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* NonSequitur: While contemplating his fate, Dinobot cannot resist dropping random exposition that has nothing to do with the situation at hand.

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* NonSequitur: While contemplating his fate, Dinobot cannot resist dropping random exposition that has absolutely nothing to do with the situation at hand.



* SeriesContinuityError: In the first chapter, Megatron states that "Rhinox is death". However, Rhinox is alive and well in the last chapter, with nobody commenting on it.

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* SeriesContinuityError: In the first chapter, Megatron states that "Rhinox is death". However, Rhinox is alive and well in the last chapter, with nobody commenting on it.his revival.



--> '''Optimus''': Cheetor, Silverboalt and I will fly those ground for found some stases pods or BLAST some Preds, and you Rattrap, stay at the base. ''[sic]''

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--> '''Optimus''': '''Optimus Primal:''' Cheetor, Silverboalt and I will fly those ground for found some stases pods or BLAST some Preds, and you Rattrap, stay at the base. ''[sic]''
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-->'''Rattrap''' huh, maybe chopper face have changer his activation code again.

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-->'''Rattrap''' -->'''Rattrap:''' huh, maybe chopper face have changer his activation code again.
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* NonSequitur: While contemplating his fate, Dinobot cannot resist dropping random exposition.

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* NonSequitur: While contemplating his fate, Dinobot cannot resist dropping random exposition.exposition that has nothing to do with the situation at hand.



* TheStarscream: Terrorsaur betrays Megatron two lines after saying that he'd ally with him. That must be some kind of record.

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* TheStarscream: Terrorsaur betrays Megatron two lines only ''two lines'' after saying that he'd ally with declaring his allegiance to him. That must be some kind of record.

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* PlotHole: Just how Dinobot is resurrected as Mega-Rex is never explained.


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* UnexplainedRecovery: Just how Dinobot is resurrected as Mega-Rex is never explained.
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* BlindIdiotTranslation: The entire thing was translated word for word from French to English by someone not fluent in the latter. It shows.
* CameBackWrong: Dinobot is resurrected as Mega-Rex, who is now a murderous maniac with a questionable combination of animals for his alt-mode.
* DueToTheDead; Optimus Primal bring back Dinobot's body to the Maximal base and destroy it, '''WITH HONOR!'''
* LeftHanging: The last chapter ends with the appearance of Airrazor and Tigatron in a new form and more powerful than before.

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* BlindIdiotTranslation: The entire thing was translated word for word from French to English by someone not fluent in the latter. It latter, and it definitely shows.
* CameBackWrong: Dinobot is resurrected as Mega-Rex, who is who's now a murderous maniac with a questionable combination of animals for his alt-mode.
* DueToTheDead; Optimus DueToTheDead: "Optimus Primal bring back Dinobot's body to the Maximal base and destroy it, '''WITH HONOR!'''
HONOR!'''"
* LeftHanging: The last chapter ends with the appearance of Airrazor and Tigatron in a new form and new, more powerful than before.form.



* SeriesContinuityError: In the first chapter, Megatron states that "Rhinox is death". However, Rhinox is alive and well in the last chapter, nobody commenting on it.

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* SeriesContinuityError: In the first chapter, Megatron states that "Rhinox is death". However, Rhinox is alive and well in the last chapter, with nobody commenting on it.



* TranslationTrainWreck: As stated in BlindIdiotTranslation above, the story was translated from French to English from someone with a tenuous grasp on the latter language, which results in such lines as:

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* TranslationTrainWreck: As stated in BlindIdiotTranslation above, the story was translated from French to English from by someone with a tenuous grasp on the latter language, which results in such lines as:



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%%* * WrittenSoundEffect: BOOM!Explosions are written as "BOOM!" rather than described word for word.

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!!Tropes used in Dinobot's Old Technology and its sequels include:


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!!Tropes used in ''Dinobot's Old Technology'' and its sequels include:

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-->''nooo.........You lived like a warrior ans died to an hero.''

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-->''nooo.........->''nooo.........You lived like a warrior ans died to an hero.''



However, MG-Dinobot reportedly had a cursory at best knowledge of English and "translated" his writing word for word with a dictionary, with [[RougeAnglesOfSatin predictable]] [[WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma results]]. Several lines from the fics quickly became memetic within the fandom, to the point that the series most infamous line (quoted above) [[AscendedMeme was referenced]] in the ''[[WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated [=AllSpark=] Almanac]]'', and is [[http://tfwiki.net/wiki/Dinobot_(BW) the caption]] for his picture on Wiki/TFWikiDotNet.

