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* '''San Francisco Ferries''': Referencing San Francisco's status as America's most well-known {{Gayborhood}}. The word Ferries, mainly referring to ferryboats, is also a play on "[[CampGay fairy]]", a slur towards gay men. The players wear white, pastel pink, and blue uniforms.
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* '''San Francisco Ferries''': Referencing San Francisco's status as America's most well-known best known {{Gayborhood}}. The word Ferries, mainly referring to ferryboats, is also a play on "[[CampGay fairy]]", a slur towards gay men. The players wear white, pastel pink, and blue uniforms.
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** The home arena, Roswell Stadium, is shaped to look like a flying saucer and has a backboard resembling a restricted government warehouse (reminiscent of {{Area 51}}).
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** The home arena, Roswell Stadium, is shaped to look like a flying saucer and has a backboard resembling a restricted government warehouse (reminiscent reminiscent of {{Area 51}}).51}}.
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* '''Los Angeles Riots''': Reference to the 1992 [[UsefulNotes/LosAngeles L.A.]][=/=]Rodney King riots and, possibly, the 1965 Watts Riots.
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* '''Los Angeles Riots''': Reference to the 1992 [[UsefulNotes/LosAngeles L.A.]][=/=]Rodney King riots and, possibly, (and possibly the 1965 Watts Riots.Riots).
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->''"...The spirit of athletic competition, however, indeed was not dead. Its seed merely laid dormant in the dreams of the young."''
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--> ''Look out ahead, there's a truck changing lanes\\
And you've got some yellow crumbs on your upper lip...''
And you've got some yellow crumbs on your upper lip...''
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--> ''Look ''♫ Look out ahead, there's a truck changing lanes\\
And you've got some yellow crumbs on your upper lip...''♫''
And you've got some yellow crumbs on your upper lip...
