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* {{Foreshadowing}}: When Rainstorm is being harassed by a lecherous guild, one of the members promise him a cuter pet, assuming that Red XII was Rainstorm's pet mob. Vincent, who becomes Rainstorm's pet, is noted to be a {{Bishonen}}.

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* {{Foreshadowing}}: When Rainstorm is being harassed by a lecherous guild, one of the members promise him a cuter pet, assuming that Red XII was Rainstorm's pet mob. Vincent, who becomes Rainstorm's pet, is noted to be a {{Bishonen}}.PrettyBoy.



* FromNobodyToNightmare: Rainstorm.

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* %%* FromNobodyToNightmare: Rainstorm.
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Ill Girl has been cut per TRS decision. Examples are moved to Delicate And Sickly when appropriate.


* IllGirl: Mena[[spoiler:/Myrna Wallace]] is one in real life, being so ill that she has no energy to leave her bed. [[spoiler: Barret introduced to her Terra Online so she could have a life outside her illness.]]
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Viera are covered under multiple games so I don't know which one to pick, and I don't know where the Gria come from exactly.


* BulletProofHumanShield: Justified [[spoiler: game mechanics make it impossible for attacks to kill party members, so Rainstorm grabs a fallen bounty hunter to use as a shield to protect him from the other bounty hunters' attacks.]]

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* BulletProofHumanShield: Justified [[spoiler: Justified, game mechanics make it impossible for attacks to kill party members, members,[[spoiler: so Rainstorm grabs can grab a fallen bounty hunter to use as a shield to protect him from the other bounty hunters' attacks.]]



* ExtremelyShortTimespan: 40 chapters take over the course of 4 days.

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* ExtremelyShortTimespan: 40 nearly 60 chapters take over the course of 4 days.



* MythologyGag: The many races of Terra Online are actual ''Franchise/FinalFantasy'' races: the Viera, the Moogles, the Gria, the Miqu'ote, the Burmecian, the Ronsos and so on.

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* MythologyGag: The many races of Terra Online are actual ''Franchise/FinalFantasy'' races: the Viera, the Moogles, the Gria, the Miqu'ote, [[VideoGame/FinalFantasyXIV Miqu'ote]], the Burmecian, [[VideoGame/FinalFantasyIX Burmecian]], the Ronsos [[VideoGame/FinalFantasyX Ronsos]] and so on.



* VideoGameCrueltyPunishment: Infamy is a status effect that makes it difficult for players to level up or get monster drops, as a deterrent for PlayerKilling. Cloud accumulates a ton of it when he causes the Albrook Newbie Massacre, and half the destruction of the Elder Tree.

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* VideoGameCrueltyPunishment: Infamy is a status effect player statistic that makes it difficult for players to level up or get monster drops, as a deterrent for PlayerKilling. Cloud accumulates a ton of it when he causes the Albrook Newbie Massacre, and half the destruction of the Elder Tree.

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* OneGenderRace: The Viera were assumed to be this due to their largely female faction.


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* AnAesop: Cloud initially assumes that the sexual harassment he faces is due to his very {{Stripperiffic}} attire. This assumption is shot to hell when he sees Flower, who's wearing a conservative pretty dress that covers her from neck to toe, being sexually harassed by a bunch of guys who try to coerce her into joining their party. He then realizes that clothing doesn't provoke sexual harassment, people can just be jerks.


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* OneGenderRace: The Viera were assumed to be this due to their largely female faction.

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* RealityEnsues: While Vincent is physically intact due to his supernatural abilities, 15 years of no sleeping has mentally tore him to shreds. Due to being unable to rest his mind, he pretty much loses his memories due to being unable to process them. He's only able to remember his own name at the end of this.


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* SleepDeprivation: While Vincent is physically intact due to his supernatural abilities, 15 years of no sleeping has mentally tore him to shreds. Due to being unable to rest his mind, he pretty much loses his memories due to being unable to process them. He's only able to remember his own name at the end of this.

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Disambiguating; deleting and renaming wicks as appropriate


* ADarkerMe: Cloud is a shy teenager in real-life, but Rainstorm is an assertive BloodKnight and DeadpanSnarker who takes shit from no one.
* AFriendInNeed: After the Albrook Massacre, Treasure Princess and Red XII seek out Rainstorm and protect him from bounty hunters.

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* ADarkerMe: Cloud is a shy teenager in real-life, but Rainstorm is an assertive BloodKnight and DeadpanSnarker who takes shit from no one.
* AFriendInNeed: After the Albrook Massacre, Treasure Princess and Red XII seek out Rainstorm and protect him from bounty hunters.
OneGenderRace: The Viera were assumed to be this due to their largely female faction.



* BullyHunter: [[spoiler: Rainstorm meets Flower when he defends her from perverts harassing her by killing them.]]