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However, MG-Dinobot reportedly had a cursory at best knowledge of English and "translated" his writing word for word with a dictionary, with [[RougeAnglesOfSatin predictable]] [[WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma results]]. Several lines from the fics quickly became memetic within the fandom, to the point that the series most infamous line (quoted above) [[AscendedMeme was referenced]] in the ''[[WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated [=AllSpark=] Almanac]]'', and is [[http://tfwiki.net/wiki/Dinobot_(BW) the caption]] for his picture on Wiki/TFWikiDotNet.
Website/TFWikiDotNet.



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* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Silverbolt's name is repeatedly spelled as Silverbo'''a'''lt.
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I meant to put this in here too when I was editing this last night but I had to go to bed oops


An archive of the fics can be found [[http://www.worlds-worst.com/worldsworst/fanfic/idea_detail.php?LinkID=106&CatID=2 here]].

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An archive of the fics can be found [[http://www.worlds-worst.com/worldsworst/fanfic/idea_detail.php?LinkID=106&CatID=2 [[https://groups.google.com/g/alt.toys.transformers/c/rzUxFaGSCvQ/m/qNU_EJ7bUu4J?hl=en here]], and a DramaticReading of it by none other than Creator/XanderMobus (and company) can be found [[https://youtu.be/0zvvX03jp70 here]].

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''nooo.........You lived like a warrior ans died to an hero.''

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''nooo.........-->''nooo.........You lived like a warrior ans died to an hero.''



However, MG-Dinobot reportedly had a cursory at best knowledge of English and "translated" his writing word for word with a dictionary, with [[RougeAnglesOfSatin predictable]] [[WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma results]]. Several lines from the fics quickly became memetic within the fandom, to the point that the series most infamous line (quoted above) [[AscendedMeme was referenced]] in the ''WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated Almanac'', and is [[http://tfwiki.net/wiki/Dinobot_(BW) the caption]] for his picture on Wiki/TFWikiDotNet.

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However, MG-Dinobot reportedly had a cursory at best knowledge of English and "translated" his writing word for word with a dictionary, with [[RougeAnglesOfSatin predictable]] [[WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma results]]. Several lines from the fics quickly became memetic within the fandom, to the point that the series most infamous line (quoted above) [[AscendedMeme was referenced]] in the ''WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated Almanac'', ''[[WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated [=AllSpark=] Almanac]]'', and is [[http://tfwiki.net/wiki/Dinobot_(BW) the caption]] for his picture on Wiki/TFWikiDotNet.



%%* ScriptFic

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%%* ScriptFic* ScriptFic: The story is written in script format.



%%* TranslationTrainWreck

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%%* TranslationTrainWreck* TranslationTrainWreck: As stated in BlindIdiotTranslation above, the story was translated from French to English from someone with a tenuous grasp on the latter language, which results in such lines as:
--> '''Optimus''': Cheetor, Silverboalt and I will fly those ground for found some stases pods or BLAST some Preds, and you Rattrap, stay at the base. ''[sic]''
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* HowDoIUsedTense: Very frequent.
-->'''Optimus''' Shut up Rattrap. Cheetor, try to found Dinobot on the sector 110 to 210 and I'll try to found him on the Predacons
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'''Dinobot's Old Technology''' is an infamous '''WesternAnimation/BeastWars''' fanfiction written during the early days of online fandom by one named MG-Dinobot. A straight rewrite of the episode ''Code of Hero'' (often considered the best in the series) in script format with very little changes, it was followed by several sequels that had more original plots.

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'''Dinobot's ''Dinobot's Old Technology''' Technology'' is an infamous '''WesternAnimation/BeastWars''' ''WesternAnimation/BeastWars'' fanfiction written during the early days of online fandom by one named MG-Dinobot. A straight rewrite of the episode ''Code "Code of Hero'' Hero" (often considered the best in the series) in script format with very little changes, it was followed by several sequels that had more original plots.




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* PlotHole: Just how Dinobot is ressurected as Mega-Rex is never explained.

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* PlotHole: Just how Dinobot is ressurected resurrected as Mega-Rex is never explained.



