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--> [[ItCanThink It is self-aware. It is intelligent.]]
--> Aethon knows no fear. But staring into the monster’s burning pupils, he feels unease stirring in his twin hearts.
--> [[ItCanThink It is self-aware. It is intelligent.]]
--> Aethon knows no fear. But staring into the monster’s burning pupils, he feels unease stirring in his twin hearts.
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* CarryABigStick: Sergeant Braellin owns a colossal Thunder hammer; mixed with him being an assault marine, he's more than enough of a match for his enemies. Jaune calls it the biggest hammer he has ever seen, while Nora {{squee}}s just by looking at it and is overjoyed when she holds it for Braellin.
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* DropTheHammer: Sergeant Braellin owns a Thunder hammer mixed that with being an assault marine and he's more than enough of a match for his enemies. Jaune calls it the biggest hammer he has ever seen, while Nora {{squee}}s just by looking at it and is overjoyed when she holds it for Braellin.
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: Venerable Dreadnaught Vaspasian laughs when Ruby gushes all over the weaponry he carries.
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* DropTheHammer: Sergeant Braellin owns a Thunder hammer mixed that with being an assault marine and he's more than enough of a match for his enemies. Jaune calls it the biggest hammer he has ever seen, while Nora {{squee}}s just by looking at it and is overjoyed when she holds it for Braellin.
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* DropTheHammer: Sergeant Braellin owns a Thunder hammer mixed that with being an assault marine and he's more than enough of a match for his enemies. Jaune calls it the biggest hammer he has ever seen, while Nora squees just by looking at it and is overjoyed when she holds it for Braellin.
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* HeroicLineage: Far more then most other chapters The Lamenters are to a man extremely heroic. This is because of how close they are to the mindset of their Primarch, Sanguinius the Great Angel. The Black Rage, a kind of madness the Lamenters can be taken by, essentially transforms the afflicted into a shadow of Sanguinius complete with some of his memories and power.
--> (Battle of Terra) Sanguinius facing a horde of daemons with civilians behind him: "These are the Emperor's people..."
--> (Battle of Vale) Lamenter afflicted by Black Rage facing a horde of Grimm with civilians behind him: ''"...And you shall not have them!"''
--> (Battle of Terra) Sanguinius facing a horde of daemons with civilians behind him: "These are the Emperor's people..."
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* HeroicLineage: Far more then than most other chapters The chapters, the Lamenters are to a man extremely heroic. This is because of how close they are to the mindset of their Primarch, Sanguinius the Great Angel. The Black Rage, a kind of madness the Lamenters can be taken by, essentially transforms the afflicted into a shadow of Sanguinius complete with some of his memories and power.
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* LiteralMinded: Downplayed, but sometimes the metaphors used by the Hunters are taken too literally by the Marines.
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* MistakenIdentity: [[spoiler:In the throes of the Black Rage, Malakim Phoros momentarily mistakes Jaune for Rogal Dorn]].
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* MistakenIdentity: [[spoiler:In the throes of the Black Rage, Malakim Phoros momentarily mistakes Jaune for Rogal Dorn]].Dorn.]]
* {{Squee}}: Ruby is in a semi-permanent status of this as she keeps learning more and more about the weaponry the Astartes and Imperial Guard have brought.
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--> '''Cyril:''' "That's so frakking adamantium."
--> '''Cyril:''' "That's so frakking adamantium."
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* TheWorldIsJustAwesome: Eveline, Oobleck, and Port can't help but tear up at the sight of Remnant from space.
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--> (Battle of Vale) Lamenter afflicted by Black Rage facing a horde of Grimm with civilians behind him: ''"...And you shall not have them!"''
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--> (Battle of Vale) Lamenter afflicted by Black Rage facing a horde of Grimm with civilians behind him: ''"...And you shall not have them!"''
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* TheCallTwinksYou: As part of their attempt at fostering Imperium-Remnant relations, the Lamenters decide to give the Remnant hunters (Team RWBY being chosen for this) gifts. They let the girls have their pick of the Imperial Guard's wargear, considering that they have more gear than they do people to wield them. Astartes wargear, however, are off-limits.
