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* Harry jumping up and down like a schoolgirl after realizing he's in the StarWars universe and he now has a [[{{Nerdgasm}} motherfucking]] [[LaserBlade LIGHTSABER]]!
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** Which might become a FunnyAneurysmMoment once we see what they are capable of.
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* Harry referring to [[EverythingsBetterWithRainbows the Rainbow of Light]] as "the power of friendship and skittles."
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* Harry referring to [[EverythingsBetterWithRainbows the Rainbow of Light]] as "the power of friendship and skittles.Advertising/{{skittles}}."
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* Plan C:[[spoiler:Covering Rainbow Dash in chocolate and tempting Pinkie Pie to eat it off her.]] Hurray for ChekhovsGun.
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** Followed by is increasingly ludicrous ideas on how he could [[spoiler: field a team of lightsaber wielding ponies]]
* Harry jumping up and down like a schoolgirl after realizing he's in the [[spoiler: StarWars universe and he now has a [[{{Nerdgasm}} motherfucking]] [[LaserBlade LIGHTSABER]]]]!
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* Plan C:[[spoiler:Covering C: Covering Rainbow Dash in chocolate and tempting Pinkie Pie to eat it off her.]] her. Hurray for ChekhovsGun.
* Harry jumping up and down like a schoolgirl after realizing he's in the[[spoiler: StarWars universe and he now has a [[{{Nerdgasm}} motherfucking]] [[LaserBlade LIGHTSABER]]]]!
LIGHTSABER]]!
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-->'''Harry:''' ''(after'' ''[[spoiler: Derpiel]]'' ''has ripped through a tree with her'' RazorFloss ''hair)'' Looks like you’ve found your true calling in life. Give up the whole demon thing and take up lumberjacking – I’ve heard it’s a pretty lucrative career. [[Series/MontyPythonsFlyingCircus Plus, you get to dress up in women’s clothing and hang around in bars.]]
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-->'''Harry:''' ''(after'' ''[[spoiler: Derpiel]]'' ''Derpiel'' ''has ripped through a tree with her'' RazorFloss ''hair)'' Looks like you’ve found your true calling in life. Give up the whole demon thing and take up lumberjacking – I’ve heard it’s a pretty lucrative career. [[Series/MontyPythonsFlyingCircus Plus, you get to dress up in women’s clothing and hang around in bars.]]
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** 2. Harry is now a hormonal teenager. In his teenage years, Mr. Dresden had a thing for brash, smart-assed tomboys. Result: Harry thinks that Human Rainbow Dash is hot. It comes to a head when [[spoiler: he has to distract her from some awkward questions about Equestria and does so by kissing her. She then [[GroinAttack kicks him in the balls]] and calls him a perv.]]
*** [[spoiler:[[FridgeBrilliance It's the chapter title]][[note]]"Sometimes, [[{{Foreshadowing}} Life Just Kicks You in the Balls]]"[[/note]] [[FridgeBrilliance for a reason...]]]]
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***[[FridgeBrilliance It's the chapter title]][[note]]"Sometimes, [[{{Foreshadowing}} Life Just Kicks You in the Balls]]"[[/note]] [[FridgeBrilliance for a reason...
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** 2. Harry is now a hormonal teenager. In his teenage years, Mr. Dresden had a thing for brash, smart-assed tomboys. Result: Harry thinks that Human Rainbow Dash is hot. It comes to a head when [[spoiler: he has to distract her from some awkward questions about Equestria and does so by kissing her. She then [[GroinAttack kicks him in the Balls]] balls]] and calls him a perv. [[FridgeBrilliance perv.]]
***[[spoiler:[[FridgeBrilliance It's the chapter title]][[note]]"Sometimes, [[{{Foreshadowing}} Life Just Kicks You in the Balls]]"[[/note]] [[FridgeBrilliance for a reason...]] ]]]]]]
***[[spoiler:[[FridgeBrilliance It's the chapter title]][[note]]"Sometimes, [[{{Foreshadowing}} Life Just Kicks You in the Balls]]"[[/note]] [[FridgeBrilliance for a reason...