* ScriptFic

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* %%* ScriptFic



* TranslationTrainWreck
* WordSaladTitle: Which seems to be a garbled reference to one of Megatron's lines in ''Code of Hero'' ("Face it, Dinobot, you're old technology! Obsolete! What could you possibly do?").
* WrittenSoundEffect: BOOM!

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* %%* TranslationTrainWreck
* WordSaladTitle: Which seems to be a garbled reference to one of Megatron's lines in ''Code "Code of Hero'' Hero" ("Face it, Dinobot, you're old technology! Obsolete! What could you possibly do?").
* %%* WrittenSoundEffect: BOOM!
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However, MG-Dinobot reportedly had a cursory at best knowledge of English and "translated" his writing word for word with a dictionary, with [[RougeAnglesOfSatin predictable]] [[WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma results]]. Several lines from the fics quickly became memetic within the fandom, to the point that the series most infamous line (quoted above) [[AscendedMeme was referenced]] in the ''WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated Almanac'', and is [[http://tfwiki.net/wiki/Dinobot_(BW) the caption]] for his picture on TFWiki.

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However, MG-Dinobot reportedly had a cursory at best knowledge of English and "translated" his writing word for word with a dictionary, with [[RougeAnglesOfSatin predictable]] [[WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma results]]. Several lines from the fics quickly became memetic within the fandom, to the point that the series most infamous line (quoted above) [[AscendedMeme was referenced]] in the ''WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated Almanac'', and is [[http://tfwiki.net/wiki/Dinobot_(BW) the caption]] for his picture on TFWiki.
Wiki/TFWikiDotNet.



--->'''Optimus''' Shut up Rattrap. Cheetor, try to found Dinobot on the sector 110 to 210 and I'll try to found him on the Predacons

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--->'''Optimus''' -->'''Optimus''' Shut up Rattrap. Cheetor, try to found Dinobot on the sector 110 to 210 and I'll try to found him on the Predacons



---> '''Rampage:''' Hahahaha...You will be destroy lizard head. Dinobot jump on Rampage and blast him with his sword but

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---> --> '''Rampage:''' Hahahaha...You will be destroy lizard head. Dinobot jump on Rampage and blast him with his sword but



--->'''Rattrap''' huh, maybe chopper face have changer his activation code again.

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--->'''Rattrap''' -->'''Rattrap''' huh, maybe chopper face have changer his activation code again.
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However, MG-Dinobot reportedly had a cursory at best knowledge of English and "translated" his writing word for word with a dictionary, with [[RougeAnglesOfSatin predictable]] [[WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma results]]. Several lines from the fics quickly became memetic within the fandon, to the point that the series most infamous line (quoted above) [[AscendedMeme was referenced]] in the ''WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated Almanac''.

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However, MG-Dinobot reportedly had a cursory at best knowledge of English and "translated" his writing word for word with a dictionary, with [[RougeAnglesOfSatin predictable]] [[WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma results]]. Several lines from the fics quickly became memetic within the fandon, fandom, to the point that the series most infamous line (quoted above) [[AscendedMeme was referenced]] in the ''WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated Almanac''.
Almanac'', and is [[http://tfwiki.net/wiki/Dinobot_(BW) the caption]] for his picture on TFWiki.



* WrittenSoundEffect: BOOM!

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* WrittenSoundEffect: BOOM!

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However, MG-Dinobot reportedly had a cursory at best knowledge of English and "translated" his writing word for word with a dictionary, with [[RougeAnglesOfSatin predictable]] [[WantonCrueltytotheCommonComma results]]. Several lines from the fics quickly became memetic within the fandon, to the point that the series most infamous line (quoted above) [[AscendedMeme was referenced]] in the ''WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated Almanac''.

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However, MG-Dinobot reportedly had a cursory at best knowledge of English and "translated" his writing word for word with a dictionary, with [[RougeAnglesOfSatin predictable]] [[WantonCrueltytotheCommonComma [[WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma results]]. Several lines from the fics quickly became memetic within the fandon, to the point that the series most infamous line (quoted above) [[AscendedMeme was referenced]] in the ''WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated Almanac''.



* LeftHanging: The last chapter ends with the appearance of Air Razor and Tigatron in a new form and more powerful than before?????

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* LeftHanging: The last chapter ends with the appearance of Air Razor Airrazor and Tigatron in a new form and more powerful than before?????before.



* RougeAnglesOfSatin: The main source of humour. Several words are also left with their French spelling.

