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Is a Dead Fic as Shade has not touched it it over two years time.



* {{Hypocrite}}: The Cardinal. He gives a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to Karin over acting irrationally after losing two of her daughters, and cites losing his father over it as a reason to stay mad at her. Meanwhile, he mocks her over losing both of them, he indirectly caused yearly instability and refugee situations in Tristain over the incursions from Germania, and failed to reconcile more than a [[WhatAnIdiot few gaping holes in his roundabout plan.]] And he does it out of pure petty revenge over his father. He acts out of personal hurt, and lets several things get worse than they should be, making his criticism of Karin feel a tad off.

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* {{Hypocrite}}: The Cardinal. He gives a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to Karin over acting irrationally after losing two of her daughters, and cites losing his father over it as a reason to stay mad at her. Meanwhile, he mocks her over losing both of them, he indirectly caused yearly instability and refugee situations in Tristain over the incursions from Germania, bonus points for making the crown look weak as well in that regard, and failed to reconcile more than a [[WhatAnIdiot few gaping holes in his roundabout plan.]] And he does it out of pure petty revenge over his father. He acts out of personal hurt, and lets several things get worse than they should be, making his criticism of Karin feel a tad off.

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* {{Hypocrite}}: The Cardinal. He gives a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to Karin over acting irrationally after losing two of her daughters, and cites losing his father over it as a reason to stay mad at her. Meanwhile, he mocks her over losing both of them, he indirectly caused yearly instability and refugee situations in Tristain over the incursions from Germania, and failed to reconcile more than a [[WhatAnIdiot few gaping holes in his roundabout plan.]] ''Especially'' the accusations of treason considering he kidnapped a member of a family that has, though distant, royal blood. All of the troubles in the story are his fault, yet he is too blinded by his fathers death, much like Karin was for her daughters, to see it and comes off as rather irrational himself.

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* {{Hypocrite}}: The Cardinal. He gives a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to Karin over acting irrationally after losing two of her daughters, and cites losing his father over it as a reason to stay mad at her. Meanwhile, he mocks her over losing both of them, he indirectly caused yearly instability and refugee situations in Tristain over the incursions from Germania, and failed to reconcile more than a [[WhatAnIdiot few gaping holes in his roundabout plan.]] ''Especially'' the accusations And he does it out of treason considering he kidnapped a member of a family that has, though distant, royal blood. All of the troubles in the story are pure petty revenge over his fault, yet he is too blinded by father. He acts out of personal hurt, and lets several things get worse than they should be, making his fathers death, much like criticism of Karin was for her daughters, to see it and comes off as rather irrational himself. feel a tad off.



* NeverMyFault: The Cardinal rants at Karin over the trouble she caused, especially for his family, and country... which only happened because he stole her daughter, and killed the other one, an unprovoked action on his part.



* RevengeMyopia: The Cardinal seems rather self righteous in his speech against Karin, stating he would do what he did because she's a 'selfish bitch', citing her actions after losing her daughters as why. What he fails to remember is that he ''caused'' them in the first place. He kidnapped one and murdered the other, and gloats about the latter, which caused Karin to act irrationally, which in turn led to him losing his father. His spiel against her regarding treason is laughable considering he committed 'it'' with his scheme going behind everyone else's backs, and kidnapping and murder unprovoked against an ally, which in itself doesn't seem rational at all.


* [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Hypocrite Hypocrite:]] The Cardinal. He gives a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to Karin over acting irrationally after losing two of her daughters, and cites losing his father over it as a reason to stay mad at her. Meanwhile, he mocks her over losing both of them, he indirectly caused yearly instability and refugee situations in Tristain over the incursions from Germania, and failed to reconcile more than a [[WhatAnIdiot few gaping holes in his roundabout plan.]] ''Especially'' the accusations of treason considering he kidnapped a member of a family that has, though distant, royal blood. All of the troubles in the story are his fault, yet he is too blinded by his fathers death, much like Karin was for her daughters, to see it and comes off as rather irrational himself.