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** 2. Harry is now a hormonal teenager. In his teenage years, Mr. Dresden had a thing for brash, smart-assed tomboys. Result: Harry thinks that Human Rainbow Dash is hot. It comes to a head when [[spoiler: he has to distract her from some awkward questions about Equestria and does so by kissing her. She then [[GroinAttack kicks him in the Balls]] and calls him a perv. [[FridgeBrilliance It's the chapter title]][[note]]"Sometimes, [[{{Foreshadowing}} Life Just Kicks You in the Balls]]"[[/note]] [[FridgeBrilliance for a reason...]] ]]
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* Three things from the Sequel.
** 1. Harry's first plan to retrieve the crown is too try and break the gender barrier on the Princess of the Fall formal competition. Michael is not amused
** 2. Harry is now a Hormonal teenager. In his teenage years, Mr. Dresden had a Thing for Brash, Smart Assed Tomboys. result: Harry thinks that Human Rainbow Dash is Hot[[spoiler: it comes to a head when he has to distract her from some awkward questions about Equestria and does so by Kissing Her, She then [[GroinAttack Kicks him in the Balls]] and calls him a perv]]
** 3.Harry's response to Sunset's ultimatum? [[WhyDontYouJustShootHim Pull out his Gun.]]
-->'''Harry''': "Oh, I'm sorry. [[PulpFiction Did I break your concentration?]]
** 1. Harry's first plan to retrieve the crown is too try and break the gender barrier on the Princess of the Fall formal competition. Michael is not amused
** 2. Harry is now a Hormonal teenager. In his teenage years, Mr. Dresden had a Thing for Brash, Smart Assed Tomboys. result: Harry thinks that Human Rainbow Dash is Hot[[spoiler: it comes to a head when he has to distract her from some awkward questions about Equestria and does so by Kissing Her, She then [[GroinAttack Kicks him in the Balls]] and calls him a perv]]
** 3.Harry's response to Sunset's ultimatum? [[WhyDontYouJustShootHim Pull out his Gun.]]
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* Three things from the Sequel.
[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/114804/1/dresden-gets-schooled/sometimes-life-just-kicks-you-in-the-balls sequel]].
** 1. Harry's first plan to retrieve the crown istoo to try and break the gender barrier on the Princess of the Fall formal Formal competition. Michael is not amused
** 2. Harry is now aHormonal hormonal teenager. In his teenage years, Mr. Dresden had a Thing thing for Brash, Smart Assed Tomboys. result: brash, smart-assed tomboys. Result: Harry thinks that Human Rainbow Dash is Hot[[spoiler: it hot. It comes to a head when [[spoiler: he has to distract her from some awkward questions about Equestria and does so by Kissing Her, kissing her. She then [[GroinAttack Kicks kicks him in the Balls]] and calls him a perv]]
perv.]]
** 3. Harry's response to Sunset's ultimatum? [[WhyDontYouJustShootHim Pull out hisGun.gun.]]
-->'''Harry''': "Oh, I'm sorry. [[PulpFiction Did I break yourconcentration?]]concentration?]]"
** 1. Harry's first plan to retrieve the crown is
** 2. Harry is now a
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** 3.Harry's response to Sunset's ultimatum? [[WhyDontYouJustShootHim Pull out his Gun.]]
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** 3.Harry's response to Sunset's ultimatum? [[WhyDontYouJustShootHim Pull out his Gun.]]]]
-->'''Harry''': "Oh, I'm sorry. [[PulpFiction Did I break your concentration?]]
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** 1. Harry's first plan to retrieve the crown is too try and break the gender barrier on the Princess of the Fall formal competition.
