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* As Tulip and Mikayla are walking from the bus, Tulip is [[BizarreTasteInFood munching on an onion]] similarly to how most people eat apples. Mikayla even jokes that the camp won't like Tulip stinking up the whole state with her onion breath.
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* As Tulip and Mikayla are walking from the bus, Tulip is [[BizarreTasteInFood munching on an a whole raw onion]] similarly to how most people eat apples. Mikayla even jokes that the camp won't like Tulip stinking up the whole state with her onion breath.
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-->'''Hazel:''' This is Louis. He's a good sort... ''(whispers conspiratorially) but barking mad.''
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-->'''Hazel:''' This is Louis. He's a good sort... ''(whispers conspiratorially) '' ([[PoseOfSilence whispers conspiratorially]]) but barking mad.''
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* One-One has apparently provided a pre-recorded orientation video for newcomers to the Infinity Train. Among the questions he speculates people will have are "Where am I? Why am I here? [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Are snacks provided?]]"
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* One-One has apparently provided a pre-recorded orientation video for newcomers to the Infinity Train. Among the questions he speculates people will have are "Where am I? Why am I here? [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Are snacks provided?]]"provided?"
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-->'''Glad-One''': It involves robots and coding and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers juice boxes]] and . . .
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-->'''Glad-One''': It involves robots and coding and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers juice boxes]] boxes and . . .
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* One-One wasn't just looking for his mum. He was looking for the [[JustForPun motherboard]].
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* One-One wasn't just looking for his mum. He was looking for the [[JustForPun [[{{Pun}} motherboard]].
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!!Book 3
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!!Book 3
Three
* Simon asking The Cat why Grace has been acting differently.
-->'''Simon:''' I want something that'll tell me what's wrong with Grace.
-->'''The Cat:''' Oh, piffle. I can do that. One, she's very full of herself. Two, she has no respect for personal property. Three-
-->'''Simon:''' This isn't a joke!
-->'''Simon:''' I want something that'll tell me what's wrong with Grace.
-->'''The Cat:''' Oh, piffle. I can do that. One, she's very full of herself. Two, she has no respect for personal property. Three-
-->'''Simon:''' This isn't a joke!
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!!Book 4
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!!Book 4
Four
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* A little bit of BlackComedy when Jesse gets a brand new harpoon pack, and [[WhatAnIdiot proceeds to point them at his own eyes.]]
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* A little bit of BlackComedy when Jesse gets a brand new harpoon pack, and [[WhatAnIdiot [[RecklessGunUsage proceeds to point them at his own eyes.]]
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* Another case of MundameMadeAwesome: after Tulip goes through all of the ball pit games, Khaki Bottoms wants Tulip to engage in "The Feast of a Thousand Chicken Nuggets".
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* Another case of MundameMadeAwesome: MundaneMadeAwesome: after Tulip goes through all of the ball pit games, Khaki Bottoms wants Tulip to engage in "The Feast of a Thousand Chicken Nuggets".
