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Set in RealLife albeit with ''VideoGame/SuperMarioBros'' and ''VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog'' characters co-existing (including those [[PatchworkFic from other continuities]] and {{original|character}} ones), the ''Mario'' and ''Sonic'' cast are grown-up married adults with families living their own lives on opposite sides of the United States[[note]]Brooklyn, New York City, and Burbank, California respectively[[/note]]. Every season, they are invited to partake in and represent America in the upcoming UsefulNotes/OlympicGames. Besides training and competing in sports, they [[LectureAsExposition exchange facts about]] the Olympics and the host country, and even meet real Olympic athletes.
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Set in RealLife albeit with ''VideoGame/SuperMarioBros'' ''Franchise/SuperMarioBros'' and ''VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog'' ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' characters co-existing (including those [[PatchworkFic from other continuities]] and {{original|character}} ones), the ''Mario'' and ''Sonic'' cast are grown-up married adults with families living their own lives on opposite sides of the United States[[note]]Brooklyn, New York City, and Burbank, California respectively[[/note]]. Every season, they are invited to partake in and represent America in the upcoming UsefulNotes/OlympicGames. Besides training and competing in sports, they [[LectureAsExposition exchange facts about]] the Olympics and the host country, and even meet real Olympic athletes.
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** Episode 1 uses significant dialogue from ''WesternAnimation/TheIncredibles'', such as Sonic stating how his son Sean got sent to the office for putting the tack on his teacher's chair and then sawing through the table.
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** Episode 1 uses significant dialogue from ''WesternAnimation/TheIncredibles'', ''Franchise/TheIncredibles'', such as Sonic stating how his son Sean got sent to the office for putting the tack on his teacher's chair and then sawing through the table.
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* ShoutOut: The "Honey, where's my supersuit" scene from ''WesternAnimation/TheIncredibles'', except with night-out clothes, and the same ''WesternAnimation/WreckItRalph'' dialogue used in ''Tokyo 2020'' Episode 109 is used many times.
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* ShoutOut: The "Honey, where's my supersuit" scene from ''WesternAnimation/TheIncredibles'', ''Franchise/TheIncredibles'', except with night-out clothes, and the same ''WesternAnimation/WreckItRalph'' dialogue used in ''Tokyo 2020'' Episode 109 is used many times.
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You can read the series [[https://www.deviantart.com/rahadiansulisetyo/gallery/67635238/msog-script here]].
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* PatchworkFic: While the ''Mario'' cast includes those from spin-off series, such as ''Franchise/DonkeyKong'', ''VideoGame/PaperMario'', ''VideoGame/MarioGolf'', and ''VideoGame/WarioWare'', the ''Sonic'' cast includes characters from the [[ComicBook/ArchieComicsSonicTheHedgehog Archie]], [[ComicBook/SonicTheComic StC]], [[WesternAnimation/SonicUnderground Underground]], [[Anime/SonicX X]], [[WesternAnimation/SonicBoom Boom]], and [[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogIDW IDW]] continuities, given the author is more of a ''Sonic'' fan.
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* PatchworkFic: While the ''Mario'' cast includes those from spin-off series, such as ''Franchise/DonkeyKong'', ''VideoGame/PaperMario'', ''VideoGame/MarioGolf'', and ''VideoGame/WarioWare'', the ''Sonic'' cast includes characters from the [[ComicBook/ArchieComicsSonicTheHedgehog [[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogArchieComics Archie]], [[ComicBook/SonicTheComic StC]], [[WesternAnimation/SonicUnderground Underground]], [[Anime/SonicX X]], [[WesternAnimation/SonicBoom Boom]], and [[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogIDW IDW]] continuities, given the author is more of a ''Sonic'' fan.
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** For some reason, Tails has ''two wives'', Cream and [[WesternAnimation/SonicBoom Zooey]], and ''two concubines'', [[Anime/SonicX Cosmo]] and [[ComicBook/ArchieComicsSonicTheHedgehog Fiona]]. Keep in mind this takes place in the USA, [[ArtisticLicenseLaw where polygamy is illegal]].
