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This or these examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected, or something is just an innate aspect of the setting or character that has a logical reason for being present); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread
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* [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere Screw This, We're Outta Here!]]: The first part of the fic in a nutshell: both Ranma and Akane become fed up with all the chaos in Nerima, so they just up and leave (with Kasumi).
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** In response to Ukyo's use of explosives at the failed wedding, Ranma formally ends his engagement with her, bluntly pointing out that her actions could have gotten his mother or the other wedding guests injured or killed, and that he no longer considers himself honor-bound to marry her as a result.
** Upon learning that Ryoga is P-chan, Akane is shocked, disappointed and furious with him, as well as Ranma and her father, both of whom kept the secret from her. Soun also gets treated a lot worse than Ranma; while the latter was restrained by his honor and at least tried to give Akane obvious hints to the truth, Soun has no such excuse, seeing as he IS Akane's father.
** The behaviour of the Kuno siblings - Kuno trying to kill someone who looks like Ranma, Kodachi attacking the real Ranma with paralysis powder - leads to them getting arrested, forced to undergo psychiatric evaluations, and finally [[spoiler: imprisoned for the rest of their lives]].
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** In response to Ukyo's use of explosives at the failed wedding, Ranma formally ends his engagement with her, bluntly pointing out that her actions could have gotten his mother or the other wedding guests injured or killed, and that he no longer considers himself honor-bound to marry her as a result.
** Upon learning that Ryoga is P-chan, Akane is shocked, disappointed and furious with him, as well as Ranma and her father, both of whom kept the secret from her. Soun also gets treated a lot worse than Ranma; while the latter was restrained by his honor and at least tried to give Akane obvious hints to the truth, Soun has no such excuse, seeing as he IS Akane's father.
** The behaviour of the Kuno siblings - Kuno trying to kill someone who looks like Ranma, Kodachi attacking the real Ranma with paralysis powder - leads to them getting arrested, forced to undergo psychiatric evaluations, and finally [[spoiler: imprisoned for the rest of their lives]].
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* [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere Screw This, We're Outta Here!]]: ScrewThisImOuttaHere: The first part of the fic in a nutshell: both Ranma and Akane become fed up with all the chaos in Nerima, so they just up and leave (with Kasumi).
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** In response to Ukyo's use of explosives at the failed wedding, Ranma formally ends his engagement with her, bluntly pointing out that her actions could have gotten his mother or the other wedding guests injured or killed, and that he no longer considers himself honor-bound to marry her as a result.
** Upon learning that Ryoga is P-chan, Akane is shocked, disappointed and furious with him, as well as Ranma and her father, both of whom kept the secret from her. Soun also gets treated a lot worse than Ranma; while the latter was restrained by his honor and at least tried to give Akane obvious hints to the truth, Soun has no such excuse, seeing as he IS Akane's father.
** The behaviour of the Kuno siblings - Kuno trying to kill someone who looks like Ranma, Kodachi attacking the real Ranma with paralysis powder - leads to them getting arrested, forced to undergo psychiatric evaluations, and finally [[spoiler: imprisoned for the rest of their lives]].Kasumi).
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** In response to Ukyo's use of explosives at the failed wedding, Ranma formally ends his engagement with her, bluntly pointing out that her actions could have gotten his mother or the other wedding guests injured or killed, and that he no longer considers himself honor-bound to marry her as a result.
** Upon learning that Ryoga is P-chan, Akane is shocked, disappointed and furious with him, as well as Ranma and her father, both of whom kept the secret from her. Soun also gets treated a lot worse than Ranma; while the latter was restrained by his honor and at least tried to give Akane obvious hints to the truth, Soun has no such excuse, seeing as he IS Akane's father.
** The behaviour of the Kuno siblings - Kuno trying to kill someone who looks like Ranma, Kodachi attacking the real Ranma with paralysis powder - leads to them getting arrested, forced to undergo psychiatric evaluations, and finally [[spoiler: imprisoned for the rest of their lives]].
