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* When Bower thaws out Commander Payton, he quickly briefs him on what he knows, and tries to jog his memory to get the Commander's help in figuring out what's wrong with the ship. After a few moments of thought, Payton asks with no small degree of irritation for Bower to stop shining his flashlight in his face.
* After Payton is briefly unresponsive to Bower during his crawling through the air ducts, the latter begins to freak out from the mercilessly claustrophobic environment. When telling him to calm down and try to think of something else isn't working, Payton tells Bower that [[BlatantLies the door to the bridge has opened]].
* After Payton is briefly unresponsive to Bower during his crawling through the air ducts, the latter begins to freak out from the mercilessly claustrophobic environment. When telling him to calm down and try to think of something else isn't working, Payton tells Bower that [[BlatantLies the door to the bridge has opened]].
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* When Bower thaws out Commander Lieutenant Payton, he quickly briefs him on what he knows, and tries to jog his memory to get the Commander's lieutenant's help in figuring out what's wrong with the ship. After a few moments of thought, Payton asks with no small degree of irritation for Bower to stop shining his flashlight in his face.
* After Payton is briefly unresponsive to Bower during his crawling through the air ducts, the latter begins to freak out from the mercilessly claustrophobic environment. When telling him to calm down and try to think of something else isn't working, Payton tells Bower that [[BlatantLiesthe door he's managed to get the bridge has opened]].door open]].
* After Payton is briefly unresponsive to Bower during his crawling through the air ducts, the latter begins to freak out from the mercilessly claustrophobic environment. When telling him to calm down and try to think of something else isn't working, Payton tells Bower that [[BlatantLies
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* When Bower and company meet up with [[CloudCuckoolander Leland]], he immediately offers food made from... something.
-->'''Leland:''' It's difficult to season it when you're working with a motor oil base!
** And moments later when Bower asks how long he's been awake:
-->'''Leland:''' Let's see, what day is it? Tuesday, so... I have no idea.
-->'''Leland:''' It's difficult to season it when you're working with a motor oil base!
** And moments later when Bower asks how long he's been awake:
-->'''Leland:''' Let's see, what day is it? Tuesday, so... I have no idea.
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* When Bower thaws out Commander Payton, he quickly briefs him on what he knows, and tries to jog his memory to get the Commander's help in figuring out what's wrong with the ship. After a few moments of thought, Payton asks with no small degree of irritation for Bower to stop shining his flashlight in his face.
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* When Bower thaws out Commander Payton, he quickly briefs him on what he knows, and tries to jog his memory to get the Commander's help in figuring out what's wrong with the ship. After a few moments of thought, Payton asks with no small degree of irritation for Bower to stop shining his flashlight in Payton's face.
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--> '''Payton''': Yeah, I'm kidding you. ''[Bowers chuckles nervously]'' You see? Now that's not so bad. We're gonna get you through this. We're gonna figure this out together.
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--> '''Payton''': Yeah, I'm kidding you. ''[Bowers ''[Bower chuckles nervously]'' You see? Now that's not so bad. We're gonna get you through this. We're gonna figure this out together.
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* After Payton is briefly unresponsive to Bower during his crawling through the air ducts, the latter begins to freak out from the mercilessly claustrophobic environment. When telling him to calm down and try to think of something else isn't working, Payton tells Bower that [[BlatantLies that the door to the bridge has opened]].
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* After Payton is briefly unresponsive to Bower during his crawling through the air ducts, the latter begins to freak out from the mercilessly claustrophobic environment. When telling him to calm down and try to think of something else isn't working, Payton tells Bower that [[BlatantLies that the door to the bridge has opened]].
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* The final scene with all of the crypods popping out of the water can come off as unintentionally funny, partly due to the pods breaching like dolphins, and partially due to their bearing a passing resemblance to [[Series/DoctorWho a British Police Box.]]
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* The final scene with all of After Payton is briefly unresponsive to Bower during his crawling through the crypods popping air ducts, the latter begins to freak out of from the water can come off as unintentionally funny, partly due mercilessly claustrophobic environment. When telling him to calm down and try to think of something else isn't working, Payton tells Bower that [[BlatantLies that the door to the pods breaching like dolphins, and partially due to their bearing a passing resemblance to [[Series/DoctorWho a British Police Box.]]bridge has opened]].
--> '''Bower''': ''[{{Beat}}]'' You fucking kidding me?
--> '''Payton''': Yeah, I'm kidding you. ''[Bowers chuckles nervously]'' You see? Now that's not so bad. We're gonna get you through this. We're gonna figure this out together.
--> '''Bower''': ''[{{Beat}}]'' You fucking kidding me?
--> '''Payton''': Yeah, I'm kidding you. ''[Bowers chuckles nervously]'' You see? Now that's not so bad. We're gonna get you through this. We're gonna figure this out together.
