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* CatchPhrase: Hojo uses the words ''specimen'' and ''insubordinate'' ad nauseam.

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* CatchPhrase: CharacterCatchphrase: Hojo uses the words ''specimen'' and ''insubordinate'' ad nauseam.
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** Hojo is the most proeminent example in both stories. Although his plot armor comes and goes, as the author deems fit, when he does have it he is invincible. He is the most powerful character in the series, easily surpassing Sephiroth and Julia combined, and even when he should be eliminated or at least fired, the author throws all logic and common sense out the window and brings some [[InsaneTrollLogic ridiculous explanation]] as justification for his invincibility and exemption from the rules. By the end of ''Shinra SOLDIER,'' he is able to kill twenty first class soldiers (Shinra's elite) without breaking a sweat and his body count includes the commander of the Shinra army and her infant son, a Turk and two other first class soldiers. He doesn't get more than a demotion for killing the Turk, the two soldiers and the baby, and is never shown receiving any punishment at all for killing Julia and the other twenty soldiers.

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** Hojo is the most proeminent prominent example in both stories. Although his plot armor comes and goes, as the author deems fit, when he does have it he is invincible. He is the most powerful character in the series, easily surpassing Sephiroth and Julia combined, and even when he should be eliminated or at least fired, the author throws all logic and common sense out the window and brings some [[InsaneTrollLogic ridiculous explanation]] as justification for his invincibility and exemption from the rules. By the end of ''Shinra SOLDIER,'' he is able to kill twenty first class soldiers (Shinra's elite) without breaking a sweat and his body count includes the commander of the Shinra army and her infant son, a Turk and two other first class soldiers. He doesn't get more than a demotion for killing the Turk, the two soldiers and the baby, and is never shown receiving any punishment at all for killing Julia and the other twenty soldiers.
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* DarkChick: Julia is a rare protagonist example. She demonstrates a distinct [[LackOfEmpathy lack of empathy]] for almost everyone around her, is a ruthless and uncaring manager and shows a disturbing inclination towards torture and murder.

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* CreatorsCultureCarryover: Detention and federal holidays are mentioned, despite this not being an AU story.



* WeAllLiveInAmerica: Detention and federal holidays are mentioned, despite this not being an AU story.
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* AuthorAvatar: Sephirothslave's real name is Julia. Julia's description and artwork makes it clear she is an idealized version of its creator, with more money, power, and [[BuxomIsBetter bigger breasts.]] The character shares the author's hobbies such as martial arts and music, her interest in the occult, her aspirations (being together with Sephiroth, obtaining power, fame and recognition), even the name of her weapons, which Sephirothslave claims to own in real life. Julia's parents and friends also share the names of their real life counterparts. Julia also automatically hates anybody Sephirothslave hates even before they do anything. (Cloud is asleep when she first meets him and hits him out of the blue in the eye with a marble, and her first encounter with Aerith is just Julia feeling smug that Aerith got hit by an ink balloon).

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* AuthorAvatar: Sephirothslave's real name is Julia. Julia's description and artwork makes it clear she is an idealized version of its creator, with more money, power, and [[BuxomIsBetter bigger breasts.]] breasts. The character shares the author's hobbies such as martial arts and music, her interest in the occult, her aspirations (being together with Sephiroth, obtaining power, fame and recognition), even the name of her weapons, which Sephirothslave claims to own in real life. Julia's parents and friends also share the names of their real life counterparts. Julia also automatically hates anybody Sephirothslave hates even before they do anything. (Cloud is asleep when she first meets him and hits him out of the blue in the eye with a marble, and her first encounter with Aerith is just Julia feeling smug that Aerith got hit by an ink balloon).
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* {{Chickification}}: In addition to Tifa becoming TheChick, Julia herself manages to go through this, switching from a FauxActionGirl to a full fledge DamselInDistress after the Wutai arc.

