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Unlike the original, the remake makes Ash's growth as a Trainer much slower and much nore natural, but still retains the basic concept of Ash being much less of an IdiotHero than his anime counterpart.
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Unlike the original, the remake makes Ash's growth as a Trainer much slower and much nore more natural, but still retains the basic concept of Ash being much less of an IdiotHero than his anime counterpart.
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Loads And Loads Of Characters is no longer a trope
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: [[spoiler:The fic is leaning towards this with Ash's companions and Pokemon following him on his journey.]]
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* AdaptationalVillainy: In this story, Damien beats the hell out of his Pokémon before abandoning them.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: In this story, Damien beats the hell out of his Pokémon before abandoning them.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: Ash gets a Riolu instead of a Pikachu for a starter. Also, like in the original, other Pokémon not native to Kanto appear.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: Ash gets a Riolu instead of a Pikachu for a starter. Also, like in the original, other Pokémon not native to Kanto appear.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: In this story, Damien beats the hell out of his Pokémon before abandoning them.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: Ash gets a Riolu instead of a Pikachu for a starter. Also, like in the original, other Pokémon not native to Kanto appear.
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The original fic has been currently discontinued, but is being remade as "The Journey of the Guardian", which can be viewed here:
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12051581/1/The-Journey-of-the-Guardian
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12051581/1/The-Journey-of-the-Guardian
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The original fic has been currently discontinued, but is being remade as "The Journey of the Guardian", which can be viewed here:
https://www.[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12051581/1/The-Journey-of-the-Guardian
net/s/12051581/1/The-Journey-of-the-Guardian here.]]
https://www.