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* SupernaturalAid: As part of their attempt at fostering Imperium-Remnant relations, the Lamenters decide to give the Remnant hunters (Team RWBY being chosen for this) gifts. They let the girls have their pick of the Imperial Guard's wargear, considering that they have more gear than they do people to wield them. Astartes wargear, however, are off-limits.
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* HeroicLineage: Far more then most other chapters The Lamenters are to a man extremely heroic. This is because of how close they are to the mindset of their Primarch, Sanguinius the Great Angel. The Black Rage, a kind of madness the Lamenters can be taken by, essentially transforms the afflicted into a shadow of Sanguinius complete with some of his memories and power.
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* InTheBlood: Far more then most other chapters The Lamenters are to a man extremely heroic. This is because of how close they are to the mindset of their Primarch, Sanguinius the Great Angel. The Black Rage, a kind of madness the Lamenters can be taken by, essentially transforms the afflicted into a shadow of Sanguinius complete with some of his memories and power.
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** Two in quick sucession. The Edler Beringel inflicts this on both Team RWBY and the space marines. It only gets hurt due to it's own overconfidence and that only really ticked it off. [[spoiler:Ancient Vaspasian, a Relic Contemptor Dreadnought, quickly returns the favor killing the Elder Grimm with ease.]]
** Over 180 White Fang terrorists equipped with heavy weapons, hiding behind heavy barricades, and lead by Roman Torchwick try to stop a squad of Space Marines. [[spoiler:The Astartes fall into the Thirst and slaughter them without taking a single casualty.]]
** Over 180 White Fang terrorists equipped with heavy weapons, hiding behind heavy barricades, and lead by Roman Torchwick try to stop a squad of Space Marines. [[spoiler:The Astartes fall into the Thirst and slaughter them without taking a single casualty.]]
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** Two in quick sucession. succession. The Edler Elder Beringel inflicts this on both Team RWBY and the space marines. It only gets hurt due to it's own overconfidence and that only really ticked it off. [[spoiler:Ancient Vaspasian, a Relic Contemptor Dreadnought, quickly returns the favor killing the Elder Grimm with ease.]]
** Over 180 White Fang terrorists equipped with heavy weapons, hiding behind heavy barricades, and lead by Roman Torchwick try to stop a squad of Space Marines. [[spoiler:The Astartes fall into the Thirst and slaughter them without taking a singlecasualty.casualty like only the sons of the Angel can do.]]
** Over 180 White Fang terrorists equipped with heavy weapons, hiding behind heavy barricades, and lead by Roman Torchwick try to stop a squad of Space Marines. [[spoiler:The Astartes fall into the Thirst and slaughter them without taking a single
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** Over 180 White Fang terrorists equipped with heavy weapons, hiding behind heavy barricades, and lead by Roman Torchwick try to stop a squad of Space Marines. [[spoiler:The Astartes fall into the Thirst and slaughter them without taking a single casualty.]]
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* BadassCreed: One which is also a TitleDrop: ''For those we cherish, we die in glory!''
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* BadassCreed: One Half of which is also a TitleDrop: ''For those we cherish, we die in glory!''
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** Two in quick sucession. The Edler Beringel inflicts this on both Team RWBY and the space marines. It only gets hurt due to it's own overconfidence and that only really ticked it off. [[spoiler: Ancient Vaspasian, a [[BadassGrandpa Relic Contemptor Dreadnought,]] quickly returns the favor killing the Elder Grimm with ease.]]
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** Two in quick sucession. The Edler Beringel inflicts this on both Team RWBY and the space marines. It only gets hurt due to it's own overconfidence and that only really ticked it off. [[spoiler: Ancient [[spoiler:Ancient Vaspasian, a [[BadassGrandpa Relic Contemptor Dreadnought,]] Dreadnought, quickly returns the favor killing the Elder Grimm with ease.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: Two in quick sucession. The Edler Beringel inflicts this on both Team RWBY and the space marines. It only gets hurt due to it's own overconfidence and that only really ticked it off. [[spoiler: Ancient Vaspasian, a [[BadassGrandpa Relic Contemptor Dreadnought,]] quickly returns the favor killing the Elder Grimm with ease.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: CurbStompBattle:
** Two in quick sucession. The Edler Beringel inflicts this on both Team RWBY and the space marines. It only gets hurt due to it's own overconfidence and that only really ticked it off. [[spoiler: Ancient Vaspasian, a [[BadassGrandpa Relic Contemptor Dreadnought,]] quickly returns the favor killing the Elder Grimm with ease.]]