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* {{Chickification}}: In addition to Tifa becoming TheChick, much weaker, Julia herself manages to go through this, switching from a FauxActionGirl to a full fledge DamselInDistress after the Wutai arc.


Shinra High doesn't so much end as [[DividedForPublication roll directly into its sequel]], Shinra SOLDIER. Julia, Sephiroth, and the others have survived Hojo's training and are now rushed into military training to ideally become the new SOLDIER class heroes that Midgar desperately needs. Sephiroth and Julia exceed expectations, quickly ousting General Heidegger and becoming the new [[AssKickingEqualsAuthority General]] and [[NumberTwo Commander]] of the Shinra armies. They then lead Shinra to its rise to power, [[InvincibleHero effortlessly crushing all opposition]] [[CombatPragmatist in the most ruthless ways possible.]]

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Shinra High doesn't so much end as [[DividedForPublication roll directly into its sequel]], Shinra SOLDIER. Julia, Sephiroth, and the others have survived Hojo's training and are now rushed into military training to ideally become the new SOLDIER class heroes that Midgar desperately needs. Sephiroth and Julia exceed expectations, quickly ousting General Heidegger and becoming the new [[AssKickingEqualsAuthority [[AsskickingLeadsToLeadership General]] and [[NumberTwo Commander]] of the Shinra armies. They then lead Shinra to its rise to power, [[InvincibleHero effortlessly crushing all opposition]] [[CombatPragmatist in the most ruthless ways possible.]]



* AssKickingEqualsAuthority: Raw, one-on-one physical combat skill is the sole quality required to become the general of the entire Shinra army, by beating the previous one in the Challenges. Sephiroth defeats Heidegger to become the general.

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* AssKickingEqualsAuthority: AsskickingLeadsToLeadership: Raw, one-on-one physical combat skill is the sole quality required to become the general of the entire Shinra army, by beating the previous one in the Challenges. Sephiroth defeats Heidegger to become the general.
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* {{BFS}}: [[WeaponOfChoice The Buster Sword]] is now standard issue for all Shinra grunts.

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* {{BFS}}: [[WeaponOfChoice The Buster Sword]] Sword is now standard issue for all Shinra grunts.



** During the Wutai arc, Julia tortures both her victims due to minor slights. Gorki, for daring to call Sephiroth a woman, is tortured until she screams, which includes cutting off both her arms and crushing her legs with Demi. Staniv breaks Julia's [[WeaponOfChoice katana]], so Julia paralyzes her [[EyeScream cuts out her eyeball and forces her to eat it]], and then mutilates her so she can bleed to death.

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** During the Wutai arc, Julia tortures both her victims due to minor slights. Gorki, for daring to call Sephiroth a woman, is tortured until she screams, which includes cutting off both her arms and crushing her legs with Demi. Staniv breaks Julia's [[WeaponOfChoice katana]], katana, so Julia paralyzes her [[EyeScream cuts out her eyeball and forces her to eat it]], and then mutilates her so she can bleed to death.
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[[VideoGame/FinalFantasyVII Sephiroth]] is one of the most popular Final Fantasy villains of all time. He's [[TheAce an elite soldier,]] [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds has a tragic story,]] [[{{Bishonen}} and he's very, very pretty.]] But what was his life like before the game began? Before he met Cloud and Zack? The aptly named Sephirothslave sets out to tell us.

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[[VideoGame/FinalFantasyVII Sephiroth]] is one of the most popular Final Fantasy villains of all time. He's [[TheAce an elite soldier,]] [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds has a tragic story,]] [[{{Bishonen}} and he's very, very pretty.]] pretty. But what was his life like before the game began? Before he met Cloud and Zack? The aptly named Sephirothslave sets out to tell us.
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* BikerBabe: Julia's favorite mode of transportation is a Suzuki bike. The bike would later become a TragicKeepsake for her foster brother Tseng in the final story of the trilogy, [[DeadFic Silent Melody]].
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* UpToEleven: Hojo's evilness is greatly exaggerated.
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* LoveTriangle: Between [[TroubledButCute Sephiroth]], [[JerkSue Julia]] and [[TheCheerleader Laura]].

