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* BadassBaritone: Severus, but only after he [[spoiler: suffered very severe case of dragon pox, which spread to his throat]]. And technically, his badass side shows itself only [[spoiler: when he is protecting Lily from the werewolf]].
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%% * ADateWithRosiePalms: Mulciber is known for that.
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%% * CloserToEarth: {{Inverted}}. Severus is a reasonable one. The same with the other two Slytherin/Gryffindor couples in the fic.
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* NotWhatItLooksLike: When Mrs Evans catches them in Lily's bedroom in compromising position. Severus' reaction - ICanExplain. And [[ReconstructedTrope he does]]. Still, Lily gets in trouble.
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* NotWhatItLooksLike: When Mrs Evans catches them in Lily's bedroom in compromising position. Severus' reaction - ICanExplain. And [[ReconstructedTrope [[{{Reconstruction}} he does]]. Still, Lily gets in trouble.
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%% * SandInMyEyes: [[ReconstructedTrope Reconstructed]] with Severus.
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%% * SandInMyEyes: [[ReconstructedTrope [[{{Reconstruction}} Reconstructed]] with Severus.
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%% * BadDreams: Severus (and Lily notices).
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%% * WeddingDay.
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* HolyBurnsEvil: Petunia splashes Severus with holy water when he accompanies them to the church. {{Subverted}}.
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* HolyBurnsEvil: Petunia splashes Severus with holy water HolyWater when he accompanies them to the church. {{Subverted}}.church, [[SubvertedTrope although it doesn't actually do anything to him]].
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* AbusiveParents: Tobias Snape.
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%% * AbusiveParents: Tobias Snape.
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* ADateWithRosiePalms: Mulciber is known for that.
* ALadyOnEachArm: [[spoiler: Mary]] and Lily try it with Severus. Only Lily succeeds. Unless you count [[spoiler: the night the three of them spent together (fully clothed) as a security measure. Severus endured it.]].
* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Severus. Somewhat {{exaggerated}}, but {{justified|Trope}}. He is also unlucky enough to love a PluckyGirl.
* AllTakeAndNoGive: Severus and Lily's relationship for the most part. Though Lily genuinely doesn't see it that way.
* AllWorkVsAllPlay: Generally {{subverted}}, since they are both rather studious and responsible, but sometimes played straight on Lily's part, usually regarding sex.
* AlternateUniverseFic.
* AManIsAlwaysEager: {{Subverted}} with Severus.
* ALadyOnEachArm: [[spoiler: Mary]] and Lily try it with Severus. Only Lily succeeds. Unless you count [[spoiler: the night the three of them spent together (fully clothed) as a security measure. Severus endured it.]].
* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Severus. Somewhat {{exaggerated}}, but {{justified|Trope}}. He is also unlucky enough to love a PluckyGirl.
* AllTakeAndNoGive: Severus and Lily's relationship for the most part. Though Lily genuinely doesn't see it that way.
* AllWorkVsAllPlay: Generally {{subverted}}, since they are both rather studious and responsible, but sometimes played straight on Lily's part, usually regarding sex.
* AlternateUniverseFic.
* AManIsAlwaysEager: {{Subverted}} with Severus.
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%% * ADateWithRosiePalms: Mulciber is known for that.
%% * ALadyOnEachArm: [[spoiler: Mary]] and Lily try it with Severus. Only Lily succeeds. Unless you count [[spoiler: the night the three of them spent together (fully clothed) as a security measure. Severus endured it.]].
%% * AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Severus. Somewhat {{exaggerated}}, but {{justified|Trope}}. He is also unlucky enough to love a PluckyGirl.
%% * AllTakeAndNoGive: Severus and Lily's relationship for the most part. Though Lily genuinely doesn't see it that way.
%% * AllWorkVsAllPlay: Generally {{subverted}}, since they are both rather studious and responsible, but sometimes played straight on Lily's part, usually regarding sex.
%% * AlternateUniverseFic.
%% * AManIsAlwaysEager: {{Subverted}} with Severus.