** Over 180 White Fang terrorists equipped with heavy weapons, hiding behind heavy barricades, and lead by Roman Torchwick try to stop a squad of Space Marines. [[spoiler:The Astartes slaughter them without taking a single casualty.]]
** Two in quick sucession. The Edler Beringel inflicts this on both Team RWBY and the space marines. It only gets hurt due to it's own overconfidence and that only really ticked it off. [[spoiler: Ancient Vaspasian, a [[BadassGrandpa Relic Contemptor Dreadnought,]] quickly returns the favor killing the Elder Grimm with ease.]]
** Over 180 White Fang terrorists equipped with heavy weapons, hiding behind heavy barricades, and lead by Roman Torchwick try to stop a squad of Space Marines. [[spoiler:The Astartes slaughter them without taking a single casualty.]]
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* ShoutOut: The events that happened with Aethon going back to save the Faunus Lady is way too similar to the events in the ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' novel Rynn's World. Right down to making the audience believe that he'll put the Faunus lady out of her Misery, but insted do the same NowLetMeCarryYou moment.
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** The events that happened with Aethon going back to save the Faunus Lady is way too similar to the events in the ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' novel Rynn's World. Right down to making the audience believe that he'll put the Faunus lady out of her Misery, but insted do the same NowLetMeCarryYoumoment.moment.
** Vespasian and Oobleck's discussion about [[spoiler:the ailing veteran Huntsman leading a band of Mountain Glenn survivors]] is strongly reminiscent of a scene in the Literature/GauntsGhosts novel ''Salvation's Reach''. Namely: a Space Marine quoting the Emperor to compare a dying human to one of their own.
** The events that happened with Aethon going back to save the Faunus Lady is way too similar to the events in the ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' novel Rynn's World. Right down to making the audience believe that he'll put the Faunus lady out of her Misery, but insted do the same NowLetMeCarryYou
** Vespasian and Oobleck's discussion about [[spoiler:the ailing veteran Huntsman leading a band of Mountain Glenn survivors]] is strongly reminiscent of a scene in the Literature/GauntsGhosts novel ''Salvation's Reach''. Namely: a Space Marine quoting the Emperor to compare a dying human to one of their own.
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* PatrickStewartSpeech: In chapter 4.4, Aethon explains why he went back for the faunus and her siblings at the start of the story even where the seemed to be no reason for him to do so.
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* PatrickStewartSpeech: In chapter 4.4, Aethon explains why he went back for the faunus and her siblings at the start of the story even where the seemed to be no reason for him though it was not practical to do so.
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* PatrickStewartSpeech: In chapter 4.4, Aethon explains why he went back for the faunus and her siblings at the start of the story even where the seemed to be no reason for him to do so.
--> “If I die tomorrow, my soul will drift through the Empyrean as all lost souls will do. My spirit will be drawn to the light of the Astronomican and will continue its journey until it reaches the distant gates of Terra herself. I will kneel before the Golden Throne and I will behold the Emperor’s flawless visage as well as the perfect features of our Primarch. They will judge me as they will judge all souls. What will I say to them, my brothers? What will I say to them when they ask me why I left that woman and those children behind in that clearing? That because their bloodline was not one hundred percent pure, I abandoned them? That because of a technicality, I shirked my duty? That because these mortals, labelled as less human by other mortals, were somehow genetically inferior enough that they did not deserve protecting? As if humans could ever dictate to an Astartes what he should or should not protect. Do I do all those things, brothers? Explain to our liege-lords why I stared suffering in the face and did nothing to alleviate it. Or do I look them in the eye and tell them I lived as I died, proud, defiant, and knowing no fear. That I went back and saved that woman and those children because I thought they could be saved. That I performed this duty above and beyond what was expected of me because doing above and beyond is what we Astartes were made to do.”
