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In the wake of Second Impact, a dying god seeks to prolong her life by joining with a mortal, but she gets more than she bargained for when she chooses Kyoko Zeppelin Soryu. Years later, however, Kyoko gets a second chance at life as a result.
''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6835810/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-2-Electric-Return Superwomen of Eva 2: Electric Return]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1615106/Mike313 Mike313]] is the most obscure entry into the ''Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva'' series yet.
When Second Impact causes the Lords of Order and the Lords of Chaos to begin dying off, two of their number decide to reject this fate, each merging with a mortal to pass on their legacy. The Lord of Chaos [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Kestrel Kestrel]] merges with an unborn Angel, and [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Kismet Kismet]] merges with Kyoko Zeppelin Soryu. Years later, the core of Unit 02 cracks, and a [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Strange_Visitor Strange Visitor]] emerges with no memories of who it was, but a strong desire to help a young redheaded girl at the end of her rope.
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!!Tropes:
%% * AngerBornOfWorry: Misato towards Asuka. [[spoiler:And that's without knowing she tried to commit suicide.]]
%% * BackFromTheDead: This ''is'' [[DeathByOriginStory Kyoko]] we're talking about.
%% * ComboPlatterPowers: Seriously, ''how'' do Strange Visitor's powers make sense?
* DespairEventHorizon: Asuka reaches this point after it's discovered she can't synch with Unit-02. [[spoiler:She's saved both physically and emotionally by Strange Visitor]].
* DrivenToSuicide: Asuka tries to jump off a building after Unit-02 is decommissioned.
* TheEmpath: Strange Visitor gets a pain in her gut whenever someone is expressing negative emotions that indicate they're in trouble.
%% * [[EnergyBeings Energy Being]]: Strange Visitor is one and ends up appropriating a containment suit.
%% * {{Flight}}
* FusionDance: Kismet merges with Kyoko in the opening. Years later, they become Strange Visitor as a result.
%% * {{Intangibility}}
* IronicFear: Strange Visitor is terrified of being shot at. Later on, she takes several pieces of crystal shrapnel and is uneffected beyond some brief pain and panic.
* LightningCanDoAnything: Nerv tries to repair Unit-02's core ([[spoiler:and subsequently wakes up Strange Visitor]]) by running an enormous amount of electricity through it.
* LossOfIdentity: Kyoko's memory is more than a bit spotty. Understandable, considering how many times her mind's been shattered and clumped back together again in canon, nevermind the stuff that happens in the fic.
%% * MamaBear: Kyoko. Oh yes, Kyoko.
* NoSell: Kestrel and Strange Visitor can both keep whaling on each other in perpetuity and never get tired. Just like the Lords of Order and Chaos have been doing since forever and an age.
%% * ReassignedToAntarctica: Siberia, actually.
* RefusalOfTheCall: Strange Visitor actively ignores her empathic alarm that someone is in trouble after the first time she saves a group of people out of fear. Until Asuka [[WhatTheHellHero gives her what for]].
* RoaringRampageOfRescue: The climax is, with few breaks or reversals, one long scene of Strange Visitor pummeling Kestrel for daring to harm [[spoiler:Asuka]].
* RunawayTrain: Strange Visitor's first -- and only -- on-screen incident of saving bystanders is stopping one of these.
%% * SecretKeeper: Asuka is the only one who knows where Strange Visitor lives.
* ShockAndAwe: Strange Visitor is apparently ''[[EnergyBeings made]]'' of electricity. She can also sense it, including bio-electric fields, and manipulate it, including electromagnetics.
* ShoutOut: How much power does an Eva's core need to get going? [[Film/BackToTheFuture 1.21 gigawatts]].
%% * SmokeShield
%% * SuperpowerfulGenetics: [[spoiler:Asuka, in the epilogue]].
%% * WorthLivingFor: [[spoiler:Strange Visitor gives Asuka this after her attempted suicide and a long conversation]].
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6835810/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-2-Electric-Return Superwomen of Eva 2: Electric Return]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1615106/Mike313 Mike313]] is the most obscure entry into the ''Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva'' series yet.
