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* TheTeam: It's more than a harem, its a group coming together to strike a decisive blow against You-Know-Who.
** TheLancer: Ginny. While she's emotionally and physically closest to Harry, she's also the first one to call him on his bullshit and isn't afraid to verbally, psychically, or ''physically'' beat some sense into him.
** TheSmartGuy: Hermione, just as in canon. She's the one who figured this whole mess out. Once they're bonded, Harry quickly decides not to bother trying to actually follow Hermione's thoughts; when she gets her think on, she's on a level he can't even begin to understand.
** TheHeart: Luna, who in her own way is just as clever as Hermione and Susan, but displays it much more rarely (or in ways that take a while to grasp) and is the most open, warm, and sensitive of the girls.
** TheGenericGuy and TheHeart: Demelza has fears of just being the former, and while she doesn't have any obviously unique characteristics to recommend her, she's still important to Harry and everyone else. She does manage to consistently bring out the best in everyone around her, [[spoiler:inspiring the entire group to stage an attack on Malfoy Manor to rescue her after her abduction]].
** TheFace and TheTeamBenefactor: Susan slips into this, being politically savvy, quite rich, and emancipated and living on her own in a large manor (since her parents died). She provides political know-how and a large house for everyone to meet in when not at Hogwarts.
** TeamMom: Katie is growing into this, mostly towards Harry, but taking the other girls under her wing as well.
** TheBigGuy and TokenNonHuman: Fleur, being a highly skilled and of-age witch and a Triwizard contender means she knows magic the others have no idea about. Also, being part-Veela gives her some SuperStrength and PlayingWithFire, so she's surprisingly dangerous when provoked, as well as making her the only member of the harem who isn't purely human (which has some ulterior benefits for Harry when he and Fleur have sex).
** TagalongKid: Gabrielle. Fleur's younger sister, Fleur brought her along primarily to get her away from their mother ([[AdaptationalVillainy who's quite a piece of work in this fic]]). She wants to help, but Harry (and, presumably, the others) want to keep her safe from the dangers of confronting Voldemort and the Death Eaters. And Harry knows she's crushing on him ''hard'', and wants to spare her the painful sight of him with. . . well, basically everyone ''but'' her.
** SixthRangerTraitor: Pansy Parkinson, with the twist that the group ''knows'' she's TheMole and are planning to [[FeedTheMole feed her]].
** TheLancer: Ginny. While she's emotionally and physically closest to Harry, she's also the first one to call him on his bullshit and isn't afraid to verbally, psychically, or ''physically'' beat some sense into him.
** TheSmartGuy: Hermione, just as in canon. She's the one who figured this whole mess out. Once they're bonded, Harry quickly decides not to bother trying to actually follow Hermione's thoughts; when she gets her think on, she's on a level he can't even begin to understand.
** TheHeart: Luna, who in her own way is just as clever as Hermione and Susan, but displays it much more rarely (or in ways that take a while to grasp) and is the most open, warm, and sensitive of the girls.
** TheGenericGuy and TheHeart: Demelza has fears of just being the former, and while she doesn't have any obviously unique characteristics to recommend her, she's still important to Harry and everyone else. She does manage to consistently bring out the best in everyone around her, [[spoiler:inspiring the entire group to stage an attack on Malfoy Manor to rescue her after her abduction]].
** TheFace and TheTeamBenefactor: Susan slips into this, being politically savvy, quite rich, and emancipated and living on her own in a large manor (since her parents died). She provides political know-how and a large house for everyone to meet in when not at Hogwarts.
** TeamMom: Katie is growing into this, mostly towards Harry, but taking the other girls under her wing as well.
** TheBigGuy and TokenNonHuman: Fleur, being a highly skilled and of-age witch and a Triwizard contender means she knows magic the others have no idea about. Also, being part-Veela gives her some SuperStrength and PlayingWithFire, so she's surprisingly dangerous when provoked, as well as making her the only member of the harem who isn't purely human (which has some ulterior benefits for Harry when he and Fleur have sex).
** TagalongKid: Gabrielle. Fleur's younger sister, Fleur brought her along primarily to get her away from their mother ([[AdaptationalVillainy who's quite a piece of work in this fic]]). She wants to help, but Harry (and, presumably, the others) want to keep her safe from the dangers of confronting Voldemort and the Death Eaters. And Harry knows she's crushing on him ''hard'', and wants to spare her the painful sight of him with. . . well, basically everyone ''but'' her.
** SixthRangerTraitor: Pansy Parkinson, with the twist that the group ''knows'' she's TheMole and are planning to [[FeedTheMole feed her]].
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* TheTeam: It's more than a harem, its a group coming together to strike a decisive blow against You-Know-Who.
** TheLancer: Ginny. While she'sYou-Know-Who. Ginny's emotionally and physically closest to Harry, but she's also the first one to call him on his bullshit and isn't afraid to verbally, psychically, or ''physically'' beat some sense into him.
** TheSmartGuy: Hermione, just as in canon. She'shim. Hermione's the one who figured this whole mess out. Once they're bonded, Harry quickly decides not to bother trying to actually follow Hermione's thoughts; when she gets her think on, she's on a level he can't even begin to understand.
** TheHeart:understand. Luna, who in her own way way, is just as clever as Hermione and Susan, but displays it much more rarely (or in ways that take a while to grasp) and is the most open, warm, and sensitive of the girls.
** TheGenericGuy and TheHeart:girls. While Demelza has fears of just being the former, and while she doesn't have any obviously unique characteristics to recommend her, she's still important to Harry and everyone else. She does manage to consistently bring out the best in everyone around her, [[spoiler:inspiring the entire group to stage an attack on Malfoy Manor to rescue her after her abduction]].