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** 2. Harry is now a Hormonal teenager. In his teenage years, Mr. Dresden had a Thing for Brash, Smart Assed Tomboys. result: Harry thinks that Human Rainbow Dash is Hot[[spoiler: it comes too a head when he has two distract her from some awkward questions about Equestria and does so by Kissing Her, She then [[GroinAttack Kicks him in the Balls]] and calls him a perv]]
** 3.Harry's response to Sunset's ultimatum? [[WhyDontYouJustHhootHim Pull out his Gun.]]
** 3.Harry's response to Sunset's ultimatum? [[WhyDontYouJustHhootHim Pull out his Gun.]]
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** 2. Harry is now a Hormonal teenager. In his teenage years, Mr. Dresden had a Thing for Brash, Smart Assed Tomboys. result: Harry thinks that Human Rainbow Dash is Hot[[spoiler: it comes too to a head when he has two to distract her from some awkward questions about Equestria and does so by Kissing Her, She then [[GroinAttack Kicks him in the Balls]] and calls him a perv]]
** 3.Harry's response to Sunset's ultimatum?[[WhyDontYouJustHhootHim [[WhyDontYouJustShootHim Pull out his Gun.]]
** 3.Harry's response to Sunset's ultimatum?
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** 3.Harry's response to Sunset's ultimatum? [[whydontyoujustshoothim Pull out his Gun.]]
** 3.Harry's response to Sunset's ultimatum? [[whydontyoujustshoothim Pull out his Gun.]]
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** 2. Harry is now a Hormonal teenager. In his teenage years, Mr. Dresden had a Thing for Brash, Smart Assed Tomboys. result: Harry thinks that Human Rainbow Dash is Hot[[spoiler: it comes too a head when he has two distract her from some akward awkward questions about equestria Equestria and does so by Kissing Her, She then [[groinattack [[GroinAttack Kicks him in the Balls]] and calls him a perv]]
** 3.Harry's response to Sunset's ultimatum?[[whydontyoujustshoothim [[WhyDontYouJustHhootHim Pull out his Gun.]]
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* Nickodemus getting stuck during his escape because his car's engine block was mysteriously replaced with a hamster ball.
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*Three things from the Sequel.
**1. Harry's first plan to retrieve the crown is too try and break the gender barrier on the Princess of the Fall formal competition.
Michael is not amused
**2. Harry is now a Hormonal teenager. In his teenage years, Mr. Dresden had a Thing for Brash, Smart Assed Tomboys. result: Harry thinks that Human Rainbow Dash is Hot[[spoiler: it comes too a head when he has two distract her from some akward questions about equestria and does so by Kissing Her, She then [[groinattack Kicks him in the Balls]] and calls him a perv]]
**3.Harry's response to Sunset's ultimatum? [[whydontyoujustshoothim Pull out his Gun.]]
*Three things from the Sequel.
**1. Harry's first plan to retrieve the crown is too try and break the gender barrier on the Princess of the Fall formal competition.
Michael is not amused
**2. Harry is now a Hormonal teenager. In his teenage years, Mr. Dresden had a Thing for Brash, Smart Assed Tomboys. result: Harry thinks that Human Rainbow Dash is Hot[[spoiler: it comes too a head when he has two distract her from some akward questions about equestria and does so by Kissing Her, She then [[groinattack Kicks him in the Balls]] and calls him a perv]]
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* Chapter 22: Sanya [[BigDamnHeroes shows up in Canada]] [[ItMakesSenseInContext to help Harry, Lash and the Mane Six to retake the animation studio]] and stop Discord and Nicodemus. HilarityEnsues.
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* Chapter 22: Sanya [[BigDamnHeroes shows up in Canada]] [[ItMakesSenseInContext to help Harry, Lash and the Mane Six to retake the animation studio]] and stop Discord and Nicodemus. HilarityEnsues.HilarityEnsues.
* Nickodemus getting stuck during his escape because his car's engine block was mysteriously replaced with a hamster ball.
* Nickodemus getting stuck during his escape because his car's engine block was mysteriously replaced with a hamster ball.
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* Chapter 22: Sanya [[BigDamnHeroes shows up in Canada]] [[ItMakesSenseInContext to help Harry, Lash and the Mane Six to retake the animation studio]] and stop Discord and Nicodemus. HilarityEnsues.
* Chapter 22: Sanya [[BigDamnHeroes shows up in Canada]] [[ItMakesSenseInContext to help Harry, Lash and the Mane Six to retake the animation studio]] and stop Discord and Nicodemus. HilarityEnsues.
