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->''"Voldemort is gone, now the question is: What to do with the Marked Ones that haven’t really committed any crimes? The Wizarding World’s solution: Place them under the care and ‘protection’ of a Guide from the Light. The problem is most of Abuse, Anal, BDSM, Humil, M/M, MPreg, N/C, Oral, Slave, Spank, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking WIP]]"''

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->''"Voldemort is gone, now the question is: What to do with the Marked Ones that haven’t really committed any crimes? The Wizarding World’s solution: Place them under the care and ‘protection’ of a Guide from the Light. The problem is most of Abuse, Anal, BDSM, Humil, M/M, MPreg, [=MPreg=], N/C, Oral, Slave, Spank, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking WIP]]"''


-->'''''AFF dot net's fittingly-abbreviated summary'''''

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-->'''''AFF -->--'''AFF dot net's fittingly-abbreviated summary'''''
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* BizarreAlienBiology: Several factoids about [[MisterSeahorse male pregnancy]] and wizard infants are invented for the sake of the plot.

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* BizarreAlienBiology: BizarreHumanBiology: Several factoids about [[MisterSeahorse male pregnancy]] and wizard infants are invented for the sake of the plot.


* SecondHandStorytelling: Over the course of the story, Harry and Snape [[ComedyOfRemarriage get married twice]], and both times are off-screen despite the {{ship|ping}} being ''the entire point of the fic''.

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* SecondHandStorytelling: Over the course of the story, Harry and Snape [[ComedyOfRemarriage [[DivorceIsTemporary get married twice]], and both times are off-screen despite the {{ship|ping}} being ''the entire point of the fic''.


* IndecisiveDeconstruction: The fic reads at times like a (possibly unintentional) deconstruction of both the "marriage law" sub-genre and [[MisterSeahorse mpreg]].


* DeathByChildbirth: [[CaptainObvious Male pregnancies are said to be quite dangerous]] and [[spoiler:Goyle]] finds out the hard way.

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* DeathByChildbirth: [[CaptainObvious Male pregnancies are said to be quite dangerous]] dangerous and [[spoiler:Goyle]] finds out the hard way.


''[[http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600022825 Deserving]]'' by moonofthesea picks up the {{Potterverse}} in the year 1998. The Second Wizarding War is over, and Literature/HarryPotter and friends must decide what to do with the surviving Death Eaters. This being fanfic-world, a marriage law is instituted whereby each "Marked One" must come under the supervision of a "Guide of the Light". Harry sacrifices everything he has to be Guide of the Light to Severus Snape (who in the fic survived ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows Deathly Hallows]]''), and ''Deserving'' tells their story.

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''[[http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600022825 Deserving]]'' by moonofthesea picks up the {{Potterverse}} ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' in the year 1998. The Second Wizarding War is over, and Literature/HarryPotter and friends must decide what to do with the surviving Death Eaters. This being fanfic-world, a marriage law is instituted whereby each "Marked One" must come under the supervision of a "Guide of the Light". Harry sacrifices everything he has to be Guide of the Light to Severus Snape (who in the fic survived ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows Deathly Hallows]]''), and ''Deserving'' tells their story.


''[[http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600022825 Deserving]]'' by moonofthesea picks up the {{Potterverse}} in the year 1998. The Second Wizarding War is over, and Literature/HarryPotter and friends must decide what to do with the surviving Death Eaters. This being fanfic-world, a marriage law is instituted whereby each "Marked One" must come under the supervision of a "Guide of the Light" and bear his child. [[MisterSeahorse (Yes, even if male.)]] Harry sacrifices everything he has to be Guide of the Light to Severus Snape (who in the fic survived ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows Deathly Hallows]]''), and ''Deserving'' tells their story.

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''[[http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600022825 Deserving]]'' by moonofthesea picks up the {{Potterverse}} in the year 1998. The Second Wizarding War is over, and Literature/HarryPotter and friends must decide what to do with the surviving Death Eaters. This being fanfic-world, a marriage law is instituted whereby each "Marked One" must come under the supervision of a "Guide of the Light" and bear his child. [[MisterSeahorse (Yes, even if male.)]] Light". Harry sacrifices everything he has to be Guide of the Light to Severus Snape (who in the fic survived ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows Deathly Hallows]]''), and ''Deserving'' tells their story.


''[[http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600022825 Deserving]]'' by moonofthesea picks up the {{Potterverse}} in the year 1998. The Second Wizarding War is over, and Literature/HarryPotter and friends must decide what to do with the surviving Death Eaters. This being fanfic-world, a marriage law is instituted whereby each "Marked One" must come under the supervision of a "Guide of the Light" and bear his child. [[MisterSeahorse (Yes, even if male.)]] Harry sacrifices everything he has to be Guide of the Light to Severus Snape (who in the fic survived ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows Deathly Hallows]]''), and ''Deserving'' tells their story.

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''[[http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600022825 Deserving]]'' by moonofthesea picks up the {{Potterverse}} in the year 1998. The Second Wizarding War is over, and Literature/HarryPotter and friends must decide what to do with the surviving Death Eaters. This being fanfic-world, a marriage law is instituted whereby each "Marked One" must come under the supervision of a "Guide of the Light" and bear his child. [[MisterSeahorse (Yes, even if male.)]] Harry sacrifices everything he has to be Guide of the Light to Severus Snape (who in the fic survived ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows Deathly Hallows]]''), and ''Deserving'' tells their story.


* ReactionaryFantasy: Despite being a world in which same-sex and multiple marriage are commonplace (in 1998!) and it's not unremarkable for a child to [[HasTwoMommies have two daddies]], women are still expected to [[StayInTheKitchen defer to their husbands]] and [[MyGirlIsNotASlut purity and chastity are prized above all else]] for young women and {{Bishonen}}. The juxtaposition gets [[http://szaleniec1000.livejournal.com/tag/the%20pansexual%20%2750s quite jarring]].


* PurpleProse: To the extent that it's been likened to ''TheEyeOfArgon''. It's practically ultraviolet.

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* PurpleProse: To the extent that it's been likened to ''TheEyeOfArgon''.''Literature/TheEyeOfArgon''. It's practically ultraviolet.


** [[MarySue Serena]] takes this UpToEleven when she's talking and using controlled wandless magic before her '''first''' birthday.

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** [[MarySue Serena]] Serena takes this UpToEleven when she's talking and using controlled wandless magic before her '''first''' birthday.


* GodwinsLaw: Chapter 6 has Marked Ones ''explicitly likened to Holocaust victims''; given that "Marked Ones" are ex-Death Eaters, UnfortunateImplications abound.

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* GodwinsLaw: Chapter 6 has Marked Ones ''explicitly likened to Holocaust victims''; given that "Marked Ones" are ex-Death Eaters, UnfortunateImplications abound.victims''.


* AwesomeMcCoolname: [[spoiler:Sin]], which [[FelonyMisdemeanor we're supposed to believe]] is actually a FailOSuckyname.

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* AwesomeMcCoolname: [[spoiler:Sin]], which [[FelonyMisdemeanor we're supposed to believe]] is actually a FailOSuckyname.an AtrociousAlias.

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