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* Aki and Asuka making silly faces is as funny as it is heartwarming.
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* Aki and Asuka making silly faces at each other is as funny as it is heartwarming.
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* Aki and Asuka making silly faces is as funny as it is heartwarming.
* When Asuka and her stepmother Anja finished their heart to heart talk, Aki looks back at them with a mouthful of cookies when she was mentioned.
* When Asuka and her stepmother Anja finished their heart to heart talk, Aki looks back at them with a mouthful of cookies when she was mentioned.
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* [[http://jimmywolk.studenten-froendenberg.de/eng/aki.php?browse.4.134 Pen-Pen, meet Aki's friends]]. Yes, [[OhCrap squawking]] and [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere fleeing]] is indeed the proper reaction.
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* [[http://jimmywolk.studenten-froendenberg.de/eng/aki.php?browse.4.134 Pen-Pen, meet Aki's friends]]. Yes, [[OhCrap squawking]] and [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere fleeing]] is indeed the proper reaction. Also, while he's very unhappy when Aki grabs him, the instant she asks "Now, who wants cake?", he raises his flipper and joins the kids in pounding the table and chanting (Wark! Wark! Wark!)
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trope is renamed Prefers Going Barefoot. Dewicking old name
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* Aki [[DoesNotLikeShoes does]] ''[[DoesNotLikeShoes not]]'' [[DoesNotLikeShoes like shoes]], not one bit. The readers' only complaint though is that they don't automatically have hilarious cartoon sound effects to go with [[http://jimmywolk.studenten-froendenberg.de/eng/aki.php?browse.3.67 her expression]].
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%%zce * Aki [[DoesNotLikeShoes does]] ''[[DoesNotLikeShoes not]]'' [[DoesNotLikeShoes does not like shoes]], shoes, not one bit. The readers' only complaint though is that they don't automatically have hilarious cartoon sound effects to go with [[http://jimmywolk.studenten-froendenberg.de/eng/aki.php?browse.3.67 her expression]].
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** Aki and Rei maneuvering away from the FinalBattle was a tense affair in ''[=TST=]''. The video sees the pair literally walking over the mountain and out of sight, just as [[MissedHimByThatMuch the Mass-Pro Evas fly over that mountain a second later]].
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** Aki and Rei maneuvering away from the FinalBattle was a tense affair in ''[=TST=]''. The video sees the pair literally walking over the mountain and out of sight, just as [[MissedHimByThatMuch the Mass-Pro Evas fly over that mountain to their doo—er, the final battle a second later]].
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* Aki [[DoesNotLikeShoes does]] ''[[DoesNotLikeShoes not]]'' [[DoesNotLikeShoes like shoes]], not one bit. The readers only complaint though is that they don't automatically have hilarious cartoon sound effects to go with [[http://jimmywolk.studenten-froendenberg.de/eng/aki.php?browse.3.67 her expression]].
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* Aki [[DoesNotLikeShoes does]] ''[[DoesNotLikeShoes not]]'' [[DoesNotLikeShoes like shoes]], not one bit. The readers readers' only complaint though is that they don't automatically have hilarious cartoon sound effects to go with [[http://jimmywolk.studenten-froendenberg.de/eng/aki.php?browse.3.67 her expression]].
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* Kodoma [[OhCrap notices Aki up in a tree, about to fall]]. Kodoma runs to catch her. Kodoma [[EpicFail faceplants]]. Aki lands on her feet without a scratch.
* Toji and Hikari's reaction to [[EmotionlessGirl Rei]] [[http://jimmywolk.studenten-froendenberg.de/eng/aki.php?browse.1.11#comment smiling]].
* Toji and Hikari's reaction to [[EmotionlessGirl Rei]] [[http://jimmywolk.studenten-froendenberg.de/eng/aki.php?browse.1.11#comment smiling]].
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* Kodoma Kodama [[OhCrap notices Aki up in a tree, about to fall]]. Kodoma runs to catch her. Kodoma Kodama [[EpicFail faceplants]]. Aki lands on her feet without a scratch.
* Toji and Hikari'sreaction to reactions to: A.) a little girl who looks a lot like Asuka and Shinji answering the door, and B.) [[EmotionlessGirl Rei]] [[http://jimmywolk.''[[http://jimmywolk.studenten-froendenberg.de/eng/aki.php?browse.1.11#comment smiling]].smiling]]''.
* Toji and Hikari's
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'''Misato''': Aki, that's not…\\
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'''Misato''': Aki, I don't think that's not…\\what he…\\
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** Asuka [[OhCrap completely forgot to take off her engagement ring]].
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** Aki's reaction to the flight itself: amazement and awe, followed by that awe fading into boredom. Efforts Aki makes to alleviate the boredom usually result in her getting scolded.