--> “If I die tomorrow, my soul will drift through the Empyrean as all lost souls will do. My spirit will be drawn to the light of the Astronomican and will continue its journey until it reaches the distant gates of Terra herself. I will kneel before the Golden Throne and I will behold the Emperor’s flawless visage as well as the perfect features of our Primarch. They will judge me as they will judge all souls. What will I say to them, my brothers? What will I say to them when they ask me why I left that woman and those children behind in that clearing? That because their bloodline was not one hundred percent pure, I abandoned them? That because of a technicality, I shirked my duty? That because these mortals, labelled as less human by other mortals, were somehow genetically inferior enough that they did not deserve protecting? As if humans could ever dictate to an Astartes what he should or should not protect. Do I do all those things, brothers? Explain to our liege-lords why I stared suffering in the face and did nothing to alleviate it. Or do I look them in the eye and tell them I lived as I died, proud, defiant, and knowing no fear. That I went back and saved that woman and those children because I thought they could be saved. That I performed this duty above and beyond what was expected of me because doing above and beyond is what we Astartes were made to do.”
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* MookHorrorShow: When the Lamenters, Oobleck, and Team RWBY are attacked by the White Fang [[spoiler:after rescuing the survivors of Mt. Gleen]], the Astartes fall into the Red Thirst and are butchering their way through their enemies with extreme prejudice.
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* AndIMustScream: Venerable Dreadnaught Vaspasian really doesn't like when he's forced to sleep. He also had a FreakOut when he was first entombed within his chassis.
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* TheUnchosenOne: The reason why [[spoiler:a Knight Titan picked Jaune as his newest pilot. The machine doesn't seek someone able of honour, bravery or sacrifice, it seeks someone ''wanting'' to be this. Jaune was chosen because he really wanted to be a hero but didn't feel he had the capacities for it.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: Two in quick sucession. The Edler Beringel inflicts this on both Team RWBY and the space marines. It only gets hurt due to it's own overconfidence and that only really ticked it off. [[spoiler: Ancient Vaspasian, a [[BadassGrandpa Relic Contemptor Dreadnought,]] quickly returns the favor killing the Elder Grimm with ease.]]
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--> (Battle of Vale) Lamenter afflicted by Black Rage facingdown a horde of Grimm with civilians behind him: ''"...And you shall not have them!"''
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* DropTheHammer: Sergeant Braellin owns a Thunder hammer mixed that with being an assault marine and he's more than enough of a match for his enemies. Jaune calls it the biggest hammer he has ever seen, while Nora squees just by looking at it and is overjoyed when she holds it for Braellin.
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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/for-those-we-cherish-40k-rwby.408155/ For Those We Cherish]]'' is a crossover between ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000'' and ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' written by The Crimson Lord, author of ''FanFic/ADemonAmongDevils''.
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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/for-those-we-cherish-40k-rwby.408155/ For Those We Cherish]]'' is a crossover between ''{{TabletopGames/Warhammer ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' and ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' written by The Crimson Lord, author of ''FanFic/ADemonAmongDevils''.
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* GrumpyOldMan: Venerable Dreadnaught Vaspasian.Vaspasian, years being stuck inside a dreadnought has left him very... irate.
* HeroesPreferSwords: Aethon carries a master-crafted Power Sword in battle.
* HeroesPreferSwords: Aethon carries a master-crafted Power Sword in battle.
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** Averted with the Imperial Guard. While normally just as xenophobic as the rest of the Imperium, the Guard units accompanying the Lamenters more or less shrug off the differences between humans and faunus. After fighting tooth and nail against the Tyranids, Orks, and other freakish alien horrors out to destroy humanity, a few ears in the wrong places just aren't worth raising a fuss over.
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** Averted with the Imperial Guard. While normally just as xenophobic as the rest of the Imperium, the Guard units accompanying the Lamenters more or less shrug off the differences between humans and faunus. After fighting tooth and nail against the Tyranids, Orks, and other freakish alien horrors out to destroy humanity, a few ears in the wrong places just aren't worth raising a fuss over. It also helps that Abhumans like Ratlings and Felinid exists.
