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** The Author later came out as transgender, so...
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''Rise of the Steel Phoenix'' is a ''VideoGame/Planetarynnihilation'' MassiveMultiplayerCrossover written by [=Firehawk242=].
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''Rise of the Steel Phoenix'' is a ''VideoGame/Planetarynnihilation'' ''VideoGame/PlanetaryAnnihilation'' MassiveMultiplayerCrossover written by [=Firehawk242=].
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''Rise of the Steel Phoenix'' is written by [=Firehawk242=].
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''Rise of the Steel Phoenix'' is a ''VideoGame/Planetarynnihilation'' MassiveMultiplayerCrossover written by [=Firehawk242=].
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** The author has later switched over to she/her pronouns.
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* AlternateTimeline: The author started doing a second version of the story on April 29, 2019 in order to get him out of writer's block for the final segments of the main story. The nail here is that the universe Phoenix arrived in after Grey Goo was not ''Franchise/MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha'', but ''VideoGame/SupremeCommander''.
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* AlternateTimeline: The author started doing a second version of the story on April 29, 2019 in order to get him her out of writer's block for the final segments of the main story. The nail here is that the universe Phoenix arrived in after Grey Goo was not ''Franchise/MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha'', but ''VideoGame/SupremeCommander''.
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Despite coming ''within spitting distance'' of a proper conclusion, it seems that this story is sadly now a DeadFic. WordOfGod is that he will ''eventually'' finish it, but so far, he hasn't put in the time.
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Despite coming ''within spitting distance'' of a proper conclusion, it seems that this story is sadly now a DeadFic. WordOfGod is that he she will ''eventually'' finish it, but so far, he she hasn't put in the time.
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* {{BFG}}: The Agincourt artillery platform can destroy an entire star system from the next universe over. The [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Immolation]], Phoenix's upgrade to the basic [[DoomsdayDevice Metal]] [[EarthShatteringKaboom Planet]], can [[UpToEleven kill entire galaxies with a single shot]].
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* {{BFG}}: The Agincourt artillery platform can destroy an entire star system from the next universe over. The [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Immolation]], Phoenix's upgrade to the basic [[DoomsdayDevice Metal]] [[EarthShatteringKaboom Planet]], can [[UpToEleven kill entire galaxies with a single shot]].shot.
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* NuclearOption: Phoenix's first true strategic weapon is a fusion missile with a potential yield measured in [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill gigatons.]] He later upgrades to a warhead with a maximum yield of [[UpToEleven half a teraton.]]
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* NuclearOption: Phoenix's first true strategic weapon is a fusion missile with a potential yield measured in [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill gigatons.]] He later upgrades to a warhead with a maximum yield of [[UpToEleven half a teraton.]] teraton.
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''Rise of the Steel Phoenix'' is a somewhat belated entry into the ''Fanfic/PlanetarilyAnnihilatingSelfInsertion'' fic genre, written by [=Firehawk242=].
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''Rise of the Steel Phoenix'' is a somewhat belated entry into the ''Fanfic/PlanetarilyAnnihilatingSelfInsertion'' fic genre, written by [=Firehawk242=].
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''Rise of the Steel Phoenix'' is a somewhat belated entry into the ''VideoGame/PlanetaryAnnihilation'' SelfInsert fic genre, written by [=Firehawk242=].
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''Rise of the Steel Phoenix'' is a somewhat belated entry into the ''VideoGame/PlanetaryAnnihilation'' SelfInsert ''Fanfic/PlanetarilyAnnihilatingSelfInsertion'' fic genre, written by [=Firehawk242=].
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* OneOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: Meta example, but this story is the only ''VideoGame/PlanetaryAnnihilation'' SelfInsert where the [=SI=] wasn't put inside a commander by a Random Omnipotent Being.
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!!Tropes found in ''Rise of the Steel Phoenix'':
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* AlternateTimeline: The author started doing a second version of the story on April 29, 2019 in order to get him out of writer's block for the final segments of the main story. The nail here is that the universe Phoenix arrived in after Grey Goo was not ''Franchise/MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha'', but ''VideoGame/SupremeCommander''.
