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Story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/250453/the-youngest-alicorn here]].
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** It is stated that this takes place sometime between the events of ''Magical Mystery Cure'' and ''Equestria Girls.''
** Luna also reads a book in the Prologue about a possible future where Celestia never recovers from the Nightmare Moon incident. It is apparently very popular, and even the Princesses enjoy it!
** Luna also reads a book in the Prologue about a possible future where Celestia never recovers from the Nightmare Moon incident. It is apparently very popular, and even the Princesses enjoy it!
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** It is stated that this takes place sometime between the events of ''Magical Mystery Cure'' and ''Equestria Girls.''
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** Lunaalso reads a book in the Prologue about a possible future where Celestia never recovers from the Nightmare Moon incident. It is apparently very popular, and even the Princesses enjoy it!
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*** Rarity is not as much of a social climber after the events of this universe's ''Sweet and Elite.''
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*** Rarity is not as much of a social climber after the events of this universe's ''Sweet and Elite.''Elite''.
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*** Discord's reformation is a lot better than the show's. [[spoiler:Fluttershy genuinely wanted to be Discord's friends, but he was playing her the fool. Eventually, Flutters is attacked by demon beavers, and Discord saves her because she was the first pony to ever be genuinely nice to him.]]
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*** Discord's reformation is a lot better different than the show's. [[spoiler:Fluttershy genuinely wanted to be Discord's friends, but he was playing her the fool. Eventually, Flutters is attacked by demon beavers, and Discord saves her because she was the first pony to ever be genuinely nice to him.]]
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* AlternateUniverse: Luna adopts an orphan. 'nough said.
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* AlternateUniverse: AlternateUniverse:
** Luna adopts an orphan. 'nough said.
** Luna adopts an orphan. 'nough said.
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* OrphanageOfFear: Averted with High Hopes Orphanage. The head of it, Miss Sunny Smiles, has a sunny disposition, and the few orphans seen are happy (well, aside from the whole orphan thing).
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* OrphanageOfFear: OrphanageOfFear:
** Averted with High Hopes Orphanage. The head of it, Miss Sunny Smiles, has a sunny disposition, and the few orphans seen are happy (well, aside from the whole orphan thing).
** Averted with High Hopes Orphanage. The head of it, Miss Sunny Smiles, has a sunny disposition, and the few orphans seen are happy (well, aside from the whole orphan thing).
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* SiblingRivalry: Played with for Celly and Luna. In the original story, there was a huge prank war, but the author re-wrote the story (but she may include it later on).
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* SiblingRivalry: SiblingRivalry:
** Played with for Celly and Luna. In the original story, there was a huge prank war, but the author re-wrote the story (but she may include it later on).
** Played with for Celly and Luna. In the original story, there was a huge prank war, but the author re-wrote the story (but she may include it later on).
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* UnfortunateNames:PlayedForLaughs: Cadence apparently calls Celestia "Auntie Tia," which Lily points out to mean "Auntie Aunt" in Hoofspanic/Spanish.
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* UnfortunateNames:PlayedForLaughs: UnfortunateNames:
** PlayedForLaughs: Cadence apparently calls Celestia "Auntie Tia," which Lily points out to mean "Auntie Aunt" in Hoofspanic/Spanish.
** PlayedForLaughs: Cadence apparently calls Celestia "Auntie Tia," which Lily points out to mean "Auntie Aunt" in Hoofspanic/Spanish.
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*** Rarity is also not as much of a social climber after the events of this universe's ''Sweet and Elite.''
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*** Rarity is also not as much of a social climber after the events of this universe's ''Sweet and Elite.''
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** Rarity is also not as much of a social climber after the events of this universe's ''Sweet and Elite.''
** Discord's reformation is a lot better than the show's. [[spoiler:Fluttershy genuinely wanted to be Discord's friends, but he was playing her the fool. Eventually, Flutters is attacked by demon beavers, and Discord saves her because she was the first pony to ever be genuinely nice to him.]]
** Discord's reformation is a lot better than the show's. [[spoiler:Fluttershy genuinely wanted to be Discord's friends, but he was playing her the fool. Eventually, Flutters is attacked by demon beavers, and Discord saves her because she was the first pony to ever be genuinely nice to him.]]
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* CallBack:PlayedForLaughs: Celestia makes a joke referencing Nightmare Moon. Luna's reaction just makes it even funnier.
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* CallBack:PlayedForLaughs: CallBack: There is a short reference to Rainbow Dash's love of cider.