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* Bower stumbles into a fight between Nadia and Manh, and is more than a little frustrated with them, making the argument that in their situation, "a little ''[[PrecisionFStrike fucking]]'' solidarity" would go a long way. Ben Foster's weary, aggravated delivery is really what sells the line.
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* Bower stumbles into a fight between Nadia and Manh, and is more than a little frustrated with them, making the argument that in their situation, "a little ''[[PrecisionFStrike fucking]]'' solidarity" would go a long way. Ben Foster's weary, aggravated delivery is really what sells the line.line.
* The final scene with all of the crypods popping out of the water can come off as [[Main/{{Narm}} unintentionally funny]], partly due to the pods breaching like dolphins, and partially due to their bearing a passing resemblance to [[Series/DoctorWho a British Police Box.]]
* The final scene with all of the crypods popping out of the water can come off as [[Main/{{Narm}} unintentionally funny]], partly due to the pods breaching like dolphins, and partially due to their bearing a passing resemblance to [[Series/DoctorWho a British Police Box.]]
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* Bower finds himself in a standoff with two other crewmembers, and is more than a little frustrated with the situation, making the argument that in their situation, "a little ''[[PrecisionFStrike fucking]]'' solidarity" would go a long way.
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* Bower finds himself in stumbles into a standoff with two other crewmembers, fight between Nadia and Manh, and is more than a little frustrated with the situation, them, making the argument that in their situation, "a little ''[[PrecisionFStrike fucking]]'' solidarity" would go a long way.way. Ben Foster's weary, aggravated delivery is really what sells the line.
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* When Bower thaws out Commander Payton, he quickly briefs him on what he knows, and tries to jog his memory to get the Commander's help in figuring out what's wrong with the ship. After a few moments of thought, Payton asks with no small degree of irritation for Bower to stop shining his flashlight in Payton's face.
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* When Bower thaws out Commander Payton, he quickly briefs him on what he knows, and tries to jog his memory to get the Commander's help in figuring out what's wrong with the ship. After a few moments of thought, Payton asks with no small degree of irritation for Bower to stop shining his flashlight in Payton's face.face.
* Bower finds himself in a standoff with two other crewmembers, and is more than a little frustrated with the situation, making the argument that in their situation, "a little ''[[PrecisionFStrike fucking]]'' solidarity" would go a long way.
* Bower finds himself in a standoff with two other crewmembers, and is more than a little frustrated with the situation, making the argument that in their situation, "a little ''[[PrecisionFStrike fucking]]'' solidarity" would go a long way.
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* The final scene with all of the crypods popping out of the water can come off as unintentionally funny, partly due to the pods breaching like dolphins, and partially due to their bearing a passing resemblance to [[Franchise/DoctorWho a British Police Box.]]
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* The final scene with all of the crypods popping out of the water can come off as unintentionally funny, partly due to the pods breaching like dolphins, and partially due to their bearing a passing resemblance to [[Franchise/DoctorWho [[Series/DoctorWho a British Police Box.]]
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* Bower does find himself falling from great heights with a disconcerting consistency. It wouldn't be funny if he was ever seriously hurt, but it ends up resembling a RunningGag, with one such fall being due to a weakened floor panel giving way suddenly as if it were a TrapDoor.
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* Bower does find himself falling from great heights with a disconcerting consistency. It wouldn't be funny if he was ever seriously hurt, but it ends up resembling a RunningGag, with one such fall being due to a weakened floor panel giving way suddenly as if it were a TrapDoor.TrapDoor.
* When Bower thaws out Commander Payton, he quickly briefs him on what he knows, and tries to jog his memory to get the Commander's help in figuring out what's wrong with the ship. After a few moments of thought, Payton asks with no small degree of irritation for Bower to stop shining his flashlight in Payton's face.
* When Bower thaws out Commander Payton, he quickly briefs him on what he knows, and tries to jog his memory to get the Commander's help in figuring out what's wrong with the ship. After a few moments of thought, Payton asks with no small degree of irritation for Bower to stop shining his flashlight in Payton's face.
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* The final scene with all of the crypods popping out of the water can come off as unintentionally funny, partly due to the pods breaching like dolphins, and partially due to their bearing a passing resemblance to [[Franchise/DoctorWho a British Police Box.]]
* Bower does find himself falling from great heights with a disconcerting consistency. It wouldn't be funny if he was ever seriously hurt, but it ends up resembling a RunningGag, with one such fall being due to a weakened floor panel giving way suddenly as if it were a TrapDoor.
* Bower does find himself falling from great heights with a disconcerting consistency. It wouldn't be funny if he was ever seriously hurt, but it ends up resembling a RunningGag, with one such fall being due to a weakened floor panel giving way suddenly as if it were a TrapDoor.