%% * ALadyOnEachArm: [[spoiler: Mary]] and Lily try it with Severus. Only Lily succeeds. Unless you count [[spoiler: the night the three of them spent together (fully clothed) as a security measure. Severus endured it.]].
%% * AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Severus. Somewhat {{exaggerated}}, but {{justified|Trope}}. He is also unlucky enough to love a PluckyGirl.
%% * AllTakeAndNoGive: Severus and Lily's relationship for the most part. Though Lily genuinely doesn't see it that way.
%% * AllWorkVsAllPlay: Generally {{subverted}}, since they are both rather studious and responsible, but sometimes played straight on Lily's part, usually regarding sex.
%% * AlternateUniverseFic.
%% * AManIsAlwaysEager: {{Subverted}} with Severus.
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* AmbitionIsEvil: {{Subverted}} with Severus: despite of him being a Slytherin he has no real ambition.
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* AmbitionIsEvil: AmbitionIsEvil:
** {{Subverted}} with Severus: despite of him being a Slytherin he has no real ambition.
** {{Subverted}} with Severus: despite of him being a Slytherin he has no real ambition.
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* AnimalsHateHim: {{Inverted}}: some animals like him but they are either Mrs Norris or [[spoiler: his raven Phi, whom he gets as a gift and initially treats as a nuisance]].
* AntiHero: Severus.
* AttentionWhore: James Potter, duh.
** {{Subverted}}, somewhat, with Gilderoy Lockhart: it seems he was a lot nicer as a student.
* BadDreams: Severus (and Lily notices).
* AntiHero: Severus.
* AttentionWhore: James Potter, duh.
** {{Subverted}}, somewhat, with Gilderoy Lockhart: it seems he was a lot nicer as a student.
* BadDreams: Severus (and Lily notices).
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%% ** James Potter, duh.
%% ** {{Subverted}}, somewhat, with Gilderoy Lockhart: it seems he was a lot nicer as a student.
%% * BadDreams: Severus (and Lily notices).
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* BadassNormal: Tobias Snape and his friends, who [[spoiler: killed Rodolphus and Rabastan Lestranges and almost killed Bellatrix]].
* BatmanGambit: Severus uses it successfully.
* BatmanGambit: Severus uses it successfully.
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%% * BadassNormal: Tobias Snape and his friends, who [[spoiler: killed Rodolphus and Rabastan Lestranges and almost killed Bellatrix]].
%% * BatmanGambit: Severus uses it successfully.
%% * BatmanGambit: Severus uses it successfully.
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** Also WordOfGod thinks it was one of the main reasons for Lily's change of heart towards James in the canon.
* {{Bookworm}}: Severus and Barty Crouch Jr.
* BornWinner: James, at least he thinks that way.
* BrilliantButLazy: James and Sirius.
* CallingYourOrgasms: Lily.
* CantHoldHisLiquor: Lily. Severus doesn't take advantage at first, [[spoiler: but when the time is right he does]].
* CatsAreMean: {{Subverted}} with Mrs Norris. She isn't really mean. [[spoiler: Only to rats]].
* CloserToEarth: {{Inverted}}. Severus is a reasonable one. The same with the other two Slytherin/Gryffindor couples in the fic.
* ChildhoodFriendRomance: Arguably.
* {{Bookworm}}: Severus and Barty Crouch Jr.
* BornWinner: James, at least he thinks that way.
* BrilliantButLazy: James and Sirius.
* CallingYourOrgasms: Lily.
* CantHoldHisLiquor: Lily. Severus doesn't take advantage at first, [[spoiler: but when the time is right he does]].
* CatsAreMean: {{Subverted}} with Mrs Norris. She isn't really mean. [[spoiler: Only to rats]].
* CloserToEarth: {{Inverted}}. Severus is a reasonable one. The same with the other two Slytherin/Gryffindor couples in the fic.
* ChildhoodFriendRomance: Arguably.
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%% * BornWinner: James, at least he thinks that way.
%% * BrilliantButLazy: James and Sirius.
%% * CallingYourOrgasms: Lily.
%% * CantHoldHisLiquor: Lily. Severus doesn't take advantage at first, [[spoiler: but when the time is right he does]].