When Second Impact causes the Lords of Order and the Lords of Chaos to begin dying off, two of their number decide to reject this fate, each merging with a mortal to pass on their legacy. The Lord of Chaos [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Kestrel Kestrel]] merges with an unborn Angel, and [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Kismet Kismet]] merges with Kyoko Zeppelin Soryu. Years later, the core of Unit 02 cracks, and a [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Strange_Visitor Strange Visitor]] emerges with no memories of who it was, but a strong desire to help a young redheaded girl at the end of her rope.
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!!Tropes:
%% * AngerBornOfWorry: Misato towards Asuka. [[spoiler:And that's without knowing she tried to commit suicide.]]
%% * BackFromTheDead: This ''is'' [[DeathByOriginStory Kyoko]] we're talking about.
%% * ComboPlatterPowers: Seriously, ''how'' do Strange Visitor's powers make sense?
* DespairEventHorizon: Asuka reaches this point after it's discovered she can't synch with Unit-02. [[spoiler:She's saved both physically and emotionally by Strange Visitor]].
* DrivenToSuicide: Asuka tries to jump off a building after Unit-02 is decommissioned.
* TheEmpath: Strange Visitor gets a pain in her gut whenever someone is expressing negative emotions that indicate they're in trouble.
%% * [[EnergyBeings Energy Being]]: Strange Visitor is one and ends up appropriating a containment suit.
%% * {{Flight}}
* FusionDance: Kismet merges with Kyoko in the opening. Years later, they become Strange Visitor as a result.
%% * {{Intangibility}}
* IronicFear: Strange Visitor is terrified of being shot at. Later on, she takes several pieces of crystal shrapnel and is uneffected beyond some brief pain and panic.
* LightningCanDoAnything: Nerv tries to repair Unit-02's core ([[spoiler:and subsequently wakes up Strange Visitor]]) by running an enormous amount of electricity through it.
* LossOfIdentity: Kyoko's memory is more than a bit spotty. Understandable, considering how many times her mind's been shattered and clumped back together again in canon, nevermind the stuff that happens in the fic.
%% * MamaBear: Kyoko. Oh yes, Kyoko.
* NoSell: Kestrel and Strange Visitor can both keep whaling on each other in perpetuity and never get tired. Just like the Lords of Order and Chaos have been doing since forever and an age.
%% * ReassignedToAntarctica: Siberia, actually.
* RefusalOfTheCall: Strange Visitor actively ignores her empathic alarm that someone is in trouble after the first time she saves a group of people out of fear. Until Asuka [[WhatTheHellHero gives her what for]].
* RoaringRampageOfRescue: The climax is, with few breaks or reversals, one long scene of Strange Visitor pummeling Kestrel for daring to harm [[spoiler:Asuka]].
* RunawayTrain: Strange Visitor's first -- and only -- on-screen incident of saving bystanders is stopping one of these.
%% * SecretKeeper: Asuka is the only one who knows where Strange Visitor lives.
* ShockAndAwe: Strange Visitor is apparently ''[[EnergyBeings made]]'' of electricity. She can also sense it, including bio-electric fields, and manipulate it, including electromagnetics.
* ShoutOut: How much power does an Eva's core need to get going? [[Film/BackToTheFuture 1.21 gigawatts]].
%% * SmokeShield
%% * SuperpowerfulGenetics: [[spoiler:Asuka, in the epilogue]].
%% * WorthLivingFor: [[spoiler:Strange Visitor gives Asuka this after her attempted suicide and a long conversation]].
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6835810/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-2-Electric-Return Superwomen of Eva 2: Electric Return]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1615106/Mike313 Mike313]] is the most obscure entry into the ''Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva'' series yet.
When Second Impact causes the Lords of Order and the Lords of Chaos to begin dying off, two of their number decide to reject this fate, each merging with a mortal to pass on their legacy. The Lord of Chaos [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Kestrel Kestrel]] merges with an unborn Angel, and [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Kismet Kismet]] merges with Kyoko Zeppelin Soryu. Years later, the core of Unit 02 cracks, and a [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Strange_Visitor Strange Visitor]] emerges with no memories of who it was, but a strong desire to help a young redheaded girl at the end of her rope.
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!!Tropes:
%% * AngerBornOfWorry: Misato towards Asuka. [[spoiler:And that's without knowing she tried to commit suicide.]]