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** For some reason, Tails has ''two wives'', Cream and [[WesternAnimation/SonicBoom Zooey]], and ''two concubines'', [[Anime/SonicX Cosmo]] and [[ComicBook/ArchieComicsSonicTheHedgehog [[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogArchieComics Fiona]]. Keep in mind this takes place in the USA, [[ArtisticLicenseLaw where polygamy is illegal]].
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Read the series [[https://www.deviantart.com/rahadiansulisetyo/gallery/67635238/msog-script here]].
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** In Episode 74, Amy requests the same thing to the Japanese painter, except with the Film/PinkPanther Diamond. Amy, Cream, and Sally then [[PublicExposure implicitly pose naked]].
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** In Episode 74, Amy requests the same thing to of the Japanese painter, except with the Film/PinkPanther Diamond. Amy, Cream, and Sally then [[PublicExposure implicitly pose naked]].
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Set in RealLife albeit with ''VideoGame/SuperMarioBros'' and ''VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog'' characters co-existing (including those [[PatchworkFic from other continuities]] and {{original|character}} ones), the ''Mario'' and ''Sonic'' cast are grown-up married adults with families living their own lives on opposite sides of the United States[[note]]Brooklyn, New York City and Burbank, California respectively[[/note]]. Every season, they are invited to partake in and represent America in the upcoming UsefulNotes/OlympicGames. Besides training and competing in sports, they [[LectureAsExposition exchange facts about]] the Olympics and the host country, and even meet real Olympic athletes.
Essentially, it's the ''Mario & Sonic at the Olympic Games'' series retold as a real life SliceOfLife[=/=]Olympic Games story, coupled with extensive history/geography lessons on the Olympics, sports, and countries the Olympics are hosted in.
Essentially, it's the ''Mario & Sonic at the Olympic Games'' series retold as a real life SliceOfLife[=/=]Olympic Games story, coupled with extensive history/geography lessons on the Olympics, sports, and countries the Olympics are hosted in.
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Set in RealLife albeit with ''VideoGame/SuperMarioBros'' and ''VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog'' characters co-existing (including those [[PatchworkFic from other continuities]] and {{original|character}} ones), the ''Mario'' and ''Sonic'' cast are grown-up married adults with families living their own lives on opposite sides of the United States[[note]]Brooklyn, New York City City, and Burbank, California respectively[[/note]]. Every season, they are invited to partake in and represent America in the upcoming UsefulNotes/OlympicGames. Besides training and competing in sports, they [[LectureAsExposition exchange facts about]] the Olympics and the host country, and even meet real Olympic athletes.
Essentially, it's the ''Mario & Sonic at the Olympic Games'' series retold as areal life real-life SliceOfLife[=/=]Olympic Games story, coupled with extensive history/geography lessons on the Olympics, sports, and countries the Olympics are hosted in.
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** In ''Beijing 2022'', Sonic has another wife, Sally. Sally didn't even divorce from her husband Richard.
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** In ''Beijing 2022'', Sonic has another wife, Sally. Sally didn't even divorce from her husband Richard.
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** In Episode 74, Amy requests the same thing of the Japanese painter, except with the Film/PinkPanther Diamond. Amy, Cream, and Sally then [[PublicExposure implicitly pose naked]].
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* LandDownUnder: The Downunda Freedom Fighters live in Sydney, New South Wales, Australia, as usual.
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** In Episode 64, Mario's room at the Olympic Village is [[Creator/{{Pixar}} A113]].
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** In Episode 64, dialogue from ''Film/RushHour2'' is used, specifically Vanilla throwing out Aleena's Music/TheBeachBoys CD. Mario's room at the Olympic Village is [[Creator/{{Pixar}} A113]].
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** Episode 1 uses significant dialogue from ''WesternAnimation/TheIncredibles'', such as Sonic stating how his son Sean got sent to the office for putting the tack on his teacher's chair and then sawing through the table.
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** In Episodes 10 and 25, Mario and Peach have the "Honey, where's my supersuit" scene from ''WesternAnimation/TheIncredibles'', only with night-out clothes. Episode 13 does the same but with a Kritter.
