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As an ElsewhereFic, ''The Ollivander Children'' focuses on Mr. Ollivander's grand-niece, [[FrozenFlower Calliope]], who has been continuing her post-Hogwarts education in Boston, and along the way befriended a {{Muggle}} named Mark Printzen. When Calliope hears about her uncle's kidnapping (from her somewhat estranged best friend, Nymphadora Tonks), [[CallToAdventure she returns to England]], becoming reluctantly involved with the [[LaResistance Order of the Phoenix]]. However, through an accident she leaves her wand behind, where [[GenreSavvy Mark]] finds it -- and he decides to [[LoveMakesYouCrazy look for her in England]], having [[TheMasquerade little idea what he's getting into]].
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As an ElsewhereFic, ''The Ollivander Children'' focuses on Mr. Ollivander's grand-niece, [[FrozenFlower [[SugarAndIcePersonality Calliope]], who has been continuing her post-Hogwarts education in Boston, and along the way befriended a {{Muggle}} named Mark Printzen. When Calliope hears about her uncle's kidnapping (from her somewhat estranged best friend, Nymphadora Tonks), [[CallToAdventure she returns to England]], becoming reluctantly involved with the [[LaResistance Order of the Phoenix]]. However, through an accident she leaves her wand behind, where [[GenreSavvy Mark]] finds it -- and he decides to [[LoveMakesYouCrazy look for her in England]], having [[TheMasquerade little idea what he's getting into]].
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* MindRape: [[spoiler: What Turpentine inflicts on Mr. Ollivander, and then on Calliope, to extract their memories of Benedicte.]]
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* MindRape: [[spoiler: What Turpentine inflicts on Mr. [[spoiler:Mr. Ollivander, and then on Calliope, Calliope]], to extract their memories of Benedicte.]]
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* BrotherSisterTeam: Several: Calliope and Linus, Tess and Hector, [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal Januarius and Julietta.]]
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* BrotherSisterTeam: Several: Calliope and Linus, Tess and Hector, [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal [[AlliterativeFamily full-blood-siblings Januarius and Julietta.]]
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* MissingMom: Calliope and Linus' mother died a couple of years before the story starts, as well is Januarius and Julietta' mother.
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* MissingMom: Calliope and Linus' mother died a couple of years before the story starts, as well is Januarius and Julietta' Julietta's mother.
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* HypotheticalCast: At the end of some of chapter 17 in ''war'', Vifetoile comments on who would be her dream cast choices for some of the characters.
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thesouthpaw is detroped per TRS, doesn't fit any subtypes
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* TheSouthpaw: Calliope.
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Black Best Friend was renamed Token Black Friend in TRS. Removing examples that are low context or are otherwise not about a Satellite Character who is there to add diversity.
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* BlackBestFriend: Andrew Dupont.
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* GrayEyes: Every one of the Ollivanders has 'em.
