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* AmbiguousDisorder:
** Though it is technically artificial, [[spoiler:Cheese with his memories removed]] suffers from frequent headaches, fatigue, forgetfulness, and irritability. However, drinking from a magic pool later makes him exhibit dog-like behavior that's much ''less'' ambiguous...
** Willow, Flora's youngest sister, talks less than her toddler brother Kernel despite being older than him, doesn't like eye contact, typically shows little emotion, and is overly obsessed with princesses.

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* GrumpyBear: Tomato. Must have been city life or something... [[spoiler:combined with crummy parents and so-called 'friends' who abandoned him when he was emotionally distressed]].



* TheIdealist: Flora Peace. Despite her occasional DeadpanSnarker moment, acting like a self-righteous naggy mother, or being reminded about how she hates Manehattan, she truly strives to see the best in everypony she meets. After all, she has found a reason to befriend [[GrumpyBear Tomato]] [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Sandwich]].

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* TheIdealist: Flora Peace. Despite her occasional DeadpanSnarker moment, acting like a self-righteous naggy mother, or being reminded about how she hates Manehattan, she truly strives to see the best in everypony she meets. After all, she has found a reason to befriend [[GrumpyBear Tomato]] [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Tomato Sandwich]].



* NeverBeHurtAgain: Tomato's main motivation for becoming a [[GrumpyBear grumpy]] DeadpanSnarker.

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* NeverBeHurtAgain: Tomato's main motivation for becoming a [[GrumpyBear grumpy]] grumpy DeadpanSnarker.
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** [[spoiler:Rooney subjects Cheese to this by forcing him to relive his worst memories UpToEleven, and then performing LaserGuidedAmnesia by the very painful method of having them literally ripped out of his mind (with the final memory removal having Cheese watch helplessly as they're taken away from him until he's not himself anymore)]].

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** [[spoiler:Rooney subjects Cheese to this by forcing him to relive his worst memories UpToEleven, memories, and then performing LaserGuidedAmnesia by the very painful method of having them literally ripped out of his mind (with the final memory removal having Cheese watch helplessly as they're taken away from him until he's not himself anymore)]].
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* AdultFear:
** Cheese naturally gets really concerned whenever his little brother is in danger. Whether it be running into bandits, making a deal with the wrong pony, or going missing, you can bet that Cheese would be worried.
** The Las Pegasus arc mentions that ''foals'' were [[spoiler:transformed into vampires--by the classic bite on the neck]]! An upset mother makes it hit even harder.
** The Manehattan arc has [[spoiler:Tomato having regressed in age to a small colt, losing any memory beyond his current age, and getting lost in the city]]. Any adult will know that a big city is not kind to unattended small children, especially with the dangers that [[spoiler:Tommy]] runs into, like gang fights and shady strangers, while trying to find his way home. Doesn't help that he thinks that he was abandoned by his family and eventually cries out of fear when he realizes how alone he is.
*** On a related note, [[spoiler:teenage Tomato]] may be suffering from depression, to the point where he seems to be considering suicide.
** March Redwood is angry with his daughter Flora when she [[spoiler:sets off to try to calm a rampaging Cheese Sandwich down]], because there is the chance that she very well could have been hurt [[spoiler:with the candy cannons Cheese carried set to a pretty high setting]].
** Even before Tomato learns what's causing it, he's very clearly worried about Cheese's mental health since Las Pegasus, which has spawned erratic behavior from the party pony, ranging from headaches to outright going berserk from seeing and hearing things that aren't there. He's even tried to talk him into staying in one place for the rest of the summer.
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* {{Megane}}: Tomato wears glasses.
** StoicSpectacles: He has a tendency to be aloof.
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** NotSoDifferent: He is related to Cheese Sandwich after all, and due to Tomato being the younger brother with a good dose of BigBrotherWorship in youth meant that he might be subconsciously emulating him.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Both of them.
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* BearsAreBadNews: A bear attacks the brothers, nearly killing Cheese. Tomato manages to drive it off with the fruit firework launcher.
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* NatureIsNotNice: Though most of their time camping between parties have been rather uneventful, the brothers have had moments of nature biting at them; they've been chased by Bighoof, had items stolen by a yeti, ended up in a forest fire, got attacked by a bear, and nearly murdered by a mob of animals.

