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%%* ArmorPiercingSlap: [[spoiler:Kim gives one to Ron.]]
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ZCE comment-outs.
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: [[spoiler:Kim gives one to Ron.]]
* BackToBackBadasses: Kim & Ron when they use the Lotus Bloom/Blade respectively.
* BackToBackBadasses: Kim & Ron when they use the Lotus Bloom/Blade respectively.
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* BerserkButton: Hurting either Kim or Ron is one for the other.
* BigBad: Count Olafinski.
* BigBad: Count Olafinski.
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* BoundAndGagged: Kim ends up this way after Ron [[spoiler: pretends to]] betray her.
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* ChekhovsGun: Kim's necklace.
* ContinuityNod: Lots of them.
* DeconstructionFic: Works as one, as it averts AmusingInjuries & AngstWhatAngst, and shows the consequences Kim & Ron's crimefighting lifestyle would have on them & their families, something the show usually glossed over.
* DespairEventHorizon: Kim reaches it again after Ron turns evil and dumps her for Bonnie. [[spoiler: In reality, he was working as a FakeDefector and didn't tell her [[EnforcedMethodActing so her reactions would be more genuine.]]]]
* ContinuityNod: Lots of them.
* DeconstructionFic: Works as one, as it averts AmusingInjuries & AngstWhatAngst, and shows the consequences Kim & Ron's crimefighting lifestyle would have on them & their families, something the show usually glossed over.
* DespairEventHorizon: Kim reaches it again after Ron turns evil and dumps her for Bonnie. [[spoiler: In reality, he was working as a FakeDefector and didn't tell her [[EnforcedMethodActing so her reactions would be more genuine.]]]]
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* DeconstructionFic: Works as one, as it averts AmusingInjuries & AngstWhatAngst, and shows the consequences Kim & Ron's crimefighting lifestyle would have on them & their families, something the show usually
* DespairEventHorizon: Kim reaches it again after Ron turns evil and dumps her for Bonnie.
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* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler: Although she's been mean before, Bonnie is a striaght up villain in this one.]]
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* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler: Although she's been mean before, Bonnie is a striaght straight up villain in this one.]]
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* MoodWhiplash: Dear God yes. One minute, the characters will be making jokes & one-liners like on the show, and the next, you'll read about them being bruised or bloodied. It's quite a jarring experience.
* MoreThanMindControl: [[spoiler:With Bonnie.]]
* MoreThanMindControl: [[spoiler:With Bonnie.]]
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* MoodWhiplash: Dear God yes. One minute, the characters will be making jokes & one-liners like on the show, and the next, you'll read about them being bruised or bloodied. It's quite a jarring experience.
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* OurZombiesAreDifferent: They're normal people turned into loyal drones by spit from Gill.
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* UnstoppableRage: Kim or Ron usually display it if the other is hurt. Ron especially after the Count mocks Kim's supposed death.
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* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: The villains use synthrodrones as their [[{{Mook}} mooks]] and Kim & Ron slice them up with little regard.
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* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: The villains use synthrodrones as their [[{{Mook}} mooks]] and Kim & Ron slice them up with little regard.regard.
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Not So Different has been renamed, and it needs to be dewicked/moved
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* WeCanRuleTogether: The Count offers Ron this after Kim is supposedly killed, saying he and Ron are NotSoDifferent. Ron's response [[ShutUpHannibal is to to rush him, swords at the ready]]
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* WeCanRuleTogether: The Count offers Ron this after Kim is supposedly killed, saying he and Ron are NotSoDifferent.[[NotSoDifferentRemark aren't so different]]. Ron's response [[ShutUpHannibal is to to rush him, swords at the ready]]
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* [[spoiler:ArmorPiercingSlap: Kim gives one to Ron.]]
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* [[spoiler:ArmorPiercingSlap: Kim ArmorPiercingSlap: [[spoiler:Kim gives one to Ron.]]
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* [[spoiler: FaceHeelTurn: Although she's been mean before, Bonnie is a striaght up villain in this one.]]
* [[spoiler: FakeDefector: Ron pretends to join the bad guys so he can rescue his & Kim's families.]]
* [[spoiler: FakeDefector: Ron pretends to join the bad guys so he can rescue his & Kim's families.]]
