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* TheUnpronounceable: One of Ron's cousins was named after the sound a whale makes when it attacks, so it can be safely inferred their name is this.
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* TheUnpronounceable: One of Ron's cousins was named after the sound a whale makes when it attacks, so it can be safely inferred their name is this.this.
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You can read the text version [[https://www.wattpad.com/story/246772166-harry-potter-and-no-one-in-particular here]].
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* SpyFiction: Lots of hushed conversations, and Harry's boss wants him to infiltrate the [[spoiler: reformed]] Death Eaters. Definitely the "stale beer" flavor.
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* SpyFiction: Lots of hushed conversations, and Harry's boss wants him to infiltrate the [[spoiler: reformed]] Death Eaters. Definitely the "stale beer" flavor.flavor.
* TheUnpronounceable: One of Ron's cousins was named after the sound a whale makes when it attacks, so it can be safely inferred their name is this.
* TheUnpronounceable: One of Ron's cousins was named after the sound a whale makes when it attacks, so it can be safely inferred their name is this.
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The playlist can be found [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q1ES4VZUIzw&list=PLexCibCDw1jfyQDkMR4ddbDgYpunaLKro here]]. Updates more-or-less weekly.
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The playlist can be found [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q1ES4VZUIzw&list=PLexCibCDw1jfyQDkMR4ddbDgYpunaLKro here]]. Updates more-or-less weekly.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: In contrast to Rowling's child novels, this fanfic is a gritty and somewhat vulgar Lynchian Noir. Aside from descriptions of depressive and washed up mood of characters, there are quite a few erotic scenes and the characters are considerably more foul-mouthed as well.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: In contrast to Rowling's child young adult novels, this fanfic is a gritty and somewhat vulgar Lynchian Noir. Aside from descriptions of depressive and washed up mood of characters, there are quite a few erotic scenes and the characters are considerably more foul-mouthed as well.
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* RememberTheNewGuy: Most of the new characters are given sufficient context for their relation to the canon characters (Mavis is Harry's assistant, for instance), but Yvette is suddenly introduced partway into chapter 3 as though Harry always knew her, even though there's no indication of why she would, especially given she is later revealed to have been [[spoiler:trapped inside Harry's glass rabbit for years before he inadvertently freed her.]]
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* RememberTheNewGuy: Most of the new characters are given sufficient context for their relation to the canon characters (Mavis is Harry's assistant, for instance), but Yvette is suddenly introduced partway into chapter 3 as though Harry always knew her, even though there's no indication of why she he would, especially given she is later revealed to have been [[spoiler:trapped inside Harry's glass rabbit for years before he inadvertently freed her.]]
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* RememberTheNewGuy: Most of the new characters are given sufficient context for their relation to the canon characters (Mavis is Harry's assistant, for instance), but Yvette is suddenly introduced partway into chapter 3 as though Harry always knew her, even though there's no indication of why she would, especially given she is later revealed to have been [[spoiler:trapped inside Harry's glass rabbit for years before he inadvertently freed her.]]
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It's 2021. The wizarding world is incorporating Muggle media and technology, and the Ministry of Magic is experimenting with mixed wizard-Muggle settlements. Imagine, if you will, an older ''Franchise/HarryPotter'', middle-aged now, dealing with an [[FantasticDrug addiction to magic potions]], his dead-end job at the Ministry of Magic, his teenage children, his [[SassySecretary snarky assistant]] Mavis, [[HollywoodMidLifeCrisis his midlife crisis]], borderline [[TheAlcoholic alcoholism]], the ongoing wars, and the supposed death of one Hermione Granger, the suspicion that an old friend has become the new Dark Lord, that everyone has secrets and plans and secret plans... and how about this mysterious woman whose been plaguing Harry Potter's dreams, the one with a [[AcheyScars crescent moon scar upon her cheek]]? Now imagine it was all in the style of a Main/FilmNoir as written by Creator/DavidLynch. That is ''[[TitleDrop Harry Potter And No One In Particular]]''.