**PlayedForLaughs: Celestia makes a joke referencing Nightmare Moon. Luna's reaction just makes it even funnier.
**PlayedForLaughs: Celestia makes a joke referencing Nightmare Moon. Luna's reaction just makes it even funnier.
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* Continuity:PlayedForLaughs: Celestia makes a joke referencing Nightmare Moon. Luna's reaction just makes it even funnier.
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*Continuity:PlayedForLaughs: Celestia makes a joke referencing Nightmare Moon. Luna's reaction just makes it even funnier.
-->Celestia: Did it last forever?
-->Luna calmly put her cup of coffee onto the table and glared daggers at Celestia. There was a still silence, before she sighed dejectedly.
-->Celestia: Did it last forever?
-->Luna calmly put her cup of coffee onto the table and glared daggers at Celestia. There was a still silence, before she sighed dejectedly.
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* UnfortunateNames:PlayedForLaughs: Cadence apparently calls Celestia "Auntie Tia," which Lily points out to mean "Auntie Aunt" in
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* UnfortunateNames:PlayedForLaughs: Cadence apparently calls Celestia "Auntie Tia," which Lily points out to mean "Auntie Aunt" inin Hoofspanic/Spanish.
**Luna even goes the extra mile and deliberately gives her a new nickname the next day!
**Luna even goes the extra mile and deliberately gives her a new nickname the next day!
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**Discord's reformation is a lot better than the show's. [[spoiler:Fluttershy genuinely wanted to be Discord's friends, but he was playing her the fool. Eventually, Flutters is attacked by demon beavers, and Discord saves her because she was the first pony to ever be genuinely nice to him.]]
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*DarkAndTroubledPast: One of Lily's handmaidens, [[spoiler:Morning Glory]], has one that made her go completely mute!
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* SiblingRivalry: Played with for Celly and Luna. In the original story, there was a huge prank war, but the author re-wrote the story.
** She may or not include this again, later on.
** She may or not include this again, later on.
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* SiblingRivalry: Played with for Celly and Luna. In the original story, there was a huge prank war, but the author re-wrote the story.
** Shestory (but she may or not include this again, it later on.on).
**The two also have share some jests in the first chapter.
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**The two also have share some jests in the first chapter.
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* BodyguardCrush: [[spoiler:Luna and the Captain of her guard, Nebula, certainly enjoy each other's company! They even spend much of Lily's birthday party together.]].
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* BodyguardCrush: [[spoiler:Luna and the Captain of her guard, Nebula, certainly enjoy each other's company! They even spend much of Lily's birthday party together.]].]]
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.* OrphanageOfFear: Averted with High Hopes Orphanage. The head of it, Miss Sunny Smiles, has a sunny disposition, and the few orphans seen are happy (well, aside from the whole orphan thing).
.* OrphanageOfFear: Averted with High Hopes Orphanage. The head of it, Miss Sunny Smiles, has a sunny disposition, and the few orphans seen are happy (well, aside from the whole orphan thing).
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* OrphanageOfFear: Averted with High Hopes Orphanage. The head of it, Miss Sunny Smiles, has a sunny disposition, and the few orphans seen are happy (well, aside from the whole orphan thing).
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*NoodleIncident: Apparently, a fanatic cult member tried to assassinate Luna for whatever reason. All that we're given is that Luna is perplexed and amused at his murder weapon.
--> [[spoiler:She would never quite understood how that crazed stallion had gotten the idea that a combination of baking soda and vinegar would kill her]]
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--> [[spoiler:She would never quite understood how that crazed stallion had gotten the idea that a combination of baking soda and vinegar would kill her]]
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*UnfortunateNames:PlayedForLaughs: Cadence apparently calls Celestia "Auntie Tia," which Lily points out to mean "Auntie Aunt" in
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*BodyguardCrush: [[spoiler:Luna and the Captain of her guard, Nebula, certainly enjoy each other's company! They even spend much of Lily's birthday party together.]].
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**Luna also reads a book in the Prologue about a possible future where Celestia never recovers from the Nightmare Moon incident. It is apparently very popular, and even the Princesses enjoy it!
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* PrincessesRule: Celestia and Luna. Lily will also be crowned once she comes of age.
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* PrincessesRule: Celestia and Luna. Lily will also be crowned once she comes of age.age.
*SiblingRivalry: Played with for Celly and Luna. In the original story, there was a huge prank war, but the author re-wrote the story.
**She may or not include this again, later on.
*SiblingRivalry: Played with for Celly and Luna. In the original story, there was a huge prank war, but the author re-wrote the story.
**She may or not include this again, later on.
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-->I've also decided to make the orphanage a kind one, because the "hero who lived in a horrible lifestyle stayed good" cliche is overused anyways.
