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* AgonyOfTheFeet: One of the monkeys, due to having his bike stolen (he forgot to get a license, so the police had nothing to go on), is forced to run after his friends. He eventually collapses when his feet wear out.
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* AgonyOfTheFeet: One of the monkeys, Mossby Pomegranate, due to having his bike stolen (he forgot to get a license, so the police had nothing to go on), is forced to run after his friends. He eventually collapses when his feet wear out.
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* NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer: “This little thing was ''actually'' christened “Tinkerbell [=McDillingfiddy=].”
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* NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer: “This "This little thing was ''actually'' christened “Tinkerbell [=McDillingfiddy=].”'Tinkerbell [=McDillingfiddy=]'."
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-->'''Mike:''' And then Ma hit him with a cast iron skillet.
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-->'''Creator/MikeNelson:''' She had a tragic, but goofy death.
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-->'''Creator/MikeNelson:''' She had a tragic, but yet goofy death.
* NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer: “This little thing was ''actually'' christened “Tinkerbell [=McDillingfiddy=].”
-->'''Kevin Murphy:''' By my ass, just now.
-->'''Kevin Murphy:''' By my ass, just now.
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* TenLittleMurderVictims: All the monkeys are killed (and in at least one case, incapacitated]] throughout the short
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* TenLittleMurderVictims: All the monkeys are killed (and in at least one case, incapacitated]] throughout the shortshort.
-->'''Bill:''' So uh, Fractured Fairytale Guy, are you really going to kill off all these monkeys? ‘Cause if so, you have my thanks.
-->'''Bill:''' So uh, Fractured Fairytale Guy, are you really going to kill off all these monkeys? ‘Cause if so, you have my thanks.
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** That includes not registering your bicycle riding license at the library. ''The car will know.''
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** That includes not registering your bicycle riding license at the library.paying attention to a street sign once. ''The car will know.''
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* MoodWhiplash: The various deaths of the monkeys all cut to cartoonish shots of stars.
-->'''Creator/MikeNelson:''' She had a tragic, but goofy death.
-->'''Creator/MikeNelson:''' She had a tragic, but goofy death.
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* SoleSurvivor: [[spoiler:Orville Slump]] of course, but at least one of the monkeys is shown to have been put in traction afterwards.
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%%* TenLittleMurderVictims
%%* TokenHuman: [[spoiler:Orville.]]
%%* TokenHuman: [[spoiler:Orville.]]
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* TokenHuman:
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[[caption-width-right:315:[[Podcast/RiffTrax "The story of one man's quest to purchase lard."]]]]
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* NiceHat: Rooty-Toot Jasperson, Phillip Floogal, and Stanislaw Hickenbottom each have one.