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* [[spoiler: FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler: Although she's been mean before, Bonnie is a striaght up villain in this one.]]
*[[spoiler: FakeDefector: [[spoiler: Ron pretends to join the bad guys so he can rescue his & Kim's families.]]
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* [[spoiler:MoreThanMindControl: With Bonnie.]]
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* [[spoiler:MoreThanMindControl: With MoreThanMindControl: [[spoiler:With Bonnie.]]
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* BedmateReveal: After she and Ron both go to sleep in separate beds, Kim wakes up to find Ron in her bed. Turns out their fathers put them there, as they trusted them enough not to fool around.
* BigNo: Ron lets one out after finding out the safehouse GJ base is located under Camp Wannaweep.
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* DeconstructionFic: Works as one, as it averts AmusingInjuries and shows the consequences Kim & Ron's crimefighting lifestyle would have on them & their families, something the show usually glossed over.
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* DeconstructionFic: Works as one, as it averts AmusingInjuries & AngstWhatAngst, and shows the consequences Kim & Ron's crimefighting lifestyle would have on them & their families, something the show usually glossed over.
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* EnemyMine: Drakken & Shego find themselves forced to help the heroes.
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* EnemyMine: Drakken & Shego find themselves forced to help the heroes. heroes.
* [[spoiler: FaceHeelTurn: Although she's been mean before, Bonnie is a striaght up villain in this one.]]
* [[spoiler: FaceHeelTurn: Although she's been mean before, Bonnie is a striaght up villain in this one.]]
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* OurZombiesAreDifferent: They're normal people turned into loyal drones by spit from Gill.
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* BackToBackBadasses: Kim & Ron when they use the Lotus Bloom/Blade respectively.
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* DeconstructionFic: Works as one, as it shows the consequences Kim & Ron's crimefighting lifestyle would have on them & their families, something the show usually glossed over.
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* DeconstructionFic: Works as one, as it averts AmusingInjuries and shows the consequences Kim & Ron's crimefighting lifestyle would have on them & their families, something the show usually glossed over.
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* MoodWhiplash: Dear God yes. One minute, the characters will be making jokes & one-liners like they normally do, and the next, you'll read about them being bruised or bloodied. It's quite a jarring experience.
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* MoodWhiplash: Dear God yes. One minute, the characters will be making jokes & one-liners like they normally do, on the show, and the next, you'll read about them being bruised or bloodied. It's quite a jarring experience.
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* ThePowerOfLove: What fuels the Lotus Bloom is Kim's love for Ron.
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* ThePowerOfLove: What fuels the Lotus Bloom is Kim's love for Ron.
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* WeCanRuleTogether: The Count offers Ron this after Kim is supposedly killed, saying he and Ron are NotSoDifferent. Ron, naturally, refuses.
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* UnstoppableRage: Kim or Ron usually display it if the other is hurt. Ron especially after the Count mocks Kim's supposed death.
* WeCanRuleTogether: The Count offers Ron this after Kim is supposedly killed, saying he and Ron are NotSoDifferent.Ron, naturally, refuses. Ron's response [[ShutUpHannibal is to to rush him, swords at the ready]]
* WeCanRuleTogether: The Count offers Ron this after Kim is supposedly killed, saying he and Ron are NotSoDifferent.
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* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Averted big time; Kim frequently ends up dirty, bloodied, bruised, cut...
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* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Averted big time; Kim frequently ends up dirty, bloodied, bruised, cut...cut, you name it.
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* ThatCameOutWrong: When Kim wonders why Bonnie is so interested in the Count, and Ron points out that he has lots of money, reminding her how Bonnie acted when he was rich. Kim then notes that Bonnie would date "the biggest dork" if he had money, and seeing that she offended Ron, quickly changes it to "the greatest guy."
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* ThatCameOutWrong: When Kim wonders why Bonnie is so interested in the Count, and Ron points out that he has lots of money, reminding her how Bonnie acted when he was rich. Kim then notes that Bonnie would date "the biggest dork" dork around" if he had money, and seeing that she offended Ron, quickly changes it to "the greatest guy.guy around."