* TheCassandra: Lily. She accurately predicted almost everything that would happen to Severus in their Sixth Year [[spoiler: while doing her Divination assignment]]. But ''neither of them'' tried to do much about it.
%% * CatsAreMean: {{Subverted}} with Mrs Norris. She isn't really mean. [[spoiler: Only to rats]].
%% * CloserToEarth: {{Inverted}}. Severus is a reasonable one. The same with the other two Slytherin/Gryffindor couples in the fic.
%% * ChildhoodFriendRomance: Arguably.
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* ConvenienceStoreGiftShopping: Usually neither Severus nor Lily are pleased with each other's gifts.
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* ConvenienceStoreGiftShopping: ConvenienceStoreGiftShopping:
** Usually neither Severus nor Lily are pleased with each other's gifts.
** Usually neither Severus nor Lily are pleased with each other's gifts.
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* CryingWolf: Marauders. Even when they really haven't done anything, nobody believes them.
* DeadlyPrank.
* DeathIsASadThing.
* DeadlyPrank.
* DeathIsASadThing.
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%% * CryingWolf: Marauders. Even when they really haven't done anything, nobody believes them.
%% * DeadlyPrank.
%% * DeathIsASadThing.
%% * DeadlyPrank.
%% * DeathIsASadThing.
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* DroppingTheBombshell: Dumbledore does that to Severus. {{Played For Drama}}.
* DontLookAtMe: Severus tried it with Lily, but failed.
* DrinkOrder: Dumbledore was shocked when he found out that Severus, unlike himself, drinks tea without sugar.
** Lily likes mead very much.
* DontLookAtMe: Severus tried it with Lily, but failed.
* DrinkOrder: Dumbledore was shocked when he found out that Severus, unlike himself, drinks tea without sugar.
** Lily likes mead very much.
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%% * TheDragAlong: Peter Pettigrew.
%% * DroppingTheBombshell: Dumbledore does that to Severus. {{Played For Drama}}.
%% * DontLookAtMe: Severus tried it with Lily, but failed.
*DrinkOrder: DrinkBasedCharacterization: Dumbledore was shocked when he found out that Severus, unlike himself, drinks tea without sugar.
** Lily likes mead very much.sugar.
%% * DroppingTheBombshell: Dumbledore does that to Severus. {{Played For Drama}}.
%% * DontLookAtMe: Severus tried it with Lily, but failed.
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** Lily likes mead very much.
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* FieryRedhead: Lily.
* ForgetsToEat: Severus.
* FreudianExcuse: Severus has a big one.
* FriendsWithBenefits: On Lily's side.
* GuessWhoImMarrying: Walburga and [[spoiler: Slughorn]] to poor Regulus.
* HappyEndingMassage: Lily wants to do it to Severus and won't take no for an answer.
* ForgetsToEat: Severus.
* FreudianExcuse: Severus has a big one.
* FriendsWithBenefits: On Lily's side.
* GuessWhoImMarrying: Walburga and [[spoiler: Slughorn]] to poor Regulus.
* HappyEndingMassage: Lily wants to do it to Severus and won't take no for an answer.
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%% * FieryRedhead: Lily.
%% * ForgetsToEat: Severus.
%% * FreudianExcuse: Severus has a big one.
%% * FriendsWithBenefits: On Lily's side.
%% * TheGloriousWarOfSisterlyRivalry: Lily and Petunia. Not as ugly as in the canon.
%% * GuessWhoImMarrying: Walburga and [[spoiler: Slughorn]] to poor Regulus.
%% * HappyEndingMassage: Lily wants to do it to Severus and won't take no for an answer.
%% * ForgetsToEat: Severus.
%% * FreudianExcuse: Severus has a big one.
%% * FriendsWithBenefits: On Lily's side.
%% * TheGloriousWarOfSisterlyRivalry: Lily and Petunia. Not as ugly as in the canon.
%% * GuessWhoImMarrying: Walburga and [[spoiler: Slughorn]] to poor Regulus.
%% * HappyEndingMassage: Lily wants to do it to Severus and won't take no for an answer.
