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* We already know the Activity Club is full of children fighting against spirits, but Boss Leader mentions that she's known Spender since he started puberty. It's very possible that [[AdultFear a lot of children have been fighting these dangerous spirits]] (where it's known there's a risk of dying) for years, possibly decades.
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* We already know the Activity Club is full of children fighting against spirits, but Boss Leader mentions that she's known Spender since he started puberty. It's very possible that [[AdultFear [[ChildrenForcedToKill a lot of children have been fighting these dangerous spirits]] (where it's known there's a risk of dying) for years, possibly decades.
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--->'''Ed:''' Oh, don't worry. Peeps won't deduce the whole spirit ghost secret spectral superpowers club thing from a bit of weird behavior. They'll just think yer crazy! And if ya really own it, they might even like you! Ha ha!
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* Stephen mistaking Jeff for Isaac may seem like just a one-off joke to portray him as a potential idiot, but then it's revealed that Isaac is 13, so he's in an entirely different grade. Stephen wouldn't be able to see Isaac in any of his classes. So even if he did see and/or interacted with him at some point, it wouldn't be a for a very long moment. Because Johnny and the gang bully Jeff the most and share classes with him, the ginger haired kid who they always interact with instead of some random dude who you've maybe seen once or twice down your school hallways would be the more likely option.
** Johnny also refers to Isaac as "that kid with the hair", so naturally Stephen is going to go after the kid he knows with giant hair rather than the kid he doesn't know with such a vague description.
** Johnny also refers to Isaac as "that kid with the hair", so naturally Stephen is going to go after the kid he knows with giant hair rather than the kid he doesn't know with such a vague description.
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* Stephen mistaking Jeff for Isaac may seem like just a one-off joke to portray him as a potential idiot, but then it's revealed that Isaac is 13, so he's in an entirely different grade. Stephen wouldn't be able to see Isaac in any of his classes. So even if he did see and/or interacted with him at some point, it wouldn't be a for a very long moment. Because Johnny and the gang bully Jeff the most and share classes with him, the ginger haired kid who they always interact with instead of some random dude who you've maybe seen once or twice down your school hallways would be the more likely option.
**option. Johnny also refers to Isaac as "that kid with the hair", so naturally Stephen is going to go after the kid he knows with giant hair rather than the kid he doesn't know with such a vague description.
* Isabel and Spender both warn Max that most ghosts can't really use tools, as the tool will eventually consume them. However, the plunger that Max gives PJ is blue, while PJ's own energy is a shade of purple. The plunger ''can't'' feed on PJ, at least not at a rate that will be dangerous.
* Early on, Max muses "why isn't the Earth covered in the ghosts of dead bugs?" While he doesn't get a direct answer, Spender mentions off-hand that most tools feed off of small ghosts. So the spirit world isn't overrun with bug ghosts for the same reason the living world isn't overrun with living bugs: Bigger things eat them.
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* Isabel and Spender both warn Max that most ghosts can't really use tools, as the tool will eventually consume them. However, the plunger that Max gives PJ is blue, while PJ's own energy is a shade of purple. The plunger ''can't'' feed on PJ, at least not at a rate that will be dangerous.
* Early on, Max muses "why isn't the Earth covered in the ghosts of dead bugs?" While he doesn't get a direct answer, Spender mentions off-hand that most tools feed off of small ghosts. So the spirit world isn't overrun with bug ghosts for the same reason the living world isn't overrun with living bugs: Bigger things eat them.
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** Johnny also refers to Isaac as "that kid with the hair", so naturally Stephen is going to go after the kid he knows with giant hair rather than the kid he doesn't know with such a vague description.
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** Considering that some of the kids are seen wearing modern day earphones, the former seems more likely. A lot of them are seen in the school hallways, implying that they're either unaware that they are dead or there's some sort of ghost community. Adding to this, there's also a ghost teacher. Just what happened at Mayview middle school that resulted in the deaths of seemingly all of its inhabitants?