** Episode 7 uses the same ''WesternAnimation/WreckItRalph'' dialogue used in ''Tokyo 2020'' Episode 109, except Creator/ChrisTucker is taking Calhoun's role. Heck, Episode 15 does the same ''3 times'' with different coaches.
** In Episodes 10 and 25, Mario and Peach have the "Honey, where's my supersuit" scene from ''WesternAnimation/TheIncredibles'', only with night-out clothes. Episode 13 does the same but with a Kritter.
** Episode 7 uses the same ''WesternAnimation/WreckItRalph'' dialogue used in ''Tokyo 2020'' Episode 109, except Creator/ChrisTucker is taking Calhoun's role. Heck, Episode 15 does the same ''3 times'' with different coaches.
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** In Episodes 10 and 25, Mario and Peach have theShoutOut: The "Honey, where's my supersuit" scene from ''WesternAnimation/TheIncredibles'', only except with night-out clothes. Episode 13 does the same but with a Kritter.
** Episode 7 usesclothes, and the same ''WesternAnimation/WreckItRalph'' dialogue used in ''Tokyo 2020'' Episode 109, except Creator/ChrisTucker 109 is taking Calhoun's role. Heck, Episode 15 does the same ''3 times'' with different coaches.used many times.
** In Episodes 10 and 25, Mario and Peach have the
** Episode 7 uses
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* PatchworkFic: While the ''Mario'' cast includes those from spin-off series, such as ''Franchise/DonkeyKong'', ''VideoGame/PaperMario'', and ''VideoGame/WarioWare'', the ''Sonic'' cast includes characters from the [[ComicBook/ArchieComicsSonicTheHedgehog Archie]], [[ComicBook/SonicTheComic StC]], [[WesternAnimation/SonicUnderground Underground]], [[Anime/SonicX X]], [[WesternAnimation/SonicBoom Boom]], and [[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogIDW IDW]] continuities, given the author is more of a ''Sonic'' fan.
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* PatchworkFic: While the ''Mario'' cast includes those from spin-off series, such as ''Franchise/DonkeyKong'', ''VideoGame/PaperMario'', ''VideoGame/MarioGolf'', and ''VideoGame/WarioWare'', the ''Sonic'' cast includes characters from the [[ComicBook/ArchieComicsSonicTheHedgehog Archie]], [[ComicBook/SonicTheComic StC]], [[WesternAnimation/SonicUnderground Underground]], [[Anime/SonicX X]], [[WesternAnimation/SonicBoom Boom]], and [[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogIDW IDW]] continuities, given the author is more of a ''Sonic'' fan.
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* ShoutOut: There's a habit of copying dialogue of scenes from famous films to the point of looking awkward.
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* ShoutOut: There's a habit of copying dialogue of scenes from famous films to the point of looking awkward.films.
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** In Episode 74, Amy requests the same thing of the Japanese painter, except with the Film/PinkPanther Diamond. Amy, Cream, and Sally then [[PublicExposure pose naked]], or so it's impied.
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** In Episode 74, Amy requests the same thing of the Japanese painter, except with the Film/PinkPanther Diamond. Amy, Cream, and Sally then [[PublicExposure implicitly pose naked]], or so it's impied.naked]].
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** Episode 7 and 15 use the same ''WesternAnimation/WreckItRalph'' dialogue used in ''Tokyo 2020'' Episode 109, except Creator/ChrisTucker, Phillip Schoch, and Anna Fenninger are taking Calhoun's role.
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** Episode 7 and 15 use uses the same ''WesternAnimation/WreckItRalph'' dialogue used in ''Tokyo 2020'' Episode 109, except Creator/ChrisTucker, Phillip Schoch, and Anna Fenninger are Creator/ChrisTucker is taking Calhoun's role.role. Heck, Episode 15 does the same ''3 times'' with different coaches.
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** Episode 7 and 15 use the same ''WesternAnimation/WreckItRalph'' dialogue used in ''Tokyo 2020'' Episode 109, except Creator/ChrisTucker and Phillip Schoch are taking Calhoun's role.
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** Episode 7 and 15 use the same ''WesternAnimation/WreckItRalph'' dialogue used in ''Tokyo 2020'' Episode 109, except Creator/ChrisTucker and Creator/ChrisTucker, Phillip Schoch Schoch, and Anna Fenninger are taking Calhoun's role.