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* [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Hypocrite Hypocrite:]] {{Hypocrite}}: The Cardinal. He gives a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to Karin over acting irrationally after losing two of her daughters, and cites losing his father over it as a reason to stay mad at her. Meanwhile, he mocks her over losing both of them, he indirectly caused yearly instability and refugee situations in Tristain over the incursions from Germania, and failed to reconcile more than a [[WhatAnIdiot few gaping holes in his roundabout plan.]] ''Especially'' the accusations of treason considering he kidnapped a member of a family that has, though distant, royal blood. All of the troubles in the story are his fault, yet he is too blinded by his fathers death, much like Karin was for her daughters, to see it and comes off as rather irrational himself.

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* RevengeMyopia: The Cardinal seems rather self righteous in his speech against Karin, stating he would do what he did because she's a 'selfish bitch', citing her actions after losing her daughters as why. What he fails to remember is that he ''caused'' them in the first place. He kidnapped one and murdered the other, and gloats about the latter, which caused Karin to act irrationally, which in turn led to him losing his father. His spiel against her regarding treason is laughable considering he committed 'it'' with his scheme going behind everyone else's backs, and kidnapping and murder unprovoked against an ally, which in itself doesn't seem rational at all.


* Hypocrite: The Cardinal. He gives a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to Karin over acting irrationally after losing two of her daughters, and cites losing his father over it as a reason to stay mad at her. Meanwhile, he mocks her over losing both of them, he indirectly caused yearly instability and refugee situations in Tristain over the incursions from Germania, and failed to reconcile more than a [[WhatAnIdiot few gaping holes in his plan.]]

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* Hypocrite: [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Hypocrite Hypocrite:]] The Cardinal. He gives a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to Karin over acting irrationally after losing two of her daughters, and cites losing his father over it as a reason to stay mad at her. Meanwhile, he mocks her over losing both of them, he indirectly caused yearly instability and refugee situations in Tristain over the incursions from Germania, and failed to reconcile more than a [[WhatAnIdiot few gaping holes in his roundabout plan.]] ''Especially'' the accusations of treason considering he kidnapped a member of a family that has, though distant, royal blood. All of the troubles in the story are his fault, yet he is too blinded by his fathers death, much like Karin was for her daughters, to see it and comes off as rather irrational himself.


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* NeverMyFault: The Cardinal rants at Karin over the trouble she caused, especially for his family, and country... which only happened because he stole her daughter, and killed the other one, an unprovoked action on his part.

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* Hypocrite: The Cardinal. He gives a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to Karin over acting irrationally after losing two of her daughters, and cites losing his father over it as a reason to stay mad at her. Meanwhile, he mocks her over losing both of them, he indirectly caused yearly instability and refugee situations in Tristain over the incursions from Germania, and failed to reconcile more than a [[WhatAnIdiot few gaping holes in his plan.]]


* RolePlayingGameTerms: Saito starts using these, relating his situation to being stuck in a game, such as asking Luise to provide DPS.

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* RolePlayingGameTerms: UsefulNotes/RolePlayingGameTerms: Saito starts using these, relating his situation to being stuck in a game, such as asking Luise to provide DPS.





* ActionMom: Karin, natch.

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* %%* ActionMom: Karin, natch.Karin.



** Louise in Chapter 69.
--->'''Louise:''' "He could have died. Do you know what it means? When you're dead, you're in Founder Brimir's arms forever. There's no coming back. You can't just turn back time. A dead person is dead forever, so I am angry. I am angry and I am hurt that he could not wait for me to wake up, and I don't care if he succeeded now, because if tomorrow he does the same and he fails, then I'll be the one left to pick up the pieces of his scattered corpse to sew them back together, and then I'll have to present it to his family saying that he died bravely, but they would rather have their son back."
** It runs in her family considering Eleonore got pissed at Wardes for fighting an Elf that trying to kill them in Chapter 75, [[SlapSlapKiss slapping him and then hugging him.]]

