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The fic was under a bit of {{Retcon}} after it changed authors, but only one chapter was ever published. The original author, meme-asaurus, has cancelled the original fic, and its continuation on by the name of "The Unexpetected Love Life of Dusk Shine Continues" [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/185781/the-unexpected-love-life-of-dusk-shine-continues has been hidden]], and the author ( [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/White+Rabbit White Rabbit]]) appears to have had his account removed.

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The fic was under a bit of {{Retcon}} after it changed authors, but only one chapter was ever published. The original author, meme-asaurus, has cancelled the original fic, and its continuation on by the name of "The Unexpetected Unexpected Love Life of Dusk Shine Continues" [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/185781/the-unexpected-love-life-of-dusk-shine-continues has been hidden]], and the author ( [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/White+Rabbit White Rabbit]]) appears to have had his account removed.



* CovertPervert: Dusk, while every bit the recluse Twilight is, is shown to be quite the pervert himself, both by Spike's accounts and several of his trains of thoughts.
* CrackFic: Chapter one ([[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E1MareInTheMoon Which retells the fir]][[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E2ElementsOfHarmony st two episodes]]) contains a lot of Meta humor and LemonyNarrator. Chapter two, short though it is in comparison to chapter one, seems to tone this down.

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* CovertPervert: Dusk, while every bit the recluse Twilight is, is shown to be quite the pervert himself, both by Spike's accounts and several of his trains of thoughts.
thoughts. Apparently he [[TheInternetIsForPorn looks up porn]] on [[Website/FourChan Ponichan]] and in the manga, he keeps a [[PornStash stash of "special magazines"]].
* CrackFic: Chapter one ([[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E1MareInTheMoon Which retells the fir]][[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E2ElementsOfHarmony st first]][[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E2ElementsOfHarmony two episodes]]) contains a lot of Meta humor and LemonyNarrator. Chapter two, short though it is in comparison to chapter one, seems to tone this down.



* {{Foreshadowing}}: Early in chapter one, Dash mentions when she brushes of Nightmare Moon's death threat that, amoung other things, she can't die yet because she 'hasn't banged that one geek yet', and in the chapters covering the Gala Ticket episode, Dusk makes mention about how one of the main reasons Dash wants him to pick her is because 'she wants to clop him in public'. [[spoiler: Guess which one of the mane cast Dusk ends up losing his virginity to way later in the fic. (Though, granted, it was ''unintentional''. They were both drugged out on poison joke at the time... It MakesSenseInContext. Rainbow Dash is still content with it though.)]]

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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Early in chapter one, Dash mentions when she brushes of Nightmare Moon's death threat that, amoung among other things, she can't die yet because she 'hasn't banged that one geek yet', and in the chapters covering the Gala Ticket episode, Dusk makes mention about how one of the main reasons Dash wants him to pick her is because 'she wants to clop him in public'. [[spoiler: Guess which one of the mane cast Dusk ends up losing his virginity to way later in the fic. (Though, granted, it was ''unintentional''. They were both drugged out on poison joke at the time... It MakesSenseInContext. Rainbow Dash is still content with it though.)]]



* LoveAtFirstSight: Just like in canon, Spike for Rarity. Then Dusk for Fluttershy.



* MarshmallowHell: Dusk take one by Rarity in the manga.

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* MarshmallowHell: Dusk take takes one by from Rarity in the manga.



* ShmuckBait: Rarity tells Dusk that he has a smudge on his cheek and insists he come closer so she can get it for him. Despite this being a {{blatant lie|s}}, Dusk (like an idiot) steps forward like she says until he's eye level with her, and she promptly [[spoiler:closes the distance between them, locking him in a kiss]].

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* ShmuckBait: Rarity tells Dusk that he has a smudge on his cheek and insists he come closer so she can get it for him. Despite this being a {{blatant lie|s}}, Dusk (like an idiot) steps forward like she says until he's eye level with her, and she promptly [[spoiler:closes closes the distance between them, locking him in a kiss]].kiss.



** Applejack is a Type B, being as friendly and generous as canon in her default state, but anything that triggers romantic feelings in her tends to make her get violently defensive, [[DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale even when ''she'' initiates it]].