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* LoveTriangle: Between [[TroubledButCute Sephiroth]], [[JerkSue Julia]] and [[TheCheerleader [[CruelCheerleader Laura]].

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* TheCheerleader:
** Although initially portrayed as a sweetheart, Laura Summers later proves to be a manipulative, spiteful, selfish and shallow girl. Yuffie realized there is something wrong with her when she found out Laura was a "Varsity cheerleader".
** Averted with Aerith, who is not written as being evil or mean, despite being a cheerleader. However, everybody still treats her as if she is.


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* CruelCheerleader:
** Although initially portrayed as a sweetheart, Laura Summers later proves to be a manipulative, spiteful, selfish and shallow girl. Yuffie realized there is something wrong with her when she found out Laura was a "Varsity cheerleader".
** Averted with Aerith, who is not written as being evil or mean, despite being a cheerleader. However, everybody still treats her as if she is.

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* AbortedArc: We are introduced to two of Hojo's assistants, one of whom has feelings for him. The fic never addresses this again, and [[ChuckCunninghamSyndrome we never see them again.]]

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We are introduced to two of Hojo's assistants, one of whom has feelings for him. The fic never addresses this again, and [[ChuckCunninghamSyndrome we never see them again.]]



* ArtisticLicenseMilitary: Promotions are done by straight combat with no need to go through Officer school.

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Promotions are done by straight combat with no need to go through Officer school.



* BadBoss: President Shinra allows Hojo to torture Sephiroth, Julia and the others because he wants them for his army. When Hojo murders two soldiers, a Turk and Sephiroth and Julia's baby, the only course of action taken by the President is to demote Hojo and spend two weeks without arresting the soldiers who obeyed the crazy scientist. His justification? He needs Hojo for the mako therapy. Worth noting is that this is an unintentional example on the author's part, as the main characters fail to see just how little President Shinra cares about them and consider him a benevolent, if somewhat dim-witted man.

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President Shinra allows Hojo to torture Sephiroth, Julia and the others because he wants them for his army. When Hojo murders two soldiers, a Turk and Sephiroth and Julia's baby, the only course of action taken by the President is to demote Hojo and spend two weeks without arresting the soldiers who obeyed the crazy scientist. His justification? He needs Hojo for the mako therapy. Worth noting is that this is an unintentional example on the author's part, as the main characters fail to see just how little President Shinra cares about them and consider him a benevolent, if somewhat dim-witted man.



* BullyingADragon: Zack, fully aware that Sephiroth can and will beat him up for any affront, loves to antagonize him anyway.

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Zack, fully aware that Sephiroth can and will beat him up for any affront, loves to antagonize him anyway.



* TheCheerleader: Although initially portrayed as a sweetheart, Laura Summers later proves to be a manipulative, spiteful, selfish and shallow girl. Yuffie realized there is something wrong with her when she found out Laura was a "Varsity cheerleader".

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* TheCheerleader: TheCheerleader:
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Although initially portrayed as a sweetheart, Laura Summers later proves to be a manipulative, spiteful, selfish and shallow girl. Yuffie realized there is something wrong with her when she found out Laura was a "Varsity cheerleader".



* ColorMotif: The color silver appears numerous times in both stories: it's the color of the gym outfits from the special training course, the color of the tablecloths at Homecoming, of one of Julia's dresses and the cloth around her wedding bouquet.

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The color silver appears numerous times in both stories: it's the color of the gym outfits from the special training course, the color of the tablecloths at Homecoming, of one of Julia's dresses and the cloth around her wedding bouquet.



* DisproportionateRetribution: Julia and Sephiroth are big fans of this. In response to being attacked by half the football team, (even though the football players [[CurbStompBattle lost spectacularly]]) Julia and Sephiroth get revenge by blowing up the football field during a game, openly wounding players and spectators in the process.