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* Upon seeing that his [[spoiler: freeing Celestia from Discord's brainwashing also depowered her and turned her into a younger version of herself, at least temporarily.]]
-->'''Harry:''' "I think I broke the princess."
* Upon seeing that his [[spoiler: freeing Celestia from Discord's brainwashing also depowered her and turned her into a younger version of herself, at least temporarily.]]
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-->'''Harry:''' ''(after'' ''[[spoiler: Derpiel]]'' ''has ripped through a tree with her'' RazorFloss ''hair)'' Looks like you’ve found your true calling in life. Give up the whole demon thing and take up lumberjacking – I’ve heard it’s a pretty lucrative career. [[Series/MontyPythonsFlyingCircus Plus, you get to dress up in women’s clothing and hang around in bars.]]
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-->'''Harry:''' ''(after'' ''[[spoiler: Derpiel]]'' ''has ripped through a tree with her'' RazorFloss ''hair)'' Looks like you’ve found your true calling in life. Give up the whole demon thing and take up lumberjacking – I’ve heard it’s a pretty lucrative career. [[Series/MontyPythonsFlyingCircus Plus, you get to dress up in women’s clothing and hang around in bars.]]]]
* Harry referring to [[EverythingsBetterWithRainbows the Rainbow of Light]] as "the power of friendship and skittles."
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-->'''Harry:''' ''(after'' ''[[spoiler: Derpiel]]'' ''has ripped through a tree with her'' RazorFloss ''hair)'' Looks like you’ve found your true calling in life. Give up the whole demon thing and take up lumberjacking – I’ve heard it’s a pretty lucrative career. [[MontyPythonsFlyingCircus [[Series/MontyPythonsFlyingCircus Plus, you get to dress up in women’s clothing and hang around in bars.]]
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* Harry in all of his smartass-ery glory.
-->'''Harry:''' ''(after'' ''[[spoiler: Derpiel]]'' ''has ripped through a tree with her'' RazorFloss ''hair)'' Looks like you’ve found your true calling in life. Give up the whole demon thing and take up lumberjacking – I’ve heard it’s a pretty lucrative career. [[MontyPythonsFlyingCircus Plus, you get to dress up in women’s clothing and hang around in bars.]]
* Harry in all of his smartass-ery glory.
-->'''Harry:''' ''(after'' ''[[spoiler: Derpiel]]'' ''has ripped through a tree with her'' RazorFloss ''hair)'' Looks like you’ve found your true calling in life. Give up the whole demon thing and take up lumberjacking – I’ve heard it’s a pretty lucrative career. [[MontyPythonsFlyingCircus Plus, you get to dress up in women’s clothing and hang around in bars.]]
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* The entire first half of chapter 13. Oh, Pinkie, you're so [[ObliviousToLove oblivious...]]
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* Harry jumping up and down like a schoolgirl after realizing he's in the [[spoiler: StarsWars StarWars universe and he now has a [[Nerdgasm [[{{Nerdgasm}} motherfucking]] [[LaserBlade LIGHTSABER]]]]!
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* Plan C:[[spoiler:Covering Rainbow Dash in chocolate and tempting Pinkie Pie to eat it off her.]] Hurray for ChekhovsGun.
* Harry jumping up and down like a schoolgirl after realizing he's in the [[spoiler: StarsWars universe and he now has a [[Nerdgasm motherfucking]] [[LaserBlade LIGHTSABER]]]]!
* [[StoryBreakerPower "Unicorns are hax."]]
* [[TheNicknamer Harry's]] names for the possessed ponies: Psycho Pie, Demonshy, Deviljack, Fiendity...
* Plan C:[[spoiler:Covering Rainbow Dash in chocolate and tempting Pinkie Pie to eat it off her.]] Hurray for ChekhovsGun.
* Harry jumping up and down like a schoolgirl after realizing he's in the [[spoiler: StarsWars universe and he now has a [[Nerdgasm motherfucking]] [[LaserBlade LIGHTSABER]]]]!
* [[StoryBreakerPower "Unicorns are hax."]]
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