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ZCE cleanup; removed irrelevant tropes (this page is about the fic, not the author); Example Indentation In Trope Lists fixes; examples are not allowed to rely on other examples for context as per How To Write An Example; removed chained sinkhole.
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* AlmostKiss: Dammit, Weiss...
* AmusingInjuries: 90% of the hurt in this fic is inflicted on Darrel.
* AmusingInjuries: 90% of the hurt in this fic is inflicted on Darrel.
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** ApocalypseWow: This is shown in detail during a nightmare Darrel has in Chapter 7.
* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Not actually in the story, but the writer has stated that he has recently been diagnosed with ADD. He doesn't want sympathy however.
-->''I don't need pity, and more importantly, [[DontYouDarePityMe I don't want it.]] I've dealt with having [[UsefulNotes/AspergerSyndrome Asperger's]] for 10 years, so having ADD garnered the following reaction (word-for-word):''\\
''[[DullSurprise "Huh.]] Well, that explains a lot."''
* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Not actually in the story, but the writer has stated that he has recently been diagnosed with ADD. He doesn't want sympathy however.
-->''I don't need pity, and more importantly, [[DontYouDarePityMe I don't want it.]] I've dealt with having [[UsefulNotes/AspergerSyndrome Asperger's]] for 10 years, so having ADD garnered the following reaction (word-for-word):''\\
''[[DullSurprise "Huh.]] Well, that explains a lot."''
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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Not actually in the story, but the writer has stated that he has recently been diagnosed with ADD. He doesn't want sympathy however.
-->''I don't need pity, and more importantly, [[DontYouDarePityMe I don't want it.]] I've dealt with having [[UsefulNotes/AspergerSyndrome Asperger's]] for 10 years, so having ADD garnered the following reaction (word-for-word):''\\
''[[DullSurprise "Huh.]] Well, that explains a lot."''
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* BigDamnKiss[=/=]ShutUpKiss: [[WillTheyOrWontThey After 21 chapters]], Darrel and Yang finally kiss.
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* ButtMonkey: Darrel Conway.
** Though it's getting to be more of a CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass.
** Though it's getting to be more of a CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass.
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** Though
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: This is more or less Darrel's schtick in the early chapters.
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* EatMe: Part of Darrel's plan to kill the [[OurDragonsAreDifferent Wah]][[ReptilesAreAbhorrent tani]].
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* EatMe: Part of Darrel's plan to kill the [[OurDragonsAreDifferent Wah]][[ReptilesAreAbhorrent tani]].Wahtani.
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* HandicappedBadass: Apparently, Jaune's father had lost a leg some time ago. Although, according to Jaune, he can still handle himself.
** Also, Professor Kor. The man is blind, and he was an exceptional Hunter in his youth.
** Also, Professor Kor. The man is blind, and he was an exceptional Hunter in his youth.
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* HandicappedBadass: HandicappedBadass:
** Apparently, Jaune's father had lost a leg some time ago. Although, according to Jaune, he can still handle himself.
**Also, Professor Kor. The man is blind, and he was an exceptional Hunter in his youth.
** Apparently, Jaune's father had lost a leg some time ago. Although, according to Jaune, he can still handle himself.
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*** BladeBelowTheShoulder
*** [[BowAndSwordInAccord Crossbow And Sword In Accord]]
*** PowerPincers
** When the Iridescent Basilisks are destroyed, RWBY builds him a new weapon, combining his backpack with [[DualWielding a pair of]] {{ShoulderCannon}}s, which double as {{PowerFist|s}}, and PowerPalms in melee form.
* TheMole: [[spoiler:Professor Kor.]]
*** [[BowAndSwordInAccord Crossbow And Sword In Accord]]
*** PowerPincers
** When the Iridescent Basilisks are destroyed, RWBY builds him a new weapon, combining his backpack with [[DualWielding a pair of]] {{ShoulderCannon}}s, which double as {{PowerFist|s}}, and PowerPalms in melee form.
* TheMole: [[spoiler:Professor Kor.]]
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** When the Iridescent Basilisks are destroyed, RWBY builds him a new weapon, combining his backpack with
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* ShowerOfLove: The author put this in as a bonus at the end of Chapter 31. It's non-canon, though [[EveryoneHasStandards the author refuses to dabble in underage sex.]]
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* {{Troll}}: Blake comes across as one in Chapter 9.
** As does Yang during training in Chapter 16.
** As does Yang during training in Chapter 16.
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%%** Blake comes across as one in Chapter 9.
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* WreckedWeapon: One of Darrel's Iridescent Basilisk's is crushed to pieces by a cloaked enemy. The other is mangled by a Beowolf's bite during the events of the Breach.
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* WreckedWeapon: One of Darrel's Iridescent Basilisk's Basilisks is crushed to pieces by a cloaked enemy. The other is mangled by a Beowolf's bite during the events of the Breach.
