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''Portal 3'' is "multimedia comic" by deathswag (formerly blademarylin) done InTheStyleOf ''Webcomic/MSPaintAdventures''. Four years after ''Portal 2'', Wheatley decides to use his "death laser" to [[DefaceOfTheMoon inscribe a giant apology to Chell on the moon's surface]]. Chell, now a "severely brain-damaged" scientist on the surface discovers Wheatley's message and sets out on a madcap adventure to rescue him. Meanwhile a mysterious AI known as The Mainframe is gathering personality cores for some sinister plan, and Chell keeps having [[FlashBack flahsbacks]] of a strange man who may or may not have been her boyfriend: someone named "Wheatley Whitmore".

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''Portal 3'' is "multimedia comic" by deathswag (formerly blademarylin) done InTheStyleOf ''Webcomic/MSPaintAdventures''. Four years after ''Portal 2'', Wheatley decides to use his "death laser" to [[DefaceOfTheMoon inscribe a giant apology to Chell on the moon's surface]]. Chell, now a "severely brain-damaged" scientist on the surface discovers Wheatley's message and sets out on a madcap adventure to rescue him. Meanwhile Meanwhile, a mysterious AI known as The Mainframe is gathering personality cores for some sinister plan, and Chell keeps having [[FlashBack flahsbacks]] of a strange man who may or may not have been her boyfriend: someone named "Wheatley Whitmore".



The story has [[DeadFic ceased updating]], with deathswag explaining that her futher plans for the fic were turning it into a ''Portal'' story InNameOnly, and it is now being rewritten as part of deathswag's original fiction comic ''Monarch''.

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The story has [[DeadFic ceased updating]], with deathswag explaining that her futher future plans for the fic were turning it into a ''Portal'' ''Videogame/{{Portal}}'' story InNameOnly, and it is now being rewritten as part of deathswag's original fiction comic ''Monarch''.



*** She builds a giant magnet to pull him, it somehow developes teeth and legs, chasing her around the room, and doesn't even work as a functional magnet.

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*** She builds a giant magnet to pull him, it somehow developes develops teeth and legs, chasing her around the room, and doesn't even work as a functional magnet.


''Portal 3'' is "multimedia comic" by deathswag (formerly blademarylin) done InTheStyleOf ''Webcomic/MSPaintAdventures''. Four years after Portal 2, Wheatley decides to use his "death laser" to [[DefaceOfTheMoon inscribe a giant apology to Chell on the moon's surface]]. Chell, now a "severely brain-damaged" scientist on the surface discovers Wheatley's message and sets out on a madcap adventure to rescue him. Meanwhile a mysterious AI known as The Mainframe is gathering personality cores for some sinister plan, and Chell keeps having [[FlashBack flahsbacks]] of a strange man who may or may not have been her boyfriend: someone named "Wheatley Whitmore".

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''Portal 3'' is "multimedia comic" by deathswag (formerly blademarylin) done InTheStyleOf ''Webcomic/MSPaintAdventures''. Four years after Portal 2, ''Portal 2'', Wheatley decides to use his "death laser" to [[DefaceOfTheMoon inscribe a giant apology to Chell on the moon's surface]]. Chell, now a "severely brain-damaged" scientist on the surface discovers Wheatley's message and sets out on a madcap adventure to rescue him. Meanwhile a mysterious AI known as The Mainframe is gathering personality cores for some sinister plan, and Chell keeps having [[FlashBack flahsbacks]] of a strange man who may or may not have been her boyfriend: someone named "Wheatley Whitmore".



The story has [[DeadFic ceased updating]], with deathswag explaining that her futher plans for the fic were turning it into a Portal story InNameOnly, and it is now being rewritten as part of deathswag's original fiction comic Monarch.

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The story has [[DeadFic ceased updating]], with deathswag explaining that her futher plans for the fic were turning it into a Portal ''Portal'' story InNameOnly, and it is now being rewritten as part of deathswag's original fiction comic Monarch.''Monarch''.


* AffablyEvil - [=PERcy=], he just wants to help his master so they can finally have a party...
* AffectionateParody

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* AffablyEvil - AffablyEvil: [=PERcy=], he just wants to help his master so they can finally have a party...
* AffectionateParodyAffectionateParody:



** Also of detective dramas like CSI during a big lipped alligator moment.
* AlliterativeName - Wheatley Whitmore.
* AttentionDeficitOohShiny - Chell gets distracted by a plethora of strange things on her quest to save Wheatley, including toxic "pudding" and becoming sick with a made up illness.
* AuthorAppeal - Chell is a huge fan of [[http://blademarilyn.deviantart.com/art/Monarch-Act-0-214532935 Monarch]], deathswag's [[DevelopmentHell long in development original comic]].