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* DisproportionateRetribution: DisproportionateRetribution:
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Julia and Sephiroth are big fans of this. In response to being attacked by half the football team, (even though the football players [[CurbStompBattle lost spectacularly]]) Julia and Sephiroth get revenge by blowing up the football field during a game, openly wounding players and spectators in the process.



* DrivenToSuicide: Laura kills herself after dumping Sephiroth, stating that she doesn't want to live if she can't have him. Staniv commits suicide by self-immolation after Julia tortures her and leaves her to bleed to death.

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Laura kills herself after dumping Sephiroth, stating that she doesn't want to live if she can't have him. Staniv commits suicide by self-immolation after Julia tortures her and leaves her to bleed to death.



* EasilyForgiven: Zack dealt some pretty low blows to Sephiroth, helped Laura cheat on him and beat Julia within an inch of her life, leaving her bleeding and broken in a cold, dark alleyway to die. Afterwards, he is never regarded as anything more than an annoyance by Sephiroth and Julia and toward the end of ''Shinra SOLDIER'', they are on civil terms, even though Zack has never apologized or expressed any remorse for his actions.

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* EasilyForgiven: EasilyForgiven:
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Zack dealt some pretty low blows to Sephiroth, helped Laura cheat on him and beat Julia within an inch of her life, leaving her bleeding and broken in a cold, dark alleyway to die. Afterwards, he is never regarded as anything more than an annoyance by Sephiroth and Julia and toward the end of ''Shinra SOLDIER'', they are on civil terms, even though Zack has never apologized or expressed any remorse for his actions.



* ExtremeDoormat: Julia is completely obsessed with and dependent on Sephiroth.

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Julia is completely obsessed with and dependent on Sephiroth.



* ForTheEvulz: Hojo's Modus Operandi.
** Jenova as well, who's more interested in causing Julia to suffer than obtaining Gaia's energy or the Promised Land.

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* ForTheEvulz: Hojo's Modus Operandi.
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Operandi. Jenova as well, who's more interested in causing Julia to suffer than obtaining Gaia's energy or the Promised Land.



* HollywoodHealing: What magical and regular medicine can heal at any given moment depends on how dramatic it will be.
** Most notably, Julia is at one point poisoned. Days later, she loses most of her blood, which manages to drain her completely of the poison. Even ignoring the fact that she couldn't survive losing enough blood to remove the poison, by that time, it would have soaked into most of her organs and tissue.

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* HollywoodHealing: What magical and regular medicine can heal at any given moment depends on how dramatic it will be.
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be. Most notably, Julia is at one point poisoned. Days later, she loses most of her blood, which manages to drain her completely of the poison. Even ignoring the fact that she couldn't survive losing enough blood to remove the poison, by that time, it would have soaked into most of her organs and tissue.



* ImpracticallyFancyOutfit: Julia's wedding dress consists of "countless layers of the lightest silk." The problem? Her wedding takes place in a stone cathedral, at night, on the Northern continent... the coldest place on the Planet.

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Julia's wedding dress consists of "countless layers of the lightest silk." The problem? Her wedding takes place in a stone cathedral, at night, on the Northern continent... the coldest place on the Planet.



* InformedAttribute: Julia is allegedly kind, wonderful and wise, but she never demonstrates these qualities, instead being overly violent and short-sighted. We're also told that her friends call her Megami, but nobody does.

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Julia is allegedly kind, wonderful and wise, but she never demonstrates these qualities, instead being overly violent and short-sighted. We're also told that her friends call her Megami, but nobody does.



* InsistentTerminology: The author insists on calling her fanfictions ''novels''.

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The author insists on calling her fanfictions ''novels''.



* KarmaHoudini: Hojo defines this trope.
** Many other characters are never called out for their crimes. Another major example is Zack, who is never punished for nearly killing Julia.

