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* VirginPower: Apple's family prizes "purity" so much, in both the mother and child, that Snow Whites are conceived artificially.
* WeddingEnhancedFertility: Justified with Snow Whites. They're artificially inseminated on their marriage night.
* WeddingEnhancedFertility: Justified with Snow Whites. They're artificially inseminated on their marriage night.
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* VirginPower: Apple's family prizes "purity" so much, in both the mother and child, that Snow Whites are conceived artificially. \n* WeddingEnhancedFertility: Justified with Snow Whites. They're artificially inseminated on their marriage night.
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* VirginPower: Apple's family prizes "purity" so much, in both the mother and child, that Snow White's are conceived artificially.
* WeddingEnhancedFertility: Justified with Snow White's. They're artificially inseminated on their marriage night.
* WeddingEnhancedFertility: Justified with Snow White's. They're artificially inseminated on their marriage night.
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* VirginPower: Apple's family prizes "purity" so much, in both the mother and child, that Snow White's Whites are conceived artificially.
* WeddingEnhancedFertility: Justified with SnowWhite's.Whites. They're artificially inseminated on their marriage night.
* WeddingEnhancedFertility: Justified with Snow
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One day, Lizzy gets the bright idea to give Apple a poisoned apple to cheer her up. This goes exactly as expected. It turns out that this can't be cured medically--only True Love's Kiss will fix it. Daring attempts and fails this. As Raven cries over Apple, the others notice something strange and urge her to kiss Apple. It ''works''.
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One day, Lizzy gets the bright idea to give Apple a poisoned apple to cheer her up. This goes exactly as expected. It turns out that this can't be cured medically--only True Love's Kiss will fix it. Daring attempts to cure Apple and fails this. As Raven cries over Apple, the others notice something strange and urge her to kiss Apple. It ''works''.
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* DeliberateValuesDissonance: Cupid explains the differences between Wonderlandians, humans, and Gods in terms of sexual relations to Blondie. It gets to the point of TooMuchInformation for Blondie and just frazzles her.
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* DeliberateValuesDissonance: Cupid explains the differences between Wonderlandians, humans, and Gods in terms of sexual relations to Blondie.Blondie (it's also explained that Wonderland has a younger Age of Majority due to its history of war). It gets to the point of TooMuchInformation for Blondie and just frazzles her.
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* HotterAndSexier: The story is blunt on sexuality while it's source is a completely clean kid's cartoon.
* OhMyGods: Various substitutes are used but "ancestors" appears the most.
* OhMyGods: Various substitutes are used but "ancestors" appears the most.
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* HotterAndSexier: The story is blunt on sexuality while it's its source is a completely clean kid's cartoon.
* OhMyGods: Various substitutes areused used, but "ancestors" appears the most.
* OhMyGods: Various substitutes are
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* WeddingEnhancedPregnancy: Justified with Snow White's. They're artificially inseminated on their marriage night.
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* WeddingEnhancedPregnancy: WeddingEnhancedFertility: Justified with Snow White's. They're artificially inseminated on their marriage night.
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* TheBeard: [[spoiler:Snow White's]] husband is gay but they're married for tradition's sake.
* HotterAndSexier: The story is blunt on sexuality while it's source is a completely clean kid's cartoon.
* TheMistress: [[spoiler:Apple's]] father had a pageboy named Raoul that he kept as a lover. His wife was perfectly accepting of the relationship.
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* TrueLovesKiss: The plot goes in motion when Daring can't wake up Apple but ''Raven'' can.
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* SelectiveObliviousness: Apple is terribly oblivious to anything between her and Raven. It gets to the point where Raven straight-up confesses to her and Apple thinks it's a PlatonicDeclarationOfLove.
* TrueLovesKiss: The plot goes in motion when Daring can't wake up Apple but ''Raven''can.can.
* VirginPower: Apple's family prizes "purity" so much, in both the mother and child, that Snow White's are conceived artificially.