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It's 2021. The wizarding world is incorporating Muggle media and technology, and the Ministry of Magic is experimenting with mixed wizard-Muggle settlements. Imagine, if you will, an older ''Franchise/HarryPotter'', middle-aged now, dealing with an [[FantasticDrug addiction to magic potions]], his dead-end job at the Ministry of Magic, his teenage children, his [[SassySecretary snarky assistant]] Mavis, [[HollywoodMidLifeCrisis his midlife crisis]], borderline [[TheAlcoholic alcoholism]], the ongoing wars, and the supposed death of one Hermione Granger, the suspicion that an old friend has become the new Dark Lord, that everyone has [[BreadEggsBreadedEggs secrets and plans and secret plans...plans]]... and how about this mysterious woman whose been plaguing Harry Potter's dreams, the one with a [[AcheyScars crescent moon scar upon her cheek]]? Now imagine it was all in the style of a Main/FilmNoir as written by Creator/DavidLynch. That is ''[[TitleDrop Harry Potter And No One In Particular]]''.
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* AddledAddict: Harry is heavily addicted to "[[GRatedDrug magic potions]]", and the effects of the potions are partly resposible for the MindScrew-iness of the fic, while another is the magic and an autoimmune disorder shared by a few characters.
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* AddledAddict: Harry is heavily addicted to "[[GRatedDrug magic potions]]", and the effects of the potions are partly resposible responsible for the MindScrew-iness of the fic, while another is the magic and an autoimmune disorder shared by a few characters.
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* BackFromTheDead: Voldemort. [[AlternateTimeline No one seems to find this odd]]. He's rather nice now actually.
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%% * BackFromTheDead: Voldemort. [[AlternateTimeline No one seems to find this odd]]. He's rather nice now actually.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: In constrast to Rowling's child novels, this fanfic is a gritty and somewhat vulgar Lynchian Noir. Aside from descriptions of depressive and washed up mood of characters, there are quite a few erotic scenes and the characters are considerably more foul-mouthed as well.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: In constrast contrast to Rowling's child novels, this fanfic is a gritty and somewhat vulgar Lynchian Noir. Aside from descriptions of depressive and washed up mood of characters, there are quite a few erotic scenes and the characters are considerably more foul-mouthed as well.
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* MeaningfulName / {{Troll}}: The two possible interpretations of Soma's "Harry Dursley" introduction.
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* HomophobicHateCrime: As opposed to Muggle Britain in 2021, where homosexuality is a non-issue to most people, the wizarding community is suffering a rising tide of homophobia, and [[NoodleIncident something - heavily implied to be unspeakably unpleasant - was done to Billy Boglan]].
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* HomophobicHateCrime: As opposed to Muggle Britain in 2021, where homosexuality is a non-issue to most people, the wizarding community is suffering a rising tide of homophobia, and [[NoodleIncident something ''something'' - heavily implied to be unspeakably unpleasant - was done to Billy Boglan]].
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* HomophobicHateCrime: As opposed to Muggle Britain in 2021, where homosexuality is a non-issue to most people, the wizarding community is suffering a rising tide of homophobia, and [[NoodleIncident something - heavily implied to be unspeakably unpleasant - was done to Billy Boglan]].
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In chapter seven, Harry's thoughts indicate that 2020 is the previous year.
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It's 2020. The wizarding world is incorporating Muggle media and technology, and the Ministry of Magic is experimenting with mixed wizard-Muggle settlements. Imagine, if you will, an older ''Franchise/HarryPotter'', middle-aged now, dealing with an [[FantasticDrug addiction to magic potions]], his dead-end job at the Ministry of Magic, his teenage children, his [[SassySecretary snarky assistant]] Mavis, [[HollywoodMidLifeCrisis his midlife crisis]], borderline [[TheAlcoholic alcoholism]], the ongoing wars, and the supposed death of one Hermione Granger, the suspicion that an old friend has become the new Dark Lord, that everyone has secrets and plans and secret plans... and how about this mysterious woman whose been plaguing Harry Potter's dreams, the one with a [[AcheyScars crescent moon scar upon her cheek]]? Now imagine it was all in the style of a Main/FilmNoir as written by Creator/DavidLynch. That is ''[[TitleDrop Harry Potter And No One In Particular]]''.
Unlike previous entries in the canon of computer-written Harry Potter fanfiction, ''No One in Particular'' was written mostly with the help of [=GP2T=], rather than Botnik. Co-written and edited by Smashiell, best known for his [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=avOsvIWJlQk&list=PLexCibCDw1jf1chZwl_LYcUeo0i-zMjtG&index=1 animated adaptation of Portrait of Ash]]. Also notable for being, unlike its siblings, almost coherent. [[MindScrew Almost.]]
