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Can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6710475/1/When_the_Mountain_Goats_Cry here.]]
UPDATE: For reasons unknown, the original fic was taken down from the author's page (the author him/herself doesn't know why that happened) so it's being all out rewritten [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7718212/1/bWhen_b_The_bMountain_b_bGoats_b_bCry_b here]].
UPDATE: For reasons unknown, the original fic was taken down from the author's page (the author him/herself doesn't know why that happened) so it's being all out rewritten [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7718212/1/bWhen_b_The_bMountain_b_bGoats_b_bCry_b here]].
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* NOTE: The rewrite is only 2 chapters in and hasn't been updated since 2012
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* MagnificentBastard: [[spoiler: Van Dine, if the logical conclusion is to be believed.]]
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* AwesomeMoments: Will's memetic badassery gets taken UpToEleven here.
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* FunnyMoments: This is one area the fic excels at.
** "Bro."
** [[OverlyLongGag Him...and her?]]
** "Bro."
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* HeartwarmingMoments: Everything in Chapter 5. [[spoiler: Weeeell, the first half of chapter 5 anyway.]]
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* ShoutOut: The fanfic contains a lot of direct quotations to S.S Van Dine, and attributes them to Will's gestures or speaking. It seems sort of overdone at first, but once it sets in that [[spoiler: Will is Van Dine's successor]] everything turns into FridgeBrilliance. It also has a few {{Shout Out}}s to ''WebVideo/DoctorHorriblesSingAlongBlog. [[spoiler:which is also FridgeBrilliance after Will's freakout.]].
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* ShoutOut: The fanfic contains a lot of direct quotations to S.S Van Dine, and attributes them to Will's gestures or speaking. It seems sort of overdone at first, but once it sets in that [[spoiler: Will is Van Dine's successor]] everything turns into FridgeBrilliance. it makes sense It also has a few {{Shout Out}}s to ''WebVideo/DoctorHorriblesSingAlongBlog. [[spoiler:which is also FridgeBrilliance after Will's freakout.]].''WebVideo/DoctorHorriblesSingAlongBlog.
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* ShoutOut: The fanfic contains a lot of direct quotations to S.S Van Dine, and attributes them to Will's gestures or speaking. It seems sort of overdone at first, but once it sets in that [[spoiler: Will is Van Dine's successor]] everything turns into FridgeBrilliance. It also has a few {{Shout Out}}s to DrHorriblesSingAlongBlog. [[spoiler:which is also FridgeBrilliance after Will's freakout.]].
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 5.
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 5.
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* ShoutOut: The fanfic contains a lot of direct quotations to S.S Van Dine, and attributes them to Will's gestures or speaking. It seems sort of overdone at first, but once it sets in that [[spoiler: Will is Van Dine's successor]] everything turns into FridgeBrilliance. It also has a few {{Shout Out}}s to DrHorriblesSingAlongBlog.''WebVideo/DoctorHorriblesSingAlongBlog. [[spoiler:which is also FridgeBrilliance after Will's freakout.]].
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 5.
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 5.
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* ThePlan: [[spoiler: Unless the author is throwing a curveball, Van Dine had one hell of a plan prepared.]]
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* XanatosGambit: [[spoiler: Unless the author is throwing a curveball, Van Dine had one hell of a plan prepared.]]
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UPDATE: For reasons unknown, the original fic was taken down from the author's page (the author him/herself doesn't know why that happened) so it's being all out rewritten [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7718212/1/bWhen_b_The_bMountain_b_bGoats_b_bCry_b here]].
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While the writing gets(apparently on purpose) cheesy at times, which can put off some people. It's definitely not for everyone, but it keeps the cast amazingly in character despite some very, very unexpected plot twists.
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While the writing gets(apparently gets (apparently on purpose) cheesy at times, which can put off some people. It's definitely not for everyone, but it keeps the cast amazingly in character despite some very, very unexpected plot twists.
