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* BadassInCharge: In chapter six, the Dragon Corporation gets attacked by a group of mercenary griffons, Pen Dragon takes the prototype weapon he's working on and uses it to counter the attack.
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* AndManGrewProud: Two thousand years into the future and the legend of the four alicorns has faded into just a myth.
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* FishOutOfTemporalWater: Celestia has been gone for two thousand years, so naturaly she has no idea how the modern world works, much to Watcher's dismany.
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* FishOutOfTemporalWater: Celestia has been gone for two thousand years, so naturaly she has no idea how the modern world works, much to Watcher's dismany.dismay.
* LegendFadesToMyth: Two thousand years into the future, the legend of the four alicorns has faded into just a myth.
* LegendFadesToMyth: Two thousand years into the future, the legend of the four alicorns has faded into just a myth.
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** Pen Dragon suffers from this in the aftermath of the attack, justified in the form of RealityEnsues.
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** Pen Dragon suffers from this in the aftermath of the attack, justified in the form of RealityEnsues.realistic consequences.
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* RealityEnsues: [[spoiler:The attack on the Dragon Corp. doesn't go without consequences, the ADS, the company that offer security guards to Pen Dragon, terminates it's contract with Pen and a lawsuit is filled by ADS and the families of the guards that where killed during the attack. To make matters worse, there's large stock drops as a result of half of the investors quitting, the authorities has divisive opinion about Pen Dragon killing the White Talons, and this strains Pen's friendship with Cobalt Banks.]]
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* WhatMeasureIsAMook: [[spoiler:The attack on the Dragon Corp. doesn't go without consequences, the ADS, the company that offer security guards to Pen Dragon, terminates it's contract with Pen and a lawsuit is filled by ADS and the families of the guards that where killed during the attack. To make matters worse, there's large stock drops as a result of half of the investors quitting, the authorities has divisive opinion about Pen Dragon killing the White Talons, and this strains Pen's friendship with Cobalt Banks.]]