** TheFace and TheTeamBenefactor:abduction]]. Susan slips into this, being is politically savvy, quite rich, and emancipated and living on her own in a large manor (since her parents died). She provides political know-how and a large house for everyone to meet in when not at Hogwarts.
** TeamMom:Hogwarts. Katie is growing into this, mostly towards Harry, but taking Harry and the other girls under her wing as well.
** TheBigGuy and TokenNonHuman: Fleur, beingwing. Fleur is a highly skilled and of-age witch and a Triwizard contender means she who knows magic the others have no idea about. Also, being part-Veela gives her some SuperStrength and PlayingWithFire, so she's surprisingly dangerous when provoked, as well as making her the only member of the harem who isn't purely human (which has some ulterior benefits for Harry when he and Fleur have sex).
**sex). TagalongKid: Gabrielle. Gabrielle is Fleur's younger sister, Fleur brought her along primarily to get her away from their mother ([[AdaptationalVillainy who's quite a piece of work in this fic]]). She wants to help, but Harry (and, presumably, the others) want to keep her safe from the dangers of confronting Voldemort and the Death Eaters. And Harry knows she's crushing on him ''hard'', and wants to spare her the painful sight of him with. . . well, basically everyone ''but'' her.
** SixthRangerTraitor:her. Finally, there's Pansy Parkinson, with the twist that the group ''knows'' she's TheMole and are planning to [[FeedTheMole feed her]].
** TheLancer: Ginny. While she's
** TheSmartGuy: Hermione, just as in canon. She's
** TheHeart:
** TheGenericGuy and TheHeart:
** TheFace and TheTeamBenefactor:
** TeamMom:
** TheBigGuy and TokenNonHuman: Fleur, being
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[[caption-width-right:350:The Seven and their 'counterpart' horcruxes (see RuleOfSymbolism); artwork by Marcus S Lazarus]]
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** TheHero: Harry.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Harry shows this on a few occasions, but a particular moment is in chapter 48 when [[spoiler:he blatantly lies that he's never thought about Fleur's breasts]].
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* DeadpanSnarker: DeadpanSnarker:
** As per canon, Harry shows this on a few occasions, but a particular moment is inchapter Chapter 48 when [[spoiler:he blatantly lies that he's never thought about Fleur's breasts]].
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--->'''Harry''': ''(regarding the gorgeous dress robes Susan picked out for him)'' Are you suggesting I wouldn't have been able to dress myself properly?\\
'''Fleur''': [[BluntYes Yes]].\\
'''Harem''': ''Oooooohhhh.''
'''Fleur''': [[BluntYes Yes]].\\
'''Harem''': ''Oooooohhhh.''
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* ForcedToWatch: During her rant at Dumbledore in Chapter 29, Lily reveals that she was forced to watch all the abuse that the Dursleys heaped onto her son while being unable to do anything about it.
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The story pairs Harry with seven different girls; specifically, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Demelza Robbins, Susan Bones, Katie Bell, and Fleur Delacour. Ginny, Hermione and Luna were obvious candidates for the ritual from the beginning, but while Harry began 'testing' his relationship with Susan and Demelza in Chapter 6 and 7 respectively, Susan only learns the full details in Chapter 19 while Demelza initially assumes it's just a sexual fetish from Chapter 8 until Chapter 29, which also sees Katie being officially 'brought into the loop' after being invited to a sexual relationship in Chapter 23. Harry bonds with Ginny in Chapter 10, Hermione in Chapter 21, and Luna in Chapter 38, and has an orgy with the existing six girls in Chapters 31 and 39/40. As for Fleur, after realising that Harry is having sex with multiple girls in Chapter 34, she spends the next few chapters learning the full details of the situation and being inadvertently 'teased' until she fully commits herself to aiding Harry in chapter 46. Harry subsequently [[spoiler:bonds with Demelza in Chapter 58, has a full orgy with all seven girls for his birthday in Chapter 63, and bonds with Susan, Katie and Fleur on the same night in Chapters 75 to 77 through use of a time-turner when they have to complete the ritual prior to the final confrontation with Voldemort]].
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The story pairs Harry with seven different girls; specifically, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Demelza Robbins, Susan Bones, Katie Bell, and Fleur Delacour. Ginny, Hermione and Luna were obvious candidates for the ritual from the beginning, but while Harry began 'testing' his relationship with Susan and Demelza in Chapter 6 and 7 respectively, Susan only learns the full details in Chapter 19 while Demelza initially assumes it's just a sexual fetish from Chapter 8 until Chapter 29, which also sees 29. Katie is initially invited to join them in a sexual relationship in Chapter 23 before being officially 'brought into the loop' after being invited to a sexual relationship in Chapter 23.29. Harry bonds with Ginny in Chapter 10, Hermione in Chapter 21, and Luna in Chapter 38, and has an orgy with the existing six girls in Chapters 31 and 39/40. As for Fleur, after realising that Harry is having sex with multiple girls in Chapter 34, she spends the next few chapters learning the full details of the situation and being inadvertently 'teased' until she fully commits herself to aiding Harry in chapter 46. Harry subsequently [[spoiler:bonds with Demelza in Chapter 58, has a full orgy with all seven girls for his birthday in Chapter 63, and bonds with Susan, Katie and Fleur on the same night in Chapters 75 to 77 through use of a time-turner when they have to complete the ritual prior to the final confrontation with Voldemort]].
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* ADateWithRosiePalms: Various examples, ranging from Ginny teaching Luna how to masturbate by stripping down to ''show'' her what to do to [[spoiler:Harry seducing Demelza into a mutual session of it in the Quidditch changing rooms; Ginny and Luna even pleasure each other as a precursor to an end-of-term orgy in chapter 39, and Fleur pleasures Harry while feeding him before they have actual sex in chapter 48]].