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** Louise in Chapter 69.
69. It runs in her family considering Eleonore got pissed at Wardes for fighting an Elf that trying to kill them in Chapter 75, [[SlapSlapKiss slapping him and then hugging him.]]
--->'''Louise:''' "He He could have died. Do you know what it means? When you're dead, you're in Founder Brimir's arms forever. There's no coming back. You can't just turn back time. A dead person is dead forever, so I am angry. I am angry and I am hurt that he could not wait for me to wake up, and I don't care if he succeeded now, because if tomorrow he does the same and he fails, then I'll be the one left to pick up the pieces of his scattered corpse to sew them back together, and then I'll have to present it to his family saying that he died bravely, but they would rather have their son back."
** It runs in her family considering Eleonore got pissed at Wardes for fighting an Elf that trying to kill them in Chapter 75, [[SlapSlapKiss slapping him and then hugging him.]]



* AsleepForDays:
** Saito, after fighting the wolves.
*** He was out for a full week after the fight with Karin.
*** A few days after [[spoiler:becoming Lífþrasir and being kidnapped by Julio.]]

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* AsleepForDays:
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AsleepForDays: Saito, after several times:
** After
fighting the wolves.
*** ** He was out for a full week after the fight with Karin.
*** ** A few days after [[spoiler:becoming Lífþrasir and being kidnapped by Julio.]]



* MistakenForRomance: The Blacksmith in Chapter 12 presumed that Saito and Luise were a couple to the extent of placing his last name on her Adventurer Tag.
** Luise later on plays it up to keep Saito away from other women, [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/5067388/ due to him eventually leaving so there would be less heartbreak]].

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* MistakenForRomance: MistakenForRomance:
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The Blacksmith in Chapter 12 presumed that Saito and Luise were a couple to the extent of placing his last name on her Adventurer Tag.
** Luise later on plays it up to keep Saito away from other women, [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/5067388/ due to him eventually leaving so there would be less heartbreak]].



* NeverLearnedToRead: Saito ''can'' read, [[NoExceptYes just not the alphabet they use]]. Luise decides to teach him so that when he'd have an easier time getting back home.

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* NeverLearnedToRead: Saito ''can'' read, [[NoExceptYes [[DistinctionWithoutADifference just not the alphabet they use]]. Luise decides to teach him so that when he'd have an easier time getting back home.


* AlternativeCalendar: Luise's world uses a drastically different calendar, not to mention being set so far in the future by over 4000 years that Saito thinks if its his world then AfterTheEnd has taken place.

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* AlternativeCalendar: Luise's world uses a drastically different calendar, not to mention being set so far in the future by over 4000 years that Saito thinks if its it's his world then AfterTheEnd has taken place.



*** He was out for a full week afer the fight with Karin.

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*** He was out for a full week afer after the fight with Karin.



* DeathFakedForYou: [[spoiler:The Pope faked the deaths of the Chef Marteau and the orphans, sending the former to the front-lines and the latter to different orphanages.]]

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* DeathFakedForYou: [[spoiler:The [[spoiler: The Pope faked the deaths of the Chef Marteau and the orphans, sending the former to the front-lines and the latter to different orphanages.]]



* TheDoorSlamsYou: PlayedForDrama, but Charlotte's fear of doors comes from her uncle bashing his daughter's her head against one constantly until she was dead to mimic how Karin felt with her daughter gone.

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* TheDoorSlamsYou: PlayedForDrama, but Charlotte's fear of doors comes from her uncle bashing his daughter's her head against one constantly until she was dead to mimic how Karin felt with her daughter gone.



* FailureIsTheOnlyOption: Nepthys certainly believes this, due to the fact that the humans carry the sins of their past actions with eraticating several previous speices from existence, making it so that their own would eventually be erased because of the Void no matter what they do. Saito suggests [[TakeAThirdOption just moving]] the Void-bearers into his world instead.

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* FailureIsTheOnlyOption: Nepthys certainly believes this, due to the fact that the humans carry the sins of their past actions with eraticating eradicating several previous speices species from existence, making it so that their own would eventually be erased because of the Void no matter what they do. Saito suggests [[TakeAThirdOption just moving]] the Void-bearers into his world instead.