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** Applejack is a Type B, "sweet" type, being as friendly and generous as canon in her default state, but anything that triggers romantic feelings in her tends to make her get violently defensive, [[DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale even when ''she'' initiates it]].



** [[spoiler:Evidently the Pinkamena Personality.]]
** As well as [[spoiler:Rarity, although she sticks to just making dire threats with the occasional catfight.]]

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** [[spoiler:Evidently the Pinkamena Personality.]]
** As well as [[spoiler:Rarity,
Rarity, although she sticks to just making dire threats with the occasional catfight.catfight.
** And evidently, [[spoiler:the Pinkamena Personality.
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[[caption-width-right:250: It's just like ''LightNovel/InfiniteStratos''. But [[RecycledWithAGimmick with ponies]].[[note]]Sadly, no awesome PoweredArmor, though.[[/note]]]]

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[[caption-width-right:250: It's just like ''LightNovel/InfiniteStratos''.''Literature/InfiniteStratos''. But [[RecycledWithAGimmick with ponies]].[[note]]Sadly, no awesome PoweredArmor, though.[[/note]]]]
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Names The Same is no longer a trope


* [[NamesTheSame Nickname's The Same]]: Dusk Shine and his brother Shining Armor both call each other "Shiny".
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* {{Bishonen}}: The story's description outright calls Dusk a pretty boy.

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* AloofBigBrother: Shining Armor.

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* %%* AloofBigBrother: Shining Armor.



* AwesomeMcCoolname: Fluttershy's full name is revealed to be Fluttershy [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Bloodsplatter]] Hurricane.



* BreakoutCharacter: Princess Platinum.

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* %%* BreakoutCharacter: Princess Platinum.



* DontYouDarePityMe: Pinkamena.

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* %%* DontYouDarePityMe: Pinkamena.
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* CerebusRollerCoaster: Chapter 1 ends with a silly note promising UnwantedHarem shenanigans and reference-based humor. Cue chapter 2, ending with [[spoiler: [[MoodWhiplash Dusk getting knocked out and dragged]] into [[KnightOfCerebus Pinkamena's]] basement.]] Chapter 3 starts with a ''Film/PulpFiction'' quote and a [[TearJerker Tear Jearking]] flashback from [[spoiler: Pinkie's]] perspective. Chapter 4 comes back with more humor. [[UpToEleven That should give you some perspective.]]

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* CerebusRollerCoaster: Chapter 1 ends with a silly note promising UnwantedHarem shenanigans and reference-based humor. Cue chapter 2, ending with [[spoiler: [[MoodWhiplash Dusk getting knocked out and dragged]] into [[KnightOfCerebus Pinkamena's]] basement.]] Chapter 3 starts with a ''Film/PulpFiction'' quote and a [[TearJerker Tear Jearking]] flashback from [[spoiler: Pinkie's]] perspective. Chapter 4 comes back with more humor. [[UpToEleven That should give you some perspective.]]
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* BeautyMark: Manga!Rarity has a star shaped one underneath her left eye.
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[[caption-width-right:250: It's just like ''LightNovel/InfiniteStratos''. But with ponies.[[note]]Sadly, no awesome PoweredArmor, though.[[/note]]]]

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[[caption-width-right:250: It's just like ''LightNovel/InfiniteStratos''. But [[RecycledWithAGimmick with ponies.ponies]].[[note]]Sadly, no awesome PoweredArmor, though.[[/note]]]]
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* ShmuckBait: Rarity tells Dusk that he has a smudge on his cheek and insets he come closer so she can get it for him. Despite this being a {{blatant lie|s}}, Dusk (like an idiot) steps forward like she says until he's eye level with her, and she promptly [[spoiler:closes the distance between them, locking him in a kiss]].

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* ShmuckBait: Rarity tells Dusk that he has a smudge on his cheek and insets insists he come closer so she can get it for him. Despite this being a {{blatant lie|s}}, Dusk (like an idiot) steps forward like she says until he's eye level with her, and she promptly [[spoiler:closes the distance between them, locking him in a kiss]].
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* ShmuckBait: Rarity tells Dusk that he has a smudge on his cheek and insets he come closer so she can get it for him. Despite this being a BlatantLie, Dusk (like an idiot) steps forward like she says until he's eye level with her, and she promptly [[spoiler:closes the distance between them, locking him in a kiss]].