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** Also of detective dramas like CSI during a big lipped big-lipped alligator moment.
* AlliterativeName - AlliterativeName: Wheatley Whitmore.
* AttentionDeficitOohShiny - AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Chell gets distracted by a plethora of strange things on her quest to save Wheatley, including toxic "pudding" and becoming sick with a made up illness.
* AuthorAppeal - AuthorAppeal: Chell is a huge fan of [[http://blademarilyn.deviantart.com/art/Monarch-Act-0-214532935 Monarch]], deathswag's [[DevelopmentHell long in development original comic]].



* BadBoss - Cave Johnson as expected, see cool and unusual punishment.

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* BadBoss - BadBoss: Cave Johnson as expected, see cool and unusual punishment.



* BigBad - The Mainframe/[[spoiler: Cave Johnson]].
* BlatantLies - "Propulsion Pudding: Made with love and real, wholesome fiberglass!"
* CloudCuckooLander - Since being released in ''Portal 2'', Chell has become completely divorced from reality. They're not even on speaking terms.
* CoolAndUnusualPunishment - Cave Johnson punishes Wheatley for being late by covering all the sidewalks in the employee housing district with repulsion gel, then convincing the other scientists to lynch him.
* CrazyPrepared - Cave Johnson has a pair of stilts on hand in case a very tall person shows up so that he can always be the tallest person in the room.
* CrossOver - With ''The Underground'', a Portal 2 machinima series.
* DeadFic - deathswag has stated the story has "fallen on the wayside" and no further updates are planned.
** She has further elaborated that it was becoming a Portal fanfic InNameOnly, so she decided it might as well be an original story anyway. It's now being rewritten as part of Monarch.
* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything - When Chell finds the gels, she tests the conversion (white) gel by spraying it onto her face.
* TheDragon - [=PERcy=] to The Mainframe.
* EpicFail

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* BigBad - BigBad: The Mainframe/[[spoiler: Cave Mainframe/[[spoiler:Cave Johnson]].
* BlatantLies - BlatantLies: "Propulsion Pudding: Made with love and real, wholesome fiberglass!"
* CloudCuckooLander - {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Since being released in ''Portal 2'', Chell has become completely divorced from reality. They're not even on speaking terms.
* CoolAndUnusualPunishment - CoolAndUnusualPunishment: Cave Johnson punishes Wheatley for being late by covering all the sidewalks in the employee housing district with repulsion gel, then convincing the other scientists to lynch him.
* CrazyPrepared - CrazyPrepared: Cave Johnson has a pair of stilts on hand in case a very tall person shows up so that he can always be the tallest person in the room.
* CrossOver - CrossOver: With ''The Underground'', ''Machinima/TheUnderground'', a Portal 2 ''Portal 2'' machinima series.
* DeadFic - DeadFic: deathswag has stated the story has "fallen on the wayside" and no further updates are planned.
** She has further elaborated that it was becoming a Portal ''Portal'' fanfic InNameOnly, so she decided it might as well be an original story anyway. It's now being rewritten as part of Monarch.
* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything - DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: When Chell finds the gels, she tests the conversion (white) gel by spraying it onto her face.
* TheDragon - TheDragon: [=PERcy=] to The Mainframe.
* EpicFailEpicFail:



* GoodAngelBadAngel - Chell has some, they're companion cubes of course.
* HeroicMime - Chell, except in her imagine spots. If they're anything like how Chell would actually speak to people, its a good thing she's mute.
* HopeSpot - GLaDOS sees a flower growing in the ruins of the Aperture Science Employee Dormitories. She's so moved by the sight of life springing up from destruction, that she declares that as long as the flower stands she will turn over a new leaf. Then Chell runs over the flower with a stolen dump truck.
* ImagineSpot - Three, one where Chell imagines that she's driving a stolen dump truck in gangster clothes while playing "cool rap music", her piloting a spaceship while yelling sound effects to mission control, and another where she's a knight saving "Princess Wheatley" and yelling "FOR CAMELOT!".
* InNameOnly - Deathswag's belief that the story was becoming this for the Portal series was one of the reasons for its abandonment. Also nearly brought up by name in the announcement that Portal 3!Chell would become an original character in Monarch with Deathswag stating "Scientist!Chell was hardly Chell at all except for the name".
* InTheStyleOf - ''Webcomic/MSPaintAdventures'', except for looking like it was drawn in Microsoft Paint.
* InkSuitActor - Human!Wheatley looks just like Creator/StephenMerchant. His entire introduction is a big height joke.
* InsaneTrollLogic