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* NatureIsNotNice: Though most of their time camping between parties have has been rather uneventful, the brothers still have had moments of nature biting at them; they've been chased by Bighoof, had items stolen by a yeti, ended up in a forest fire, got attacked by a bear, and were nearly murdered by a mob of animals.

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* WhatTheHellHero: In "Brother Bothers", Pinkie snaps at both Sandwiches after their arguing ended in violence and made a stage collapse.

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* WhatTheHellHero: In "Brother Bothers", Pinkie snaps at both Sandwiches after their arguing ended in violence and made a stage collapse.



* NatureIsNotNice: Though most of their time camping between parties have been rather uneventful, the brothers have had moments of nature biting at them; they've been chased by Bighoof, had items stolen by a yeti, ended up in a forest fire, got attacked by a bear, and nearly murdered by a mob of animals.



** [[spoiler:Cheese's transformation into a werewolf. It begins with a headache and nausea, but once he takes a good look at the full moon, then the pain of pulsating muscles, twisting guts, his teeth and muzzle feeling yanked on, and a heart attack crashes onto him with full force until the transformation is complete]].

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** [[spoiler:Cheese's transformation into a werewolf. It begins with a headache and nausea, but once he takes a good look at the full moon, then the pain of pulsating muscles, twisting guts, his teeth and muzzle feeling yanked on, and a heart attack crashes onto leave him with full force writhing in agony until the transformation is complete]].



** Mozzarella, while trying to raise her sons into respectable stallions, is an ambitious and narrow-minded EducationMama who aggressively meddles in her sons' lives so that they fit her high standards, and snaps at them when they fall short or pursue the "wrong" career(and presumably practices ParentalFavoritism toward whichever son seems more promising at the moment). Her [[HenpeckedHusband mild-mannered husband]] was even driven into being a depressed {{Workaholic}} who barely acknowledges his family.
** Honeydew may be the OpenMindedParent, but [[spoiler:she was incredibly irresponsible, lazy, and a spoiled crybaby with an odd vendetta against rules (most likely because of Mozzarella), thus, she let her foals be free to do as they wish, having too much faith in ChildrenAreInnocent, and how they'd find their "true selves" without limits. She'd even pull the "you don't love me or our foals" card and/or run off to the local commune whenever her husband tried to assert his authority as a husband and father]].

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** Mozzarella, while trying to raise her sons into respectable stallions, is an ambitious and narrow-minded EducationMama who aggressively meddles in her sons' lives so that they fit her high standards, and snaps at them when they fall short or pursue the "wrong" career(and career (and presumably practices ParentalFavoritism toward whichever son seems more promising at the moment). Her [[HenpeckedHusband mild-mannered husband]] was even driven into being a depressed {{Workaholic}} who barely acknowledges his family.
** Honeydew may be the OpenMindedParent, but [[spoiler:she was incredibly irresponsible, lazy, and a spoiled crybaby with an odd vendetta against rules (most likely because of Mozzarella), thus, she let her foals be free to do as they wish, having too much faith in ChildrenAreInnocent, and how they'd find their "true selves" without limits.limits--while also ignoring NatureIsNotNice. She'd even pull the "you don't love me or our foals" card and/or run off to the local commune whenever her husband tried to assert his authority as a husband and father]].



*** He blatantly sings "The Longest Time" when it starts playing on the train.

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*** He blatantly sings "The Longest Time" when it starts playing on the train.
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'''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/208462/we-used-to-be-best-buddies We Used to Be Best Buddies]]'''--A oneshot based on "Do You Want to Build a Snowman?" from ''{{Disney/Frozen}}'', about the years when Cheese took to shutting himself away from Tommy, who only wants Cheese to show his friends just why he thinks Cheese is the best big brother. Includes Tomato's reaction to Cheese running away.

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'''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/208462/we-used-to-be-best-buddies We Used to Be Best Buddies]]'''--A oneshot based on "Do You Want to Build a Snowman?" from ''{{Disney/Frozen}}'', ''{{WesternAnimation/Frozen|2013}}'', about the years when Cheese took to shutting himself away from Tommy, who only wants Cheese to show his friends just why he thinks Cheese is the best big brother. Includes Tomato's reaction to Cheese running away.



* ShoutOut: ''We Used to Be Best Buddies'' is written around a song based on "Do You Want to Build a Snowman?" from ''{{Disney/Frozen}}''.