* BullyHunter: [[spoiler: Rainstorm meets Flower when he defends her from perverts harassing her by killing them.]]



* CeilingCling: Yuffie had to cling to a stalactite for 4 hours because she had lost her levels due to the Overseers, and attempted to fight the cave's boss and then realized how week she had become and didn't have the means to escape.
* CerebusSyndrome: The plot started to move and darken at the arrival of Vincent and Aerith.



* CeilingCling: Yuffie had to cling to a stalactite for 4 hours because she had lost her levels due to the Overseers, and attempted to fight the cave's boss and then realized how week she had become and didn't have the means to escape.
* CerebusSyndrome: The plot started to move and darken at the arrival of Vincent and Aerith.



* ADarkerMe: Cloud is a shy teenager in real-life, but Rainstorm is an assertive BloodKnight and DeadpanSnarker who takes shit from no one.



* DoubleStandard: A lot of players heavily discriminate against female players who chose to play in non-humanoid and unsexualized player characters.



* DoubleStandard: A lot of players heavily discriminate against female players who chose to play in non-humanoid and unsexualized player characters.



* AFriendInNeed: After the Albrook Massacre, Treasure Princess and Red XII seek out Rainstorm and protect him from bounty hunters.



* {{GMPC}}: Cait Sith is not only an NPC, but the game's admin and head designer.



* {{GIFT}}: Players can be jerks in Terra Online. Red XIII got killed and robbed several times, and Rainstorm and Flower get sexually harassed. They also pull this as revenge, causing other players grief and causing as much havoc as possible.



* {{GMPC}}: Cait Sith is not only an NPC, but the game's admin and head designer.
* HappinessInSlavery: Vincent is turned into Cloud's pet by Cait Sith due to him being unable to turn Vincent into a player. Vincent becoming a pet is for the best, since Vincent won't be constantly attacked by players, and Cloud wouldn't even consider exploiting him. On Vincent's part, he doesn't like being a pet, but likes Cloud's affection and protection. Helps that Cloud is very respectful of Vincent's boundaries.



* HappinessInSlavery: Vincent is turned into Cloud's pet by Cait Sith due to him being unable to turn Vincent into a player. Vincent becoming a pet is for the best, since Vincent won't be constantly attacked by players, and Cloud wouldn't even consider exploiting him. On Vincent's part, he doesn't like being a pet, but likes Cloud's affection and protection. Helps that Cloud is very respectful of Vincent's boundaries.



* InUniverseNickname: Naut calls Rainstorm "skimpy."



* InUniverseNickname: Naut calls Rainstorm "skimpy."

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* InUniverseNickname: Naut calls InternetJerk: Players can be jerks in Terra Online. Red XIII got killed and robbed several times, and Rainstorm "skimpy."and Flower get sexually harassed. They also pull this as revenge, causing other players grief and causing as much havoc as possible.



* ItCanThink: Cait Sith is rather surprised that the Demon of the Wastes glitch can remember things, assess danger, and make decisions. Only to find out to his horror that Vincent is not an 'it'.



* ItCanThink: Cait Sith is rather surprised that the Demon of the Wastes glitch can remember things, assess danger, and make decisions. Only to find out to his horror that Vincent is not an 'it'.



* MST3KMantra: InUniverse, when Bigshot complains the Elder Tree is too big to even to be possible, Mena tells him it's just a game.



* MST3KMantra: InUniverse, when Bigshot complains the Elder Tree is too big to even to be possible, Mena tells him it's just a game.



* NoodleIncident: the Fanocalypse of Alexandria. [[spoiler: It involved Genesis shouting that Sephiroth was in Alexandria and him carving a path through the mob that followed.]]



* NoodleIncident: the Fanocalypse of Alexandria. [[spoiler: It involved Genesis shouting that Sephiroth was in Alexandria and him carving a path through the mob that followed.]]



* OneGenderRace: The Viera were assumed to be this due to their largely female faction.



* PersonOfMassDestruction: Flower. Just by summoning Bahamut[[spoiler:, she killed over 500 players and destroyed the Elder Tree]]. Just being near her makes things more breakable[[spoiler:; this is a side effect of being a Cetra]].



* PersonOfMassDestruction: Flower. Just by summoning Bahamut[[spoiler:, she killed over 500 players and destroyed the Elder Tree]]. Just being near her makes things more breakable[[spoiler:; this is a side effect of being a Cetra]].



* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: Reeve abuses his connections as Head of Urban Development [[spoiler: to contact Cloud to get him working for immediately, getting immediate discharge papers.]]



* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: Reeve abuses his connections as Head of Urban Development [[spoiler: to contact Cloud to get him working for immediately, getting immediate discharge papers.]]
* ShamelessFanserviceGuy: While Rainstorm admits he still hates his {{Stripperific}} armor, he is no longer bothered by it anymore.
* ShameIfSomethingHappened: Vincent snarks this when Rainstorm is excited over being in Alexandria.