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* EmphathicWeapon: Kim's necklace can transform into a sword, or any weapon she needs, whenever her feelings for Ron are strongest.
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* EmphathicWeapon: EmpathicWeapon: Kim's necklace can transform into a sword, or any weapon she needs, whenever her feelings for Ron are strongest.
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* EmphaticWeapon: Kim's necklace can transform into a sword, or any weapon she needs, whenever her feelings for Ron are strongest.
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* EmphaticWeapon: EmphathicWeapon: Kim's necklace can transform into a sword, or any weapon she needs, whenever her feelings for Ron are strongest.
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: [[spoiler:Kim gives one to Ron.]]
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: [[spoiler:Kim [[spoiler:ArmorPiercingSlap: Kim gives one to Ron.]]]]
* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Averted big time; Kim frequently ends up dirty, bloodied, bruised, cut...
* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Averted big time; Kim frequently ends up dirty, bloodied, bruised, cut...
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* BoundAndGagged: Kim ends up this way after Ron [[spoiler: pretends to]] betray her.
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* BigBad: Count Olafinski.
* BoundAndGagged: Kim ends up this way after Ron [[spoiler: pretends to]] betray her.
* BoundAndGagged: Kim ends up this way after Ron [[spoiler: pretends to]] betray her.
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* FakeDefector: [[spoiler:Ron pretends to join the bad guys so he can rescue his & Kim's families.]]
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* [[spoiler: FakeDefector: [[spoiler:Ron Ron pretends to join the bad guys so he can rescue his & Kim's families.]]
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* MoreThanMindControl: [[spoiler:With Bonnie.]]
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* MoreThanMindControl: [[spoiler:With [[spoiler:MoreThanMindControl: With Bonnie.]]
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* [[spoiler:ArmorPiercingSlap: Kim gives one to Ron.]]
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* [[spoiler:ArmorPiercingSlap: Kim ArmorPiercingSlap: [[spoiler:Kim gives one to Ron.]]
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* [[spoiler: FakeDefector: Ron pretends to join the bad guys so he can rescue his & Kim's families.]]
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* [[spoiler: FakeDefector: Ron [[spoiler:Ron pretends to join the bad guys so he can rescue his & Kim's families.]]
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* [[spoiler:MoreThanMindControl: With Bonnie.]]
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* [[spoiler:MoreThanMindControl: With MoreThanMindControl: [[spoiler:With Bonnie.]]
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* BoundAndGagged: Kim ends up this way after Ron [[spoiler: pretends to]] betray her.
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* BoundAndGagged: Kim ends up this way after Ron [[spoiler: pretends to]] betray her.
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* BerserkButton: Hurting either Kim or Ron is one for the other.
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* BerserkButton: Hurting either Kim or Ron is one for the other. other.
* BoundAndGagged: Kim ends up this way after Ron [[spoiler: pretends to]] betray her.
* BoundAndGagged: Kim ends up this way after Ron [[spoiler: pretends to]] betray her.
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* BorrowedCatchphrase: Kim uses "booyah" on a few occasions.
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* DespairEventHorizon: Kim reaches it again after Ron turns evil and dumps her for Bonnie. [[spoiler: In reality, he was working as a FakeDefector and didn't tell her so her reactions would be more genuine.]]
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* DespairEventHorizon: Kim reaches it again after Ron turns evil and dumps her for Bonnie. [[spoiler: In reality, he was working as a FakeDefector and didn't tell her [[EnforcedMethodActing so her reactions would be more genuine.]]]]]]
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* [[spoiler: EnforcedMethodActing: Ron did this by not telling Kim he was a FakeDefector, so her reaction to his "betrayal" would be genuine and fool the bad guys. It worked, but not before Kim nearly beat the snot of out him.]]
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* ThePowerOfLove: What fuels the lotus bloom is Kim's love for Ron.
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* ThePowerOfLove: What fuels the lotus bloom Lotus Bloom is Kim's love for Ron.
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* BerserkButton: Hurting either Kim or Ron is one for the other.
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* [[spoiler: EnforcedMethodActing: Ron did this by not telling Kim he was a FakeDefector, so her reaction to his "betrayal" would be genuine and fool the bad guys. It worked, but not before Kim nearly beat the snot of out him.]]