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* GoodAngelBadAngel - GoodAngelBadAngel: Chell has some, they're companion cubes of course.
* HeroicMime - HeroicMime: Chell, except in her imagine spots.{{imagine spot}}s. If they're anything like how Chell would actually speak to people, its a good thing she's mute.
* HopeSpot - GLaDOS HopeSpot: [=GLaDOS=] sees a flower growing in the ruins of the Aperture Science Employee Dormitories. She's so moved by the sight of life springing up from destruction, that she declares that as long as the flower stands she will turn over a new leaf. Then Chell runs over the flower with a stolen dump truck.
* ImagineSpot - ImagineSpot: Three, one where Chell imagines that she's driving a stolen dump truck in gangster clothes while playing "cool rap music", her piloting a spaceship while yelling sound effects to mission control, and another where she's a knight saving "Princess Wheatley" and yelling "FOR CAMELOT!".
* InNameOnly - InNameOnly: Deathswag's belief that the story was becoming this for the Portal ''Portal'' series was one of the reasons for its abandonment. Also nearly brought up by name in the announcement that Portal 3!Chell ''Portal 3''!Chell would become an original character in Monarch with Deathswag stating "Scientist!Chell was hardly Chell at all except for the name".
* InTheStyleOf - InTheStyleOf: ''Webcomic/MSPaintAdventures'', except for looking like it was drawn in Microsoft Paint.
* InkSuitActor - InkSuitActor: Human!Wheatley looks just like Creator/StephenMerchant. His entire introduction is a big height joke.
* InsaneTrollLogicInsaneTrollLogic:



* LemonyNarrator - The narrator will make fun of the characters, become distracted by "hunks" who appear in a BigLippedAlligatorMoment, and go on a tangent of how Wheatley is like a lobster.
* LoveAtFirstSight - In a flashback, human!Wheatley's first meeting with Chell is described as him saying "ramble ramble REALLY BIG HEART".
* MoralityPet - Wheatley for Chell, a random flower for GLaDOS (at least until Chell runs over it with a dump truck).
* PointyHairedBoss - Mr. Bill. He's tried to fire Chell several times, but she just keeps coming back to work, so now he just ignores Chell and lets her go about her business.
* PunnyName - Wheatley's surname is Whitmore (as in hafl''whit''), the other scientists quickly notice this. Wheatley never figures it out.
* PurpleProse - Played with. Sometimes sentences will contain drawn out similes like "shipwreck-island of bitterness" only to end with "like a lonely weirdo".
* RaceLift - Chell has gone from being ambiguously Asian in the games to being Mexican here.
* RougeAnglesOfSatin - Wheatley's moon-sized apology letter. The narrative describes it as " a message full of words like “arse” and “masturbate” spelled wrong. A third of the way in the letters are all caps, and it appears that the author literally wasted space transcribing their own screaming".
* SadisticChoice - Chell must chose between saving Wheatley... or eating toxic pudding. Guess which she chooses.
* SerialEscalation- Due to his frequently getting sidetracked, Wheatley's apology ends up covering ''the entirety of the moon's surface''!