* Shinji's so used to trains being on time in Japan that, in Germany, he panics when he sees the train schedule. Asuka has to make it clear that they don't have to worry about that.
* As the family rides the train, Asuka mentions to Aki that in some regions of Germany, there are people who speak German with an accent. Aki immediately asks, "Like Papa?" eliciting a defensive "Hey!" from Shinji, who speaks German to show that he's getting better at it. Cue Asuka and Aki giggling while Shinji cutely scowls.
* Shinji's so used to trains being on time in Japan that, in Germany, he panics when he sees the train schedule. Asuka has to make it clear that they don't have to worry about that.
* As the family rides the train, Asuka mentions to Aki that in some regions of Germany, there are people who speak German with an accent. Aki immediately asks, "Like Papa?" eliciting a defensive "Hey!" from Shinji, who speaks German to show that he's getting better at it. Cue Asuka and Aki giggling while Shinji cutely scowls.
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** Aki and Rei maneuvering away from the FinalBattle was a tense affair in ''[=TST=]''. The video sees the pair literally walking over the mountain and out of sight, just as [[MissedThemByThatMuch the Mass-Pro Evas fly over that mountain a second later]].
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** Aki and Rei maneuvering away from the FinalBattle was a tense affair in ''[=TST=]''. The video sees the pair literally walking over the mountain and out of sight, just as [[MissedThemByThatMuch [[MissedHimByThatMuch the Mass-Pro Evas fly over that mountain a second later]].
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* The prologue exists as both a recap page and [[https://www.jimmys-desktop.de/aki.php?browse.0.0 a short Flash video]], the latter of which also animates some of Aki's drawings to go with her narration.
** "Mama and Papa were awesome warriors!" over a drawing of Units 01, 02, and 00 all kicking Sachiel while it's down.
** "But then [[{{Understatement}} some weird stuff happened…]]" over a drawing of the "giant Rei" during ''End of Evangelion'' comes off as innocently and morbidly hilarious.
** Aki and Rei maneuvering away from the FinalBattle was a tense affair in ''[=TST=]''. The video sees the pair literally walking over the mountain and out of sight, just as [[MissedThemByThatMuch the Mass-Pro Evas fly over that mountain a second later]].
** "Mama and Papa were awesome warriors!" over a drawing of Units 01, 02, and 00 all kicking Sachiel while it's down.
** "But then [[{{Understatement}} some weird stuff happened…]]" over a drawing of the "giant Rei" during ''End of Evangelion'' comes off as innocently and morbidly hilarious.
** Aki and Rei maneuvering away from the FinalBattle was a tense affair in ''[=TST=]''. The video sees the pair literally walking over the mountain and out of sight, just as [[MissedThemByThatMuch the Mass-Pro Evas fly over that mountain a second later]].
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* While going through the airport security, Aki see the X-ray baggage scanner and like any kid her age gets the idea to go through it herself. Shinji and Asuka’s response to the idea is to shake their heads no to the idea.
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* While going through the airport security, Aki see the X-ray baggage scanner and like any kid her age gets the idea to go through it herself. Shinji and Asuka’s response to the idea is to shake their heads no to the idea."no".
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* "Look, Mama! The gnome shows his ''butt!''" ''THUD.''
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* Asuka's father and stepmother meet Shinji and Aki for the first time, the realization that Asuka has a husband and a child knocking them flat on their backs.
-->'''Aki''': ''(gleefully holding a mooning garden gnome ornament; to Asuka)'' "Look, Mama! The gnome shows his''butt!''" ''butt!''"\\
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-->'''Aki''': ''(gleefully holding a mooning garden gnome ornament; to Asuka)'' "Look, Mama! The gnome shows his
''THUD.''
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* To quote one of the commenters, [[http://jimmywolk.studenten-froendenberg.de/eng/aki.php?browse.3.78 that is the single best representation of GNR ever]].
* Kodoma notices Aki in a tree, about to fall. Kodoma runs to catch her. Kodoma [[EpicFail faceplants]]. Aki lands on her feet without a scratch.
* Kodoma notices Aki in a tree, about to fall. Kodoma runs to catch her. Kodoma [[EpicFail faceplants]]. Aki lands on her feet without a scratch.
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* To quote one of the commenters, [[http://jimmywolk.studenten-froendenberg.de/eng/aki.php?browse.3.78 that this is the single best representation of GNR ever]].
* Kodoma [[OhCrap notices Aki up in a tree, about tofall.fall]]. Kodoma runs to catch her. Kodoma [[EpicFail faceplants]]. Aki lands on her feet without a scratch.
* Kodoma [[OhCrap notices Aki up in a tree, about to
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* Due to being given TheTalk by a reluctant Shinji, [[http://www.jimmys-desktop.de/aki.php?browse.4.122 Aki thinks that Kaji made Misato eat a baby to get her pregnant]]. Asuka immediately regrets delegating the task to Shinji.