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* Stephen mistaking Jeff for Isaac may seem like just a one-off joke to portray him as a potential idiot, but then it's revealed that Isaac is 13, so he's in an entirely different grade. Stephen wouldn't be able to see Isaac in any of his classes. So even if he did see and/or interacted with him at some point, it wouldn't be a for a very long moment. Because Johnny and the gang bully Jeff the most and share classes with him, more likely kid would be the ginger haired kid who they always interact with instead of some random dude who you've maybe seen once or twice down your school hallways.
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* Stephen mistaking Jeff for Isaac may seem like just a one-off joke to portray him as a potential idiot, but then it's revealed that Isaac is 13, so he's in an entirely different grade. Stephen wouldn't be able to see Isaac in any of his classes. So even if he did see and/or interacted with him at some point, it wouldn't be a for a very long moment. Because Johnny and the gang bully Jeff the most and share classes with him, more likely kid would be the ginger haired kid who they always interact with instead of some random dude who you've maybe seen once or twice down your school hallways.
hallways would be the more likely option.
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* Stephen mistaking Jeff for Isaac may seem like just a one-off joke to portray him as a potential idiot, but then it's revealed that Isaac is 13, so he's in an entirely different grade. Stephen wouldn't be able to see Isaac in any of his classes. So even if he did see and/or interacted with him at some point, it would be a for a very long moment. Because Johnny and the gang bully Jeff the most and share classes with him, the more likely explanation would be the ginger haired kid that they always interact with instead of some random dude who you've maybe seen once or twice down your school hallways.
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* Stephen mistaking Jeff for Isaac may seem like just a one-off joke to portray him as a potential idiot, but then it's revealed that Isaac is 13, so he's in an entirely different grade. Stephen wouldn't be able to see Isaac in any of his classes. So even if he did see and/or interacted with him at some point, it would wouldn't be a for a very long moment. Because Johnny and the gang bully Jeff the most and share classes with him, the more likely explanation kid would be the ginger haired kid that who they always interact with instead of some random dude who you've maybe seen once or twice down your school hallways.
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* Stephen mistaking Jeff for Isaac may seem like just a one-off joke to portray him as a potential idiot, but then it's revealed that Isaac is 13, so he's in an entirely different grade. Stephen wouldn't be able to see Isaac in any of his classes. So even if he did see and/or interacted with him at some point, it would be a for a very long moment. Because Johnny and the gang bully Jeff the most and share classes with him, the more likely explanation would be the ginger haired kid that they always interact with instead of some random dude who you've maybe seen once or twice down your school hallways.
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* Ed has been shown to be a spectral since infancy. There is more than one way to become a spectral, such as through high levels of Vitamin C, a near-death experience, exposure to paranormal phenomena such as being possessed and exposure to a tool. What happened to Ed to make him a spectral at such a young age?
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* Ed has been shown to be a spectral since infancy. There is more than one way to become a spectral, such as through high levels of Vitamin C, a near-death experience, exposure to paranormal phenomena such as being possessed and exposure to a tool. What happened to Ed to make him a spectral at such a young age?age?
** We learn in Chapter 7 that his parents were paranatural researchers that went missing under strange circumstances shortly after he was born. Could it be possible that Ed has been a spectral since before he was even born?
** We learn in Chapter 7 that his parents were paranatural researchers that went missing under strange circumstances shortly after he was born. Could it be possible that Ed has been a spectral since before he was even born?
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* On chapter 4, page 31, Cody mentions that Stephen getting in detention again would results in suspension according to the code of conduct. Of ''course'' he should know, [[spoiler: he's a member of the AbsurdlyPowerfulStudentCouncil! And not just ''any'' member. He's the '''Student Council President'''!]]
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* On chapter 4, page 31, Cody mentions that Stephen getting in detention again would results in suspension according to the code of conduct. Of ''course'' he should know, [[spoiler: he's a member of the AbsurdlyPowerfulStudentCouncil! And not just ''any'' member. He's the '''Student Council President'''!]]
President'''!
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* On chapter 4, page 31, Cody mentions that Stephen getting in detention again would results in suspension according to the code of conduct. Of ''course'' he should know, [[spoiler: he's a member of the AbsurdlyPowerfulStudentCouncil! And not just ''any'' member. He's the '''Student Council President'''!]]
