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* Later in the chapter, when Rainbow wants to chase after and investigate Sour Sweet.
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* Later in the chapter, In Chapter 16, when Rainbow wants to chase after and investigate Sour Sweet.
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* Later in the chapter, when Rainbow wants to chase after and investigate Sour Sweet.
-->'''Sunset''': We don't need to get distracted again, Marred. The girls are waiting for us. She’s just some angry AlphaBitch. It's nothing.\\
'''Rainbow''': [[WithDueRespect All due respect, Stanza?]]\\
'''Sunset''': Am I not gonna like this?\\
'''Rainbow''': Last time there was an angry alpha bitch attending a school that involved magic-?\\
'''Sunset''' ([[IResembleThatRemark hesitantly]]): Point made.
-->'''Sunset''': We don't need to get distracted again, Marred. The girls are waiting for us. She’s just some angry AlphaBitch. It's nothing.\\
'''Rainbow''': [[WithDueRespect All due respect, Stanza?]]\\
'''Sunset''': Am I not gonna like this?\\
'''Rainbow''': Last time there was an angry alpha bitch attending a school that involved magic-?\\
'''Sunset''' ([[IResembleThatRemark hesitantly]]): Point made.
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* All of chapter 16.5, the April Fools' chapter, in which the story is set up as a movie directed by the actual [[Anime/YuGiOhGX Uria, Lord of Searing Flames]]. It opens with Rainbow and Sunset sharing some [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything suspicious dialogue]], culminating in Lightning Dust finding them getting ready to play a [[VideoGame/DeadOrAlive 'volleyball game']].
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* All of chapter 16.5, the April Fools' chapter, in which the story is set up as a movie directed by the actual [[Anime/YuGiOhGX Uria, Lord of Searing Flames]]. It
**It opens with Rainbow and Sunset sharing some [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything suspicious dialogue]], culminating in Lightning Dust finding them getting ready to play a [[VideoGame/DeadOrAlive 'volleyball game']].
**It opens with Rainbow and Sunset sharing some [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything suspicious dialogue]], culminating in Lightning Dust finding them getting ready to play a [[VideoGame/DeadOrAlive 'volleyball game']].
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* All of chapter 16.5, the April Fools' chapter, in which the story is set up as a movie directed by the actual Uria, Lord of Searing Flames. It opens with Rainbow and Sunset sharing some suspicious dialogue, culminating in Lightning Dust finding them getting ready to play a [[VideoGame/DeadOrAlive 'volleyball game']].
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* All of chapter 16.5, the April Fools' chapter, in which the story is set up as a movie directed by the actual [[Anime/YuGiOhGX Uria, Lord of Searing Flames. Flames]]. It opens with Rainbow and Sunset sharing some [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything suspicious dialogue, dialogue]], culminating in Lightning Dust finding them getting ready to play a [[VideoGame/DeadOrAlive 'volleyball game']].
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-->'''Aria:''' Hey, I found some litter on your lawn. Know who it belongs to?
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-->'''Aria:''' Hey, I found some litter on your lawn. Know who it belongs to?to?
* All of chapter 16.5, the April Fools' chapter, in which the story is set up as a movie directed by the actual Uria, Lord of Searing Flames. It opens with Rainbow and Sunset sharing some suspicious dialogue, culminating in Lightning Dust finding them getting ready to play a [[VideoGame/DeadOrAlive 'volleyball game']].
* All of chapter 16.5, the April Fools' chapter, in which the story is set up as a movie directed by the actual Uria, Lord of Searing Flames. It opens with Rainbow and Sunset sharing some suspicious dialogue, culminating in Lightning Dust finding them getting ready to play a [[VideoGame/DeadOrAlive 'volleyball game']].
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* [[spoiler: After being released from her holding cell and being pardoned]], Lightning Dust happily watches from the sidelines, chewing on a recently crafted BLT while Rainbow and Sunset are shouting at the Princess Twilight that Aria dragged inside with her. She then takes a moment to snark at Rainbow's anger over the situation.
-->"But what do I know? I’m just some rookie that flunked off the team and wound up as her [Gilda's] lackie for a year." She took a poignant bite of her BLT, chewing with a bemused expression.
-->"But what do I know? I’m just some rookie that flunked off the team and wound up as her [Gilda's] lackie for a year." She took a poignant bite of her BLT, chewing with a bemused expression.
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* [[spoiler: After being released from her holding cell and being pardoned]], Lightning Dust happily watches from the sidelines, chewing on a recently crafted BLT while Rainbow and Sunset are shouting at the Princess Twilight that Aria dragged inside talking with her. Fluttershy. She then takes a moment to snark at Rainbow's mute anger over the situation.
-->"But what do I know? I’m just some rookie that flunked off the team and wound up as her [Gilda's] lackie for a year." She took a poignant bite of her BLT, chewing with a bemusedexpression.expression.
* A moment later, Aria drags Princess Twilight in by the scruff of the neck, declaring:
-->'''Aria:''' Hey, I found some litter on your lawn. Know who it belongs to?
-->"But what do I know? I’m just some rookie that flunked off the team and wound up as her [Gilda's] lackie for a year." She took a poignant bite of her BLT, chewing with a bemused
* A moment later, Aria drags Princess Twilight in by the scruff of the neck, declaring:
-->'''Aria:''' Hey, I found some litter on your lawn. Know who it belongs to?
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* [[spoiler: After being released from her holding cell and being pardoned]], Lightning Dust happily watches from the sidelines, chewing on a recently crafted BLT while Rainbow and Sunset are shouting at the Princess Twilight that Aria dragged inside with her. She then takes a moment to snark at Rainbow's anger over the situation.
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* After being released from her holding cell and being pardoned, Lightning Dust happily watches from the sidelines, chewing on a recently crafted BLT while Rainbow and Sunset are shouting at the Princess Twilight that Aria dragged inside with her.
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* [[spoiler: After being released from her holding cell and being pardoned, pardoned]], Lightning Dust happily watches from the sidelines, chewing on a recently crafted BLT while Rainbow and Sunset are shouting at the Princess Twilight that Aria dragged inside with her.
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* After being released from her holding cell and being pardoned, Lightning Dust happily watches from the sidelines, chewing on a recently crafted BLT while Rainbow and Sunset are shouting at the Princess Twilight that Aria dragged inside with her.
-->"But what do I know? I’m just some rookie that flunked off the team and wound up as her [Gilda's] lackie for a year." She took a poignant bite of her BLT, chewing with a bemused expression.
-->"But what do I know? I’m just some rookie that flunked off the team and wound up as her [Gilda's] lackie for a year." She took a poignant bite of her BLT, chewing with a bemused expression.