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* HatesBeingTouched: Severus. Lily is the only exception for him. [[spoiler: Later would tolerate Mary]].
* HiddenBadass: Severus.
* HiddenBadass: Severus.
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%% * HatesBeingTouched: Severus. Lily is the only exception for him. [[spoiler: Later would tolerate Mary]].
%% * HiddenBadass: Severus.
%% * HiddenBadass: Severus.
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* HumbleHero: Severus, in the eyes of some people. But he just doesn't care.
* ICanStillFight: Severus, but he doesn't have a choice, literally.
* ICanStillFight: Severus, but he doesn't have a choice, literally.
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%% * HumbleHero: Severus, in the eyes of some people. But he just doesn't care.
%% * ICanStillFight: Severus, but he doesn't have a choice, literally.
%% * ICanStillFight: Severus, but he doesn't have a choice, literally.
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: James to Lily, sometimes Lily to Severus.
* IntergenerationalFriendship: Severus and Xenophilius Lovegood (he is already working as an editor).
* IntergenerationalFriendship: Severus and Xenophilius Lovegood (he is already working as an editor).
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%% * InnocentlyInsensitive: James to Lily, sometimes Lily to Severus.
%% * IntergenerationalFriendship: Severus and Xenophilius Lovegood (he is already working as an editor).
%% * IntergenerationalFriendship: Severus and Xenophilius Lovegood (he is already working as an editor).
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* JustFriends: Lily's line.
* KickThemWhileTheyAreDown: James and Sirius do that to Severus.
** Severus does it too, but is much more sneaky about it.
* KidsAreCruel: Some of them are.
* LackOfEmpathy: Lily, Severus and most of the characters.
* LieBackAndThinkOfEngland: Severus when Lily is in the mood, but he is not. So, {{inverted}}.
* LonersAreFreaks: It doesn't help Severus' reputation. Even Lily thinks Severus needs more friends than just her. He disagrees.
* LoveHurts: Severus.
* LovePotion: {{Discussed}} and [[DeconstructedTrope deconstructed]] by Lily.
* LustObject: Severus to Lily.
* {{Mangst}}: Severus.
* MasqueradeBall.
* MiseryBuildsCharacter: Severus.
* MistakenConfession: Lily to her parents.
* MistakenForMurderer: Sirius Black. But not in the way you thought.
* MomentKiller: Dumbledore.
* MoreThanMeetsTheEye: Severus.
* MusclesAreMeaningless: In the wizarding world they are, and Severus proves it.
* NeatFreak: Petunia.
* KickThemWhileTheyAreDown: James and Sirius do that to Severus.
** Severus does it too, but is much more sneaky about it.
* KidsAreCruel: Some of them are.
* LackOfEmpathy: Lily, Severus and most of the characters.
* LieBackAndThinkOfEngland: Severus when Lily is in the mood, but he is not. So, {{inverted}}.
* LonersAreFreaks: It doesn't help Severus' reputation. Even Lily thinks Severus needs more friends than just her. He disagrees.
* LoveHurts: Severus.
* LovePotion: {{Discussed}} and [[DeconstructedTrope deconstructed]] by Lily.
* LustObject: Severus to Lily.
* {{Mangst}}: Severus.
* MasqueradeBall.
* MiseryBuildsCharacter: Severus.
* MistakenConfession: Lily to her parents.
* MistakenForMurderer: Sirius Black. But not in the way you thought.
* MomentKiller: Dumbledore.
* MoreThanMeetsTheEye: Severus.
* MusclesAreMeaningless: In the wizarding world they are, and Severus proves it.
* NeatFreak: Petunia.
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%% * JustFriends: Lily's line.
%% *KickThemWhileTheyAreDown: KickThemWhileTheyAreDown:
%% ** James and Sirius do that to Severus.
%% ** Severus does it too, but is much more sneaky about it.
* KidsAreCruel: Some of them are.
%% * LackOfEmpathy: Lily, Severus and most of the characters.
%% * LieBackAndThinkOfEngland: Severus when Lily is in the mood, but he is not. So, {{inverted}}.