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Those weren't the only ways to become a spectral. Isaac trails off the list of ways one could become a spectral, meaning that theres more
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* Ed has been shown to be a spectral since infancy. There is more than one way to become a spectral, such as through high levels of Vitamin C, a near-death experience, exposure to paranormal phenomena such as being possessed, exposure to a tool, and more. What happened to Ed to make him a spectral at such a young age?
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* Ed has been shown to be a spectral since infancy. There is more than one way to become a spectral, such as through high levels of Vitamin C, a near-death experience, exposure to paranormal phenomena such as being possessed, possessed and exposure to a tool, and more.tool. What happened to Ed to make him a spectral at such a young age?
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Those weren't the only ways to become a spectral. Isaac trails off the list of ways one could become a spectral, meaning that theres more
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* Ed has been shown to be a spectral since infancy. A person becomes a spectral either through high levels of Vitamin C, a near-death experience, or exposure to paranormal phenomena such as being possessed or exposure to a tool. What happened to Ed to make him a spectral at such a young age?
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* Ed has been shown to be a spectral since infancy. A person becomes There is more than one way to become a spectral either spectral, such as through high levels of Vitamin C, a near-death experience, or exposure to paranormal phenomena such as being possessed or possessed, exposure to a tool.tool, and more. What happened to Ed to make him a spectral at such a young age?
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* Max's tool is a bat. The first enemy that Max fights with a bat is also a bat.
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* In Chapter 4, Spender is warned by Lucifer that utilizing a technique known as "Spirit Fusion" makes Lucifer unable to contain the dangerous shadow spirit Spender is a medium to. This is showcased after the Ghost Train is pacified, with the shadow spirit coating Max and Isabel in its shadowy tendrils (and one of its powers is to turn any shadows into chasms). Later in Chapter 5, Isabel tells Max that Spender uses Spirit Fusion "all the time". She clarifies that she's never seen the shadow spirit before, but if Lucifer's warning is any indication, Spender has come close to accidentally releasing this extremely dangerous, implicitly malevolent spirit from himself ''multiple times, in front of the children he's supposed to be protecting.''
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* In Chapter 4, Spender is warned by Lucifer that utilizing a technique known as "Spirit Fusion" makes Lucifer unable to contain the dangerous shadow spirit Spender is a medium to. This is showcased after the Ghost Train is pacified, with the shadow spirit coating Max and Isabel in its shadowy tendrils (and one of its powers is to turn any shadows into chasms). Later in Chapter 5, Isabel tells Max that Spender uses Spirit Fusion "all the time". She clarifies that she's never seen the shadow spirit before, but if Lucifer's warning is any indication, Spender has come close to accidentally releasing this extremely dangerous, implicitly malevolent spirit from himself ''multiple times, in front of the children he's supposed to be protecting.''''
* Ed has been shown to be a spectral since infancy. A person becomes a spectral either through high levels of Vitamin C, a near-death experience, or exposure to paranormal phenomena such as being possessed or exposure to a tool. What happened to Ed to make him a spectral at such a young age?
* Ed has been shown to be a spectral since infancy. A person becomes a spectral either through high levels of Vitamin C, a near-death experience, or exposure to paranormal phenomena such as being possessed or exposure to a tool. What happened to Ed to make him a spectral at such a young age?
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* Max [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-4-page-48 thinks that Johnny and his gang aren't smart enough for ambush tactics]]. However, [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-1-page-19 Stephen wouldn't attack someone with their back turned anyway.]].
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* Max [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-4-page-48 thinks that Johnny and his gang aren't smart enough for ambush tactics]]. However, [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-1-page-19 Stephen wouldn't attack someone with their back turned anyway.]].
anyway]].
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* Max [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-4-page-48 thinks that Johnny and his gang aren't smart enough for ambush tactics]]. However, [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-1-page-19 Stephen wouldn't attack someone with their back turned anyway]].
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* Max [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-4-page-48 thinks that Johnny and his gang aren't smart enough for ambush tactics]]. However, [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-1-page-19 Stephen wouldn't attack someone with their back turned anyway]].
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* Max [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-4-page-48 thinks that Johnny and his gang aren't smart enough for ambush tactics]], however, [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-1-page-19 Stephen wouldn't attack someone with their back turned anyway]].