* {{Familiar}}: Saito is this for Louise. [[spoiler:And later Tiffania.]] While she's initially upset since once you summon a familiar you can't replace them until the current one dies, his [[LightningBruiser familiar]] [[InstantExpert powers]] makes him worthwhile.

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* {{Familiar}}: Saito is this for Louise. [[spoiler:And [[spoiler: And later Tiffania.]] While she's initially upset since once you summon a familiar familiar, you can't replace them until the current one dies, his [[LightningBruiser familiar]] [[InstantExpert powers]] makes him worthwhile.



** The Vampires Amethyst and Daphne test the blood of whoever comes to claim to be Karin's daughter. They're giddy when they taste Louise blood, confirming its her.

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** The Vampires Amethyst and Daphne test the blood of whoever comes to claim to be Karin's daughter. They're giddy when they taste Louise Louise's blood, confirming its it's her.



* MyMasterRightOrWrong: Julio feels that as void familiars they are extensions of their masters and nothing more, himself included.
* NeverLearnedToRead: Saito ''can'' read, [[NoExceptYes just not alphabet they use]]. Luise decides to teach him so that when he'd have an easier time getting back home.

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* MyMasterRightOrWrong: Julio feels that as void familiars familiars, they are extensions of their masters and nothing more, himself included.
* NeverLearnedToRead: Saito ''can'' read, [[NoExceptYes just not the alphabet they use]]. Luise decides to teach him so that when he'd have an easier time getting back home.



* NothingPersonal: Wardes states this when its revealed he helped Charlotte manipulate Saito (he also stopped his heart when he played the role of an assassin by stabbing him and then electrocuting him).

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* NothingPersonal: Wardes states this when its it's revealed he helped Charlotte manipulate Saito (he also stopped his heart when he played the role of an assassin by stabbing him and then electrocuting him).



--> '''Cardinal:'''" . "The only one to blame is you, Duchess! You couldn't wait! You had to find your daughter on the double! On the triple! Didn't matter the number of diplomatic accidents it would cause! Didn't matter if the Germanian ambassador was throttled out of a window, or if half the knights of the corps suddenly resigned to follow you in your inane crusade! For three years I sought out your daughter through my own means, just so I could slap in your face your weakness when compared to the Crown!"\\

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--> '''Cardinal:'''" . "The only one to blame is you, Duchess! You couldn't wait! You had to find your daughter on the double! On the triple! Didn't matter the number of diplomatic accidents it would cause! Didn't matter if the Germanian ambassador was throttled out of a window, or if half the knights of the corps suddenly resigned to follow you in your inane crusade! For three years years, I sought out your daughter through my own means, just so I could slap in your face your weakness when compared to the Crown!"\\



"But then you had to go and move a mountain. You had to build an outpost, you just had to order the knights of the Manticore to follow you! And those fools did! The King told them not to, and they followed you! Do you have any idea what that meant?! That was the closest you could have gone to treason! The Crown has power as long as the people that swear fealty to it respect it! But to find your daughter you decided to shit on Everything!"\\

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"But then you had to go and move a mountain. You had to build an outpost, you just had to order the knights of the Manticore to follow you! And those fools did! The King told them not to, and they followed you! Do you have any idea what that meant?! That was the closest you could have gone to treason! The Crown has power as long as the people that swear fealty to it respect it! But to find your daughter daughter, you decided to shit on Everything!"\\



"The nobles whispered! It's always been about magic, our nobility! The Duchess can move a mountain-what can our King do? The Duke's the bastard in the royal line, he's a descendant of Brimir too! So, frankly? When someone killed your second daughter? I was glad they did just to see you realize how weak you were."\\

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"The nobles whispered! It's always been about magic, our nobility! The Duchess can move a mountain-what can our King do? The Duke's the bastard in the royal line, line; he's a descendant of Brimir too! So, frankly? When someone killed your second daughter? I was glad they did just to see you realize how weak you were."\\



* RolePlayingGameTerms: Saito starts using these, relating his situation to being stuck in a game, suching as asking Luise to provide DPS.