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* KarmaHoudini: Hojo defines this trope. \n** Many other characters are never called out for their crimes.crimes either. Another major example is Zack, who is never punished for nearly killing Julia.



* NouveauRiche: Julia buys only designer clothes, has a custom leather catsuit made to serve as her military uniform and in spite of professing an aversion to spending money, she openly states that she has expensive taste and has a ridiculously expensive and lavish wedding to which she invites ''the entire Shinra military.''

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* NouveauRiche: NouveauRiche:
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Julia buys only designer clothes, has a custom leather catsuit made to serve as her military uniform and in spite of professing an aversion to spending money, she openly states that she has expensive taste and has a ridiculously expensive and lavish wedding to which she invites ''the entire Shinra military.''



* PlotArmor: Hojo is the most proeminent example in both stories. Although his plot armor comes and goes, as the author deems fit, when he does have it he is invincible. He is the most powerful character in the series, easily surpassing Sephiroth and Julia combined, and even when he should be eliminated or at least fired, the author throws all logic and common sense out the window and brings some [[InsaneTrollLogic ridiculous explanation]] as justification for his invincibility and exemption from the rules. By the end of ''Shinra SOLDIER,'' he is able to kill twenty first class soldiers (Shinra's elite) without breaking a sweat and his body count includes the commander of the Shinra army and her infant son, a Turk and two other first class soldiers. He doesn't get more than a demotion for killing the Turk, the two soldiers and the baby, and is never shown receiving any punishment at all for killing Julia and the other twenty soldiers.

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Hojo is the most proeminent example in both stories. Although his plot armor comes and goes, as the author deems fit, when he does have it he is invincible. He is the most powerful character in the series, easily surpassing Sephiroth and Julia combined, and even when he should be eliminated or at least fired, the author throws all logic and common sense out the window and brings some [[InsaneTrollLogic ridiculous explanation]] as justification for his invincibility and exemption from the rules. By the end of ''Shinra SOLDIER,'' he is able to kill twenty first class soldiers (Shinra's elite) without breaking a sweat and his body count includes the commander of the Shinra army and her infant son, a Turk and two other first class soldiers. He doesn't get more than a demotion for killing the Turk, the two soldiers and the baby, and is never shown receiving any punishment at all for killing Julia and the other twenty soldiers.



* PutOnABus: Ian is last seen being sent on a mission by Julia after the time skip. He is never heard of again.

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Ian is last seen being sent on a mission by Julia after the time skip. He is never heard of again.



* SociopathicSoldier: The ''entire'' Shinra army is comprised of this. The soldiers have no issue with murdering every single Wutai man, woman or child they meet, and are shown to not even notice the agonizing screams of the Wutai citizens slowly being eaten alive by insects, even though the Shinra army was right outside the city!

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* SociopathicSoldier: SociopathicSoldier:
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The ''entire'' Shinra army is comprised of this. The soldiers have no issue with murdering every single Wutai man, woman or child they meet, and are shown to not even notice the agonizing screams of the Wutai citizens slowly being eaten alive by insects, even though the Shinra army was right outside the city!



* [[WhereDoesHeGetAllThoseWonderfulToys Where Does She Get Those Wonderful Materia]]: Julia has some of the most powerful materia in the world, including maxed out heal/cure materia, all three Bahamuts, and Knights of the Round. No mention is ever made to where she got them.
* WhyDontYouJustShootHim: A rare protagonist version. Hojo is openly torturing Sephiroth, Julia and others, and later explicitly trying to kill them. Even though they have him at their mercy repeatedly, they never once consider just killing him, even as they acknowledge that he will continue to hound them.