Unlike previous entries in the canon of computer-written Harry Potter fanfiction, ''No One in Particular'' was written mostly with the help of [=GP2T=], rather than Botnik. Co-written and edited by Smashiell, best known for his [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=avOsvIWJlQk&list=PLexCibCDw1jf1chZwl_LYcUeo0i-zMjtG&index=1 animated adaptation of Portrait of Ash]]. Also notable for being, unlike its siblings, almost coherent. [[MindScrew Almost.]]
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It's 2020.2021. The wizarding world is incorporating Muggle media and technology, and the Ministry of Magic is experimenting with mixed wizard-Muggle settlements. Imagine, if you will, an older ''Franchise/HarryPotter'', middle-aged now, dealing with an [[FantasticDrug addiction to magic potions]], his dead-end job at the Ministry of Magic, his teenage children, his [[SassySecretary snarky assistant]] Mavis, [[HollywoodMidLifeCrisis his midlife crisis]], borderline [[TheAlcoholic alcoholism]], the ongoing wars, and the supposed death of one Hermione Granger, the suspicion that an old friend has become the new Dark Lord, that everyone has secrets and plans and secret plans... and how about this mysterious woman whose been plaguing Harry Potter's dreams, the one with a [[AcheyScars crescent moon scar upon her cheek]]? Now imagine it was all in the style of a Main/FilmNoir as written by Creator/DavidLynch. That is ''[[TitleDrop Harry Potter And No One In Particular]]''.
Unlike previous entries in the canon of computer-written Harry Potter fanfiction, ''No One in Particular'' was written mostly with the help of[=GP2T=], [=GPT2=], rather than Botnik. Co-written and edited by Smashiell, best known for his [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=avOsvIWJlQk&list=PLexCibCDw1jf1chZwl_LYcUeo0i-zMjtG&index=1 animated adaptation of Portrait of Ash]]. Also notable for being, unlike its siblings, almost coherent. [[MindScrew Almost.]]
Unlike previous entries in the canon of computer-written Harry Potter fanfiction, ''No One in Particular'' was written mostly with the help of
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* BadImpressionists: For whatever reason, Voldemort presents his cooking show ''Voldemort's Lamb Farm'' while doing a bad impersonation of Hagrid.
* BilingualBonus: When we learn Mavis went to Beauxbatons, Harry asks if she speaks French. She proceeds to demonstrate, telling Harry, in several paragraphs of perfect French, about her time at Beauxbatons, during which she spent most of her time crying about merciless bullying for being tall, thin and English. This has little bearing on the plot, if any.
* BilingualBonus: When we learn Mavis went to Beauxbatons, Harry asks if she speaks French. She proceeds to demonstrate, telling Harry, in several paragraphs of perfect French, about her time at Beauxbatons, during which she spent most of her time crying about merciless bullying for being tall, thin and English. This has little bearing on the plot, if any.
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* BadImpressionists: For whatever reason, Voldemort presents his cooking show ''Voldemort's Lamb Farm'' while doing a bad impersonation of Hagrid.
Hagrid. It makes just as much sense in context.
* BilingualBonus: When we learn Mavis went to Beauxbatons, Harry asks if she speaks French. She proceeds to demonstrate, telling Harry, in several paragraphs of perfect (untranslated) French, about her time at Beauxbatons, during which she spent most of her time crying about merciless bullying for being tall, thin and English. This has little bearing on the plot, if any.
* BilingualBonus: When we learn Mavis went to Beauxbatons, Harry asks if she speaks French. She proceeds to demonstrate, telling Harry, in several paragraphs of perfect (untranslated) French, about her time at Beauxbatons, during which she spent most of her time crying about merciless bullying for being tall, thin and English. This has little bearing on the plot, if any.
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* CasualKink: Neville and Hannah are engaged in an "open marriage" and do not shy away from polyamory, even trying to involve other people in their endeavors.
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** Neville and Hannah are engaged in an "open marriage" and do not shy away from polyamory, even trying to involve other people in theirendeavors.endeavors.
** Harry apparently has a thing for tavern wenches, reading a pornographic magazine with that theme in public.
** Neville and Hannah are engaged in an "open marriage" and do not shy away from polyamory, even trying to involve other people in their
** Harry apparently has a thing for tavern wenches, reading a pornographic magazine with that theme in public.