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* RolePlayingGameTerms: Saito starts using these, relating his situation to being stuck in a game, suching such as asking Luise to provide DPS.



* StabTheScorpion: Saito takes the dagger and rushes for Luise in Chapter 4, who she had been harsh on to this point, and she expects the worse... only for him to get her out of the way so he could stab the last wolf she missed before it bit her.

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* StabTheScorpion: Saito takes the dagger and rushes for Luise in Chapter 4, who she had been harsh on to this point, and she expects the worse...worst... only for him to get her out of the way so he could stab the last wolf she missed before it bit her.



* SweetPollyOliver: Luise does this from Chapter 17 onwards, claiming that two male adventurers together made things less conspicous and they weren't as likely to be [[MistakenForCouple seen as lovers.]]

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* SweetPollyOliver: Luise does this from Chapter 17 onwards, onward, claiming that two male adventurers together made things less conspicous conspicuous and they weren't as likely to be [[MistakenForCouple seen as lovers.]]



* ZettaiRyouiki: Saito mentions he has a fine apprication of this when it comes to skirts and stockings.

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* ZettaiRyouiki: Saito mentions he has a fine apprication appreciation of this when it comes to skirts and stockings.


From the same [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3864170/Shadenight123 author]] as Fanfic/SoulsArtOnline and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9658968/1/Enslaved Enslaved]], [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/the-steep-path-ahead-familiar-of-zero-au.22767/ The Steep Path Ahead]] is set in an AU of LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero where Louise is kidnapped by an elf as a child only for the ones who hired him to die before paying him, so he dropped her off in an orphanage. Several years later, ''Luise'' fails her exam to get into the Academy and summons Saito in order to prove that she isn't a failure.

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From the same [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3864170/Shadenight123 net/u/3864170/ author]] as Fanfic/SoulsArtOnline ''Fanfic/SoulsArtOnline'' and [[https://www.''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9658968/1/Enslaved Enslaved]], [[https://forums.net/s/9658968/1/ Enslaved]]'', ''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/the-steep-path-ahead-familiar-of-zero-au.22767/ The Steep Path Ahead]] Ahead]]'' is set in an AU of LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' where Louise is kidnapped by an elf as a child only for the ones who hired him to die before paying him, so he dropped her off in an orphanage. Several years later, ''Luise'' fails her exam to get into the Academy and summons Saito in order to prove that she isn't a failure.






* ZombieApocalypse: Albion went through one of these courtesy of Sheffield being more than a little upset over her lover's death.

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* ZombieApocalypse: Albion went through one of these courtesy of Sheffield being more than a little upset over her lover's death.death.

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* AnimateDead: An advanced spell of the Water Element, TheUndead created in this manner can fight just as well as they did when alive and have to be killed by either the [[ReviveKillsZombie Cure Spell]] or be [[NoBodyLeftBehind vaporized.]]

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* AnimateDead: An advanced spell of the Water Element, TheUndead created in this manner can fight just as well as they did when alive and have to be killed by either the [[ReviveKillsZombie Cure Spell]] Spell]], BurnTheUndead, or be [[NoBodyLeftBehind vaporized.]]



* ZombieApocalypse: Albion went through one of these courtesy of Sheffield being more than a little upset over her lover's death.

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* ZombieApocalypse: Albion went through one of these courtesy of Sheffield being more than a little upset over her lover's death.

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* ManipulativeBastard: Nepthys.


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** Saito has this problem in general.

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* TakingYouWithMe: Julio intends to do this in Chapter 100 with Saito, so that they aren't captured by elves, complete with SeeYouInHell. Louise stops it.

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* SeeingThroughAnothersEyes: Louise can see through Saito's eyes at certain points, such as in Chapter 99.


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** Chapter 99 has Saito deciding to end the war by trying to force them to listen, leading to him kidnapping the Pope. Julio lost an arm and control of his powers, the Holy City is burning, and Louise plans to raze it to the ground for kidnapping Saito.

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