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* ShoutOut: Apart from shout outs to movies like ''Film/TheRightStuff'' and ''Anime/RoyalSpaceForceTheWingsOfHonneamise'', there are numerous allusions to various works on the subject and to the American and Soviet space programs.
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** Apart from shout outs to movies like ''Film/TheRightStuff'' and ''Anime/RoyalSpaceForceTheWingsOfHonneamise'', there are numerous allusions to various works on the subject and to the American and Soviet space programs.
** Apart from shout outs to movies like ''Film/TheRightStuff'' and ''Anime/RoyalSpaceForceTheWingsOfHonneamise'', there are numerous allusions to various works on the subject and to the American and Soviet space programs.
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* ShownTheirWork: The author displays a lot of knowledge on the subject.
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** There are also references to space filksongs like [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o-mZ9pKvCmk Surprise!]], [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7cVOOXQo22o The Eagle Has Landed]], and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Ryd_p20XEU Fire In The Sky]].
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** There are also references to space filksongs like [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o-mZ9pKvCmk Surprise!]], [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7cVOOXQo22o The Eagle Has Landed]], Hope Eyrie]], and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Ryd_p20XEU Fire In The Sky]].
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Welcome to Cape Coltaveral, headquarters of the Bureau of Atmospheric Experimentation and the topic of the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' Fanfic '''''Our First Steps''''', written by Mrakoplaz. Where we follow the ponies behind Equestria's space program with the goal of launching a pony into orbit.
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Welcome to Cape Coltaveral, headquarters of the Bureau of Atmospheric Experimentation and the topic of the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' Fanfic '''''Our ''Our First Steps''''', Steps'', written by Mrakoplaz. Where we follow the ponies behind Equestria's space program with the goal of launching a pony into orbit.
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* NoodleIncident: Alluded to by Celestia as what, in the distant past, rearranged the landscape to the point where "Cape" Coltaveral is landlocked.
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** Some of the chapter titles are drawn from filksongs like [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o-mZ9pKvCmk Surprise!]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Ryd_p20XEU Fire In The Sky]].
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** Some of the chapter titles There are drawn from also references to space filksongs like [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o-mZ9pKvCmk Surprise!]] Surprise!]], [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7cVOOXQo22o The Eagle Has Landed]], and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Ryd_p20XEU Fire In The Sky]].
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** Some of the chapter titles are drawn from filksongs like [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o-mZ9pKvCmk Surprise!]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Ryd_p20XEU Fire In The Sky]].
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* {{Magitek}}: Some of Equestria's technology works like this. The space program on the other hand avoids using magic so that pegasi and earth ponies can operate the rockets and not just unicorns.
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* {{Magitek}}: Some of Equestria's technology works like this. The space program on the other hand hoof avoids using magic so that pegasi and earth ponies can operate the rockets and not just unicorns.
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* MugglePowerMugglePower: Part of the motivation of the designers is to assert that Earth ponies can do more than simply farm.
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* DeusExMachina: A literal one. [[spoiler:At the end of Part 8 Celestia saves the day.]]
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* DeusExMachina: A literal one. [[spoiler:At the end of Part 8 Celestia saves the day.]] ]]
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* ShownTheirWork: The author does show a lot of knowledge on the subject
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Welcome to Cape Coltaveral, headquarters of the Bureau of Atmospheric Experimentation and the topic of the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' Fanfic Our First Steps, written by Mrakoplaz. Where we follow the ponies behind Equestria's space program with the goal of launching a pony into orbit.
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Welcome to Cape Coltaveral, headquarters of the Bureau of Atmospheric Experimentation and the topic of the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' Fanfic Our '''''Our First Steps, Steps''''', written by Mrakoplaz. Where we follow the ponies behind Equestria's space program with the goal of launching a pony into orbit.
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!! This fanfic provides examples of:
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* ShoutOut: Apart from shout outs to movies like ''TheRightStuff'' and ''Anime/WingsOfHonneamiseRoyalSpaceForce'', there are numerous allusions to various works on the subject and to the American and Soviet space programs.
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* ShoutOut: Apart from shout outs to movies like ''TheRightStuff'' ''Film/TheRightStuff'' and ''Anime/WingsOfHonneamiseRoyalSpaceForce'', ''Anime/RoyalSpaceForceTheWingsOfHonneamise'', there are numerous allusions to various works on the subject and to the American and Soviet space programs.
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Can be found [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/08/story-our-first-steps.html here]].
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Can be found [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/08/story-our-first-steps.html here]] and [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/30248/Our-First-Steps here]].
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Welcome to Cape Coltaveral, headquarters of the Bureau of Atmospheric Experimentation and the topic of the My Little Pony Fanfic Our First Steps, written by Mrakoplaz. Where we follow the ponies behind Equestria's space program with the goal of launching a pony into orbit.
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Welcome to Cape Coltaveral, headquarters of the Bureau of Atmospheric Experimentation and the topic of the My Little Pony ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' Fanfic Our First Steps, written by Mrakoplaz. Where we follow the ponies behind Equestria's space program with the goal of launching a pony into orbit.
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