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Written as an alternate continuity to Fanfic/EyesWithoutAFace, ''Fanfic/EyesWithoutAFace'', but still considered a big part of FanFic/TheJubiverse (Likely Fanfic/TheJubiverse (likely due to the story becoming rather popular).
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/60289/Pagliacci You can read it here]]!
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* {{Tearjerker}}: As mentioned above, one of the Tongueless is [[TheCutie Derpy.]] ''[[KillTheCutie Derpy!]]''
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* {{Tearjerker}}: TearJerker: As mentioned above, one of the Tongueless is [[TheCutie Derpy.]] ''[[KillTheCutie Derpy!]]''
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* WeaponOfChoice: While Soprano works with powerful magic, Baritone seems more at home using his trusty revolver.
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* KillEmAll: When Pinkie “throws a party”, this is what she usually ends up doing.
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* [[ManInWhite Stallion In White]]: Wisp.
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* [[AmbiguouslyGay Ambiguously Bi:]] Pinstripe. Despite [[EvenTheGuysWantHim wanting to jump Stephen Scope’s bones]] and [[SorryImGay insisting he’s gay]], he still seems pretty flirtatious with women.
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* [[AmbiguouslyGay Ambiguously Bi:]] AmbiguouslyBi: Pinstripe. Despite [[EvenTheGuysWantHim wanting to jump Stephen Scope’s bones]] and [[SorryImGay insisting he’s gay]], he still seems pretty flirtatious with women.
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* '''MonsterClown'''MonsterClown: The Clown Princess of Crime.
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* YouHaveFailedMe: When somepony screws up enough in the ranks of the Shadowbolts, [[FateWorseThanDeath they get made into the Tongueless.]]
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* YouHaveFailedMe: When somepony screws up enough in the ranks of the Shadowbolts, [[FateWorseThanDeath they get made into the Tongueless.]]
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Big Badass Bird Of Prey is obsolete and Five Bad Band was a shoehorn.
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* FiveBadBand: Pinkie Pie's group.
** BigBad: [[MonsterClown The Prankster]]
** TheDragon: [[DragonWithAnAgenda Grift]]
** TheBrute: [[BigBadassBirdOfPrey Mr. Turnip]]
** TheEvilGenius: [[ObfuscatingStupidity Madame LeFlour]]
** DarkChick: [[SmallAnnoyingCreature Sir Lintsalot]], [[ButtMonkey Digger]]
** SixthRanger: [[OnlySaneMan Pinstripe]], [[BrawnHilda Twenty]]
** BigBad: [[MonsterClown The Prankster]]
** TheDragon: [[DragonWithAnAgenda Grift]]
** TheBrute: [[BigBadassBirdOfPrey Mr. Turnip]]
** TheEvilGenius: [[ObfuscatingStupidity Madame LeFlour]]
** DarkChick: [[SmallAnnoyingCreature Sir Lintsalot]], [[ButtMonkey Digger]]
** SixthRanger: [[OnlySaneMan Pinstripe]], [[BrawnHilda Twenty]]
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* TheIshmael: Pinstripe may be the eyes for the audience, but this is a story all about a villainous Pinkie Pie.
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* ADayInTheLimelight: After the first arc ends, we see the origin story of Twenty, as told from the perspective of Berry Punch.
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* [[AmbiguouslyGay Ambiguously Bi:]] Pinstripe. Despite [[EvenTheGuysWantHim wanting to jump Stephen Scope’s bones bones]] and [[SorryImGay insisting he’s gay]], he still seems pretty flirtatious with women.
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* BloodKnight: Ballista.
* BloodKnight: Ballista.
** Ballista's first appearance implies she's almost TheDreaded amongst her peers.
* [[ImAHumanitarian I'm A Carnivore]]: The majority of Pinkie's goons are meat-eaters. [[spoiler: They eat Blitzkrieg as the admittedly violent climax of the first arc.]]
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* PetTheDog: One of the Oranges tries to do this for his guard dog Spade by letting him escort a female Diamond Dog, since the poor thing is rarely given anything worthwhile. [[spoiler: Too bad for them both the female Diamond Dog was Madame Le Flour.]]
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* PetTheDog: One of the Oranges tries to do this for his guard dog Spade by letting him escort a female Diamond Dog, since the poor thing is rarely given anything worthwhile. [[spoiler: [[NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished Too bad for them both the female Diamond Dog was Madame Le Flour.]]]]]]
* [[PersonOfMassDestruction Pony of Mass Destruction]]: Ballista's ability is to constantly emit hot, raw magical energy all around her body, turning her into the closest thing to a living nuke.
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* YouHaveFailedMe: When somepony screws up enough in the ranks of the Shadowbolts, they get made into the Tongueless.
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* FateWorseThanDeath: When a member of the Shadowbolts disappoints Blitzkrieg too often to be reliable, they are "made" into a Tongueless: a dumb animal meant to pull their carriages.
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* CarnivoreConfusion: Addressed. One of the villains operates an illicit restaurant [[NightmareFuel where sentient species are served for lunch.]]