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* RealityEnsues:[[ScrewThisImOuttaHere Screw This, We're Outta Here!]]: The first part of the fic in a nutshell: both Ranma and Akane become fed up with all the chaos in Nerima, so they just up and leave (with Kasumi).
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* [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere Screw This, We're Outta Here!]]: The first part of the fic in a nutshell: both Ranma and Akane become fed up with all the chaos in Nerima, so they just up and leave (with Kasumi).
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** Upon learning that Ryoga is P-chan, Akane is shocked, disappointed and furious with him, as well as Ranma and her father, both of whom kept the secret from her. Soun also gets treated a lot worse than Ranma; while the latter was restrained by his honor and at least let Akane know the truth, Soun has no such excuse, seeing as he's Akane's father.
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** Upon learning that Ryoga is P-chan, Akane is shocked, disappointed and furious with him, as well as Ranma and her father, both of whom kept the secret from her. Soun also gets treated a lot worse than Ranma; while the latter was restrained by his honor and at least let tried to give Akane know obvious hints to the truth, Soun has no such excuse, seeing as he's he IS Akane's father.
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The two of them subsequently pack up and leave while the rest of the Tendo household's out, and move in with Dr. Tofu, who in this fanfic left Nerima a while ago and now resides in the city of Sendai. They're joined by Kasumi, who is intent on starting a relationship with Tofu. From here on out, the fic is pretty much about the two couples growing closer together, as well as how all the different people in Nerima deal with Ranma and Akane's disappearence.
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The two of them subsequently pack up and leave while the rest of the Tendo household's out, and move in with Dr. Tofu, who in this fanfic left Nerima a while ago and now resides in the city of Sendai. They're joined by Kasumi, who is intent on starting a relationship with Tofu. From here on out, the fic is pretty much about the two couples growing closer together, as well as how all the different people in Nerima deal with Ranma and Akane's disappearence.
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* AesopAmnesia: In her letter to Soun, Kasumi makes clear that his constant attempts to push Ranma and Akane together were one of the reasons they moved away. When Soun hears that Ranma, Akane and the others are returning to Nerima for a visit, the first thought in his mind is to contact Genma and start planning to convince Ranma and Akane to get married.
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* HappilyMarried: By the end of the fic, Ranma and Akane, along with Kasumi and Tofu.
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* HappilyMarried: By the end of the fic, Ranma and Akane, along with Kasumi and Tofu.Tofu, and Konatsu and Ukyo.
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** Upon learning that Ryoga is P-chan, Akane is shocked, disappointed and furious with him, as well as Ranma and her father, both of whom kept the secret from her.
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** In response to Ukyo's use of explosives at the failed wedding, Ranma formally ends his engagement with her, bluntly pointing out that her actions could have gotten his mother or the other wedding guests injured or killed, and that he no longer considers himself honor-bound to marry her as a result.
** Upon learning that Ryoga is P-chan, Akane is shocked, disappointed and furious with him, as well as Ranma and her father, both of whom kept the secret from her. Soun also gets treated a lot worse than Ranma; while the latter was restrained by his honor and at least let Akane know the truth, Soun has no such excuse, seeing as he's Akane's father.
** Upon learning that Ryoga is P-chan, Akane is shocked, disappointed and furious with him, as well as Ranma and her father, both of whom kept the secret from her. Soun also gets treated a lot worse than Ranma; while the latter was restrained by his honor and at least let Akane know the truth, Soun has no such excuse, seeing as he's Akane's father.
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''Sendai'' is the first of [=MZephyr=]'s [[Manga/RanmaOneHalf Ranma 1/2]] fanfics.
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* EnemyMine: Shortly after learning about Ranma's disappearence, Kodachi and Shampoo briefly team up to try and track him down.
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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Upon learning about Ranma and Akane running away, Cologne decides to give up helping Shampoo win Ranma's heart, knowing that he's chosen Akane, and fearing the damage Ranma could do.