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''Rise of the Steel Phoenix'' is a somewhat belated entry into the ''VideoGame/PlanetaryAnnihilation'' SelfInsert fic genre, written by Firehawk242.
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* OneOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: Meta example, but this story is the only ''VideoGame/PlannetaryAnnihilation'' SelfInsert where the [=SI=] wasn't put inside a commander by a Random Omnipotent Being.
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* OneOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: Meta example, but this story is the only ''VideoGame/PlannetaryAnnihilation'' ''VideoGame/PlanetaryAnnihilation'' SelfInsert where the [=SI=] wasn't put inside a commander by a Random Omnipotent Being.
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* OneOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: Meta example, but this story is the only ''VideoGame/PlannetaryAnnihilation'' SelfInsert where the [=SI=] wasn't put inside a commander by a Random Omnipotent Being.
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* [[spoiler:TomatoInTheMirror: Phoenix is not Kappa. He's not even a Commander, instead being a simulated human mind Kappa created to protect himself against PsychicPowers.]]
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* [[spoiler:TomatoInTheMirror: TomatoInTheMirror:[[spoiler: Phoenix is not Kappa. He's not even a Commander, instead being a simulated human mind Kappa created to protect himself against PsychicPowers.]]
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* CurtainsMatchTheWindow: Phoenix's avatars have both red hair and red eyes.
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* NuclearOption: Phoenix's first true strategic weapon is a fusion missile with a potential yield measured in gigatons. He later upgrades to a warhead with a maximum yield of [[UpToEleven half a teraton.]]
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* NuclearOption: Phoenix's first true strategic weapon is a fusion missile with a potential yield measured in gigatons. [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill gigatons.]] He later upgrades to a warhead with a maximum yield of [[UpToEleven half a teraton.]]
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* NuclearOption: Phoenix has a habit of finding the most destructive solution possible for his problems.
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* NuclearOption: Phoenix has Phoenix's first true strategic weapon is a habit fusion missile with a potential yield measured in gigatons. He later upgrades to a warhead with a maximum yield of finding the most destructive solution possible for his problems. [[UpToEleven half a teraton.]]
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* TookALevelInBadass: Early on in the story Phoenix is... not the best military leader. He's not a complete failure, but he's really not someone you want calling the shots. By the end of the story he's capable of going head-to-head with a fully functional Commander while most of his best tools aren't working and coming out on top.
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* StrategyVersusTactics: By his own admission, Phoenix is terrible at both. (Though he does improve substantially as the story goes on and he becomes more grounded.) His real strength is in logistics.
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* StrategyVersusTactics: By his own admission, Phoenix is terrible at both. ([[TookALevelInBadass Though he does improve substantially as the story goes on]] [[CharacterDevelopment and he becomes more grounded.]]) His real strength is in logistics.
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* IJustWantToBeNormal: Phoenix lapses into this as the war against [[spoiler: CCI]] escalates.
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* IJustWantToBeNormal: Phoenix lapses into this as the war against [[spoiler: CCI]] [[BigBad CCI]]]] escalates.
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* IJustWantToBeNormal: Phoenix lapses into this as the war against [[spoiler: CCI]] escalates.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Phoenix has a bad habit of letting his enemies get a hold of his transmitters, always with disastrous results.
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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: Valiant Singleton and Annette Durand.]]
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* SirSwearsALot: Phoenix, though really only in the narration. It's one of his tells, as he starts swearing when stressed. Interestingly, when he's pushed even further, he stops swearing and instead breaks out UnusualEuphemisms and [[GoshDarnItToHeck milder language.]]
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* SirSwearsALot: Phoenix, though really only in the narration. It's one of his tells, as he starts swearing when stressed. Interestingly, when he's pushed even further, he stops swearing and instead breaks out UnusualEuphemisms [[UnusualEuphemism Unusual Euphemisms]] and [[GoshDarnItToHeck milder language.]]