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** For some reason, Tails has ''two wives'', Cream and [[WesternAnimation/SonicBoom Zooey]], and ''two concubines'', [[Anime/SonicX Cosmo]] and [[ComicBook/ArchieComicsSonicTheHedgehog Fiona]].
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** For some reason, Tails has ''two wives'', Cream and [[WesternAnimation/SonicBoom Zooey]], and ''two concubines'', [[Anime/SonicX Cosmo]] and [[ComicBook/ArchieComicsSonicTheHedgehog Fiona]]. Keep in mind this takes place in the USA, [[ArtisticLicenseLaw where polygamy is illegal]].
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* ShoutOut: There's a habit of copying dialogue of scenes from famous films.
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* ShoutOut: There's a habit of copying dialogue of scenes from famous films.films to the point of looking awkward.
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** Episode 7 uses the same ''WesternAnimation/WreckItRalph'' dialogue used in ''Tokyo 2020'' Episode 109, except Creator/ChrisTucker is taking Calhoun's role.
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** Episode 7 uses and 15 use the same ''WesternAnimation/WreckItRalph'' dialogue used in ''Tokyo 2020'' Episode 109, except Creator/ChrisTucker is and Phillip Schoch are taking Calhoun's role.
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** In Episodes 10 and 25, Mario and Peach have the "Honey, where's my supersuit" scene from ''WesternAnimation/TheIncredibles'', only with night-out clothes.
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** In Episodes 10 and 25, Mario and Peach have the "Honey, where's my supersuit" scene from ''WesternAnimation/TheIncredibles'', only with night-out clothes. Episode 13 does the same but with a Kritter.
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* LectureAsExposition: ''Very often''. Characters will often go spitting out facts about the Olympics or the host country non-stop, making many segments read like an encyclopedia.
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* LectureAsExposition: ''Very often''. Characters will often go spitting out facts about the Olympics or the host country non-stop, non-stop as if they read encyclopedias too much, making many segments read like an encyclopedia.encyclopedia itself.
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* PatchworkFic: While the ''Mario'' cast includes those from spin-off series, such as ''Franchise/DonkeyKong'', ''VideoGame/PaperMario'', and ''VideoGame/WarioWare'', the ''Sonic'' cast includes characters from the [[ComicBook/ArchieComicsSonicTheHedgehog Archie]], [[ComicBook/SonicTheComic StC]], [[WesternAnimation/SonicUnderground Underground]], [[Anime/SonicX X]], [[WesternAnimation/SonicBoom Boom]], and [[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogIDW IDW]] continuities.
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* PatchworkFic: While the ''Mario'' cast includes those from spin-off series, such as ''Franchise/DonkeyKong'', ''VideoGame/PaperMario'', and ''VideoGame/WarioWare'', the ''Sonic'' cast includes characters from the [[ComicBook/ArchieComicsSonicTheHedgehog Archie]], [[ComicBook/SonicTheComic StC]], [[WesternAnimation/SonicUnderground Underground]], [[Anime/SonicX X]], [[WesternAnimation/SonicBoom Boom]], and [[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogIDW IDW]] continuities.continuities, given the author is more of a ''Sonic'' fan.
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* LectureAsExposition: ''Very often''. Characters will often go spitting out facts about the Olympics or host country non-stop, making many segments read like an encyclopedia.
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* LectureAsExposition: ''Very often''. Characters will often go spitting out facts about the Olympics or the host country non-stop, making many segments read like an encyclopedia.
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** And then in ''Beijing 2022'', Sonic has another wife, Sally. Sally didn't even divorce from her husband Richard.
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** And then in In ''Beijing 2022'', Sonic has another wife, Sally. Sally didn't even divorce from her husband Richard.
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*** In Episode 74, Amy requests the same thing to the Japanese painter, except with the Film/PinkPanther Diamond. Amy, Cream, and Sally then [[PublicExposure pose implicitly naked]].