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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Upon learning about that Ranma and Akane running away, have run away together, Cologne decides to give up helping Shampoo win Ranma's heart, knowing that he's chosen Akane, and fearing fearful of the damage Ranma could do.do if forced into something against his will.
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* RealityEnsues: Upon learning that Ryoga is P-chan, Akane is shocked, disappointed and furious with him, as well as everyone who kept the secret from her.
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** Upon learning that Ryoga is P-chan, Akane is shocked, disappointed and furious with him, as well aseveryone who Ranma and her father, both of whom kept the secret from her.her.
** The behaviour of the Kuno siblings - Kuno trying to kill someone who looks like Ranma, Kodachi attacking the real Ranma with paralysis powder - leads to them getting arrested, forced to undergo psychiatric evaluations, and finally [[spoiler: imprisoned for the rest of their lives]].
** Upon learning that Ryoga is P-chan, Akane is shocked, disappointed and furious with him, as well as
** The behaviour of the Kuno siblings - Kuno trying to kill someone who looks like Ranma, Kodachi attacking the real Ranma with paralysis powder - leads to them getting arrested, forced to undergo psychiatric evaluations, and finally [[spoiler: imprisoned for the rest of their lives]].
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* BorrowedCatchphrase: Akane's response to seeing Ryoga for the first time since she finds out about him being P-chan is to yell "Ryoga Hibiki! Prepare to die!"
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* HappilyMarried: By the end of the fic, Ranma and Akane, along with Kasumi and Tofu.
* [[HoistByHisOwnPetard Hoist By Her Own Petard]]: After spending two years trying to get Ranma to marry her because of her tribe's laws, Shampoo ends up trapped in a marriage to [[spoiler:Ryoga]] by those same laws.
* IJustWantToBeNormal: Both Ranma and Akane quickly agree not to tell anyone in Sendai about Ranma's curse, the guy not wanting people to regard him as a freak.
* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Upon learning about Ranma and Akane running away, Cologne decides to give up helping Shampoo win Ranma's heart, knowing that he's chosen Akane, and fearing the damage Ranma could do.
* [[HoistByHisOwnPetard Hoist By Her Own Petard]]: After spending two years trying to get Ranma to marry her because of her tribe's laws, Shampoo ends up trapped in a marriage to [[spoiler:Ryoga]] by those same laws.
* IJustWantToBeNormal: Both Ranma and Akane quickly agree not to tell anyone in Sendai about Ranma's curse, the guy not wanting people to regard him as a freak.
* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Upon learning about Ranma and Akane running away, Cologne decides to give up helping Shampoo win Ranma's heart, knowing that he's chosen Akane, and fearing the damage Ranma could do.
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* RealityEnsues: Upon learning that Ryoga is P-chan, Akane is shocked, disappointed and furious with him, as well as everyone who kept the secret from her.
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''Sendai'' is the first of MZephyr's [[Manga/RanmaOneHalf Ranma 1/2]] fanfics.
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''Sendai'' is the first of MZephyr's [=MZephyr=]'s [[Manga/RanmaOneHalf Ranma 1/2]] fanfics.
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* [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere Screw This, We're Outta Here!]]: The first part of the fic in a nutshell: both Ranma and Akanebecome fed up with all the chaos in Nerima, so they just up and leave (with Kasumi).
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* [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere Screw This, We're Outta Here!]]: The first part of the fic in a nutshell: both Ranma and Akanebecome Akane become fed up with all the chaos in Nerima, so they just up and leave (with Kasumi).
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''Sendai'' is the first of MZephyr's [[Manga/RanmaOneHalf Ranma 1/2]] fanfics.
Shortly after the failed wedding, Ranma and Akane meet up on the roof on the Tendo residence, clear a few things up between them, and acknowledge that they may in fact love one another. But they also lament that, as long as they're in Nerima, they won't ever get the chance to confirm this because of all the chaos caused by the fiances, rivals, and their fathers.