%% * LonersAreFreaks: It doesn't help Severus' reputation. Even Lily thinks Severus needs more friends than just her. He disagrees.
%% * LoveHurts: Severus.
%% * LovePotion: {{Discussed}} and [[DeconstructedTrope deconstructed]] by Lily.
%% * LustObject: Severus to Lily.
%% * {{Mangst}}: Severus.
%% * MasqueradeBall.
%% * MiseryBuildsCharacter: Severus.
%% * MistakenConfession: Lily to her parents.
%% * MistakenForMurderer: Sirius Black. But not in the way you thought.
%% * MomentKiller: Dumbledore.
%% * MoreThanMeetsTheEye: Severus.
%% * MusclesAreMeaningless: In the wizarding world they are, and Severus proves it.
%% * NeatFreak: Petunia.
%% *
%% ** James and Sirius do that to Severus.
%% ** Severus does it too, but is much more sneaky about it.
%% * LieBackAndThinkOfEngland: Severus when Lily is in the mood, but he is not. So, {{inverted}}.
%% * LonersAreFreaks: It doesn't help Severus' reputation. Even Lily thinks Severus needs more friends than just her. He disagrees.
%% * LoveHurts: Severus.
%% * LovePotion: {{Discussed}} and [[DeconstructedTrope deconstructed]] by Lily.
%% * LustObject: Severus to Lily.
%% * {{Mangst}}: Severus.
%% * MasqueradeBall.
%% * MiseryBuildsCharacter: Severus.
%% * MistakenConfession: Lily to her parents.
%% * MistakenForMurderer: Sirius Black. But not in the way you thought.
%% * MomentKiller: Dumbledore.
%% * MoreThanMeetsTheEye: Severus.
%% * MusclesAreMeaningless: In the wizarding world they are, and Severus proves it.
%% * NeatFreak: Petunia.
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** Slughorn got his moment with Magical Law Enforcement [[spoiler: and bloodied Severus]]. It did not end well.
* OddFriendship: Severus and Lily.
* OddFriendship: Severus and Lily.
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%% ** Slughorn got his moment with Magical Law Enforcement [[spoiler: and bloodied Severus]]. It did not end well.
%% * OddFriendship: Severus and Lily.
%% * OddFriendship: Severus and Lily.
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* PosterGalleryBedroom: Mulciber's posters from his PornStash.
* PornStash: A lot of students had it to Minerva's disappointment.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Minerva [=McGonagall=], Alastor Gumboil, Healer Pye.
* SandInMyEyes: [[ReconstructedTrope Reconstructed]] with Severus.
* SecretRelationship: Severus and Lily.
* PornStash: A lot of students had it to Minerva's disappointment.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Minerva [=McGonagall=], Alastor Gumboil, Healer Pye.
* SandInMyEyes: [[ReconstructedTrope Reconstructed]] with Severus.
* SecretRelationship: Severus and Lily.
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%% * PosterGalleryBedroom: Mulciber's posters from his PornStash.
%% * PornStash: A lot of students had it to Minerva's disappointment.
%% * ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Minerva [=McGonagall=], Alastor Gumboil, Healer Pye.
%% * SandInMyEyes: [[ReconstructedTrope Reconstructed]] with Severus.
%% * SecretRelationship: Severus and Lily.
%% * PornStash: A lot of students had it to Minerva's disappointment.
%% * ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Minerva [=McGonagall=], Alastor Gumboil, Healer Pye.
%% * SandInMyEyes: [[ReconstructedTrope Reconstructed]] with Severus.
%% * SecretRelationship: Severus and Lily.
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* SweetTooth: Dumbledore and Slughorn. {{Exaggerated}}.
* SwitchingPOV.
* TeenDrama.
* TheCassandra: Lily. She accurately predicted almost everything that would happen to Severus in their Sixth Year [[spoiler: while doing her Divination assignment]]. But ''neither of them'' tried to do much about it.
* TheDragAlong: Peter Pettigrew.
* TheGloriousWarOfSisterlyRivalry: Lily and Petunia. Not as ugly as in the canon.