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* ShmuckBait: Rarity tells Dusk that he has a smudge on his cheek and insets he come closer so she can get it for him. Despite this being a BlatantLie, {{blatant lie|s}}, Dusk (like an idiot) steps forward like she says until he's eye level with her, and she promptly [[spoiler:closes the distance between them, locking him in a kiss]].
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* ForcefulKiss: More often than not, any time Dusk Shine receives a kiss it will be one of these, with someone forcing it on him or surprising him with one. Though depending on who is giving it he may eventually return the kiss himself, like with Fluttershy or Rarity.



** Dusk Shine. Not only the Mane 5, but also Luna and Trixie fall in love for him.

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** Dusk Shine. Not only the Mane 5, but also Luna and Trixie fall in love for with him.


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* ShmuckBait: Rarity tells Dusk that he has a smudge on his cheek and insets he come closer so she can get it for him. Despite this being a BlatantLie, Dusk (like an idiot) steps forward like she says until he's eye level with her, and she promptly [[spoiler:closes the distance between them, locking him in a kiss]].


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* ShutUpKiss: [[spoiler:In the third chapter for "Look Before You Sleep", when Rarity gets into Dusk's bed with him he tries to talk her out of doing anything drastic, only for her to silence him with a deep kiss. Dusk ends up pondering his feelings for Rarity and her's for him, only to realize that he had been kissing Rarity back for sometime.]]
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** In the manga, his first is taken by [[spoiler:Nightmare Moon during their first encounter]].


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* TakeThatKiss: In the manga [[spoiler:during Dusk's first encounter with Nightmare Moon, she surprises him with [[ForcefulKiss a deep kiss on the lips]] after he reveals his identity to her, and she declares that everything that belongs to Celestia, including her student, will be hers]].
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* DistractedByTheSexy: Dusk ignores the whole scene with Steven Magnet because he's too busy glaring at [[HelloNurse wet-maned Rarity]].

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* DistractedByTheSexy: Dusk ignores the whole scene with Steven Magnet because he's too busy glaring at [[HelloNurse [[SexySoakedShirt wet-maned Rarity]].
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insufficient context for spoiled sweet, often-misused trope; zce and wrong example indentation


* SpoiledSweet: Pipsqueak and Vinyl Scratch, who are the children of [[UnclePennybags Fancypants]] and Fleur de Lis.
** [[GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex Good Ponies Have Good Sex]]: [[spoiler: Dusk wasn't Dash's first, but he was apparently her best.]]
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[=TL;DR=]: WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic [[JustForFun/XMeetsY mixed with]] HaremComedy. WordOfGod is that all Harem Genre hijinks are intended as an experiment to see how well the anime genre carries over. So far, [[HilarityEnsues the experiment is going swimmingly]]. Your mileage may vary, though, as some dislike it for the way the characters act compared to their canon personalities, especially "Dusk" himself. However, meme decided to go ahead and cancel the fic upon uploading the second chapter of the Sonic Rainboom arc.

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[=TL;DR=]: WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' [[JustForFun/XMeetsY mixed with]] HaremComedy. WordOfGod is that all Harem Genre hijinks are intended as an experiment to see how well the anime genre carries over. So far, [[HilarityEnsues the experiment is going swimmingly]]. Your mileage may vary, though, as some dislike it for the way the characters act compared to their canon personalities, especially "Dusk" himself. However, meme decided to go ahead and cancel the fic upon uploading the second chapter of the Sonic Rainboom arc.
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One Of Us is now Just For Fun per this TRS thread. Removed wick due to misuse.


NOTE: The author is apparently OneOfUs. He's even been pointing tropes he deliberately invoked/noticed as he went along. As such, we've thrown his responses in verbatim. Such are the cases for the YMMV bullets.

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NOTE: The author is apparently OneOfUs.a troper. He's even been pointing tropes he deliberately invoked/noticed as he went along. As such, we've thrown his responses in verbatim. Such are the cases for the YMMV bullets.
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That Cut Short and misuse.