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* [[WhereDoesHeGetAllThoseWonderfulToys Where Does She Get Those Wonderful Materia]]: WhereDoesHeGetAllThoseWonderfulToys: Julia has some of the most powerful materia in the world, including maxed out heal/cure materia, all three Bahamuts, and Knights of the Round. No mention is ever made to where she got them.
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A rare protagonist version. Hojo is openly torturing Sephiroth, Julia and others, and later explicitly trying to kill them. Even though they have him at their mercy repeatedly, they never once consider just killing him, even as they acknowledge that he will continue to hound them.
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* FingerlessGloves: Julia has a pair.
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The fiction is well known for several reasons. In addition to its length, convoluted plot and the blatant MarySue qualities of Julia, it is a mouthpiece for the [[AlternativeCharacterInterpretation Jenova Possession Theory]], which claims that Sephiroth was not the true villain of the series, but rather an innocent victim, being controlled and or commanded by [[EldritchAbomination Jenova]]. In addition to this, [[DaydreamBeliever Sephirothslave claims that the character of Sephiroth was inspired by her archangel husband, who supposedly looks like him and shares his name]]. Finally, it is famous for butchering nearly every character in ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyVII'', and getting nearly every aspect of the story wrong.

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The fiction is well known for several reasons. In addition to its length, convoluted plot and the blatant MarySue perfectionist qualities of Julia, it is a mouthpiece for the [[AlternativeCharacterInterpretation Jenova Possession Theory]], which claims that Sephiroth was not the true villain of the series, but rather an innocent victim, being controlled and or commanded by [[EldritchAbomination Jenova]]. In addition to this, [[DaydreamBeliever Sephirothslave claims that the character of Sephiroth was inspired by her archangel husband, who supposedly looks like him and shares his name]]. Finally, it is famous for butchering nearly every character in ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyVII'', and getting nearly every aspect of the story wrong.
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* NotSoDifferent: Julia and Sephiroth despise Hojo, but in the end they prove to be just as murderous and fond of torture as the professor, if not more so.
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** Her military uniform could count as this: it is described as a single piece, custom made leather bodysuit. One of the sporkers of the story [[http://lian-hua.livejournal.com/32816.html pointed out]] how impractical such an outfit would be not only for cold weather, but also for normal everyday actions like going to the toilet, because the bodysuit has to be removed almost entirely every single time. On top of that, wearing such a skin-tight leather bodysuit in front of her soldiers will generally make it [[RealityEnsues much more difficult]] for her to be taken seriously in her job.

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** Her military uniform could count as this: it is described as a single piece, custom made leather bodysuit. One of the sporkers of the story [[http://lian-hua.livejournal.com/32816.html pointed out]] how impractical such an outfit would be not only for cold weather, but also for normal everyday actions like going to the toilet, because the bodysuit has to be removed almost entirely every single time. On top of that, wearing such a skin-tight leather bodysuit in front of her soldiers will generally make it [[RealityEnsues much more difficult]] difficult for her to be taken seriously in her job.
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* AliensMadeThemDoIt: Jenova took over Sephiroth's body and forced him to rape Julia. Also counts as RapeByProxy.
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A sporking of it in its entirety, as well as many other fanfics and essays of Sephirothslave, can be found [[http://lian-hua.livejournal.com/ here]]

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Conpare ''Fanfic/MyInnerLife''. A sporking of it in its entirety, as well as many other fanfics and essays of Sephirothslave, can be found [[http://lian-hua.livejournal.com/ here]]
here]].
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* YourCheatingHeart: Laura cheats on Sephiroth with Zack, leading to a convenient breakup.
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* AllGuysWantCheerleaders: Averted. Both Laura and Aerith are looked down on for being cheerleaders by all male (and female) lead characters, with Yuffie distrusting Laura just for being a cheerleader, and Rude explicitly not wanting to watch a play because Aerith is in it.
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* AsLongAsItSoundsForeign: The fic is packed with names such as Korokou, Nakahamou and Okokou which appear Japanese, but have no meaning in the language.

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* AsLongAsItSoundsForeign: The fic is packed with names such as Korokou, Korokou and Nakahamou and Okokou which appear Japanese, but have no meaning in the language.

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