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* ShoutOut: ''We Used to Be Best Buddies'' is written around a song based on "Do You Want to Build a Snowman?" from ''{{Disney/Frozen}}''.''{{WesternAnimation/Frozen|2013}}''.

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** Both Cheese/Pinkie and Tomato/[[spoiler:Flora]] go on to have six foals each.

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** Both Cheese/Pinkie and Tomato/[[spoiler:Flora]] go on to have six eight foals each.



** The CheesePie twins: Outgoing, mischievous smart aleck Pizza Pockets and sweet ShrinkingViolet Fudge Fondue.

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** The elder CheesePie twins: Outgoing, mischievous smart aleck Pizza Pockets and sweet ShrinkingViolet Fudge Fondue. Fondue.
** The [[spoiler:Flormato]] twins: Perky, adventurous, and artistically-inclined Wildflower and dorky, timid, and scientifically-inclined Boxthorn.

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* NoodleIncident: In the Shining Vocals arc, Sapphire Shores is blackmailed with the threat of a tabloid article of her botched charity event, which apparently led to some porpoises' demise.

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In the Shining Vocals arc, Sapphire Shores is blackmailed with the threat of a tabloid article of her botched charity event, which apparently led to some porpoises' demise.demise.
** Cheese once mentions that when they were colts, Tomato stole some of Cheese's taffy and somehow ended up stuck on the ceiling.
** The reason that Manehattan cops don't like Cheese is that his confetti cannons once disrupted traffic and caused a pileup.
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* WeirdnessMagnet: Both Sandwiches often end up in weird situations, best exemplified in ''Brotherly Bonding Time'' with events like a FreakyFridayFlip with Princess Celestia, a PrinceAndPauper situation with a pop star, or [[BreadMilkEggsSquick turning into bloodthirsty monsters]].


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* PrinceAndPauper: Tomato meets Snapdragon Apple, a pop musician who happens to be his lookalike--and wants to trade places because his voice was blown out and he didn't want to let fans down. Tomato intially refuses, but is bribed into it by Snap unknowingly exploiting his worry about dwindling funds.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Despite being a goofy fic about Weird Al pony taking his grumpy brother on vacation, the fic features dark subject matter such as MindRape, depressing childhoods, [[WarIsHell a backstory about war]] and werewolves, bloody violence, and horrifying [[PainfulTransformation transformations.

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* DarkerAndEdgier: Despite being a goofy fic about Weird Al pony taking his grumpy brother on vacation, the fic features dark subject matter such as MindRape, depressing childhoods, [[WarIsHell a backstory about war]] and werewolves, bloody violence, and horrifying [[PainfulTransformation transformations.transformations]].
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** The first time is mainly defending Cheese's talent and trying to convince her that it's not what she thinks it is, but she easily shoots it down as it sounds like a naive teenager defending a toxic lover. He only manages to startle her with [[spoiler:his inner vampire acting up and hissing in anger]], but she only sees it as proving her point about him being immature.

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** The first time is mainly defending Cheese's talent and trying to convince her that it's not what she thinks it is, but she easily shoots it down as it sounds like a naive teenager defending a toxic lover.lover and justifying his own bad behavior [[JerkassHasAPoint (which on some level, she's right)]]. He only manages to startle her with [[spoiler:his inner vampire acting up and hissing in anger]], but she only sees it as proving her point about him being immature.

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* CallingTheOldManOut: Tomato has two attempts at this toward his mother, Mozzarella.
** The first time is mainly defending Cheese's talent and trying to convince her that it's not what she thinks it is, but she easily shoots it down as it sounds like a naive teenager defending a toxic lover. He only manages to startle her with [[spoiler:his inner vampire acting up and hissing in anger]], but she only sees it as proving her point about him being immature.
** Just before the climax, he finally gets to tear into her for being an overbearing perfectionist EducationMama that couldn't be bothered to give her sons proper parental affection and room to explore themselves and the world. He even points out that he managed to succeed in several endeavors without her meddling. She reacts by slapping him on the face, which just convinces him to sever ties with her.



* CourtroomAntics: Surprisingly, there is little nonsense in the CourtroomEpisode. The only antic is Kazam goading Cheese Sandwich into starting a fight when he learns why the party pony wasn't a witness. [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown It doesn't end well for him]].

