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* MasterApprenticeChain: Kurenai was Hinata's sensei for Team 8. Years later, Kurenai's daughter Mirai is the jonin sensei of Team 8 for Hinata's own daughter Himawari.
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* OneLastSmoke: [[spoiler: Ao, Shikaku, and Inoichi]] have some sake while [[spoiler:the Ten-Tails launches a tailed beast ball at Kumo]].
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* OneLastSmoke: [[spoiler: After saying goodbye telepathically to their loved ones, Ao, Shikaku, and Inoichi]] have some sake while [[spoiler:the Ten-Tails launches a tailed beast ball at Kumo]].
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* FailedState: In the years after the Fourth War, Kumo has been slipping into utter collapse with Darui having immense struggle trying to keep remaining citizens in the village while the other Kage such as Mei are having their own difficulties trying to get investors in trading due to climate change surrounding it.
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* CruelToBeKind:
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* CripplingOverspecialization: Invoked, discussed, and defied. [[spoiler:When Itachi arrives to the FinalBattle and tries to distract Tobimaru with Tsukuyomi, Tobimaru mocks for his over-reliance on 'big, flashy genjutsu' and breaks the illusion... only for Itachi to smirk and reveal that he just tricked Tobi into believing he used Tsukuyomi so that way he could catch his enemy in much weaker (but more effective) genjutsu. Itachi even admits that Tobi is right and that Itachi relied too much on his more powerful illusions, so he decided to make use of that]].
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* CripplingOverspecialization: Invoked, discussed, and defied. [[spoiler:When Itachi arrives to the FinalBattle and tries to distract Tobimaru with Tsukuyomi, Tobimaru mocks for his over-reliance on 'big, flashy genjutsu' and breaks the illusion... only for Itachi to smirk and reveal that he just tricked Tobi into believing he used Tsukuyomi so that way he could catch his enemy in much weaker [[BoringButPractical weaker]] (but more effective) genjutsu. Itachi even admits that Tobi is right and that Itachi relied too much on his more powerful illusions, so he decided to make use of that]].that]].
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** WordofGod confirms that [[spoiler:Ao is staying dead after the Ten Tails attacks the Sensor Division]].
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** WordofGod WordOfGod confirms that [[spoiler:Ao is staying dead after the Ten Tails attacks the Sensor Division]].
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* PleaseKeepYourHatOn: Ibiki pulls off his cap to show his scars to Himawari's graduation class to show that a shinobi's life [[ThisIsReality is nothing like what is seen in the movies and video games]] and how dangerous it is if unprepared.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: B has not been coping with the [[spoiler:death of A]] very well, as in addition to mostly taken on a hermit life in the two decades after the War, but also barely raps.
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* SenpaiKohai: After their respective [[HeelFaceTurn Heel-Face Turns]], both Nagato and Konan address Naruto as their kohai, fondly acknowledging him as their brother student and junior.
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* FatalFlaw: Kabuto's is his tendency to underestimate his opponents. Throughout the war, he underestimates Naruto, Sakura, Kakashi, Hinata, Bee, and even Edo Tensei!Itachi -- someone that he summoned for the war.
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** Kabuto's is his tendency to underestimate his opponents. Throughout the war, he underestimates Naruto, Sakura, Kakashi, Hinata, Bee, and even Edo Tensei!Itachi -- someone that he summoned for thewar. war.
** Like in canon, Itachi's IWorkAlone complex is this, which is shown that unlike in canon, he has no backup during his fight against Kabuto, as it's completely in his summoner's favor and ultimately results in his attempt in reversing Edo Tensei failing.
** Kabuto's is his tendency to underestimate his opponents. Throughout the war, he underestimates Naruto, Sakura, Kakashi, Hinata, Bee, and even Edo Tensei!Itachi -- someone that he summoned for the
** Like in canon, Itachi's IWorkAlone complex is this, which is shown that unlike in canon, he has no backup during his fight against Kabuto, as it's completely in his summoner's favor and ultimately results in his attempt in reversing Edo Tensei failing.
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The last chapter was posted on March 14, 2020, bringing the story to completion at 41 chapters and 376K words. However, the author promised that several sequels would follow. The first of them, based on ''LightNovel/KakashiHidenLightningInTheIcySky'', can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13639589/1/War-of-the-Biju-Kakashi-Hiden-Battle-in-the-Sky here]]. The second, based on ''Shikamaru Hiden'', can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14138824/1/ here]]
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The last chapter was posted on March 14, 2020, bringing the story to completion at 41 chapters and 376K words. However, the author promised that several sequels would follow. The first of them, based on ''LightNovel/KakashiHidenLightningInTheIcySky'', ''Literature/KakashiHidenLightningInTheIcySky'', can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13639589/1/War-of-the-Biju-Kakashi-Hiden-Battle-in-the-Sky here]]. The second, based on ''Shikamaru Hiden'', can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14138824/1/ here]]
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* AdaptationalSkimpiness: Hinata's new outfit in the first interquel is described as sleveless top, revealing some cleavage and [[BareYourMidriff exposing some of her stomach]] that replaces her old coat, as well as very short shorts replacing her old pants.
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* AdaptationalSkimpiness: Hinata's new outfit in the first interquel is described as sleveless top, revealing some cleavage and [[BareYourMidriff exposing some of her stomach]] stomach that replaces her old coat, as well as very short shorts replacing her old pants.