At this, Ranma gets an idea: They won't be able to have a relationship in Nerima, but what if they were somewhere else?
The two of them subsequently pack up and leave while the rest of the Tendo household's out, and move in with Dr. Tofu, who in this fanfic left Nerima a while ago and now resides in the city of Sendai. They're joined by Kasumi, who is intent on starting a relationship with Tofu. From here on out, the fic is pretty much about the two couples growing closer together, as well as how all the different people in Nerima deal with Ranma and Akane's disappearence.
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!!The fic provides examples of the following tropes:
* EarnYourHappyEnding: To make their new life possible, Ranma and Akane both end up working part time jobs in-between their schoolwork and martial arts training, so that they can contribute to the household's income and afford their university fees, with both of them planning on studying physical education there in order to be able to run the dojo properly. Ranma in particular has to work hard to get his school grades up to scratch.
* MuggingTheMonster: Morishita, an ArrogantKungFuGuy at Ranma and Akane's new school tries to pick fights with the both of them, not knowing that they're both a lot tougher than he is, and it ends [[CurbStompBattle the way]] [[ForegoneConclusion you'd expect]]. Goes into BullyingADragon after they both kick his ass, and he still doesn't give up.
* [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere Screw This, We're Outta Here!]]: The first part of the fic in a nutshell: both Ranma and Akanebecome fed up with all the chaos in Nerima, so they just up and leave (with Kasumi).
* TookALevelInBadass: Akane convinces Ranma to train her shortly after they move, and by the end of the first term, she becomes as tough a fighter as he was at the start of the series.
* WhatTheHellHero: Akane to Ranma, twice. The first time for keeping Ryoga's jusenkyo curse a secret from her, and the second time for breaking into Furinkan High School to remove the information on where their school records were sent, since he didn't tell her his plans beforehand.
Shortly after the failed wedding, Ranma and Akane meet up on the roof on the Tendo residence, clear a few things up between them, and acknowledge that they may in fact love one another. But they also lament that, as long as they're in Nerima, they won't ever get the chance to confirm this because of all the chaos caused by the fiances, rivals, and their fathers.
At this, Ranma gets an idea: They won't be able to have a relationship in Nerima, but what if they were somewhere else?
The two of them subsequently pack up and leave while the rest of the Tendo household's out, and move in with Dr. Tofu, who in this fanfic left Nerima a while ago and now resides in the city of Sendai. They're joined by Kasumi, who is intent on starting a relationship with Tofu. From here on out, the fic is pretty much about the two couples growing closer together, as well as how all the different people in Nerima deal with Ranma and Akane's disappearence.
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!!The fic provides examples of the following tropes:
* EarnYourHappyEnding: To make their new life possible, Ranma and Akane both end up working part time jobs in-between their schoolwork and martial arts training, so that they can contribute to the household's income and afford their university fees, with both of them planning on studying physical education there in order to be able to run the dojo properly. Ranma in particular has to work hard to get his school grades up to scratch.
* MuggingTheMonster: Morishita, an ArrogantKungFuGuy at Ranma and Akane's new school tries to pick fights with the both of them, not knowing that they're both a lot tougher than he is, and it ends [[CurbStompBattle the way]] [[ForegoneConclusion you'd expect]]. Goes into BullyingADragon after they both kick his ass, and he still doesn't give up.
* [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere Screw This, We're Outta Here!]]: The first part of the fic in a nutshell: both Ranma and Akanebecome fed up with all the chaos in Nerima, so they just up and leave (with Kasumi).
* TookALevelInBadass: Akane convinces Ranma to train her shortly after they move, and by the end of the first term, she becomes as tough a fighter as he was at the start of the series.
* WhatTheHellHero: Akane to Ranma, twice. The first time for keeping Ryoga's jusenkyo curse a secret from her, and the second time for breaking into Furinkan High School to remove the information on where their school records were sent, since he didn't tell her his plans beforehand.
