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# What if Danny ended up in a comma before Taylor could start her career as Skitter?
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# What if Danny ended up in a comma coma before Taylor could start her career as Skitter?
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Marquis is named Arthur Lavere where as he was never given a first name in canon.
* SinsOfTheFather: Victoria has immense hatred for not only Marquis for killing her family, but also his daughter just for being related to him.
* SinsOfTheFather: Victoria has immense hatred for not only Marquis for killing her family, but also his daughter just for being related to him.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Marquis is named Arthur Lavere where as whereas he was never given a first name in canon.
* SinsOfTheFather: Victoria has immense hatred for not onlyMarquis Marquis, for killing her family, but also his daughter just for being related to him.
* SinsOfTheFather: Victoria has immense hatred for not only
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* SinsOfTheFather: Victoria has immense hatred for not only Marquis for killing her family, but also his daughter just for being related to him.
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* SinsOfTheFather: Victoria has immense hatred for not only Marquis for killing her family, but also his daughter just for being related to him.him.
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* AffablyEvil: Marquis is cordial, polite, and a loving father to his daughter. However, he's still a ruthless Gang lord and he commits actions that will remind you that Affably Evil" means "Affably ''Evil''".
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* AffablyEvil: Marquis is cordial, polite, and a loving father to his daughter. However, he's still a ruthless Gang lord and he commits actions that will remind you that Affably "Affably Evil" means "Affably ''Evil''".
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Marquis is named Arthur Lavere where as he was never given a first name in canon.
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* BlackAndWhiteInsanity: Victoria has it worse here since the Brigade died to Marquis. She aggressively categorizes criminals, their family members, and any who affiliate with them as pure evil and refuses to acknowledge any shades of grey.
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* LipstickLesbian: It's mentioned that Amy has been attracted to other girls before she and Taylor started dating and she's shown to enjoy shopping and makeovers.
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* LipstickLesbian: It's mentioned that Amy has been attracted to other girls before she and Taylor started dating and she's shown to enjoy shopping and makeovers.makeovers.
* SinsOfTheFather: Victoria has immense hatred for not only Marquis for killing her family, but also his daughter just for being related to him.
* SinsOfTheFather: Victoria has immense hatred for not only Marquis for killing her family, but also his daughter just for being related to him.
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* KissingCousins: Not really, but Taylor's cover story is that she's Amy's cousin, so it gives off this impression for those outside the Wards or Marquis direct associates.
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* IJustWantToBeBadass: Duchess wants to make her father proud by showing that she can be a powerful enforcer without the need for a bodyguard.
* KissingCousins: Not really, but Taylor's cover story is that she's Amy's cousin, so it gives off this impression for those outside the Wards or Marquis directassociates.associates.
* LipstickLesbian: It's mentioned that Amy has been attracted to other girls before she and Taylor started dating and she's shown to enjoy shopping and makeovers.
* KissingCousins: Not really, but Taylor's cover story is that she's Amy's cousin, so it gives off this impression for those outside the Wards or Marquis direct
* LipstickLesbian: It's mentioned that Amy has been attracted to other girls before she and Taylor started dating and she's shown to enjoy shopping and makeovers.
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* DaddysGirl: Amy loves and cherishes her father, striving to make him proud.
* HeroismWontPayTheBills: Part of why Taylor works for Marquis rather than join the Wards is because she needs money to pay for her father's medical bills to get him out of his coma. The Wards don't really provide any payment for that sort of thing.
* HeroismWontPayTheBills: Part of why Taylor works for Marquis rather than join the Wards is because she needs money to pay for her father's medical bills to get him out of his coma. The Wards don't really provide any payment for that sort of thing.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: In ''Worm'', Amy and Vicky were extremly close to each other and grew up as sisters. Here, Victoria isn't someone Amy concerns herself much with, while Victoria flat out despises Amy due to her being the daughter of the one who killed her family.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: In ''Worm'', Amy and Vicky were extremly extremely close to each other and grew up as sisters. Here, Victoria isn't someone Amy concerns herself much with, while Victoria flat out despises Amy due to her being the daughter of the one who killed her family.family.
* AffablyEvil: Marquis is cordial, polite, and a loving father to his daughter. However, he's still a ruthless Gang lord and he commits actions that will remind you that Affably Evil" means "Affably ''Evil''".
* AffablyEvil: Marquis is cordial, polite, and a loving father to his daughter. However, he's still a ruthless Gang lord and he commits actions that will remind you that Affably Evil" means "Affably ''Evil''".
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* AdaptationalSexuality: Taylor is bisexual here and starts dating Amy.
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* BodyguardingABadass: Widow probably doesn't even need to protect Duchess, but she does so anyway.
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* BodyguardingABadass: Widow probably doesn't even need to protect Duchess, but she does so anyway.anyway.
* KissingCousins: Not really, but Taylor's cover story is that she's Amy's cousin, so it gives off this impression for those outside the Wards or Marquis direct associates.
* KissingCousins: Not really, but Taylor's cover story is that she's Amy's cousin, so it gives off this impression for those outside the Wards or Marquis direct associates.
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[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-bodyguard-worm-au.456544/ The Bodyguard]] is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' AU fanfic that follows the three following deviations:
# What if The Brigade failed to apprehend Marquis?
# What if Danny ended up in a comma before Taylor could start her career as Skitter?
# What if Marquis hired Taylor to be his daughter's bodyguard?
The story is likely dead, as it has not been updated since January 2017.
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!!''The Bodyguard'' provides examples of:
* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade:
** Inverted for Amy, as she is raised by her loving father and not in a family where her sister was the only emotional comfort she had.
** Played straight with Victoria, as the Brigade was all killed in their last attack on Marquis.
* AdaptationalNameChange: Amy and Taylor's Cape identities are different.
** Amy is referred to as Duchess instead of Panacea.
** Taylor goes by Widow rather than Skitter.
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: In ''Worm'', Amy and Vicky were extremly close to each other and grew up as sisters. Here, Victoria isn't someone Amy concerns herself much with, while Victoria flat out despises Amy due to her being the daughter of the one who killed her family.
* BodyguardingABadass: Widow probably doesn't even need to protect Duchess, but she does so anyway.
# What if The Brigade failed to apprehend Marquis?
# What if Danny ended up in a comma before Taylor could start her career as Skitter?
# What if Marquis hired Taylor to be his daughter's bodyguard?
The story is likely dead, as it has not been updated since January 2017.
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!!''The Bodyguard'' provides examples of:
* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade:
** Inverted for Amy, as she is raised by her loving father and not in a family where her sister was the only emotional comfort she had.
** Played straight with Victoria, as the Brigade was all killed in their last attack on Marquis.
* AdaptationalNameChange: Amy and Taylor's Cape identities are different.
** Amy is referred to as Duchess instead of Panacea.
** Taylor goes by Widow rather than Skitter.
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: In ''Worm'', Amy and Vicky were extremly close to each other and grew up as sisters. Here, Victoria isn't someone Amy concerns herself much with, while Victoria flat out despises Amy due to her being the daughter of the one who killed her family.
* BodyguardingABadass: Widow probably doesn't even need to protect Duchess, but she does so anyway.