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* What is Cloud's quote when "selected"? "Okay then... [[MythologyGag let's mosey.]]
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* What is Cloud's quote when "selected"? "Okay then... [[MythologyGag let's mosey.]]
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--> Sudz: *scratches head* Three? The heck is that supposed to mean?
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--> Sudz: *scratches head* Three? *somehow kitty-faced without the mouth* The heck is that supposed to mean?
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* The whole party's collective confusion at "3" and their individual responses, culminating into Erika being cut off mid-sentence.
--> [[{{Beat}} *silence*]]
--> Roy: …Pardon? Is that it?
--> Robin: …*rubs eyes with arm*...What?
--> Rock: *scratching head* *pupils rolling around cartoonily* Does not compute!
--> Lucas: Umm… Ness?
--> Ness: Sorry dude, even I can’t translate this, man!
--> Pit: Uhh… 4!
--> Kristoff: *”wat” face*
--> Calem: …Quoi? Is that supposed to be an emoticon?
--> Sonic: Beats me!
--> Sudz: *scratches head* Three? The heck is that supposed to mean?
--> Ryu: I don’t even…
--> Erika: Three? T-three?! *shakes arms, goes up to the screen* THRE- *cut off*)
--> [[{{Beat}} *silence*]]
--> Roy: …Pardon? Is that it?
--> Robin: …*rubs eyes with arm*...What?
--> Rock: *scratching head* *pupils rolling around cartoonily* Does not compute!
--> Lucas: Umm… Ness?
--> Ness: Sorry dude, even I can’t translate this, man!
--> Pit: Uhh… 4!
--> Kristoff: *”wat” face*
--> Calem: …Quoi? Is that supposed to be an emoticon?
--> Sonic: Beats me!
--> Sudz: *scratches head* Three? The heck is that supposed to mean?
--> Ryu: I don’t even…
--> Erika: Three? T-three?! *shakes arms, goes up to the screen* THRE- *cut off*)
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* Everyone's reaction to the [[spoiler:"Lick my shit?"]] line. Which includes a [[spoiler: Film/{{Troll2}} style scream from Erika, a very strange HurricaneOfEuphemisms from Ness, and Kristoff being deadpan and Rock and Sudz being naive as usual, among other things.]]
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* Everyone's reaction to the [[spoiler:"Lick "Lick my shit?"]] shit?" line. Which includes a [[spoiler: Film/{{Troll2}} Film/{{Troll 2}} style scream from Erika, a very strange HurricaneOfEuphemisms from Ness, and Kristoff being deadpan and Rock and Sudz being naive as usual, among other things.]]
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* In the author's notes, Erika refers to the party as "7 kids [[AllMyFriendsAndZoidberg and a chaperone]]" (referring to Robin).
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* In the author's notes, Erika refers to the party as "7 kids [[AllMyFriendsAndZoidberg [[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and a chaperone]]" (referring to Robin).
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* Everyone's reaction to the [[spoiler:"Lick my shit?"]] line. Which includes a [[spoiler: Film/Troll2 Film/{{Troll2}} style scream from Erika, a very strange HurricaneOfEuphemisms from Ness, and Kristoff being deadpan and Rock and Sudz being naive as usual, among other things.]]
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* In the author's notes, Erika refers to the party as "7 kids [[AllMyFriendsAndZoidberg and a chaperone]]" (referring to Robin).
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* Before the commentary even begins, Calem mistakes Sonic for a Pokemon.
* Wario can apparently only eat [[Manga/DragonBall Vegetas]].
--> Erika: Sonic, what's the stupid level of this? *tosses him script*
--> Sonic: IT'S OVER NINE THOUSAAAAANND!!!
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--> Sonic: Off with their feet!feet! Wait, what’s a Christen?
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--> Sonic: There’s a chef in the house?!
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--> Sonic: There’s a chef in the house?!house?! Hey Mr. Chef, I’d like a chili dog with the works, please!
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--> Erika: Wait, you don’t mean… *dramatically, screen zooms in* No. This just plunged into that territory!? *red beacon flashes*
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--> Sonic: Rob? He’s wearing ROB?! My, what a unique fashion sense, if I say so myself!
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--> Sonic: Rob? He’s wearing ROB?! My, what a unique ''unique'' fashion sense, if I say so myself!
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* Apparently, a bunch of Heatrans disapprove of God murdering Mr. Jonson.