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* LemonyNarrator - LemonyNarrator: The narrator will make fun of the characters, become distracted by "hunks" who appear in a BigLippedAlligatorMoment, and go on a tangent of how Wheatley is like a lobster.
* LoveAtFirstSight - LoveAtFirstSight: In a flashback, human!Wheatley's first meeting with Chell is described as him saying "ramble ramble REALLY BIG HEART".
* MoralityPet - MoralityPet: Wheatley for Chell, a random flower for GLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] (at least until Chell runs over it with a dump truck).
* PointyHairedBoss - PointyHairedBoss: Mr. Bill. He's tried to fire Chell several times, but she just keeps coming back to work, so now he just ignores Chell and lets her go about her business.
* PunnyName - PunnyName: Wheatley's surname is Whitmore (as in hafl''whit''), half-''whit''), the other scientists quickly notice this. Wheatley never figures it out.
* PurpleProse - PurpleProse: Played with. Sometimes sentences will contain drawn out similes like "shipwreck-island of bitterness" only to end with "like a lonely weirdo".
* RaceLift - RaceLift: Chell has gone from being ambiguously Asian in the games to being Mexican here.
* RougeAnglesOfSatin - RougeAnglesOfSatin: Wheatley's moon-sized apology letter. The narrative describes it as " a message full of words like “arse” and “masturbate” spelled wrong. A third of the way in the letters are all caps, and it appears that the author literally wasted space transcribing their own screaming".
* SadisticChoice - SadisticChoice: Chell must chose between saving Wheatley... or eating toxic pudding. Guess which she chooses.
* SerialEscalation- SerialEscalation: Due to his frequently getting sidetracked, Wheatley's apology ends up covering ''the entirety of the moon's surface''!



* TooDumbToLive

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* TooDumbToLiveTooDumbToLive:



* WorldWarIII - While never outright stated, its strongly implied one is going on with the USA and and a reformed USSR being the main combatants. Chell clogs the US's missile silo with underpants, unknowingly allowing the Russians to win.
* YouMakeMeSic - The first half of Wheatley's apology letter is him debating on whether he's spelled "masturbate" correctly. He didn't.

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* WorldWarIII - WorldWarIII: While never outright stated, its strongly implied one is going on with the USA and and a reformed USSR being the main combatants. Chell clogs the US's missile silo with underpants, unknowingly allowing the Russians to win.
* YouMakeMeSic - YouMakeMeSic: The first half of Wheatley's apology letter is him debating on whether he's spelled "masturbate" correctly. He didn't.


''Portal 3'' is "multimedia comic" by deathswag (formerly blademarylin) done InTheStyleOf MSPaintAdventures. Four years after Portal 2, Wheatley decides to use his "death laser" to [[DefaceOfTheMoon inscribe a giant apology to Chell on the moon's surface]]. Chell, now a "severely brain-damaged" scientist on the surface discovers Wheatley's message and sets out on a madcap adventure to rescue him. Meanwhile a mysterious AI known as The Mainframe is gathering personality cores for some sinister plan, and Chell keeps having [[FlashBack flahsbacks]] of a strange man who may or may not have been her boyfriend: someone named "Wheatley Whitmore".

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''Portal 3'' is "multimedia comic" by deathswag (formerly blademarylin) done InTheStyleOf MSPaintAdventures.''Webcomic/MSPaintAdventures''. Four years after Portal 2, Wheatley decides to use his "death laser" to [[DefaceOfTheMoon inscribe a giant apology to Chell on the moon's surface]]. Chell, now a "severely brain-damaged" scientist on the surface discovers Wheatley's message and sets out on a madcap adventure to rescue him. Meanwhile a mysterious AI known as The Mainframe is gathering personality cores for some sinister plan, and Chell keeps having [[FlashBack flahsbacks]] of a strange man who may or may not have been her boyfriend: someone named "Wheatley Whitmore".



* InTheStyleOf - MSPaintAdventures, except for looking like it was drawn in Microsoft Paint.

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* InTheStyleOf - MSPaintAdventures, ''Webcomic/MSPaintAdventures'', except for looking like it was drawn in Microsoft Paint.


It can be found on DeviantArt [[http://blademarilyn.deviantart.com/gallery/34222825#/d4j5jru here]]

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It can be found on DeviantArt Website/DeviantArt [[http://blademarilyn.deviantart.com/gallery/34222825#/d4j5jru here]]


-> "In my lap is an oval mirror with a delicate silver frame, ornate and detailed with flowers—but the glass of the mirror is black. This is a scrying mirror, and it lets me look into another world. The world on the other side of the looking glass is quite different from my own—it's like one side of the mirror is Kansas, and the other side is Oz.

->I happen to be on the Oz side."

--> '''-deathswag''', the story's summary on DeviantArt.

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-> "In my lap is an oval mirror with a delicate silver frame, ornate and detailed with flowers—but the glass of the mirror is black. This is a scrying mirror, and it lets me look into another world. The world on the other side of the looking glass is quite different from my own—it's like one side of the mirror is Kansas, and the other side is Oz.

->I happen to be on the Oz side."

--> '''-deathswag''', the story's summary on DeviantArt.