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* CourtroomAntics: Surprisingly, there is little nonsense in the CourtroomEpisode. The only antic is Kazam goading Cheese Sandwich into starting a fight when he learns why the party pony wasn't called as a witness. [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown It doesn't end well for him]].



* DaddyDNATest: In a brief argument with Sour Sweet, Lemon Zest mentions having one taken, and that Fallow is indeed her father. Tomato's taken aback by what Sour Sweet implied about Lemon's mother [[spoiler:and his aunt]].
* DarkerAndEdgier: Despite being a goofy fic about Weird Al pony taking his grumpy brother on vacation, the fic features dark subject matter such as MindRape, depressing childhoods, [[WarIsHell a backstory about war]] and werewolves, bloody violence, and horrifying PainfulTransformations.

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* DaddyDNATest: In a brief argument with Sour Sweet, Lemon Zest mentions having one taken, and that Fallow is indeed her father. Tomato's taken aback by what Sour Sweet implied about Lemon's mother [[spoiler:and his aunt]].
mother, [[spoiler:Honeydew]].
* DarkerAndEdgier: Despite being a goofy fic about Weird Al pony taking his grumpy brother on vacation, the fic features dark subject matter such as MindRape, depressing childhoods, [[WarIsHell a backstory about war]] and werewolves, bloody violence, and horrifying PainfulTransformations.[[PainfulTransformation transformations.
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** Flora gives one to her cousin, [[spoiler:Creme Brulee]], for her petty dislike of Tomato (due to difference in economic class) and her ItsAllAboutMe attitude, which led to an attempt at sabotaging Tomato, only to end up sabotaging Cheese--which led to a ruined parade and innocent ponies in danger.
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* WouldHurtAChild: Both Kazam and [[spoiler:Wayer Rune]] more than likely knew that foals would be among the victims of their respective spells; the fact that [[spoiler:parents cry over their transformed children in both the Las Pegasus and Plague arcs]] and [[spoiler:the Cutie Mark Crusaders are shown to have been affected by the Monster Plague]] suggests that they just ''don't care''.

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* WouldHurtAChild: Both Kazam and [[spoiler:Wayer Rune]] more than likely knew that foals would be among the victims of their respective spells; the fact considering that [[spoiler:parents cry over their transformed children in both the Las Pegasus and Plague arcs]] and [[spoiler:the Cutie Mark Crusaders are shown to former [[spoiler:sicced Vampire!Tomato on his audience, which ''did'' have been affected by foals in it]] and the latter [[spoiler:enchanted the water supplies of each city and town he visited with his altered Monster Plague]] suggests Plague, knowing that ponies of all ages use water]], they just ''don't care''.clearly did not care.

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** [[spoiler:Rooney subjects Cheese to this by forcing him to relive his worst memories UpToEleven, and then performing Laser-Guided amnesia by the very painful method of having them literally ripped out of his mind (with the final memory removal having Cheese watch helplessly as they're taken away from him until he's not himself anymore)]].

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** [[spoiler:Rooney subjects Cheese to this by forcing him to relive his worst memories UpToEleven, and then performing Laser-Guided amnesia LaserGuidedAmnesia by the very painful method of having them literally ripped out of his mind (with the final memory removal having Cheese watch helplessly as they're taken away from him until he's not himself anymore)]].


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* WouldHurtAChild: Both Kazam and [[spoiler:Wayer Rune]] more than likely knew that foals would be among the victims of their respective spells; the fact that [[spoiler:parents cry over their transformed children in both the Las Pegasus and Plague arcs]] and [[spoiler:the Cutie Mark Crusaders are shown to have been affected by the Monster Plague]] suggests that they just ''don't care''.
* WouldntHurtAChild: Creme Brulee only expresses remorse for her actions when she realizes that foals could get seriously hurt [[DidNotThinkThisThrough from what her sabotage led to]].
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* HappyRain: During a tour around Salt Lick City, it starts raining. Flora seems all too happy to dance in it, and surprisingly enough, Tomato's willing to join her... [[OutOfCharacterMoment and even sing]] [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming during their dance!]]

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* HappyRain: During a tour around Salt Lick City, it starts raining. Flora seems all too happy to dance in it, and surprisingly enough, Tomato's willing to join her... [[OutOfCharacterMoment and even sing]] [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming during their dance!]]dance!

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