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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: The unknown fate of two pony mages and one Royal Guard who disappeared in flashes of light during the study of Equestrian end of anomaly from which two weeks later Celestia and her fraction came.

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* AGodAmI: Discord thinks this about himself.
* AntiMagic: Psychotropic radiation disruptors - anti-magical flashbangs. Harmless to humans but very effective against all creatures with a strong affinity to the Noosphere... and magic users. Disables them for several seconds. [[spoiler: Twilight find on herself how effective they are]].

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* %%* AGodAmI: Discord thinks this about himself.
* AntiMagic: Psychotropic radiation disruptors - anti-magical flashbangs. Harmless to humans but very effective against all creatures with a strong affinity to the Noosphere... and magic users. Disables them for several seconds. [[spoiler: Twilight find on finds out herself how effective they are]].



* BroadStrokes: The events happen right as season three of FIM comes to a closure so yes, [[spoiler: we have Princess Twilight Sparkle. But as author say in comment section, in his headcanon it wasn't Celestia's idea to transform Twilight. As a result Celestia suffers a Heroic BSOD when she first catches a glimpse of Twilicorn. Oh, and she didn't react quite well to Discord being freed and reformed, either]].

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* BroadStrokes: The fic's events happen right as take place near the end of season three of FIM comes to a closure FIM, so yes, [[spoiler: we have Princess Twilight Sparkle. But as [[spoiler:Twilight Sparkle is an alicorn.]] The fic's author say says in the comment section, section that in his headcanon it wasn't Celestia's [[spoiler:Celestia's idea to transform Twilight. Twilight]]. As a result Celestia suffers a Heroic BSOD when she first catches a glimpse of Twilicorn. Oh, and she didn't [[spoiler:Twilicorn]]. She also doesn't react quite well to Discord being freed and reformed, either]].reformed.







** He have this again when he saw a sad Luna.



* EldritchAbomination: Luna describes Discord as this.

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* %%* EldritchAbomination: Luna describes Discord as this.



* HumanityIsAdvanced: Well, considering that the ponies still didn't invent the ''steel''... Somehow justified since they use magic for everything but Celestia say that she would still choice steel sword instead enchanted iron sword since steel is cheaper to produce and can be created in large quantities. And if you add other achievements of mankind...
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Something is definitely ''very'' not right with Twilight Sparkle.
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: The unknown fate of two pony mages and one Royal Guard who disappeared in flashes of ligth during the study of Equestrian end of anomaly from which two weeks later Celestia and her fraction came .
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Very short but is still there. Celestia verbally wiped the floor with the leader of a small pegasi squad who tried attack her soldiers.

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* HumanityIsAdvanced: Well, considering Considering that the ponies still didn't invent the haven't invented ''steel''... Somehow justified Justified since they use magic for everything everything, but Celestia say that she would still choice choose a steel sword instead over an enchanted iron sword since steel is cheaper to produce and can be created in large quantities. And if you add other achievements of mankind...
* %%* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Something is definitely ''very'' not right with Twilight Sparkle.
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: The unknown fate of two pony mages and one Royal Guard who disappeared in flashes of ligth during the study of Equestrian end of anomaly from which two weeks later Celestia and her fraction came .
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TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Very short but is still there. Celestia verbally wiped wipes the floor with the leader of a small pegasi squad who tried to attack her soldiers.
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* TwitchyEye: Luna reaction when Strider and Celestia kissed.

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\n* TwitchyEye: Luna reaction Luna's eye twitches when Strider and Celestia kissed.kiss.
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: The unknown fate of two pony mages and one Royal Guard who disappeared in flashes of light during the study of Equestrian end of anomaly from which two weeks later Celestia and her fraction came.
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-->'''Vano:''' ''“Fuck, I don’t know if I could have kept the serious face any longer,” Vano began. “I mean, they are so cute!” He added with a grin, hugging his machine gun with both arms. “My first instinct was to snatch one up and hug him till the fluff goes away!... or not. That wouldn’t be good.”''