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* WeCanRuleTogether: The Count offers Ron this after Kim is supposedly killed, saying he and Ron are NotSoDifferent. Ron, naturally, refuses.
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* BedmateReveal: After going to sleep, Kim wakes up to find Ron in her bed. Turns out their fathers put them there, as they trusted them enough not to fool around.
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* BedmateReveal: After going she and Ron both go to sleep, sleep in separate beds, Kim wakes up to find Ron in her bed. Turns out their fathers put them there, as they trusted them enough not to fool around.
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* DeconstructionFic: Works as one, as it shows the consequences Kim & Ron' crimefighting lifestyle would have on them & their families, something the show usually glossed over.
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* ContinuityNod: Lots of them.
* DeconstructionFic: Works as one, as it shows the consequences Kim &Ron' Ron's crimefighting lifestyle would have on them & their families, something the show usually glossed over.
* DeconstructionFic: Works as one, as it shows the consequences Kim &
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* EmphaticWeapon: Kim's necklace can transform into a sword, or any weapon she needs.
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* EmphaticWeapon: Kim's necklace can transform into a sword, or any weapon she needs.needs, whenever her feelings for Ron are strongest.
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* ThatCameOutWrong: Kim wonders why Bonnie is so interested in this Count, and Ron points out that he has lots of money, reminding her how Bonnie was when he was rich. Kim then notes that Bonnie would date "the biggest dork" if he had money, and seeing that she offended Ron, quickly changes it to "the greatest guy."
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Ron gives one to Kim after turning evil, saying she basically used him and would abandon him whenever a hot guy would come along. [[spoiler: Although it's part of his FakeDefector act, it's later shown Kim takes it to heart, and vows to never again treat him that way.]]
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Ron gives one to Kim after turning evil, saying she basically used him and would abandon him whenever a hot guy would come along. [[spoiler: Although it's part of his FakeDefector act, it's later shown Kim takes it to heart, and vows to never again treat him that way.]]
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* ThatCameOutWrong: When Kim wonders why Bonnie is so interested in this the Count, and Ron points out that he has lots of money, reminding her how Bonnie was acted when he was rich. Kim then notes that Bonnie would date "the biggest dork" if he had money, and seeing that she offended Ron, quickly changes it to "the greatest guy."
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Ron gives one to Kim after turning evil, saying she basically used him for her own reasons andwould abandon abandoned him whenever a hot guy would come came along. [[spoiler: Although it's part of his FakeDefector act, it's later shown Kim takes it to heart, and vows to never again treat him that way.]]
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Ron gives one to Kim after turning evil, saying she basically used him for her own reasons and
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* ChekhovsGun: Kim's necklace.
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* BedmateReveal: After going to sleep, Kim wakes up to find Ron in her bed. Turns out their fathers put them there, as they trusted them enough not to fool around.
* ChekhovsGun: Kim'snecklace.necklace.
* DeconstructionFic: Works as one, as it shows the consequences Kim & Ron' crimefighting lifestyle would have on them & their families, something the show usually glossed over.
* ChekhovsGun: Kim's
* DeconstructionFic: Works as one, as it shows the consequences Kim & Ron' crimefighting lifestyle would have on them & their families, something the show usually glossed over.
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* ThatCameOutWrong: Kim wonders why Bonnie is so interested in this Count, and Ron points out that he has lots of money, reminding her how Bonnie was when he was rich. Kim then notes that Bonnie would date "any dork" with money, and seeing that she offended Ron, quickly changes it to "the greatest guy."
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* ThatCameOutWrong: Kim wonders why Bonnie is so interested in this Count, and Ron points out that he has lots of money, reminding her how Bonnie was when he was rich. Kim then notes that Bonnie would date "any "the biggest dork" with if he had money, and seeing that she offended Ron, quickly changes it to "the greatest guy." "
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Ron gives one to Kim after turning evil, saying she basically used him and would abandon him whenever a hot guy would come along. [[spoiler: Although it's part of his FakeDefector act, it's later shown Kim takes it to heart, and vows to never again treat him that way.]]
