he doesn't recognise her, puts on a blonde hairpiece. Later, Emerson is worried that Chuck might have given herself away by doing this, and Ned says "no, she disguised herself with a hooker wig."
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'''The
---> '''Ned''':
'''Ned:''' (''pause'') DNA... ish.
* In "Bad
** Ned and Emerson locate Sister Larue's secret lover. He [[TooMuchInformation reveals]] that the last time they saw each other they made love on the table Ned and Emerson are currently eating off. On hearing, this both Ned and Emerson pause with their forks in mid-air... and then Ned just shrugs and keeps eating.
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--->'''Emerson''': (to a bickering mother and daughter) Looooooooove it. (Suddenly threatening) ''Love it.''
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---> "Oh, look. A dumb idea just found a friend."
---> "Well, that idea might make a stupid idea feel better about itself."
---> "Well, that idea might make a stupid idea feel better about itself."
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"Well, that idea might make a stupid idea feel better about itself."
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---> '''Chuck''': Remember-Mind over matter makes [[Franchise/WinnieThePooh Pooh]] unfatter.
---> '''Emerson''': I may be stuck, but I can still reach my gun.
---> '''Emerson''': I may be stuck, but I can still reach my gun.
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---> '''Emerson''':
'''Emerson:''' I may be stuck, but I can still reach my gun.
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* When a chef that Emerson and Ned are investigating gives a little TooMuchInformation while the two are eating, Emerson quickly stops eating, while Ned just ''shrugs and continues to eat.''
** Specifically, the information is about how he had sex on the table Ned's ''eating off''.
** Specifically, the information is about how he had sex on the table Ned's ''eating off''.
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--> '''Ned''': I've had girlfriends, but there were always extraneous factors.\\
'''Emerson & Chuck''': What kind of extraneous factors?\\
'''Ned''': Grew apart. Lost interest. .....had intimate relations on a bear-skin rug.\\
'''Chuck''': Oh no. Did it...?\\
'''Ned''': It did. Enough to be upsetting.
'''Emerson & Chuck''': What kind of extraneous factors?\\
'''Ned''': Grew apart. Lost interest. .....had intimate relations on a bear-skin rug.\\
'''Chuck''': Oh no. Did it...?\\
'''Ned''': It did. Enough to be upsetting.
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'''Emerson &
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** Ned's utter horror when the nun he revives starts cursing up a blind storm when she thinks she's in a crappy afterlife and someone stole her diamonds. And then his having to chase her -- "Nun on the run!" -- to end the revivification. "We're ''so'' going to hell."
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** Ned's utter horror when the nun he revives starts cursing up a blind storm when she thinks she's in a crappy afterlife and someone stole her diamonds. (Meanwhile Emerson is clearly finding it hilarious.) And then his Ned having to chase her -- "Nun on the run!" -- to end the revivification. "We're ''so'' going to hell."
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* Olive revealing her past as a horse jockey to Emerson. He snigger, before slowly giggling and finally cackling with laughter. After a brief JumpCut he is still laughing, with accompanying "horsie" hand gestures.
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* Olive revealing her past as a horse jockey to Emerson. He snigger, sniggers, before slowly giggling and finally cackling with laughter. After a brief JumpCut he is still laughing, with accompanying "horsie" hand gestures.
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** While Ned tries to escape through the area of the funeral home where they store the bodies, he accidentally revives two corpses. One is an old man who angrily asks him "What part of 'Do not resuscitate' do you not understand?" before Ned re-deads him.
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* Olive revealing her past as a horse jockey to Emerson. He snigger, before slowly giggling and finally cackling with laughter. After a brief JumpCut he is still laughing, with accompanying "horsie" hand gestures.
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* Olive revealing her past as a horse jockey to Emerson. He snigger, before slowly giggling and finally cackling with laughter. After a brief JumpCut he is still laughing, with accompanying "horsie" hand gestures.gestures.
** His uncontrollable giggling at Olive's expense returns when he finds her disguised as a jockey.
** His uncontrollable giggling at Olive's expense returns when he finds her disguised as a jockey.
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'''Ned''': It did. Enough to be upsetting.
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'''Ned''': It did. Enough to be upsetting.upsetting.
* Olive revealing her past as a horse jockey to Emerson. He snigger, before slowly giggling and finally cackling with laughter. After a brief JumpCut he is still laughing, with accompanying "horsie" hand gestures.
* Olive revealing her past as a horse jockey to Emerson. He snigger, before slowly giggling and finally cackling with laughter. After a brief JumpCut he is still laughing, with accompanying "horsie" hand gestures.
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** Ned's utter horror when the nun he revives starts cursing up a blind storm when she thinks she's in a crappy afterlife and someone stole her diamonds. And then his having to chase her -- "Nun on the run!" -- to end the revivification. "We're ''so'' going to hell."
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** Also from "Dummy": Mark, the executive trying to sell a fuel-efficient car powered by dandelions, pursues Ned, Chuck, and Emerson by chasing them in [[HypocriticalHumor a Hummer.]]
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* In one episode, when Emerson is too shocked to speak, the ''narrator'' [[PhraseCatcher says his usual line "Oh, HELL no!" instead]].
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* In one episode, when Emerson is too shocked to speak, the ''narrator'' [[PhraseCatcher says his usual line "Oh, HELL no!" instead]].instead.
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* In one episode, when Emerson is too shocked to speak, the ''narrator'' says his usual line "Oh, HELL no!" instead.
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* In one episode, when Emerson is too shocked to speak, the ''narrator'' [[PhraseCatcher says his usual line "Oh, HELL no!" instead.instead]].