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-->'''Vano:''' ''“Fuck, ''"Fuck, I don’t don't know if I could have kept the serious face any longer,” longer," Vano began. “I "I mean, they are so cute!” cute!" He added with a grin, hugging his machine gun with both arms. “My "My first instinct was to snatch one up and hug him till the fluff goes away!... or not. That wouldn’t wouldn't be good.”''
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-->'''Celestia:''' ''“I knew the Royal Guard was out of shape and in a desperate need of restructuring ever since the Changeling invasion. I learned then that it didn’t have what it takes to repel an enemy attack, in the goddamn capital of our own country,” she began, angry but controlled, pacing back and forth in front of the terrified Guards, before suddenly pausing, seemingly calming down. “But attacking a group unknown beings obviously minding their own business unprovoked? Without even the shadow of a proper threat assessment? What image of the Guard did you intend to give out, you pathetic excuse for a soldier!?''

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-->'''Celestia:''' ''“I ''"I knew the Royal Guard was out of shape and in a desperate need of restructuring ever since the Changeling invasion. I learned then that it didn’t didn't have what it takes to repel an enemy attack, in the goddamn capital of our own country,” country," she began, angry but controlled, pacing back and forth in front of the terrified Guards, before suddenly pausing, seemingly calming down. “But "But attacking a group unknown beings obviously minding their own business unprovoked? Without even the shadow of a proper threat assessment? What image of the Guard did you intend to give out, you pathetic excuse for a soldier!?''
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* DeadFic: Unfortunately. It was last updated in 28th Sep, 2014 and the author last login was on Dec 22nd 2015. Absolutely no one knows what really happened with him.

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* DeadFic: Unfortunately. It was last updated in 28th Sep, 2014 and the author last login was on Dec 22nd 22nd, 2015. Absolutely no one knows what really happened with him.

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''Operation Homecoming'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' / ''[[VideoGame/{{STALKER}} S.T.A.L.K.E.R.]]'' ongoing crossover and direct sequel to ''Fanfic/SeeTheZoneAndSurvive'' started in 8th March 2014.

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''Operation Homecoming'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' / ''[[VideoGame/{{STALKER}} S.T.A.L.K.E.R.]]'' ongoing crossover and direct sequel to ''Fanfic/SeeTheZoneAndSurvive'' started in 8th March 2014.
''Fanfic/SeeTheZoneAndSurvive''.


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* TwitchyEye: Luna reaction when [[spoiler:Strider and Celestia kissed]].

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* TwitchyEye: Luna reaction when [[spoiler:Strider Strider and Celestia kissed]].kissed.
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* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Averted. Celestia clearly shows that these 14 months in the Zone weren't a vacation. A chunk of her left ear is missing while a clearly visible bullet hole can be seen on the other and she has several scars on her face, notably near her left eye. But for Strider, she is as beautiful as always.

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* AntiMagic: Psychotropic radiation disruptors - anti-magical flashbangs. Harmless to humans but very effective against all creatures with a strong affinity to the Noosphere... and magic users. Disables them for several seconds. [[spoiler: Twilight find on herself how effective they are]].
* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Averted. Celestia clearly shows that these 14 months in the Zone weren't a vacation. A chunk of her left ear is missing while a clearly visible bullet hole can be seen on in the other and she has several scars on her face, notably near her left eye. But for Strider, she is as beautiful as always.



* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: The unknown fate of two pony mages and one Royal Guard who disappeared in flashes of ligth during the study of Equestrian end of anomaly from which two weeks later Celestia and her fraction came .



* TwitchyEye: Luna reaction when Strider and Celestia kissed.

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* TwitchyEye: Luna reaction when Strider [[spoiler:Strider and Celestia kissed.kissed]].
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* {{Big Entrance}}: How Celestia and her faction forces entered Equestria: Seven Mi-24 and four Mi-26 carrying the tanks, APC's, IFV's, some bikes and hundreds of personel flew out of the giant anomaly suspended in the air.

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* {{Big Entrance}}: How Celestia and her faction forces entered Equestria: Seven Mi-24 and four Mi-26 carrying the tanks, APC's, IFV's, [=APCs=], [=IFVs=], some bikes and hundreds of personel flew out of the giant anomaly suspended in the air.air.
* BigWHAT: Celestia reaction when Luna said that they freed Discord.