* ShameIfSomethingHappened: Vincent snarks this when Rainstorm is excited over being in Alexandria.
* ShamelessFanserviceGuy: While Rainstorm admits he still hates his {{Stripperific}} armor, he is no longer bothered by it anymore.
* ShipTease: Cloud and Vincent get a lot of this.



* ShipTease: Cloud and Vincent get a lot of this.



* VocalDissonance: Naut is a cute moogle, but he still has Cid's deep masculine voice and curses like a sailor.


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* VocalDissonance: Naut is a cute moogle, but he still has Cid's deep masculine voice and curses like a sailor.
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** Due to him literally existing before the game, Vincent was assumed to be a [[TheMissingNo glitch character]] or SecretBoss, because no one bothered to actually interact with him nonviolently until Rainstorm.

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** Due to him literally existing before the game, Vincent was assumed to be a [[TheMissingNo [[GlitchEntity glitch character]] or SecretBoss, because no one bothered to actually interact with him nonviolently until Rainstorm.

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* GlitchEntity: InUniverse with Vincent. Vincent is assumed to be a boss monster, but is actually a glitch character who turns out be a comatose prototype player that couldn't be removed from the game.



* TheMissingNo: InUniverse with Vincent. Vincent is assumed to be a boss monster, but is actually a glitch character who turns out be a comatose prototype player that couldn't be removed from the game.
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* AdaptationalSexualty: Cloud identifies as bisexual with a preference for men.

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* AdaptationalSexualty: AdaptationalSexuality: Cloud identifies as bisexual with a preference for men.

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* AdaptationalSexualty: Cloud identifies as bisexual with a preference for men.



* BiTheWay: Cloud identifies as bisexual with a preference for men.
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** Add [[spoiler: Killing Vincent to the things that piss him off, it being the main reason why he was able to kill the leader of the Vieravengers, namely because she killed Vincent]].

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** Add [[spoiler: Killing Vincent to the things that piss him off, it being the main reason why he was able to kill the leader of the Vieravengers, namely because she killed Vincent]].Vincent, making him so pissed that he ''snapped'' during the beat down they were giving him]].
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* IdentityAmnesia: After 15 years of no sleep, the only thing Vincent remembers of his old life is his name, his marksmanship, and that it is cold where his actual body lies.

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* IdentityAmnesia: After 15 years of no sleep, the only thing Vincent remembers of his old life is his name, his marksmanship, and that it is cold where his actual body lies. [[spoiler: a little later he remembers certain Turk signals, like making a distraction.]]

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* NoodleIncident: the Fanocalypse of Alexandria. [[spoiler: It involves Sephiroth.]]

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* NoodleIncident: the Fanocalypse of Alexandria. [[spoiler: It involves Sephiroth.involved Genesis shouting that Sephiroth was in Alexandria and him carving a path through the mob that followed.]]


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* PathOfMostResistance: Rainstorm is given the option early on by Red XIII to either [[PeninsulaOfPowerLeveling power level in the wastes]] or [[SuicideByCop die to one of the bounty hunters]] to make things easier on him. Rainstorm [[TakeAThirdOption chooses neither and goes down his path, bounty hunters and all]].
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** Hell, his first incident earned him his RedBaron honorific, the [[MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail Rabbit of Caerbannog]].

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** Hell, his first incident earned him his RedBaron honorific, the [[MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail [[Film/MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail Rabbit of Caerbannog]].



** Rainstorm gets the [[MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail Rabbit of Caerbannog]] for breaking the record of 'most player kills within an hour' and 'most kills as a low-level player'.

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** Rainstorm gets the [[MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail [[Film/MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail Rabbit of Caerbannog]] for breaking the record of 'most player kills within an hour' and 'most kills as a low-level player'.
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* OhCrap: Rainstorm gets one of these when [[spoiler: he realizes that Sonata is Tifa and could recognize him even in disguise]].
** Especially straight after when [[spoiler: Tifa blurts out his character name in a fit of laughter right as some Overseers walk into the bar]].
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* StopHavingFunGuys: Aerith accuses Tseng of being one due to his treating Terra Online as his information network as opposed to the game it's supposed to be.

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* StopHavingFunGuys: In-Universe; Aerith accuses Tseng of being one due to his treating Terra Online as his information network as opposed to the game it's supposed to be.
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** Once Aerith realizes that Vincent is a person she starts thinking that Cloud and him are a Dominant/Submissive couple that is hacking the game in order to be owner and pet. She finds it adorable, in a weird, kinky way.


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* FromNobodyToNightmare: Rainstorm.

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