* AbortedArc:
** The Winter Wrapup episode was skipped completely, mainly due to the author having difficulties establishing a winter having happened within the more constrained timeframe of the fic. (In the show, it's assumed that the winter takes place outside of the episodes.)
** Unfortunately, the original story itself. Meme ended it after losing interest, among other things. However, meme was kind enough to leave behind spoilers for what was to come. [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/185781/the-unexpected-love-life-of-dusk-shine-continues That is, until White Rabbit's]] {{Retcon}}.
*** Dusk and Luna's dream kid was going to be [[Fanfic/PastSins Nyx]], with Dusk being the one to pay child support.
*** At one point, Applejack was going to be the mare who won Dusk. When she ran off after The Last Roundup, she was going to have sex with Dusk in his sleep before she went, leading to a pregnancy scare. And then meme had the idea for Luna's dream sexcapades.
*** A Dog and Pony Show was going to be a long chapter ending in a short "Dear Princess Celestia" letter. ("Rarity scares me sometimes.")
*** The entire Gala included the five girls attempting to drag Dusk off on their escapades. Luna was going to have her guards kidnap Dusk for an all-night gaming session, where Dusk had never touched a controller in his life. Rarity was going to meet Blueblood, [[Fanfic/TheBestNightEver who was trapped in an endless Groundhog Day loop]] on Gala night, and they would argue over whose night was worse. Trixie would try to impress Dusk by using an old magic tome (The Necronomicon) and end up summoning zombies.
*** Gilda was to show up as a member of Appleloosa's weather team with Lightning Dust, leading Dash to question her feelings for Gilda, leading to them becoming a beta couple.
*** Dusk was going to become an alicorn.
*** Clover's Soul Gem was going to get smashed, leaving her in limbo, where she would encounter Discord. Discord would free her if she did some intell-gathering on the Elements so Discord could corrupt them.
*** Fluttershy was supposed to be a futanari. She would end up flashing the crowd during Green Isn't Your Color, but thereafter devolve ino a sputtering mess whenever it was brought up.
*** People were apparently asking for an Equestria Girl's chapter done Dusk-style, with Flash Sentry/Dusk bromance and a jealous Spike.
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Has nothing to do with familiarity with in-universe fiction.


* GenreSavvy: Rainbow Dash quickly clues in that the Shadowbolts only want to lure her away from the group and are a trick of Nightmare Moon's.

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The fic has been under a bit of {{Retcon}} after it changed authors. The original author, meme-asaurus, has cancelled the original fic, but it lives on by the name of [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/185781/the-unexpected-love-life-of-dusk-shine-continues The Unexpetected Love Life of Dusk Shine Continues]] by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/White+Rabbit White Rabbit]]

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The fic has been was under a bit of {{Retcon}} after it changed authors. authors, but only one chapter was ever published. The original author, meme-asaurus, has cancelled the original fic, but it lives and its continuation on by the name of "The Unexpetected Love Life of Dusk Shine Continues" [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/185781/the-unexpected-love-life-of-dusk-shine-continues The Unexpetected Love Life of Dusk Shine Continues]] by has been hidden]], and the author ( [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/White+Rabbit White Rabbit]]
Rabbit]]) appears to have had his account removed.


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* DeadFic: The continuation had all of one chapter published in three years, before it was made invisible and the author's account was removed from the site for unknown reasons.
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* CerebusRollerCoaster: Chapter 1 ends with a silly note promising UnwantedHarem shenanigans and reference-based humor. Cue chapter 2, ending with [[spoiler: [[MoodWhiplash Dusk getting knocked out and dragged]] into [[KnightOfCerebus Pinkamena's]] basement.]] Chapter 3 starts with a PulpFiction quote and a [[TearJerker Tear Jearking]] flashback from [[spoiler: Pinkie's]] perspective. Chapter 4 comes back with more humor. [[UpToEleven That should give you some perspective.]]

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* CerebusRollerCoaster: Chapter 1 ends with a silly note promising UnwantedHarem shenanigans and reference-based humor. Cue chapter 2, ending with [[spoiler: [[MoodWhiplash Dusk getting knocked out and dragged]] into [[KnightOfCerebus Pinkamena's]] basement.]] Chapter 3 starts with a PulpFiction ''Film/PulpFiction'' quote and a [[TearJerker Tear Jearking]] flashback from [[spoiler: Pinkie's]] perspective. Chapter 4 comes back with more humor. [[UpToEleven That should give you some perspective.]]

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