* EldritchAbomination: Luna describes Discord with this.

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** He have this again when he saw a sad Luna.

* EldritchAbomination: Luna describes Discord with as this.



* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Something is definitely not right with Twilight Sparkle.

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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Something is definitely ''very'' not right with Twilight Sparkle.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Very, very short. Celestia verbally wiped the floor with the leader of a small pegasi squad who tried attack her soldiers.

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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Very, very short.Very short but is still there. Celestia verbally wiped the floor with the leader of a small pegasi squad who tried attack her soldiers.
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* BroadStrokes: The events happen right as season three of FIM comes to a closure so yes, [[spoiler: we have Princess Twilight Sparkle. But as author say in comment section, in his headcanon it wasn't Celestia's idea to transform Twilight. As a result Celestia suffers a Heroic BSOD when she first catches a glimpse of Twilicorn]].

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* BroadStrokes: The events happen right as season three of FIM comes to a closure so yes, [[spoiler: we have Princess Twilight Sparkle. But as author say in comment section, in his headcanon it wasn't Celestia's idea to transform Twilight. As a result Celestia suffers a Heroic BSOD when she first catches a glimpse of Twilicorn]].Twilicorn. Oh, and she didn't react quite well to Discord being freed and reformed, either]].
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* AGodAmI: Discord thinks this about himself.


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* EldritchAbomination: Luna describes Discord with this.


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* HumanityIsAdvanced: Well, considering that the ponies still didn't invent the ''steel''... Somehow justified since they use magic for everything but Celestia say that she would still choice steel sword instead enchanted iron sword since steel is cheaper to produce and can be created in large quantities. And if you add other achievements of mankind...
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Something is definitely not right with Twilight Sparkle.
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* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Subverted. Celestia clearly shows that these 14 months in the Zone weren't a vacation. A chunk of her left ear is missing while a clearly visible bullet hole can be seen on the other and she has several scars on her face, notably near her left eye. But for Strider, she is as beautiful as always.

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* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Subverted.Averted. Celestia clearly shows that these 14 months in the Zone weren't a vacation. A chunk of her left ear is missing while a clearly visible bullet hole can be seen on the other and she has several scars on her face, notably near her left eye. But for Strider, she is as beautiful as always.

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-->''Fourteen Months Celestia has been in the Zone. S.T.A.L.K.E.R.s say that the Zone changes who you are... that's partially true. The truth is as horrific as it is simple: the weak die. The strong grow stronger.''

-->''Celestia wasn't weak to begin with. She has changed.''

-->''Can she still fit in her homeworld?''

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-->''Fourteen Months Celestia has been in the Zone. S.Chernobyl Exclusion Zone.''

-->''S.
T.A.L.K.E.R.s say that the Zone changes who you are... that's partially true. The truth is as horrific as it is simple: the weak die. The die, the strong grow stronger.''

-->''Celestia wasn't weak to begin with. She has changed.''

-->''Can
became stronger. She changed. Can she still fit in her homeworld?''



* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Celestia face clearly shows that these 14 months in the Zone was not a vacation. A chunk of her left ear is missing, she have several scars under her left eye and in right ear she have a hole (probably after the bullet). But for Strider, she is beautiful as always.
* {{Big Entrance}}: How Celestia and her faction forces entered Equestria: Seven Mi-24 and four Mi-26 that were carrying the tanks, APC's, IFV's, some bikes and assload of people and stuff flew out of the giant anomaly suspended in the air.
* BroadStrokes: The fic events happen right as season three of FIM comes to a closure so yes, [[spoiler: we have Princess Twilight Sparkle. But as author say in comment section, in his headcanon it wasn't Celestia's idea to transform Twilight ''"because it doesn't make sense in the slightest"''. Hence, we have Heroic BSOD performed by Celestia]].
* CutenessOverload: When the group of Royal Guards (few of them participated in the reunion between Luna and Celestia and shortly later they were dismissed) finally was beyond the range of his sight and voice:

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* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Subverted. Celestia face clearly shows that these 14 months in the Zone was not weren't a vacation. A chunk of her left ear is missing, missing while a clearly visible bullet hole can be seen on the other and she have has several scars under on her face, notably near her left eye and in right ear she have a hole (probably after the bullet). eye. But for Strider, she is as beautiful as always.
* {{Big Entrance}}: How Celestia and her faction forces entered Equestria: Seven Mi-24 and four Mi-26 that were carrying the tanks, APC's, IFV's, some bikes and assload hundreds of people and stuff personel flew out of the giant anomaly suspended in the air.
* BroadStrokes: The fic events happen right as season three of FIM comes to a closure so yes, [[spoiler: we have Princess Twilight Sparkle. But as author say in comment section, in his headcanon it wasn't Celestia's idea to transform Twilight ''"because it doesn't make sense in the slightest"''. Hence, we have Twilight. As a result Celestia suffers a Heroic BSOD performed by Celestia]].
when she first catches a glimpse of Twilicorn]].
* CutenessOverload: When Vano, when the group of Royal Guards (few finally was beyond the range of them his sight and voice (they participated in the reunion between Luna and Celestia and shortly later they were dismissed) finally was beyond the range of his sight and voice:
dismissed):



* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Very, very short but still existing. Celestia verbally wiped the floor with commander of small pegasi squad who tried attack her soldiers.

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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Very, very short but still existing. short. Celestia verbally wiped the floor with commander the leader of a small pegasi squad who tried attack her soldiers. soldiers.

-->'''Celestia:''' ''“I knew the Royal Guard was out of shape and in a desperate need of restructuring ever since the Changeling invasion. I learned then that it didn’t have what it takes to repel an enemy attack, in the goddamn capital of our own country,” she began, angry but controlled, pacing back and forth in front of the terrified Guards, before suddenly pausing, seemingly calming down. “But attacking a group unknown beings obviously minding their own business unprovoked? Without even the shadow of a proper threat assessment? What image of the Guard did you intend to give out, you pathetic excuse for a soldier!?''
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* HeroicBSOD: Celestia reaction when she noticed that Twiligh [[spoiler: is alicorn now]].

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* HeroicBSOD: Celestia reaction when she noticed that Twiligh Twilight [[spoiler: is alicorn now]].
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* BroadStrokes: The fic events happen right as season three of FIM comes to a closure so yes, [[spoiler: we have Princess Twilight Sparkle. But as author say in comment section, in his headcanon it wasn't Celestia's idea to transform Twilight ''"because it doesn't make sense in the slightest"''. Hence, we have HeroicBSOD performed by Celestia]].

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* BroadStrokes: The fic events happen right as season three of FIM comes to a closure so yes, [[spoiler: we have Princess Twilight Sparkle. But as author say in comment section, in his headcanon it wasn't Celestia's idea to transform Twilight ''"because it doesn't make sense in the slightest"''. Hence, we have HeroicBSOD Heroic BSOD performed by Celestia]].
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* CutenessOverload: When the group of Royal Guards finally was beyond the range of his sight and voice:

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* CutenessOverload: When the group of Royal Guards (few of them participated in the reunion between Luna and Celestia and shortly later they were dismissed) finally was beyond the range of his sight and voice:
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* {{Big Entrance}}: How Celestia and her faction forces entered Equestria. Seven Mi-24 and four Mi-26 that were carrying the tanks, APC's, IFV's, some bikes and assload of people and stuff flew out of the giant anomaly suspended in the air.
* BroadStrokes: The fic events happen right as season three of FIM comes to a closure so yes, [[spoiler: we have Princess Twilight Sparkle. But as author say in comment section, in his headcanon it wasn't Celestia's idea ''"because it doesn't make sense in the slightest"''. Hence, we have HeroicBSOD performed by Celestia]].
* CutenessOverload: When the Royal Guards finally was beyond the range of his sight and voice:

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* {{Big Entrance}}: How Celestia and her faction forces entered Equestria. Equestria: Seven Mi-24 and four Mi-26 that were carrying the tanks, APC's, IFV's, some bikes and assload of people and stuff flew out of the giant anomaly suspended in the air.
* BroadStrokes: The fic events happen right as season three of FIM comes to a closure so yes, [[spoiler: we have Princess Twilight Sparkle. But as author say in comment section, in his headcanon it wasn't Celestia's idea to transform Twilight ''"because it doesn't make sense in the slightest"''. Hence, we have HeroicBSOD performed by Celestia]].
* CutenessOverload: When the group of Royal Guards finally was beyond the range of his sight and voice:



* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Very, very short. Celestia verbally wiped the floor with commander of small pegasi squad who tried attack them.