--> Erika: I didn’t type that folks, it was spelt like that and capitalized like that from the start it’s just HEATRANS!!!)*pics of Heatrans spin around as “HEATRANS!!11!!” flashes onscreen*
--> Erika: I didn’t type that folks, it was spelt like that and capitalized like that from the start it’s just HEATRANS!!!)*pics of Heatrans spin around as “HEATRANS!!11!!” flashes onscreen*
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--> Robin: Maybe "bro" is his name?
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--> Robin: Maybe Unless "bro" is his name?
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--> Robin: What? I’m used to literature, not the embodiment of the worst that an happen without a publishing house!
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[[folder: Mishonh Form God]]
[[AC:Episode 1]]
* When Erika attempts to use a theme song. You can seriously just imagine an accompning RecordScratch.
--> *roll theme*
--> Ness: Wait, we ain’t have no opening!
--> Erika: Oh! Sorry! Heh heh…
* Sonic, Ness, and Robin's first response.
--> Fic: Sara went to nentendo world to save.
--> Ness: What save file?
--> Sonic: Aww, Ness! I wanted first dibs!
--> Ness: Tuff luck, dude!
--> Robin: This is my first exposure to “English” - first impression: This writer is horrid at it.
* Imagining this small detail in video format helps make the fic much more bareable.
--> [[LiteralMinded Show pictures onscreen showing every word literally]].
* Erika's reaction to Supper Smash Bras.
--> The game where you smash bras for supper?
* Erika's response to Sonic and Rock not knowing of 'lesbans' is this for those who have seen what she means first hand.
--> Ironic considering your fandoms...
* Another humourous reaction.
--> Fic: you Christens wil be defeet on day!
--> Sonic: Off with their feet!
* Sonic is left with no idea about what Mr. Jonson is saying, and asks Robin for help.
--> Robin: What? I’m used to literature, not the embodiment of the worst that an happen without a publishing house!
* According to the fic, God is 'waring a rob'.
--> Sonic: Rob? He’s wearing ROB?! My, what a unique fashion sense, if I say so myself!
* [[CaptainObvious Sara's bro is her brother]].
--> Robin: Maybe "bro" is his name?
* Satan plans to do evil stuff in 'Nentendo World'.
--> Robin: [[DeadpanSnarker Stuff. How specific.]]
--> Sonic: It's a vague threat of vagueness!
[[AC:Episode 2]]
* [[Film/TheRoom Erika takes the "Hai" and adds an "O" to it]].
* Sara mistakes 'Samas' for "Mister Chef from Hallo".
--> Sonic: There’s a chef in the house?!
* Sara mentions how she 'cloded' her eyes.
--> Rock: She clouded her eyes? No, that makes no sense for a biological human.
* Ness gets confused by Sara 'madding out' with an apparent robot.
--> Ness: *double take* Fluffernutters! How is that even possible?!
* They find out that 'Mister Chef' was actually 'Samas'.
--> Ness: Oh no,it's not Samus, it's this person named "Samas"!
--> Erika: Dude, is she color blind?
--> Sonic: [[MythologyGag People can surprise you sometimes]]. [[VideoGame/SonicAdventure2 One time, everybody mistook me for Shads]]!
* The reaction to the shooted/shouted confusion.
--> Ness: She’s shootin’ werds outta her mouth now? … Actually, that sounds like a legit verb!
* 'Samas' starts to 'rap'.
--> Sonic: Samus rapping? Now that’s hilarious!
--> Ness: [[WebVideo/JonTron Sweet Itoi! Strap in, strap in! *puts on helmet*]]
* 'Samas' grabs Sara's shirt and her shirt.
--> Sonic: Two shirts? That some kinda fashion statement?
* Marth acts heavily out of character in the fic, prompting this line.
--> Sonic: Unfortunately, Marth was dragged back in after having a bunch of copies throw the invader off.
* Amongst the 'Christens' is Sold Snape.
--> Robin: All of a sudden, Severus Snape from [[Literature/HarryPotter that story]] was sold into here… Okay, that sounded wrong.
* The reason for 'Snape' being Marth's father is a failed attempt at RuleOfCool.
--> Ness: Dude, they’re from two completely different times! [[InsaneTrollLogic This lady’s troll logic is hilarious!]] *stuffs face with popcorn*
* Sara mentions a 'govermint vaksine'.