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* Due to being given TheTalk by a reluctant Shinji, [[http://www.jimmys-desktop.de/aki.php?browse.4.122 Aki thinks that Kaji made Misato eat a baby to get her pregnant]]. Aki also hits Kaji before running over to Misato, trying to talk to the latter's tummy. Asuka immediately regrets delegating the task to Shinji.
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* [[http://jimmywolk.studenten-froendenberg.de/eng/aki.php?browse.4.134 Pen Pen, meet Aki's friends]]. Yes, fleeing is indeed the proper reaction.
** To say nothing of how Pen Pen got his fear of Aki in the first place:
** To say nothing of how Pen Pen got his fear of Aki in the first place:
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* [[http://jimmywolk.studenten-froendenberg.de/eng/aki.php?browse.4.134 Pen Pen, Pen-Pen, meet Aki's friends]]. Yes, fleeing [[OhCrap squawking]] and [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere fleeing]] is indeed the proper reaction.
** To say nothing of howPen Pen Pen-Pen got his fear of Aki in the first place:
** To say nothing of how
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* Aki spits down the massive elevator shaft in an attempt to judge how far down it goes. Initially scolded by Shinji, Asuka lets her off, reckoning the chances of her spit hitting someone are minute. Cut to a janitor having a break at the bottom of the shaft, where Aki's spit-ball lands in his drink. Apparently, [[http://jimmywolk.studenten-froendenberg.de/eng/aki.php?browse.2.27 it's not the first time its happened to him]].
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* Aki spits down the massive elevator shaft in an attempt to judge how far down it goes. Initially scolded by Shinji, Asuka lets her off, reckoning [[TemptingFate the chances of her spit hitting someone are minute. minute]]. Cut to a janitor having a break at the bottom of the shaft, where Aki's spit-ball lands in his drink.drink, to the janitor's resigned annoyance. Apparently, [[http://jimmywolk.studenten-froendenberg.de/eng/aki.php?browse.2.27 it's not the first time its it's happened to him]].
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* At the airport, Aki gets a cute smug I’m right your wrong look when she manages to up one on her parents when the check in lady says that they need to see their passports too.
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* At the airport, Aki gets a cute smug I’m right your wrong ''I’m-right-your-wrong'' look when she manages to up get one up on her parents when the check in check-in lady says that they need to see their passports too.
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''(Asuka {{face palms}})''
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''(Asuka {{face palms}})''[[FacePalm face-palms]])''
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* Shinji and Asuka's [[http://jimmywolk.studenten-froendenberg.de/eng/aki.php?browse.2.29 reaction]] when Ritsuko suggests taking a blood sample from Aki. (who knew that Shinji could pull off a DeathGlare?)
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* Shinji and Asuka's [[http://jimmywolk.studenten-froendenberg.de/eng/aki.php?browse.2.29 reaction]] when Ritsuko suggests taking a blood sample from Aki. (who Who knew that Shinji could pull off a DeathGlare?)DeathGlare?
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-->'''Aki''': ''(to Misato's tummy)'' Hello~? Are you OK in there?\\
'''Asuka''': Aki, what…?\\
'''Aki''': ''(to Asuka; pointing at Misato's tummy)'' Papa says Mr. Kaji put a baby in there!\\
'''Misato''': Aki, that's not…\\
'''Aki''': ''(to Misato)'' Did it hurt? He didn't make you eat it, did he?\\
''(Asuka {{face palms}})''
'''Asuka''': Aki, what…?\\
'''Aki''': ''(to Asuka; pointing at Misato's tummy)'' Papa says Mr. Kaji put a baby in there!\\
'''Misato''': Aki, that's not…\\
'''Aki''': ''(to Misato)'' Did it hurt? He didn't make you eat it, did he?\\
''(Asuka {{face palms}})''
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* While going though the airport security, Aki see the X-ray scanner and like any kid her age gets the idea to go through it herself like the baggage. Shinji and Asuka’s response to the idea is to shake their heads no to the idea.
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* While going though through the airport security, Aki see the X-ray baggage scanner and like any kid her age gets the idea to go through it herself like the baggage.herself. Shinji and Asuka’s response to the idea is to shake their heads no to the idea.
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** This comes up again only for Aki to want to try and ride on the baggage carousel upon arriving at the German airport with the same head shake response.
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** This comes up again only for Aki to want to try and ride on the baggage carousel upon arriving at the German airport with the same head shake no response.
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* While going though the airport security, Aki see the X-ray scanner and like any kid her age gets the idea to go through it herself like the baggage. Shinji and Asuka’s response to the idea is to shake their heads no to the idea.
** This comes up again only for Aki to want to try and ride on the baggage carousel upon arriving at the German airport with the same head shake response.
** This comes up again only for Aki to want to try and ride on the baggage carousel upon arriving at the German airport with the same head shake response.