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Think of it as how And Another Thing is to the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy series. The writing tone is definitely different, but it's still the same characters you have grown to know and love.
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Think of it as how And ''And Another Thing Thing'' is to the ''The Hitchhiker's guide Guide to the galaxy Galaxy'' series. The writing tone is definitely different, but it's still the same characters you have grown to know and love.
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* ShoutOut: The fanfic contains a lot of direct quotations to S.S Van Dine, and attributes them to Will's gestures or speaking. It seems sort of overdone at first, but once it sets in that [[spoiler: Will is Van Dine's successor]] everything turns into FridgeBrilliance.
** It also has a few ShoutOuts to DrHorriblesSingAlongBlog. [[spoiler: Which is also FridgeBrilliance after Will's freakout.]].
** It also has a few ShoutOuts to DrHorriblesSingAlongBlog. [[spoiler: Which is also FridgeBrilliance after Will's freakout.]].
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* ShoutOut: The fanfic contains a lot of direct quotations to S.S Van Dine, and attributes them to Will's gestures or speaking. It seems sort of overdone at first, but once it sets in that [[spoiler: Will is Van Dine's successor]] everything turns into FridgeBrilliance.
**FridgeBrilliance. It also has a few ShoutOuts {{Shout Out}}s to DrHorriblesSingAlongBlog. [[spoiler: Which [[spoiler:which is also FridgeBrilliance after Will's freakout.]].
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* HeartwarmingMoments: Everything in Chapter 5. [[spo
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* HeartwarmingMoments: Everything in Chapter 5. [[spo[[spoiler: Weeeell, the first half of chapter 5 anyway.]]
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* HeartwarmingMoments: Everything in Chapter 5. [[spoiler: Weeeell, the first half of chapter 5 anyway.]]
* HeroicBSOD: Played for laughs with Krauss when [[spoiler: Kinzo dies.]] He is literally unable to do anything but look off into the distance and bemoan how his life will be ruined, what he will do about his inheritance, and what will become of his stamp collection. And he’s ''still'' going at it when [[spoiler: the goat butlers start attacking.]]
* HeroicRROD: Again, played for laughs with [[spoiler: Shannon]] in "Cat Box of the Golden Witch".
* HeroicBSOD: Played for laughs with Krauss when [[spoiler: Kinzo dies.]] He is literally unable to do anything but look off into the distance and bemoan how his life will be ruined, what he will do about his inheritance, and what will become of his stamp collection. And he’s ''still'' going at it when [[spoiler: the goat butlers start attacking.]]
* HeroicRROD: Again, played for laughs with [[spoiler: Shannon]] in "Cat Box of the Golden Witch".
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* HeartwarmingMoments: Everything in Chapter 5. [[spoiler: Weeeell, the first half of chapter 5 anyway.]]
* HeroicBSOD: Played for laughs with Krauss when [[spoiler: Kinzo dies.]] He is literally unable to do anything but look off into the distance and bemoan how his life will be ruined, what he will do about his inheritance, and what will become of his stamp collection. And he’s ''still'' going at it when [[spoiler: the goat butlers start attacking.]]
* HeroicRROD: Again, played for laughs with [[spoiler: Shannon]] in "Cat Box of the Golden Witch".[[spo
* HeroicBSOD: Played for laughs with Krauss when [[spoiler: Kinzo dies.]] He is literally unable to do anything but look off into the distance and bemoan how his life will be ruined, what he will do about his inheritance, and what will become of his stamp collection. And he’s ''still'' going at it when [[spoiler: the goat butlers start attacking.]]
* HeroicRROD: Again, played for laughs with [[spoiler: Shannon]] in "Cat Box of the Golden Witch".
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It should be noted that while the series seems to go the extra mile to keep things in canon, the author's interpretation of some events might put off some people.
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Can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6710475/1/When_the_Mountain_Goats_Cry here.]]
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** [OverlyLongGag Him...and her?]
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** [OverlyLongGag [[OverlyLongGag Him...and her?]her?]]