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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Very, very short. short but still existing. Celestia verbally wiped the floor with commander of small pegasi squad who tried attack them.her soldiers.
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''Operation Homecoming'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' / ''[[VideoGame/{{STALKER}} S.T.A.L.K.E.R.]]'' ongoing crossover and direct sequel to ''SeeTheZoneAndSurvive'' started in 8th March 2014.

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''Operation Homecoming'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' / ''[[VideoGame/{{STALKER}} S.T.A.L.K.E.R.]]'' ongoing crossover and direct sequel to ''SeeTheZoneAndSurvive'' ''Fanfic/SeeTheZoneAndSurvive'' started in 8th March 2014.
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* {{Big Entrance}}: How Celestia and her faction forces entered Equestria. Seven Mi-24 and four Mi-26 that were carrying the tanks, APCs, IFVs, some bikes and assload of people and stuff flew out of the giant anomaly suspended in the air.

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* {{Big Entrance}}: How Celestia and her faction forces entered Equestria. Seven Mi-24 and four Mi-26 that were carrying the tanks, APCs, IFVs, APC's, IFV's, some bikes and assload of people and stuff flew out of the giant anomaly suspended in the air.

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* FourStarBadass: General Celestia Everfree, leader of Dawn faction.

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* FourStarBadass: General Celestia Everfree, leader CutenessOverload: When the Royal Guards finally was beyond the range of Dawn faction.his sight and voice:

-->'''Vano:''' ''“Fuck, I don’t know if I could have kept the serious face any longer,” Vano began. “I mean, they are so cute!” He added with a grin, hugging his machine gun with both arms. “My first instinct was to snatch one up and hug him till the fluff goes away!... or not. That wouldn’t be good.”''
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[[quoteright:349:http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/changes_by_kr4k40-d76kger---_3922.jpg]]
[[caption-width-right:349:The Zone really changes you...]]
-->''Fourteen Months Celestia has been in the Zone. S.T.A.L.K.E.R.s say that the Zone changes who you are... that's partially true. The truth is as horrific as it is simple: the weak die. The strong grow stronger.''

-->''Celestia wasn't weak to begin with. She has changed.''

-->''Can she still fit in her homeworld?''

''Operation Homecoming'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' / ''[[VideoGame/{{STALKER}} S.T.A.L.K.E.R.]]'' ongoing crossover and direct sequel to ''SeeTheZoneAndSurvive'' started in 8th March 2014.

After fourteen, adventurous but also hard, months Celestia, together with her new friends, allies and her lover, finally returned to Equestria. But this is not the end of the challenges that she must face. Now, not only Equestria must adapt to their old-new ruler but also Celestia must adapt to a few changes that have occurred during her absence.

Fanfic can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/170699/operation-homecoming here]].

Page picture originally made by [[http://kr4k40.deviantart.com/art/Changes-434295315 author of the story]] and used by him as a fanfic's covert art.


!!See The Zone And Survive contains examples of:

* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Celestia face clearly shows that these 14 months in the Zone was not a vacation. A chunk of her left ear is missing, she have several scars under her left eye and in right ear she have a hole (probably after the bullet). But for Strider, she is beautiful as always.
* BroadStrokes: The fic events happen right as season three of FIM comes to a closure so yes, [[spoiler: we have Princess Twilight Sparkle. But as author say in comment section, in his headcanon it wasn't Celestia's idea ''"because it doesn't make sense in the slightest"''. Hence, we have HeroicBSOD performed by Celestia]].
* FourStarBadass: General Celestia Everfree, leader of Dawn faction.
* HeroicBSOD: Celestia reaction when she noticed that Twiligh [[spoiler: is alicorn now]].
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Very, very short. Celestia verbally wiped the floor with commander of small pegasi squad who tried attack them.
* TwitchyEye: Luna reaction when Strider and Celestia kissed.

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