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-->I've also decided to make the orphanage a kind one, because the "hero who lived in a horrible lifestyle stayed good" cliche is overused anyways.anyways.
*PrincessesRule: Celestia and Luna. Lily will also be crowned once she comes of age.
*PrincessesRule: Celestia and Luna. Lily will also be crowned once she comes of age.
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* OrphanageofFear: Averted with High Hopes Orphanage. The head of it, Miss Sunny Smiles, has a sunny disposition, and the few orphans seen are happy (well, aside from the whole orphan thing).
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*AlternateUniverse: Luna adopts an orphan. 'nough said.
**It is stated that this takes place sometime between the events of ''Magical Mystery Cure'' and ''Equestria Girls.''
**Rarity is also not as much of a social climber after the events of this universe's ''Sweet and Elite.''
**It is stated that this takes place sometime between the events of ''Magical Mystery Cure'' and ''Equestria Girls.''
**Rarity is also not as much of a social climber after the events of this universe's ''Sweet and Elite.''
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* MarySue: Averted with Lily Note, even though she is an alicorn. She is also an orphan living in a pretty nice orphanage, and is not completely flawless.
** It also helps that she is not bright, contrasting colors like many horrible alicorn OCs...
** It also helps that she is not bright, contrasting colors like many horrible alicorn OCs...
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!! The following tropes are associated with ''The Youngest Alicorn'':
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!! The following tropes are associated with ''The Youngest Alicorn'':Alicorn'':
*MarySue: Averted with Lily Note, even though she is an alicorn. She is also an orphan living in a pretty nice orphanage, and is not completely flawless.
**It also helps that she is not bright, contrasting colors like many horrible alicorn OCs...
*OrphanageofFear: Averted with High Hopes Orphanage. The head of it, Miss Sunny Smiles, has a sunny disposition, and the few orphans seen are happy (well, aside from the whole orphan thing).
**As the author herself says:
-->I've also decided to make the orphanage a kind one, because the "hero who lived in a horrible lifestyle stayed good" cliche is overused anyways.
*MarySue: Averted with Lily Note, even though she is an alicorn. She is also an orphan living in a pretty nice orphanage, and is not completely flawless.
**It also helps that she is not bright, contrasting colors like many horrible alicorn OCs...
*OrphanageofFear: Averted with High Hopes Orphanage. The head of it, Miss Sunny Smiles, has a sunny disposition, and the few orphans seen are happy (well, aside from the whole orphan thing).
**As the author herself says:
-->I've also decided to make the orphanage a kind one, because the "hero who lived in a horrible lifestyle stayed good" cliche is overused anyways.
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Story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/250453/the-youngest-alicorn here]].
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[[caption-width-right:350:No Mary Sues to be found here!]]
[[caption-width-right:350:No Mary Sues to be found here!]]
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Story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/250453/the-youngest-alicorn here]]
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Story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/250453/the-youngest-alicorn here]]here]].
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Lily Note is both anxious and elated about her new position. After all, is it not every filly's dream to be a princess? However, the gilded appearance of royalty is much more complicated than dancing at balls, living in luxury, wearing beautiful dresses, and getting what you want. It does not help that her adoptive mother and aunt are having issues of their own.
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Lily Note is both anxious and elated about her new position. After all, is it not every filly's dream to be a princess? However, the gilded appearance of royalty is much more complicated than dancing at balls, living in luxury, wearing beautiful dresses, and getting what you want. It does not help that her adoptive mother and aunt are having issues of their own.own.
Story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/250453/the-youngest-alicorn here]]
Story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/250453/the-youngest-alicorn here]]
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Lily Note never really stuck out at High Hopes Orphanage. She was just a regular old unicorn. OR WAS SHE??
Yeah, turns out she's the first natural alicorn (that is, a pony born as an alicorn) in over 1000 years. As soon as Celestia and Luna heard about this, the younger sister decided to take Lily under her wing as her adopted daughter.
Lily Note is both anxious and elated about her new position. After all, is it not every filly's dream to be a princess? However, the gilded appearance of royalty is much more complicated than dancing at balls, living in luxury, wearing beautiful dresses, and getting what you want. It does not help that her adoptive mother and aunt are having issues of their own.
Yeah, turns out she's the first natural alicorn (that is, a pony born as an alicorn) in over 1000 years. As soon as Celestia and Luna heard about this, the younger sister decided to take Lily under her wing as her adopted daughter.
Lily Note is both anxious and elated about her new position. After all, is it not every filly's dream to be a princess? However, the gilded appearance of royalty is much more complicated than dancing at balls, living in luxury, wearing beautiful dresses, and getting what you want. It does not help that her adoptive mother and aunt are having issues of their own.