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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: The main source of humour.humor. Several words are also left with their French spelling.



* TheStarscream: Terrorsaur betrays Megatron two lines after saying he'd ally with him. That must be some kind of record.
* WordSaladTitle: Which seems to be a garbled reference to one of Megatron's lines in ''Code of Hero'' ("Face it Dinobot: You're old technology, obselete!").

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* TheStarscream: Terrorsaur betrays Megatron two lines after saying that he'd ally with him. That must be some kind of record.
* TranslationTrainWreck
* WordSaladTitle: Which seems to be a garbled reference to one of Megatron's lines in ''Code of Hero'' ("Face it Dinobot: You're it, Dinobot, you're old technology, obselete!").technology! Obsolete! What could you possibly do?").
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And again.


* WordSaladTitle: Which seems to be a garbled reference to one of Megatron's line in ''Code of Hero'' ("Face it Dinobot: You're old technology, obselete!").

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* WordSaladTitle: Which seems to be a garbled reference to one of Megatron's line lines in ''Code of Hero'' ("Face it Dinobot: You're old technology, obselete!").
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How ironic.


* BlindIdiotTranslation: The entire thing was translated word for word from French to English by someone not fluent in the later. It shows.

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* BlindIdiotTranslation: The entire thing was translated word for word from French to English by someone not fluent in the later.latter. It shows.
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* PlotHole: Just how Dinobot is ressurected as Mega-Rex is never explained.


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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: The main source of humour. Several words are also left with their French spelling.
--->'''Rattrap''' huh, maybe chopper face have changer his activation code again.
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''nooo.........You lived like a warrior ans died to an hero.''

'''Dinobot's Old Technology''' is an infamous '''WesternAnimation/BeastWars''' fanfiction written during the early days of online fandom by one named MG-Dinobot. A straight rewrite of the episode ''Code of Hero'' (often considered the best in the series) in script format with very little changes, it was followed by several sequels that had more original plots.

However, MG-Dinobot reportedly had a cursory at best knowledge of English and "translated" his writing word for word with a dictionary, with [[RougeAnglesOfSatin predictable]] [[WantonCrueltytotheCommonComma results]]. Several lines from the fics quickly became memetic within the fandon, to the point that the series most infamous line (quoted above) [[AscendedMeme was referenced]] in the ''WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated Almanac''.

An archive of the fics can be found [[http://www.worlds-worst.com/worldsworst/fanfic/idea_detail.php?LinkID=106&CatID=2 here]].

!!Tropes used in Dinobot's Old Technology and its sequels include:

*BlindIdiotTranslation: The entire thing was translated word for word from French to English by someone not fluent in the later. It shows.
*CameBackWrong: Dinobot is resurrected as Mega-Rex, who is now a murderous maniac with a questionable combination of animals for his alt-mode.
*DueToTheDead; Optimus Primal bring back Dinobot's body to the Maximal base and destroy it, '''WITH HONOR!'''
*HowDoIUsedTense: Very frequent.
--->'''Optimus''' Shut up Rattrap. Cheetor, try to found Dinobot on the sector 110 to 210 and I'll try to found him on the Predacons
*LeftHanging: The last chapter ends with the appearance of Air Razor and Tigatron in a new form and more powerful than before?????
*MixAndMatchCritter: Mega-Rex is a "Ty-Rex"/snake/ant hybrid while Death Blade is a bird/shark one.
*NonSequitur: While contemplating his fate, Dinobot cannot resist dropping random exposition.
-->'''Dinobot''': rrrrr.....I think the time is come for the final battle of my life...mmmm...I know that I will die, but if my calcule are right, less than 10 steses pods had not crashed to the earth during the alien blast.
*ReadingTheStageDirectionsOutloud: Due to the combination of script format and poor grammar, some of the characters appear to be doing this.
---> '''Rampage:''' Hahahaha...You will be destroy lizard head. Dinobot jump on Rampage and blast him with his sword but
*ScriptFic
*SeriesContinuityError: In the first chapter, Megatron states that "Rhinox is death". However, Rhinox is alive and well in the last chapter, nobody commenting on it.
*TheStarscream: Terrorsaur betrays Megatron two lines after saying he'd ally with him. That must be some kind of record.
*WordSaladTitle: Which seems to be a garbled reference to one of Megatron's line in ''Code of Hero'' ("Face it Dinobot: You're old technology, obselete!").
*WrittenSoundEffect: BOOM!

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