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** Really, the clown-car crash bears repeating, as it's an OverlyLongGag of all the clowns being wheeled out of the crashed car, and they just. Keep. Coming.
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** And another episode has one of the week's murder suspects, attempting to explain why he's innocent, starting his expositional speech with "the facts were these."
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** And another episode has one of the week's murder suspects, attempting to explain why he's innocent, starting his expositional speech with "the facts were these.""
* Ned discussing his past relationships (read while keeping his " touch -> life" powers in mind):
--> '''Ned''': I've had girlfriends, but there were always extraneous factors.\\
'''Emerson & Chuck''': What kind of extraneous factors?\\
'''Ned''': Grew apart. Lost interest. .....had intimate relations on a bear-skin rug.\\
'''Chuck''': Oh no. Did it...?\\
'''Ned''': It did. Enough to be upsetting.
* Ned discussing his past relationships (read while keeping his " touch -> life" powers in mind):
--> '''Ned''': I've had girlfriends, but there were always extraneous factors.\\
'''Emerson & Chuck''': What kind of extraneous factors?\\
'''Ned''': Grew apart. Lost interest. .....had intimate relations on a bear-skin rug.\\
'''Chuck''': Oh no. Did it...?\\
'''Ned''': It did. Enough to be upsetting.
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* In one episode, when Emerson is too shocked to speak, the ''narrator'' says his usual line "Oh, HELL no!" instead.
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* In one episode, when Emerson is too shocked to speak, the ''narrator'' says his usual line "Oh, HELL no!" instead.instead.
** And another episode has one of the week's murder suspects, attempting to explain why he's innocent, starting his expositional speech with "the facts were these."
** And another episode has one of the week's murder suspects, attempting to explain why he's innocent, starting his expositional speech with "the facts were these."
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** Specifically, the information is about how he had sex on the table Ned's ''eating off''.
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It\'s been a while, so I forget which episode or what happened, but I remember laughing hard at this part.
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* As Olive pours her heart out to Pigby, the Narrator notes "Pigby enjoyed the warbling sounds that the nice-smelling thing that fed him made."
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* As Olive pours her heart out to Pigby, the Narrator notes "Pigby enjoyed the warbling sounds that the nice-smelling thing that fed him made.""
* In one episode, when Emerson is too shocked to speak, the ''narrator'' says his usual line "Oh, HELL no!" instead.
* In one episode, when Emerson is too shocked to speak, the ''narrator'' says his usual line "Oh, HELL no!" instead.
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* When a chef that Emerson and Ned are investigating gives a little TooMuchInformation while the two are eating, Emerson quickly stops eating, while Ned just ''shrugs and continues to eat.''
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* When a chef that Emerson and Ned are investigating gives a little TooMuchInformation while the two are eating, Emerson quickly stops eating, while Ned just ''shrugs and continues to eat.''''
* As Olive pours her heart out to Pigby, the Narrator notes "Pigby enjoyed the warbling sounds that the nice-smelling thing that fed him made."
* As Olive pours her heart out to Pigby, the Narrator notes "Pigby enjoyed the warbling sounds that the nice-smelling thing that fed him made."
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** Chuck slams the funeral director's coffin lid on him and it locks, meaning that Ned won't be able to touch him again and someone else nearby will soon die. Emerson shouts "Oh, HELL no!" and races to get as far away as possible, crossing himself the whole time.
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---> '''Chuck''': Remember-Mind over matter makes [[WinnieThePooh Pooh]] unfatter.
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---> '''Chuck''': Remember-Mind over matter makes [[WinnieThePooh [[Franchise/WinnieThePooh Pooh]] unfatter.
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** "I wanted to be a Jedi!" *asskicking ensues*
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** "Kick, Pooh! Kick!"
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** "Kick, Pooh! Kick!"Kick!"
* When a chef that Emerson and Ned are investigating gives a little TooMuchInformation while the two are eating, Emerson quickly stops eating, while Ned just ''shrugs and continues to eat.''
* When a chef that Emerson and Ned are investigating gives a little TooMuchInformation while the two are eating, Emerson quickly stops eating, while Ned just ''shrugs and continues to eat.''
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---> "Well, that idea might make a stupid idea feel better about itself."
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* The moment in episode 2, "Dummy", where the villain has just gotten into his triumphant monologue (which contains gems like "So ''what'' if there might be a bit of a possibility that if you drive in 70 mph with the headlights on and the seat warmer on low, a shortcircuit in the radio causes a cataclysmic chain reaction which causes it and its precious human cargo to go to ''smithereens''!") while the heroes are trapped. Cut back to vision from the trap where you can see him gestikulating wildly in silence, where the narrator says
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* The moment in episode 2, "Dummy", where the villain has just gotten into his triumphant monologue (which contains gems like "So ''what'' if there might be a bit of a possibility that if you drive in 70 mph with the headlights on and the seat warmer on low, a shortcircuit in the radio causes a cataclysmic chain reaction which causes it and its precious human cargo to go to ''smithereens''!") while the heroes are trapped. Cut back to vision from inside the trap where you can see him gestikulating gesticulating wildly in silence, where the narrator sayssilence:
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-->'''Emerson:''' Oooh, a 'magic' show! Where did I put that rat's ass that I could give? Oh yeah -- I don't have it.
-->'''Emerson:''' Oooh, a 'magic' show! Where did I put that rat's ass that I could give? Oh yeah -- I don't have it.
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-->'''Emerson:''' Oooh,
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-->'''Emerson:''' Oooh, a 'magic' show! Where did I put that rat's ass that I could give? Oh yeah -- I don't have it.
-->'''Emerson:''' Oooh, a 'magic' show! Where did I put that rat's ass that I could give? Oh yeah -- I don't have it.