* WeddingEnhancedPregnancy: Justified with Snow White's. They're artificially inseminated on their marriage night.
* TrueLovesKiss: The plot goes in motion when Daring can't wake up Apple but ''Raven''
* VirginPower: Apple's family prizes "purity" so much, in both the mother and child, that Snow White's are conceived artificially.
* WeddingEnhancedPregnancy: Justified with Snow White's. They're artificially inseminated on their marriage night.
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* CoveredWithScars: Raven, due to her mother. She usew a concealment spell to cover up the scars.
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* CoveredWithScars: Raven, due to her mother. She usew uses a concealment spell cream to cover up the scars.
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* DudeShesLikeInAComa: Lampshaded. Daring tries to wake up Apple several times but it's awkward
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* AbusiveParents: Raven's mother is emotionally and physically abusive towards her.
* ClassPet: As a kid, Raven's class had a pet goldfish-serpent that died.
* CoveredWithScars: Raven, due to her mother. She usew a concealment spell to cover up the scars.
* DeliberateValuesDissonance: Cupid explains the differences between Wonderlandians, humans, and Gods in terms of sexual relations to Blondie. It gets to the point of TooMuchInformation for Blondie and just frazzles her.
* DudeShesLikeInAComa: Lampshaded. Daring tries to wake up Apple several times but it'sawkwardawkward.
* OhMyGods: Various substitutes are used but "ancestors" appears the most.
* ClassPet: As a kid, Raven's class had a pet goldfish-serpent that died.
* CoveredWithScars: Raven, due to her mother. She usew a concealment spell to cover up the scars.
* DeliberateValuesDissonance: Cupid explains the differences between Wonderlandians, humans, and Gods in terms of sexual relations to Blondie. It gets to the point of TooMuchInformation for Blondie and just frazzles her.
* DudeShesLikeInAComa: Lampshaded. Daring tries to wake up Apple several times but it's
* OhMyGods: Various substitutes are used but "ancestors" appears the most.
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* DudeShesInAComa: Lampshaded. Daring tries to wake up Apple several times but it's awkward
* FakingSickness: To explain away why she looks like she was crying, Raven tells Apple she has allergies.
* FakingSickness: To explain away why she looks like she was crying, Raven tells Apple she has allergies.
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* DudeShesInAComa: DudeShesLikeInAComa: Lampshaded. Daring tries to wake up Apple several times but it's awkward
*FakingSickness: PlayingSick: To explain away why she looks like she was crying, Raven tells Apple she has allergies.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10983213/1/The-True-Love-Loophole The True Love Loophole]]'' is an ''Toys/EverAfterHigh'' fanfic by Sigmu.
One day, Lizzy gets the bright idea to give Apple a poisoned apple to cheer her up. This goes exactly as expected. It turns out that this can't be cured medically--only True Love's Kiss will fix it. Daring attempts and fails this. As Raven cries over Apple, the others notice something strange and urge her to kiss Apple. It ''works''.
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!!This fic provides examples of:
* DudeShesInAComa: Lampshaded. Daring tries to wake up Apple several times but it's awkward
* FakingSickness: To explain away why she looks like she was crying, Raven tells Apple she has allergies.
* TrueLovesKiss: The plot goes in motion when Daring can't wake up Apple but ''Raven'' can.
One day, Lizzy gets the bright idea to give Apple a poisoned apple to cheer her up. This goes exactly as expected. It turns out that this can't be cured medically--only True Love's Kiss will fix it. Daring attempts and fails this. As Raven cries over Apple, the others notice something strange and urge her to kiss Apple. It ''works''.
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!!This fic provides examples of:
* DudeShesInAComa: Lampshaded. Daring tries to wake up Apple several times but it's awkward
* FakingSickness: To explain away why she looks like she was crying, Raven tells Apple she has allergies.
* TrueLovesKiss: The plot goes in motion when Daring can't wake up Apple but ''Raven'' can.