%% * BackFromTheDead: This ''is'' [[DeathByOriginStory Kyoko]] we're talking about.
%% * ComboPlatterPowers: Seriously, ''how'' do Strange Visitor's powers make sense?
* DespairEventHorizon: Asuka reaches this point after it's discovered she can't synch with Unit-02. [[spoiler:She's saved both physically and emotionally by Strange Visitor]].
* DrivenToSuicide: Asuka tries to jump off a building after Unit-02 is decommissioned.
* TheEmpath: Strange Visitor gets a pain in her gut whenever someone is expressing negative emotions that indicate they're in trouble.
%% * [[EnergyBeings Energy Being]]: Strange Visitor is one and ends up appropriating a containment suit.
%% * {{Flight}}
* FusionDance: Kismet merges with Kyoko in the opening. Years later, they become Strange Visitor as a result.
%% * {{Intangibility}}
* IronicFear: Strange Visitor is terrified of being shot at. Later on, she takes several pieces of crystal shrapnel and is uneffected beyond some brief pain and panic.
* LightningCanDoAnything: Nerv tries to repair Unit-02's core ([[spoiler:and subsequently wakes up Strange Visitor]]) by running an enormous amount of electricity through it.
* LossOfIdentity: Kyoko's memory is more than a bit spotty. Understandable, considering how many times her mind's been shattered and clumped back together again in canon, nevermind the stuff that happens in the fic.
%% * MamaBear: Kyoko. Oh yes, Kyoko.
* NoSell: Kestrel and Strange Visitor can both keep whaling on each other in perpetuity and never get tired. Just like the Lords of Order and Chaos have been doing since forever and an age.
%% * ReassignedToAntarctica: Siberia, actually.
* RefusalOfTheCall: Strange Visitor actively ignores her empathic alarm that someone is in trouble after the first time she saves a group of people out of fear. Until Asuka [[WhatTheHellHero gives her what for]].
* RoaringRampageOfRescue: The climax is, with few breaks or reversals, one long scene of Strange Visitor pummeling Kestrel for daring to harm [[spoiler:Asuka]].
* RunawayTrain: Strange Visitor's first -- and only -- on-screen incident of saving bystanders is stopping one of these.
%% * SecretKeeper: Asuka is the only one who knows where Strange Visitor lives.
* ShockAndAwe: Strange Visitor is apparently ''[[EnergyBeings made]]'' of electricity. She can also sense it, including bio-electric fields, and manipulate it, including electromagnetics.
* ShoutOut: How much power does an Eva's core need to get going? [[Film/BackToTheFuture 1.21 gigawatts]].
%% * SmokeShield
%% * SuperpowerfulGenetics: [[spoiler:Asuka, in the epilogue]].
%% * WorthLivingFor: [[spoiler:Strange Visitor gives Asuka this after her attempted suicide and a long conversation]].
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* ComboPlatterPowers: Seriously, ''how'' do these powers make sense?
** TheEmpath: Strange Visitor gets a pain in her gut whenever someone is expressing negative emotions that indicate they're in trouble.
** [[EnergyBeings Energy Being]]: Strange Visitor is one and ends up appropriating a containment suit.
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** {{Intangibility}}
** ShockAndAwe: Strange Visitor is apparently ''[[EnergyBeings made]]'' of electricity. She can also sense it, including bio-electric fields, and manipulate it, including electromagnetics.
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* ComboPlatterPowers: Seriously, ''how'' do these powers make sense?
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** [[EnergyBeings Energy Being]]: Strange Visitor is one and ends up appropriating a containment suit.
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%% * AngerBornOfWorry: Misato towards Asuka. [[spoiler:And that's without knowing she tried to commit suicide.]]
%% * BackFromTheDead: This ''is'' [[DeathByOriginStory Kyoko]] we're talking about.
%% * ComboPlatterPowers: Seriously, ''how'' dothese Strange Visitor's powers make sense?
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** [[EnergyBeings Energy Being]]: Strange Visitor is one and ends up appropriating a containment suit.
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** [[EnergyBeings Energy Being]]: Strange Visitor is one and ends up appropriating a containment suit.
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** ShockAndAwe: Strange Visitor is apparently ''[[EnergyBeings made]]'' of electricity. She can also sense it, including bio-electric fields, and manipulate it, including electromagnetics.