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* MonsterClown'''MonsterClown'''
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* [[AmbiguouslyGay Ambiguously Bi:]] Pinstripe. Despite wanting to jump Stephen Scope’s bones and [[SorryImGayinsists insisting he’s gay]], he still seems pretty flirtatious with women.
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* CampGay: Holy crap, ''crap'', Stephen Scope.
* DirtyCop: BerryPunch. ''Very'' Punch, ''very'' much so. so, although the other cops don't come off as very clean either. They're more of a government-funded street gang.
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Thanks to the above trope, there's no way to know what their real names are (Except Pinstripe and Digger).
* PetTheDog: One of the Oranges tries to do this for his guard dog Spade by letting him escort a female Diamond Dog, since the poor thing is rarely given anything worthwhile. [[spoiler: Too bad for them bothit the female Diamond Dog was Madame Le Flour.]]
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** [[MakeMeWannaShout Soprano]] and [[BadassBaritone Baritone]]
** [[RedScare Hammer and Sickle]]
** [[RedShirt Rind and Pulp]]
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** [[RedScare Hammer and Sickle]]
** [[RedShirt Rind and Pulp]]
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-> What are you smiling at?
-->--The Prankster
Written as an alternate continuity to Fanfic/EyesWithoutAFace, but still considered a big part of TheJubiverse (Likely due to the story becoming rather popular).
After spending five years locked away in a mental institution, the infamous Clown Princess of Crime is let loose upon Manehatten. It’s become soft in her absence, so she aims to liven things up by getting her friends together and throwing a party!
Of course, when The Prankster throws a party, all are invited… but none survive.
[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/60289/Pagliacci You can read it here]]!
!!WARNING: Smiling at the following Tropes could be hazardous to your health:
* TheAlcoholic: As expected, Berry Punch. Not portrayed as a LadyDrunk, however; she just loves her liquor too much.
*[[AmbiguouslyGay Ambiguously Bi:]] Pinstripe. Despite wanting to jump Stephen Scope’s bones and [[SorryImGay insists he’s gay]], he still seems pretty flirtatious with women.
* BadCopIncompetentCop: Berry Punch and Carrot Top, respectively.
* BerserkButton: Pinstripe hates the sound of laughter.
** Oh yeah?! Well, PINKS ''HATES'' IT WHEN YOU LOOK AT HER ''SCARS!!''
* BigGuyLittleGuy: [[ThemeNaming Soprano and Baritone.]]
* BreakingTheFourthWall: "Chapter 2 is about to end."
* ButtMonkey: Digger. Moreso than Pinstripe at least.
* TheCameo: One of the strippers in the Ringer is a certain blue unicorn mare with silver hair, who used to be a traveling magician…
* CampGay: Holy crap, Stephen Scope.
** One of the Tongueless is Derpy.
* DirtyCop: Berry Punch. ''Very'' much so.
* DistractedByTheSexy: Pinstripe's mind seems to wander when he's around the female characters, as do his eyes.
* EstablishingCharacterMoment:
** Pinkie Pie is introduced to the reader as she plays a bizarre mind-game with Pinstripe.
** Baritone makes quite an entrance by flipping over an entire fleet of cop cars... ''just so he can "have a talk" with Twenty.''
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Blitzkrieg once offered Pinstripe a Tongueless to have sex with. [[{{Squick}} Needless to say, he passed on the offer.]]
* FiveBadBand: Pinkie Pie's group.
** BigBad: [[MonsterClown The Prankster]]
** TheDragon: [[DragonWithAnAgenda Grift]]
** TheBrute: [[BigBadassBirdOfPrey Mr. Turnip]]
** TheEvilGenius: [[ObfuscatingStupidity Madame LeFlour]]
** DarkChick: [[SmallAnnoyingCreature Sir Lintsalot]], [[ButtMonkey Digger]]
** SixthRanger: [[OnlySaneMan Pinstripe]], [[BrawnHilda Twenty]]
* HitmanWithAHeart: Despite being hired to kill Twenty, Wisp decides to let her go—[[PetTheDog and even gives her some fatherly advice while he’s at it.]]
* HugeGirlTinyGuy: A non-romantic, villainous example is found in the pair of griffins Grift and Lintsalot.
* HuskyRusskie: Quite a few of the Stalliongrad ponies are pretty big. Even the mares!
* TheIshmael: Pinstripe may be the eyes for the audience, but this is a story all about a villainous Pinkie Pie.
* KillEmAll: When Pinkie “throws a party”, this is what she usually ends up doing.
* MonsterClown
* NaiveNewcomer: Carrot Top thinks of detective work like a comic book.
* TheNicknamer: Pinkie doesn't really care what their real names are. They're all [[InsistentTerminology Pins, Madame LeFlour, Rocky, Sir Lintsalot, and Mr. Turnip.]]
* PetTheDog: One of the Oranges tries to do this for his guard dog Spade by letting him escort a female Diamond Dog, since the poor thing is rarely given anything worthwhile. [[spoiler: Too bad for them both it was Madame Le Flour.]]
* PoliceBrutality: A common event in Manehatten, and also how Twenty lost vision in her right eye [[spoiler: as well as her family.]]
