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Has since been unofficially canceled as {{Tropers/wille179}} has left the fandom
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* AndIMustScream: Twilight's tree. Despite having been hollowed out and filled with sources of [[PrimalFear fire]], the tree is still very much alive. Only Jack can hear it's mad screaming.
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* AndIMustScream: Twilight's tree. Despite having been hollowed out and filled with sources of [[PrimalFear fire]], the tree is still very much alive. Only Jack can hear it's its mad screaming.
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** "Ok, imagine both the literal and the innuendo-filled meaning of what I'm about to say: A bee flies towards my flower. It lands, and its head descends into the depths of my flower. The pollen it's carrying gets deposited. That pollen makes my flower grow a fruit with seeds that sprout into more trees. Now, if you imagined a stallion and a mare doing it, congratulations; you got the point. See, for me, a bee landing in in a flower is exactly like you saying a [redacted] landing in a [redacted]. Fluttershy is a giant, flying bee; Fluttershy is a giant, flying di-"
* {{Planimal}}: Timberwolves.
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* PrimalFear: Fire. Jack, being a tree, is ''terrified'' of fire. As Applejack puts it, "Trees can't run away."
** It's hinted that all trees are scared of fire.
** It's hinted that all trees are scared of fire.
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* PrimalFear: Fire. Jack, being a tree, is ''terrified'' of fire. As Applejack puts it, "Trees can't run away."
**" It's hinted that all trees are scared of fire.fire... for obvious enough reasons.
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* WhenTreesAttack: Jack turns downright murderous if an intelligent creature enters his grove. He managed to control himself and not hurt Rarity, but Tirek was not so lucky.
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* WhenTreesAttack: Jack turns downright murderous if an intelligent creature enters his grove. He managed to control himself and not hurt Rarity, but Tirek was not so lucky.lucky.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/289951/lupine-tree Lupine Tree]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' FanFiction by {{Tropers/wille179}}. It is the story of [[PunnyName Lumber Jack]], a [[{{Planimal}} timberwolf]] who gains the intelligence of a human to become [[PlantPerson something more]].
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/289951/lupine-tree Lupine Tree]] Tree]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' FanFiction by {{Tropers/wille179}}. It is the story of [[PunnyName Lumber Jack]], a [[{{Planimal}} timberwolf]] who gains the intelligence of a human to become [[PlantPerson something more]].
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->''I think, therefore I am.''
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->''"I think, therefore I am.
* BlobMonster: Cheif Hiram of Eezdraug. He's an entire ''lake'' of slime, and has boats and such sailing his surface.
* DireBeast: Monsters inside the Everfree Exclusion Zone are big. ''Very Big.'' The orochi, as Jack refers to the eight-headed snake, has eyes large enough to fit two of his puppets inside a single socket.
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* WhenTreesAttack: Jack turns downright murderous if an intelligent creature enters his grove. He managed to control himself and not hurt Rarity, but Tirek was not so lucky.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Cheif Hiram. When he wished to talk to Muzen and Jack, he created a minotaur-like body out of his slime.[[note]]This was just a tiny portion of his total mass.[[/note]]
* WhenTreesAttack: Jack turns downright murderous if an intelligent creature enters his grove. He managed to control himself and not hurt Rarity, but Tirek was not so lucky.
* WhenTreesAttack: Jack turns downright murderous if an intelligent creature enters his grove. He managed to control himself and not hurt Rarity, but Tirek was not so lucky.
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* OrderVersusChaos: Jack bats for team Chaos. Part of his soul was saved by Discord, and Jack ''is'' a chaos demon. [[spoiler:And, as it turns out, the Tree of Harmony was willing to attack Jack to fix the "chaotic hole in his heart," whatever it meant by that.]]
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* {{Invisibility}}: Clear Glass is a unicorn who can do this with magic. It turns out that his ability is useless against Jack, who could smell him and see his ''hoofprints in the grass.''
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* GlowingEyes: Slightly deconstructed. As a timberwolf, every single one of Jack's puppets has glowing eye sockets. Jack wishes for real eyes just so he can roll them.
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* OurCentaursAreDifferent: Jack makes a wooden wolf-centaur using the blood of Tirek.
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* HiveMind: Jack's puppets. Every timberwolf tree's puppet collection acts like a HiveMind, but Jack's collection is by far the largest.
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* BrandishmentBluff: Downplayed. Jack's Taur puppet draws a functional but crudely made bow and aims it at Clear Glass, but knows that the bow is likely to break if he draws it to full strength. His aim is terrible as well, according to his [[FirstPersonPerspective narration.]]
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* FirstPersonPerspective: The story is written in strict first person. Jack narrates as if he knew there was an audience, but he never acknowledges them.
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** Ok, imagine both the literal and the innuendo-filled meaning of what I'm about to say: A bee flies towards my flower. It lands, and its head descends into the depths of my flower. The pollen it's carrying gets deposited. That pollen makes my flower grow a fruit with seeds that sprout into more trees. Now, if you imagined a stallion and a mare doing it, congratulations; you got the point. See, for me, a bee landing in in a flower is exactly like you saying a [redacted] landing in a [redacted]. Fluttershy is a giant, flying bee; Fluttershy is a giant, flying di-"
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** Ok, "Ok, imagine both the literal and the innuendo-filled meaning of what I'm about to say: A bee flies towards my flower. It lands, and its head descends into the depths of my flower. The pollen it's carrying gets deposited. That pollen makes my flower grow a fruit with seeds that sprout into more trees. Now, if you imagined a stallion and a mare doing it, congratulations; you got the point. See, for me, a bee landing in in a flower is exactly like you saying a [redacted] landing in a [redacted]. Fluttershy is a giant, flying bee; Fluttershy is a giant, flying di-"
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* OurDemonsAreDifferent: Discord reveals that Jack is ''technically'' a demon by Equestria's definition. What this actually means is unclear, but it was enough to make Princess Celestia nervous.[[note]]A fan pointed out, and then was later confirmed by the author, that Lumber Jack takes inspiration from a [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jubokko Jubokko.]][[/note]]
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* OurDemonsAreDifferent: Discord reveals that Jack is ''technically'' a demon by Equestria's definition. What this actually means is unclear, but it was enough to make Princess Celestia nervous.[[note]]A fan pointed out, and then was later confirmed by the author, that Lumber Jack takes inspiration from a [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jubokko Jubokko.]][[/note]]
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