** Shown in Episode 64, Mario's room at the Olympic Village is [[Creator/{{Pixar}} A113]].
** Part of the dialogue in Episode 109 is copied from ''WesternAnimation/WreckItRalph'', specially Ralph starting on the Hero's Duty game.
---> '''Referee''': Alright, now listen up ‘cause I’m only gonna say this once. Fear is a four letter word, ladies. If you wanna go pee-pee in your big boy slacks, keep it to yourself! It’s make-your-mamas-proud time!
** Shown in Episode 64, Mario's room at the Olympic Village is [[Creator/{{Pixar}} A113]].
** Part of the dialogue in Episode 109 is copied from ''WesternAnimation/WreckItRalph'', specially Ralph starting on the Hero's Duty game.
---> '''Referee''': Alright, now listen up ‘cause I’m only gonna say this once. Fear is a four letter word, ladies. If you wanna go pee-pee in your big boy slacks, keep it to yourself! It’s make-your-mamas-proud time!
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** Part of the dialogue in Episode 109 is copied from ''WesternAnimation/WreckItRalph'',
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** Episode 7 also uses the same ''WesternAnimation/WreckItRalph'' dialogue used in ''Tokyo 2020'' Episode 109, except Creator/ChrisTucker is taking Calhoun's role.
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** Episode 7 also uses the same ''WesternAnimation/WreckItRalph'' dialogue used in ''Tokyo 2020'' Episode 109, except Creator/ChrisTucker is taking Calhoun's role.
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** In Episode 25, Mario and Peach have the "Honey, where's my supersuit" scene from ''WesternAnimation/TheIncredibles'', only with night-out clothes.
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** In Episode Episodes 10 and 25, Mario and Peach have the "Honey, where's my supersuit" scene from ''WesternAnimation/TheIncredibles'', only with night-out clothes.
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Set in RealLife albeit with ''VideoGame/SuperMarioBros'' and ''VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog'' characters co-existing (including those [[PatchworkFic from other continuities]] and {{original|character}} ones), the ''Mario'' and ''Sonic'' cast are grown-up married adults with families living their own lives on opposite sides of the United States[[notes]]Brooklyn, New York City and Burbank, California respectively[[/notes]]. Every season, they are invited to partake in and represent America in the upcoming UsefulNotes/OlympicGames. Besides training and competing in sports, they [[LectureAsExposition exchange facts about]] the Olympics and the host country, and even meet real Olympic athletes.
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Set in RealLife albeit with ''VideoGame/SuperMarioBros'' and ''VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog'' characters co-existing (including those [[PatchworkFic from other continuities]] and {{original|character}} ones), the ''Mario'' and ''Sonic'' cast are grown-up married adults with families living their own lives on opposite sides of the United States[[notes]]Brooklyn, States[[note]]Brooklyn, New York City and Burbank, California respectively[[/notes]].respectively[[/note]]. Every season, they are invited to partake in and represent America in the upcoming UsefulNotes/OlympicGames. Besides training and competing in sports, they [[LectureAsExposition exchange facts about]] the Olympics and the host country, and even meet real Olympic athletes.
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Set in RealLife albeit with ''VideoGame/SuperMarioBros'' and ''VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog'' characters co-existing (including those [[PatchworkFic from other continuities]] and {{original|character}} ones), the ''Mario'' and ''Sonic'' cast are grown-up married adults with families living their own lives on opposite sides of the United States. Every season, they are invited to partake in and represent America in the upcoming UsefulNotes/OlympicGames. Besides training and competing in sports, they [[LectureAsExposition exchange facts about]] the Olympics and the host country, and even meet real Olympic athletes.
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Set in RealLife albeit with ''VideoGame/SuperMarioBros'' and ''VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog'' characters co-existing (including those [[PatchworkFic from other continuities]] and {{original|character}} ones), the ''Mario'' and ''Sonic'' cast are grown-up married adults with families living their own lives on opposite sides of the United States.States[[notes]]Brooklyn, New York City and Burbank, California respectively[[/notes]]. Every season, they are invited to partake in and represent America in the upcoming UsefulNotes/OlympicGames. Besides training and competing in sports, they [[LectureAsExposition exchange facts about]] the Olympics and the host country, and even meet real Olympic athletes.
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