* NowLetMeCarryYou: After the Faunus woman who was carrying her younger siblings finally collapses because of her wounds, Aethon decides that rather than kill he decides to help her keep her promise towards her younger siblings. Obviously a reference to the events on Rynn's World.
* NowLetMeCarryYou: After the Faunus woman who was carrying her younger siblings finally collapses because of her wounds, Aethon decides that rather than kill he decides to help her keep her promise towards her younger siblings. Obviously a reference to the events on Rynn's World.
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* CoolOldGuy: Ancient Vaspasian is an amazing combination of snarky, wise, and awesome.
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* AndThenWhat: Vaspian asks this to Atheon while the two are on watch at night: if the Imperium finally defeats all of the myriad horrors that assault it, then what will the Space Marines do, as they were created for warfare. Atheon is initially unable to answer, but eventually responds that the Astartes will find a new path, because they were made to excel at everything.
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* AndThenWhat: Vaspian Vaspasian asks this to Atheon Aethon while the two are on watch at night: if the Imperium finally defeats all of the myriad horrors that assault it, then what will the Space Marines do, as they were created for warfare. Atheon Aethon is initially unable to answer, but eventually responds that the Astartes will find a new path, because they were made to excel at everything.
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* HypotheticalFightDebate: Taken completely seriously for once. Everyone involved hopes it ''remains'' strictly hypothetical, but Brother-Captain Theoseus asks Aethon for his threat assessment of Teams RWBY, JNPR and CFVY after the second arc in the event that the (so far, highly positive) relations between the marines and the locals should take a turn for the worse. The results are inconclusive as they've found Aura and Semblances to be rather potent factors that weigh in the favor of the people of Remnant, but find that each side's perception of warfare shows that Imperium humans also have an edge.
* ImTakingHerHomeWithMe: Ruby's reaction to seeing Venerable Dreadnaught Vaspasian in his Ancient Contemptor Dreadnaught chassis.
* ImTakingHerHomeWithMe: Ruby's reaction to seeing Venerable Dreadnaught Vaspasian in his Ancient Contemptor Dreadnaught chassis.
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* HypotheticalFightDebate: Taken completely seriously for once. Everyone involved hopes it ''remains'' strictly hypothetical, but Brother-Captain Theoseus Theosius asks Aethon for his threat assessment of Teams RWBY, JNPR and CFVY after the second arc in the event that the (so far, highly positive) relations between the marines and the locals should take a turn for the worse. The results are inconclusive as they've found Aura and Semblances to be rather potent factors that weigh in the favor of the people of Remnant, but find that each side's perception of warfare shows that Imperium humans also have an edge.
* ImTakingHerHomeWithMe: Ruby's reaction to seeing Venerable Dreadnaught Vaspasian in his Ancient ContemptorDreadnaught Dreadnought chassis.
* ImTakingHerHomeWithMe: Ruby's reaction to seeing Venerable Dreadnaught Vaspasian in his Ancient Contemptor
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* AndThenWhat: Vaspian asks this to Atheon while the two are on watch at night: if the Imperium finally defeats all of the myriad horrors that assault it, then what will the Space Marines do, as they were created for warfare. Atheon is initially unable to answer, but eventually responds that the Astartes will find a new path, because they were made to excel at everything.
* ArmorPiercingQuestion: See above.
* ArmorPiercingQuestion: See above.
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--> It is self-aware. It is intelligent.
-->Aethon knows no fear. But staring into the monster’s burning pupils, he feels unease stirring in his twin hearts.
-->Aethon knows no fear. But staring into the monster’s burning pupils, he feels unease stirring in his twin hearts.
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--> [[ItCanThink It is self-aware. It is intelligent.
-->Aethonintelligent.]]
--> Aethon knows no fear. But staring into the monster’s burning pupils, he feels unease stirring in his twin hearts.
-->Aethon
--> Aethon knows no fear. But staring into the monster’s burning pupils, he feels unease stirring in his twin hearts.