* TogetherInDeath: After believing Kim has been killed, Ron tries to pull a HeroicSacrifice to achieve this. Luckily, Kim saves him before he can.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Ron gives one to Kim after turning evil, saying she basically used him and would abandon him whenever a hot guy would come along. [[spoiler: Although it's part of his FakeDefector act, it's later shown Kim takes it to heart, and vows to never again treat him that way.]]
* TogetherInDeath: After believing Kim has been killed, Ron tries to pull a HeroicSacrifice to achieve this. Luckily, Kim saves him before he can.
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* EnemyMine: Drakken & Shego find themselves forced to help the heroes.
* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Yori feels this way and says as much when she presents Kim & Rom with their necklaces.
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* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: The villains use synthrodrones as thier [[{{Mook}} mooks]] and Kim & Ron slice them up with little regard.
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* TalkToTheFist: Kim does this to Bonnie when the gang makes their escape. Gets an IronicEcho when Bonnie does the same to Kim after having her at her mercy.
* ThatCameOutWrong: Kim wonders why Bonnie is so interested in this Count, and Ron points out that he has lots of money, reminding her how Bonnie was when he was rich. Kim then notes that Bonnie would date "any dork" with money, and seeing that she offended Ron, quickly changes it to "the greatest guy."
* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: The villains use synthrodrones asthier their [[{{Mook}} mooks]] and Kim & Ron slice them up with little regard.
* ThatCameOutWrong: Kim wonders why Bonnie is so interested in this Count, and Ron points out that he has lots of money, reminding her how Bonnie was when he was rich. Kim then notes that Bonnie would date "any dork" with money, and seeing that she offended Ron, quickly changes it to "the greatest guy."
* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: The villains use synthrodrones as
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* ChekhovsGun: Kim's necklace
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* ChekhovsGun: Kim's necklacenecklace.
* DespairEventHorizon: Kim reaches it again after Ron turns evil and dumps her for Bonnie. [[spoiler: In reality, he was working as a FakeDefector and didn't tell her so her reactions would be more genuine.]]
* EmphaticWeapon: Kim's necklace can transform into a sword, or any weapon she needs.
* [[spoiler: FakeDefector: Ron pretends to join the bad guys so he can rescue his & Kim's families.]]
* MoodWhiplash: Dear God yes. One minute, the characters will be making jokes & one-liners like they normally do, and the next, you'll read about them being bruised or bloodied. It's quite a jarring experience.
* DespairEventHorizon: Kim reaches it again after Ron turns evil and dumps her for Bonnie. [[spoiler: In reality, he was working as a FakeDefector and didn't tell her so her reactions would be more genuine.]]
* EmphaticWeapon: Kim's necklace can transform into a sword, or any weapon she needs.
* [[spoiler: FakeDefector: Ron pretends to join the bad guys so he can rescue his & Kim's families.]]
* MoodWhiplash: Dear God yes. One minute, the characters will be making jokes & one-liners like they normally do, and the next, you'll read about them being bruised or bloodied. It's quite a jarring experience.
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* ThePowerOfLove: What fuels the lotus bloom is Kim's love for Ron.
* OfficialCouple: Sticks with the canon pairing of Kim andRon.Ron.
* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: The villains use synthrodrones as thier [[{{Mook}} mooks]] and Kim & Ron slice them up with little regard.
* OfficialCouple: Sticks with the canon pairing of Kim and
* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: The villains use synthrodrones as thier [[{{Mook}} mooks]] and Kim & Ron slice them up with little regard.
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Written in a collaborative effort between captainkodak1, one of the more well-established members of the Kimmunity, and Rich Sirois, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2385745/1/The_bLotus_b_bBloom_b The Lotus Bloom]] is one of the classics of the KimPossible fandom. The story contains many cliches seen in the fandom. However, this story is probably the one that came up with most of them in the first place.
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Written in a collaborative effort between captainkodak1, one of the more well-established members of the Kimmunity, and Rich Sirois, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2385745/1/The_bLotus_b_bBloom_b The Lotus Bloom]] is one of the classics of the KimPossible ''WesternAnimation/KimPossible'' fandom. The story contains many cliches seen in the fandom. However, this story is probably the one that came up with most of them in the first place.
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* [[spoiler:MoreThanMindControl: With Bonnie.]]