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* Lucy's ability to remember her experiences in the womb is foreshadowing of her status as a TimeMaster .
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* Lucy's ability to remember her experiences in the womb is foreshadowing of her status as a TimeMaster .TimeMaster.
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** Also likely because Lucy had been forced to deliver the briefcase and refused to accept the "job offer," whereas the others seemingly had willingly complied, not knowing what they were getting themselves into.
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*** Doesn't work. The drug was already ''in'' her body. If she could make her own body reproduce more melanin to change her appearance, why couldn't she make it produce more of ''the drug'' internally?
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* The first person to try a sample of the drug goes into a fit of laughter. When Lucy gets her doses, she starts floating around the room, falls unconscious, and has ALL SENSE OF HUMOR(And Emotion for that matter) REMOVED.
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* The first person to try a sample of the drug goes into a fit of laughter. When Lucy gets her doses, she starts floating around the room, falls unconscious, and has ALL SENSE OF HUMOR(And Emotion HUMOR (and emotions for that matter) REMOVED.
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** Or perhaps years of drug abuse had already ''damaged'' his brain, and all the [=CPH4=] did was repair enough of said damage for him to appreciate the irony of one drug undoing what all the ''other'' drugs caused.
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** Or perhaps years of drug abuse had already ''damaged'' his brain, and all the [=CPH4=] did was repair enough of said damage for him to appreciate the irony {{irony}} of one drug undoing what all the ''other'' drugs caused.
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** Yes, but if you had that USB stick, would you casually throw it in a drawer and forget about it? Or would you treat it as the almost-holy relic that it is? This troper would never let it out of his sight!
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*** Yes, from a bullet to the head delivered by Jang.
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*** Yes, from a bullet to but he was only one part of the head delivered by Jang.organization. The EvilBrit would be wise to cut his losses after the major debacle this caused, but drug dealers aren't usually known for restraint and logic.
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** Didn't the guard dog start to wander over before she told it "go away" mentally? It apparently smelled something unusual.
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*** Yes, from a bullet to the head delivered by Jang.
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** Or perhaps years of drug abuse had already ''damaged'' his brain, and all the CPH4 did was repair enough of said damage for him to appreciate the irony of one drug undoing what all the ''other'' drugs caused.
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** Or perhaps years of drug abuse had already ''damaged'' his brain, and all the CPH4 [=CPH4=] did was repair enough of said damage for him to appreciate the irony of one drug undoing what all the ''other'' drugs caused.
