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* AdultFear: When everyone sees that the camp was destroyed, then realize that Phoebe, the youngest member of the camp, and daughter of one of the counselors, is nowhere around here, you can see this fear on the faces of her mother, other adults, and Lane.
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* MissingChild: When everyone sees that the camp was destroyed, then realize that Phoebe, the youngest member of the camp, and daughter of one of the counselors, is nowhere around here.
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* NiceGirl: Main character Lane definitely qualifies.. She has some moments where she's not as kind as she should be, but she really tries to be nice to everyone around, even when this community is new and strange for her. On top of that, the main reason for her to go to camp was to cheer up her new step-cousin, who was extremely anxious about the camp. Some of the other girls also count.
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* NiceGirl: Main character Lane definitely qualifies..qualifies. She has some moments where she's not as kind as she should be, but she really tries to be nice to everyone around, even when this community is new and strange for her. On top of that, the main reason for her to go to camp was to cheer up her new step-cousin, who was extremely anxious about the camp. Some of the other girls also count.
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But quickly things [[{{FromBadToWorse}} get even worse]], when her mother and new step-father go on a honeymoon, Lane must stay with her step-father's family, who are also part of the [[UsefulNotes/{{Mormonism}} LDS Church]], for three weeks. She tries to settle in, but when her 12-year old step-cousin, Phoebe, who has anxiety, is pressured into going to a Mormon girls' camp, she steps in and decides to go with her.
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But quickly things [[{{FromBadToWorse}} get even worse]], when her mother and new step-father go on a honeymoon, Lane must stay with her step-father's family, who are also part of the [[UsefulNotes/{{Mormonism}} LDS Church]], for three weeks. She tries to settle in, but when her 12-year old 12-year-old step-cousin, Phoebe, who has anxiety, is pressured into going to a Mormon girls' camp, she steps in and decides to go with her.
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* AdultFear: When everyone sees that the camp was destroyed, then realize that Phoebe, the youngest member of camp, and daughter of one of the counselors, is no around here, you can see this fear on faces of her mother, other adults, and Lane.
* ChekhovsGunman: [[spoiler: The handsome rangers everyone encounters on the hike. They tell the crew about how there have recently been bear sightings, and how to react depending on the bear. Of course, a bear shows up. Had it not been for them, Lane, Phoebe, and Bree probably wouldn't have survived the movie.]]
** [[spoiler: Then, near the end of the movie, they show up ''again'' with Roxy, who was presumed dead up until that point.]]
* ChekhovsGunman: [[spoiler: The handsome rangers everyone encounters on the hike. They tell the crew about how there have recently been bear sightings, and how to react depending on the bear. Of course, a bear shows up. Had it not been for them, Lane, Phoebe, and Bree probably wouldn't have survived the movie.]]
** [[spoiler: Then, near the end of the movie, they show up ''again'' with Roxy, who was presumed dead up until that point.]]
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* AdultFear: When everyone sees that the camp was destroyed, then realize that Phoebe, the youngest member of the camp, and daughter of one of the counselors, is no nowhere around here, you can see this fear on the faces of her mother, other adults, and Lane.
*ChekhovsGunman: [[spoiler: ChekhovsGunman:[[spoiler: The handsome rangers everyone encounters on the hike. They tell the crew about how there have recently been bear sightings, and how to react depending on the bear. Of course, a bear shows up. Had it not been for them, Lane, Phoebe, and Bree probably wouldn't have survived the movie.]]
**]] [[spoiler: Then, near the end of the movie, they show up ''again'' with Roxy, who was presumed dead up until that point.]]
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* DisappearedDad: Lane's father.
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* DisappearedDad: Lane's father.father died of cancer.
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* OdangoHair: Mindy generally wears her hair like this.