* PuttingTheBandBackTogether: Pinkie Pie's first goal.
* {{Tearjerker}}: As mentioned above, one of the Tongueless is [[TheCutie Derpy.]] ''[[KillTheCutie Derpy!]]''
* TokenMinority: Pinstripe is the only zebra in the current group.
*WeaponOfChoice: While Soprano works with powerful magic, Baritone seems more at home using his trusty revolver.
* YouHaveFailedMe: When somepony screws up enough in the ranks of the Shadowbolts, they get made into the Tongueless.
-->--The Prankster
Written as an alternate continuity to Fanfic/EyesWithoutAFace, but still considered a big part of TheJubiverse (Likely due to the story becoming rather popular).
After spending five years locked away in a mental institution, the infamous Clown Princess of Crime is let loose upon Manehatten. It’s become soft in her absence, so she aims to liven things up by getting her friends together and throwing a party!
Of course, when The Prankster throws a party, all are invited… but none survive.
[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/60289/Pagliacci You can read it here]]!
!!WARNING: Smiling at the following Tropes could be hazardous to your health:
* TheAlcoholic: As expected, Berry Punch. Not portrayed as a LadyDrunk, however; she just loves her liquor too much.
*[[AmbiguouslyGay Ambiguously Bi:]] Pinstripe. Despite wanting to jump Stephen Scope’s bones and [[SorryImGay insists he’s gay]], he still seems pretty flirtatious with women.
* BadCopIncompetentCop: Berry Punch and Carrot Top, respectively.
* BerserkButton: Pinstripe hates the sound of laughter.
** Oh yeah?! Well, PINKS ''HATES'' IT WHEN YOU LOOK AT HER ''SCARS!!''
* BigGuyLittleGuy: [[ThemeNaming Soprano and Baritone.]]
* BreakingTheFourthWall: "Chapter 2 is about to end."
* ButtMonkey: Digger. Moreso than Pinstripe at least.
* TheCameo: One of the strippers in the Ringer is a certain blue unicorn mare with silver hair, who used to be a traveling magician…
* CampGay: Holy crap, Stephen Scope.
** One of the Tongueless is Derpy.
* DirtyCop: Berry Punch. ''Very'' much so.
* DistractedByTheSexy: Pinstripe's mind seems to wander when he's around the female characters, as do his eyes.
* EstablishingCharacterMoment:
** Pinkie Pie is introduced to the reader as she plays a bizarre mind-game with Pinstripe.
** Baritone makes quite an entrance by flipping over an entire fleet of cop cars... ''just so he can "have a talk" with Twenty.''
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Blitzkrieg once offered Pinstripe a Tongueless to have sex with. [[{{Squick}} Needless to say, he passed on the offer.]]
* FiveBadBand: Pinkie Pie's group.
** BigBad: [[MonsterClown The Prankster]]
** TheDragon: [[DragonWithAnAgenda Grift]]
** TheBrute: [[BigBadassBirdOfPrey Mr. Turnip]]
** TheEvilGenius: [[ObfuscatingStupidity Madame LeFlour]]
** DarkChick: [[SmallAnnoyingCreature Sir Lintsalot]], [[ButtMonkey Digger]]
** SixthRanger: [[OnlySaneMan Pinstripe]], [[BrawnHilda Twenty]]
* HitmanWithAHeart: Despite being hired to kill Twenty, Wisp decides to let her go—[[PetTheDog and even gives her some fatherly advice while he’s at it.]]
* HugeGirlTinyGuy: A non-romantic, villainous example is found in the pair of griffins Grift and Lintsalot.
* HuskyRusskie: Quite a few of the Stalliongrad ponies are pretty big. Even the mares!
* TheIshmael: Pinstripe may be the eyes for the audience, but this is a story all about a villainous Pinkie Pie.
* KillEmAll: When Pinkie “throws a party”, this is what she usually ends up doing.
* MonsterClown
* NaiveNewcomer: Carrot Top thinks of detective work like a comic book.
* TheNicknamer: Pinkie doesn't really care what their real names are. They're all [[InsistentTerminology Pins, Madame LeFlour, Rocky, Sir Lintsalot, and Mr. Turnip.]]
* PetTheDog: One of the Oranges tries to do this for his guard dog Spade by letting him escort a female Diamond Dog, since the poor thing is rarely given anything worthwhile. [[spoiler: Too bad for them both it was Madame Le Flour.]]
* PoliceBrutality: A common event in Manehatten, and also how Twenty lost vision in her right eye [[spoiler: as well as her family.]]
* PuttingTheBandBackTogether: Pinkie Pie's first goal.
* {{Tearjerker}}: As mentioned above, one of the Tongueless is [[TheCutie Derpy.]] ''[[KillTheCutie Derpy!]]''
* TokenMinority: Pinstripe is the only zebra in the current group.
*WeaponOfChoice: While Soprano works with powerful magic, Baritone seems more at home using his trusty revolver.
* YouHaveFailedMe: When somepony screws up enough in the ranks of the Shadowbolts, they get made into the Tongueless.