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* Max [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-4-page-48 thinks that Johnny and his gang aren't smart enough for ambush tactics]], however, tactics]]. However, [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-1-page-19 Stephen wouldn't attack someone with their back turned anyway]].
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* Max [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-4-page-48 thinks that Johnny and his gang aren't smart enough for ambush tactics]], however, [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-1-page-19 Stephen wouldn't attack someone with their back turned anyway]].
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realized that theres almost nothing fridge about this, and should be blatantly obvious to anyone who already knows that hijack was possessing spender
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* In Chapter 4, Spender is warned by Lucifer that utilizing a technique known as "Spirit Fusion" makes Lucifer unable to contain the dangerous shadow spirit Spender is a medium to. This is showcased after the Ghost Train is pacified, with the shadow spirit coating Max and Isabel in its shadowy tendrils (and one of its powers is to turn any shadows into chasms). Later in Chapter 5, Isabel tells Max that Spender uses Spirit Fusion "all the time". She clarifies that she's never seen the shadow spirit before, but if Lucifer's warning is any indication, Spender has come close to accidentally releasing this extremely dangerous, implicitly malevolent spirit from himself ''multiple times, in front of the children he's supposed to be protecting.''
* In Chapter 5, Spenjack was groaning because [[MemeticMutation being Spender is suffering]]. [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-5-page-101 Note the way Spenjack clutches his own shirt is where Spender sustained his injury]].
* In Chapter 5, Spenjack was groaning because [[MemeticMutation being Spender is suffering]]. [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-5-page-101 Note the way Spenjack clutches his own shirt is where Spender sustained his injury]].
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* In Chapter 4, Spender is warned by Lucifer that utilizing a technique known as "Spirit Fusion" makes Lucifer unable to contain the dangerous shadow spirit Spender is a medium to. This is showcased after the Ghost Train is pacified, with the shadow spirit coating Max and Isabel in its shadowy tendrils (and one of its powers is to turn any shadows into chasms). Later in Chapter 5, Isabel tells Max that Spender uses Spirit Fusion "all the time". She clarifies that she's never seen the shadow spirit before, but if Lucifer's warning is any indication, Spender has come close to accidentally releasing this extremely dangerous, implicitly malevolent spirit from himself ''multiple times, in front of the children he's supposed to be protecting.''
* In Chapter 5, Spenjack was groaning because [[MemeticMutation being Spender is suffering]]. [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-5-page-101 Note the way Spenjack clutches his own shirt is where Spender sustained his injury]].''
* In Chapter 5, Spenjack was groaning because [[MemeticMutation being Spender is suffering]]. [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-5-page-101 Note the way Spenjack clutches his own shirt is where Spender sustained his injury]].
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* In Chapter 5, Spenjack was groaning because [[MemeticMutation being Spender is suffering]]. [[[[http://www.[[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-5-page-101 Note the way Spenjack clutches his own shirt is where Spender sustained his injury]].
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* In Chapter 5, [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-5-page-101 Spenjack was groaning because the pain of being Spender's body was practically unbearable. Note the way Spenjack clutches his own shirt is where Spender sustained his injury]].
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* In Chapter 5, [[http://www.Spenjack was groaning because [[MemeticMutation being Spender is suffering]]. [[[[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-5-page-101 Spenjack was groaning because the pain of being Spender's body was practically unbearable. Note the way Spenjack clutches his own shirt is where Spender sustained his injury]].
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* In Chapter 5, [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-5-page-101 Spenjack was groaning because the pain of being Spender's body was practically ''unbearable''. Note the way Spenjack clutches his own shirt is where Spender sustained his injury]].
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* In Chapter 5, [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-5-page-101 Spenjack was groaning because the pain of being Spender's body was practically ''unbearable''.unbearable. Note the way Spenjack clutches his own shirt is where Spender sustained his injury]].
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* In Chapter 5, [[spoiler: [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-5-page-101 Spenjack was groaning because the pain of being Spender's body was practically ''unbearable''. Note the way Spenjack clutches his own shirt is where Spender sustained his injury]].
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* In Chapter 5, [[spoiler: [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-5-page-101 Spenjack was groaning because the pain of being Spender's body was practically ''unbearable''. Note the way Spenjack clutches his own shirt is where Spender sustained his injury]].