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* SmokeShield
* SuperpowerfulGenetics: [[spoiler:Asuka, in the epilogue]].
* WorthLivingFor: [[spoiler:Strange Visitor gives Asuka this after her attempted suicide and a long conversation]].
* ShoutOut
** How much power does an Eva's core need to get going? [[Film/BackToTheFuture 1.21 gigawatts]].
* SmokeShield
* SuperpowerfulGenetics: [[spoiler:Asuka, in the epilogue]].
* WorthLivingFor: [[spoiler:Strange Visitor gives Asuka this after her attempted suicide and a long conversation]].
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* ShoutOut: How much power does an Eva's core need to get going? [[Film/BackToTheFuture 1.21 gigawatts]].
%% * SmokeShield
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%% * WorthLivingFor: [[spoiler:Strange Visitor gives Asuka this after her attempted suicide and a long conversation]].
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* FusionDance: Kismet merges with Kyoko merge in the opening. Years later they become Strange Visitor as a result.
* IronicFear: Strange Visitor is terrified of being shot at. Later on she takes several pieces of crystal shrapnel and is uneffected beyond some brief pain and panic.
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* FusionDance: Kismet merges with Kyoko merge in the opening. Years later later, they become Strange Visitor as a result.
* IronicFear: Strange Visitor is terrified of being shot at. Lateron on, she takes several pieces of crystal shrapnel and is uneffected beyond some brief pain and panic.
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** TheEmpath: Strange Visitor gets a pain in her gut whenever someone is expressing negative emotions that indicate they're in trouble.
** [[EnergyBeings Energy Being]]: Strange Visitor is one and ends up appropriating a containment suit.
** {{Flight}}
** {{Intangibility}}
** ShockAndAwe: Strange Visitor is ''[[Energy Beings made]]'' of electricity. She can also sense it, including bio-electric fields, and manipulate it, including electromagnetics.
** TheEmpath: Strange Visitor gets a pain in her gut whenever someone is expressing negative emotions that indicate they're in trouble.
** [[EnergyBeings Energy Being]]: Strange Visitor is one and ends up appropriating a containment suit.
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** {{Intangibility}}
** ShockAndAwe: Strange Visitor is ''[[Energy Beings made]]'' of electricity. She can also sense it, including bio-electric fields, and manipulate it, including electromagnetics.
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When Second Impact causes the Lords of Order and the Lords of Chaos to begin dying off two of their number decide to reject this fate, each merging with mortal to pass on their legacy. The Lord of Chaos [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Kestrel Kestrel]] merges with an unborn Angel, and [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Kismet Kismet]] merges with Kyoko Zeppelin Soryu. Years later the core of Unit-02 cracks and a [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Strange_Visitor Strange Visitor]] emerges with no memories of who it was, but a strong desire to help a young redheaded girl at the end of her rope.
When Second Impact causes the Lords of Order and the Lords of Chaos to begin dying off two of their number decide to reject this fate, each merging with mortal to pass on their legacy. The Lord of Chaos [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Kestrel Kestrel]] merges with an unborn Angel, and [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Kismet Kismet]] merges with Kyoko Zeppelin Soryu. Years later the core of Unit-02 cracks and a [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Strange_Visitor Strange Visitor]] emerges with no memories of who it was, but a strong desire to help a young redheaded girl at the end of her rope.
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When Second Impact causes the Lords of Order and the Lords of Chaos to begin dyingoff off, two of their number decide to reject this fate, each merging with a mortal to pass on their legacy. The Lord of Chaos [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Kestrel Kestrel]] merges with an unborn Angel, and [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Kismet Kismet]] merges with Kyoko Zeppelin Soryu. Years later later, the core of Unit-02 cracks Unit 02 cracks, and a [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Strange_Visitor Strange Visitor]] emerges with no memories of who it was, but a strong desire to help a young redheaded girl at the end of her rope.
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* NoSell: Kestrel and Strange Visitor can both keep wailing on each other in perpetuity and never get tired. Just like the Lords of Order and Chaos have been doing since forever and an age.