* TheirFirstTime.
* TroubleFollowsYouHome.
* SwitchingPOV.
* TeenDrama.
* TheCassandra: Lily. She accurately predicted almost everything that would happen to Severus in their Sixth Year [[spoiler: while doing her Divination assignment]]. But ''neither of them'' tried to do much about it.
* TheDragAlong: Peter Pettigrew.
* TheGloriousWarOfSisterlyRivalry: Lily and Petunia. Not as ugly as in the canon.
* TheirFirstTime.
* TroubleFollowsYouHome.
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%% * SweetTooth: Dumbledore and Slughorn. {{Exaggerated}}.
%% * SwitchingPOV.
%% * TeenDrama.
* TheCassandra: Lily. She accurately predicted almost everything that would happen to Severus in their Sixth Year [[spoiler: while doing her Divination assignment]]. But ''neither of them'' tried to do much about it.
* TheDragAlong: Peter Pettigrew.
* TheGloriousWarOfSisterlyRivalry: Lily and Petunia. Not as ugly as in the canon.
%% * TheirFirstTime.
%% * TroubleFollowsYouHome.
%% * SwitchingPOV.
%% * TeenDrama.
* TheDragAlong: Peter Pettigrew.
* TheGloriousWarOfSisterlyRivalry: Lily and Petunia. Not as ugly as in the canon.
%% * TroubleFollowsYouHome.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Severus doesn't hesitate to use the Polyjuice Potion when needed.
** Marauders and [=McGonagall=], of course.
* WeddingDay.
* WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong: Lily and her friends' attitude before [[spoiler: the werewolf incident]].
* YouAreGrounded: Lily by her parents.
** Marauders and [=McGonagall=], of course.
* WeddingDay.
* WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong: Lily and her friends' attitude before [[spoiler: the werewolf incident]].
* YouAreGrounded: Lily by her parents.
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%% * VoluntaryShapeshifting: VoluntaryShapeshifting:
%% ** Severus doesn't hesitate to use the Polyjuice Potion when needed.
%% ** Marauders and [=McGonagall=], of course.
%% * WeddingDay.
%% * WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong: Lily and her friends' attitude before [[spoiler: the werewolf incident]].
%% * YouAreGrounded: Lily by her parents.
%% ** Severus doesn't hesitate to use the Polyjuice Potion when needed.
%% ** Marauders and [=McGonagall=], of course.
%% * WeddingDay.
%% * WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong: Lily and her friends' attitude before [[spoiler: the werewolf incident]].
%% * YouAreGrounded: Lily by her parents.
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* AngstWhatAngst: Lily.
** {{Subverted}} with Severus because while some things hurt him deeply, he doesn't usually show it:
--> He [Avery] was scared shitless. Someone who could shrug off the death of his own mother? …
** {{Subverted}} with Severus because while some things hurt him deeply, he doesn't usually show it:
--> He [Avery] was scared shitless. Someone who could shrug off the death of his own mother? …
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Severus. Somewhat {{exaggerated}}, but {{justified}}. He is also unlucky enough to love a PluckyGirl.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Severus. Somewhat {{exaggerated}}, but {{justified}}.{{justified|Trope}}. He is also unlucky enough to love a PluckyGirl.
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* RonTheDeathEater: Played with. James, Sirius, Slughorn and Dumbledore don't do anything too out of character, but it all just [[GoneHorriblyWrong goes horribly wrong]].
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* NotHelpingYourCase: When McGonagall accuses the Marauders of attacking Snape because [[FantasticRacism he's a half-blood]] in Chapter 7, James responds ''that they would have attacked him no matter what his parents were''.
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* NotHelpingYourCase: When McGonagall [=McGonagall=] accuses the Marauders of attacking Snape because [[FantasticRacism he's a half-blood]] in Chapter 7, James responds ''that they would have attacked him no matter what his parents were''.
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* NotHelpingYourCase: When McGonagall accuses the Marauders of attacking Snape because [[FantasticRacism he's a half-blood]] in Chapter 7, James responds ''that they would have attacked him no matter what his parents were''.