--> Ness: Introducing, the new Govermint! It’s a government an’ mint all in one!
* The fic does not include every Smasher.
--> Ness: [[WildMassGuessing Olimar, Game n' Watch, Popo n' Nana, ROB, an' Yoshi were happy ta go AWOL for the rest o' this thin']].
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[[folder: Mishonh Form God]]
[[AC:Episode 1]]
* When Erika attempts to use a theme song. You can seriously just imagine an accompning RecordScratch.
--> *roll theme*
--> Ness: Wait, we ain’t have no opening!
--> Erika: Oh! Sorry! Heh heh…
* Sonic, Ness, and Robin's first response.
--> Fic: Sara went to nentendo world to save.
--> Ness: What save file?
--> Sonic: Aww, Ness! I wanted first dibs!
--> Ness: Tuff luck, dude!
--> Robin: This is my first exposure to “English” - first impression: This writer is horrid at it.
* Imagining this small detail in video format helps make the fic much more bareable.
--> [[LiteralMinded Show pictures onscreen showing every word literally]].
* Erika's reaction to Supper Smash Bras.
--> The game where you smash bras for supper?
* Erika's response to Sonic and Rock not knowing of 'lesbans' is this for those who have seen what she means first hand.
--> Ironic considering your fandoms...
* Another humourous reaction.
--> Fic: you Christens wil be defeet on day!
--> Sonic: Off with their feet!
* Sonic is left with no idea about what Mr. Jonson is saying, and asks Robin for help.
--> Robin: What? I’m used to literature, not the embodiment of the worst that an happen without a publishing house!
* According to the fic, God is 'waring a rob'.
--> Sonic: Rob? He’s wearing ROB?! My, what a unique fashion sense, if I say so myself!
* [[CaptainObvious Sara's bro is her brother]].
--> Robin: Maybe "bro" is his name?
* Satan plans to do evil stuff in 'Nentendo World'.
--> Robin: [[DeadpanSnarker Stuff. How specific.]]
--> Sonic: It's a vague threat of vagueness!
[[AC:Episode 2]]
* [[Film/TheRoom Erika takes the "Hai" and adds an "O" to it]].
* Sara mistakes 'Samas' for "Mister Chef from Hallo".
--> Sonic: There’s a chef in the house?!
* Sara mentions how she 'cloded' her eyes.
--> Rock: She clouded her eyes? No, that makes no sense for a biological human.
* Ness gets confused by Sara 'madding out' with an apparent robot.
--> Ness: *double take* Fluffernutters! How is that even possible?!
* They find out that 'Mister Chef' was actually 'Samas'.
--> Ness: Oh no,it's not Samus, it's this person named "Samas"!
--> Erika: Dude, is she color blind?
--> Sonic: [[MythologyGag People can surprise you sometimes]]. [[VideoGame/SonicAdventure2 One time, everybody mistook me for Shads]]!
* The reaction to the shooted/shouted confusion.
--> Ness: She’s shootin’ werds outta her mouth now? … Actually, that sounds like a legit verb!
* 'Samas' starts to 'rap'.
--> Sonic: Samus rapping? Now that’s hilarious!
--> Ness: [[WebVideo/JonTron Sweet Itoi! Strap in, strap in! *puts on helmet*]]
* 'Samas' grabs Sara's shirt and her shirt.
--> Sonic: Two shirts? That some kinda fashion statement?
* Marth acts heavily out of character in the fic, prompting this line.
--> Sonic: Unfortunately, Marth was dragged back in after having a bunch of copies throw the invader off.
* Amongst the 'Christens' is Sold Snape.
--> Robin: All of a sudden, Severus Snape from [[Literature/HarryPotter that story]] was sold into here… Okay, that sounded wrong.
* The reason for 'Snape' being Marth's father is a failed attempt at RuleOfCool.
--> Ness: Dude, they’re from two completely different times! [[InsaneTrollLogic This lady’s troll logic is hilarious!]] *stuffs face with popcorn*
* Sara mentions a 'govermint vaksine'.
--> Ness: Introducing, the new Govermint! It’s a government an’ mint all in one!
* The fic does not include every Smasher.
--> Ness: [[WildMassGuessing Olimar, Game n' Watch, Popo n' Nana, ROB, an' Yoshi were happy ta go AWOL for the rest o' this thin']].
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