* RefusalOfTheCall: Strange Visitor actively ignores her empathic alarm that someone is in trouble after the first time she saves a group of people out of fear. Until Asuka [[WhatTheHellHero gives her what for]].
* NoSell: Kestrel and Strange Visitor can both keep wailing on each other in perpetuity and never get tired. Just like the Lords of Order and Chaos have been doing since forever and an age.
* RefusalOfTheCall: Strange Visitor actively ignores her empathic alarm that someone is in trouble after the first time she saves a group of people out of fear. Until Asuka [[WhatTheHellHero gives her what for]].
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* WorthLivingFor: [[spoiler:Strange Visitor gives Asuka this after her attempted suicide and a long conversation]].
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* DispairEventHorizon: Asuka reaches this point after it's discovered she can't synch with Unit-02. [[spoiler:She's saved both physically and emotionally by Strange Visitor]].
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* DispairEventHorizon: DespairEventHorizon: Asuka reaches this point after it's discovered she can't synch with Unit-02. [[spoiler:She's saved both physically and emotionally by Strange Visitor]].
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* DrivenToSuicide: Asuka tries to jump off a building after Unit-02 is decommissioned.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Asuka tries to jump off a building after Unit-02 is decommissioned.decommissioned.
* DispairEventHorizon: Asuka reaches this point after it's discovered she can't synch with Unit-02. [[spoiler:She's saved both physically and emotionally by Strange Visitor]].
* DispairEventHorizon: Asuka reaches this point after it's discovered she can't synch with Unit-02. [[spoiler:She's saved both physically and emotionally by Strange Visitor]].
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When Second Impact causes the Lords of Order and the Lords of Chaos to begin dying off two of their number decide to reject this fate, each merging with mortal to pass on their legacy. The Lord of Chaos [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Kestrel Kestrel]] merges with an unborn Angel, and [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Kismet Kismet]] merges with Kyoko Zeppelin Soryu. Years later the core of Unit-02 cracks an a [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Strange_Visitor Strange Visitor]] emerges with no memories of who it was, but a strong desire to help a young redheaded girl at the end of her rope.
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When Second Impact causes the Lords of Order and the Lords of Chaos to begin dying off two of their number decide to reject this fate, each merging with mortal to pass on their legacy. The Lord of Chaos [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Kestrel Kestrel]] merges with an unborn Angel, and [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Kismet Kismet]] merges with Kyoko Zeppelin Soryu. Years later the core of Unit-02 cracks an and a [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Strange_Visitor Strange Visitor]] emerges with no memories of who it was, but a strong desire to help a young redheaded girl at the end of her rope.
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** How much power does an Eva's core need to get going? [[Film/BackToTheFuture 1.21 gigawatts]].
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** How much power does an Eva's core need to get going? [[Film/BackToTheFuture 1.21 gigawatts]]. gigawatts]].
* SuperpowerfulGenetics: [[spoiler:Asuka, in the epilogue]].
* SuperpowerfulGenetics: [[spoiler:Asuka, in the epilogue]].
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* LightningCanDoAnything: Nerv tries to repair Unit-02's core ([[spoiler:and subsequently wakes up Strange Visitor]]) by running an enormous amount of electricity through it.
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** How much power does an Eva's core need to get going? [[Film/BackToTheFuture 1.21 gigawatts]].
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When Second Impact causes the Lords of Order and the Lords of Chaos to begin dying off two of their number decide to reject this fate, each merging with mortal to pass on their legacy. The Lord of Chaos [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Kestrel Kestrel]] merges with an unborn Angel, and Kismet merges with Kyoko Zeppelin Soryu. Years later the core of Unit-02 cracks an a [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Strange_Visitor Strange Visitor]] emerges with no memories of who it was, but a strong desire to help a young redheaded girl at the end of her rope.
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When Second Impact causes the Lords of Order and the Lords of Chaos to begin dying off two of their number decide to reject this fate, each merging with mortal to pass on their legacy. The Lord of Chaos [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Kestrel Kestrel]] merges with an unborn Angel, and Kismet [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Kismet Kismet]] merges with Kyoko Zeppelin Soryu. Years later the core of Unit-02 cracks an a [[http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Strange_Visitor Strange Visitor]] emerges with no memories of who it was, but a strong desire to help a young redheaded girl at the end of her rope.