->I happen to be on the Oz side."//

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->I happen to be on the Oz side."//"


I happen to be on the Oz side."//

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I ->I happen to be on the Oz side."//


-> "In my lap is an oval mirror with a delicate silver frame, ornate and detailed with flowers—but the glass of the mirror is black. This is a scrying mirror, and it lets me look into another world. The world on the other side of the looking glass is quite different from my own—it's like one side of the mirror is Kansas, and the other side is Oz.//

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-> "In my lap is an oval mirror with a delicate silver frame, ornate and detailed with flowers—but the glass of the mirror is black. This is a scrying mirror, and it lets me look into another world. The world on the other side of the looking glass is quite different from my own—it's like one side of the mirror is Kansas, and the other side is Oz.//
Oz.


-> "NOW PRESENTING PORTAL 3\\
A MULTIMEDIA COMIC BY TJ DORIAN\\
UPDATES RANDOMLY AND OFTEN\\
FEATURES ART, WRITING, AND ANIMATION\\
HAS ACTION, DRAMA, AND ALSO ZEE LAFFS (MAYBE EVEN SOME ROMANCE IN THERE)\\
Ladies and gentlemen, let the game begin."

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-> "NOW PRESENTING PORTAL 3\\
A MULTIMEDIA COMIC BY TJ DORIAN\\
UPDATES RANDOMLY AND OFTEN\\
FEATURES ART, WRITING, AND ANIMATION\\
HAS ACTION, DRAMA, AND ALSO ZEE LAFFS (MAYBE EVEN SOME ROMANCE IN THERE)\\
Ladies
"In my lap is an oval mirror with a delicate silver frame, ornate and gentlemen, let detailed with flowers—but the game begin."glass of the mirror is black. This is a scrying mirror, and it lets me look into another world. The world on the other side of the looking glass is quite different from my own—it's like one side of the mirror is Kansas, and the other side is Oz.//

I happen to be on the Oz side."//


-> "NOW PRESENTING PORTAL 3
A MULTIMEDIA COMIC BY TJ DORIAN

UPDATES RANDOMLY AND OFTEN

FEATURES ART, WRITING, AND ANIMATION

HAS ACTION, DRAMA, AND ALSO ZEE LAFFS (MAYBE EVEN SOME ROMANCE IN THERE)

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-> "NOW PRESENTING PORTAL 3
3\\
A MULTIMEDIA COMIC BY TJ DORIAN

DORIAN\\
UPDATES RANDOMLY AND OFTEN

OFTEN\\
FEATURES ART, WRITING, AND ANIMATION

ANIMATION\\
HAS ACTION, DRAMA, AND ALSO ZEE LAFFS (MAYBE EVEN SOME ROMANCE IN THERE)
THERE)\\





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* InkSuitActor - Human!Wheatley looks just like StephenMerchant. His entire introduction is a big height joke.

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* InkSuitActor - Human!Wheatley looks just like StephenMerchant.Creator/StephenMerchant. His entire introduction is a big height joke.



* YouMakeMeSic - The first half of Wheatley's apology letter is him debating on whether he's spelled "masturbate" correctly. He didn't.

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* YouMakeMeSic - The first half of Wheatley's apology letter is him debating on whether he's spelled "masturbate" correctly. He didn't.


-''I'm calling her Izzy Fortuna though so it's totally kosher. (Plus Scientist!Chell was hardly Chell at all except for the name.)''

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-''I'm ->''I'm calling her Izzy Fortuna though so it's totally kosher. (Plus Scientist!Chell was hardly Chell at all except for the name.)''


-''I'm calling her Izzy Fortuna though so it's totally kosher. (Plus Scientist!Chell was hardly Chell at all except for the name.)''
** More recently Chell has actually be rewritten as a character in Monarch, under the name Izzy Fortuna.

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** More recently Chell has actually be rewritten as a character in Monarch, under the name Izzy Fortuna.
-''I'm calling her Izzy Fortuna though so it's totally kosher. (Plus Scientist!Chell was hardly Chell at all except for the name.)''
** More recently Chell has actually be rewritten as a character in Monarch, under the name Izzy Fortuna.
)''


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* InNameOnly - Deathswag's belief that the story was becoming this for the Portal series was one of the reasons for its abandonment. Also nearly brought up by name in the announcement that Portal 3!Chell would become an original character in Monarch with Deathswag stating "Scientist!Chell was hardly Chell at all except for the name".

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