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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Probably the main reason this fic is written on Google Docs, rather than either fanfiction.net or Website/FimfictionDotNet. Between the Website/{{Youtube}} links to the music Pinkie Pie likes to play to Red Velvet's powers completely decimating the document at one point, the author has a bit of fun with this.
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Probably the main reason this fic is written on Google Docs, rather than either fanfiction.net or Website/FimfictionDotNet. Platform/FimfictionDotNet. Between the Website/{{Youtube}} Platform/{{Youtube}} links to the music Pinkie Pie likes to play to Red Velvet's powers completely decimating the document at one point, the author has a bit of fun with this.
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* LeftTheBackgroundMusicOn: Pinkie likes to play music while she's fighting, fully embracing the idea of ThemeMusicPowerUp is in play. Every time, the other characters can hear it, as can the reader, via Website/{{Youtube}} links within the document.
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* LeftTheBackgroundMusicOn: Pinkie likes to play music while she's fighting, fully embracing the idea of ThemeMusicPowerUp is in play. Every time, the other characters can hear it, as can the reader, via Website/{{Youtube}} Platform/{{Youtube}} links within the document.
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** Chpater 27 is loaded with many of them, such as: ''Literature/CharlieAndTheChocolateFactory'', ''Franchise/ToyStory'', ''Film/BillAndTed'', and ''Series/MysteryScienceTheater3000'' (specifically, the ''Film/SpaceMutiny'' episode).
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** Chpater 27 is loaded with many of them, such as: ''Literature/CharlieAndTheChocolateFactory'', ''Franchise/ToyStory'', ''Film/BillAndTed'', ''Franchise/BillAndTed'', and ''Series/MysteryScienceTheater3000'' (specifically, the ''Film/SpaceMutiny'' episode).
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* AnAesop: As part of the story’s less adventurous and more mundane events, the cast get chances to share some friendship and life lessons with one another, such as the importance of self-confidence in oneself and one’s body image, moving past guilt, and being there for your friends when they’re down.
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* CatchPhrase: [[BoisterousBruiser Havocwing's]] got one:
--> "I'm the best damn fighter this side of Pandemonium!"
--> "I'm the best damn fighter this side of Pandemonium!"
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* CloningBlues: The clones of the Mane Six handle the revelation that they're clones vastly differently in the different timelines.
** In Chapter 25 of the original timeline, the Mean Six find out they're clones of the Mane Six. Their decision on what to do with this information? Why, murder the originals of course.
** In Chapter 25 of the original timeline, the Mean Six find out they're clones of the Mane Six. Their decision on what to do with this information? Why, murder the originals of course.
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* CloningBlues: CloneAngst: The clones of the Mane Six handle the revelation that they're clones vastly differently in the different timelines.
** In Chapter 25 of the original timeline, the Mean Six find out they're clones of the Mane Six.Their decision on what to do They cope with this information? Why, revelation by deciding to murder the originals of course.originals.
** In Chapter 25 of the original timeline, the Mean Six find out they're clones of the Mane Six.
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* BreakThemByTalking: The Mane Six as a whole use this tactic to try and talk down the Mean Six during their solo battles in the later chapters, as the Mean Six are out for blood. The Mean Six leave themselves open to it since they attempt to get their feelings about their CloningBlues off their chests. [[spoiler: Curaçao knew this would happen and not only accounted for it, but ''planned'' on it, hoping the situation would drive the evil from her sisters and make them happy.]]
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* BreakThemByTalking: The Mane Six as a whole use this tactic to try and talk down the Mean Six during their solo battles in the later chapters, as the Mean Six are out for blood. The Mean Six leave themselves open to it since they attempt to get their feelings about their CloningBlues CloneAngst off their chests. [[spoiler: Curaçao knew this would happen and not only accounted for it, but ''planned'' on it, hoping the situation would drive the evil from her sisters and make them happy.]]
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* CompanionCube: Red Velvet, like Pinkie in Party of One, loses her mind temporarily in Chapter 25 after learning [[CloningBlues she is Pinkie's clone]]. In her insanity she, again like Pinkie, pulls a bad ventriloquism act with an inanimate object that she moves and speaks for -- her blood. And again, like Pinkie, she even gives it a name: [[OverlyLongName Sir Visceral Clottington McKillicutty the Third, Esquire]]. She calls him "Clottles" because it's shorter.
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* CompanionCube: Red Velvet, like Pinkie in Party of One, loses her mind temporarily in Chapter 25 after learning [[CloningBlues [[CloneAngst she is Pinkie's clone]]. In her insanity she, again like Pinkie, pulls a bad ventriloquism act with an inanimate object that she moves and speaks for -- her blood. And again, like Pinkie, she even gives it a name: [[OverlyLongName Sir Visceral Clottington McKillicutty the Third, Esquire]]. She calls him "Clottles" because it's shorter.
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* EvilIsOneBigHappyFamily: The Mean Six become extremely tightly bonded together after learning [[CloningBlues the truth about themselves]].
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* EvilIsOneBigHappyFamily: The Mean Six become extremely tightly bonded together after [[CloneAngst learning [[CloningBlues the truth about themselves]].
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** Starlight Shadow, after her CloningBlues kicks in, is shown to be genuinely remorseful for how she treated her sisters while she was in command, and wants to make amends for it by helping Havocwing and Curaçao in any and all duties
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** Starlight Shadow, after her CloningBlues CloneAngst kicks in, is shown to be genuinely remorseful for how she treated her sisters while she was in command, and wants to make amends for it by helping Havocwing and Curaçao in any and all duties
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** Queen Blackburn: A hyper-intelligent mare with [[TerseTalker an unusual]] [[BeigeProse speech pattern]], and who proves that [[AuthorityEqualsAsskicking she is not somepony to be trifled with lightly]].
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** Queen Blackburn: A hyper-intelligent mare with [[TerseTalker an unusual]] [[BeigeProse speech pattern]], and who proves that [[AuthorityEqualsAsskicking [[RankScalesWithAsskicking she is not somepony to be trifled with lightly]].
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* FoeRomanceSubtext: [[InvokedTrope Invoked]] by Tick Tock, who taunts Starlight Shadow's attempts to frighten Twilight's group into submission by a display of power, as her basically showing off in an attempt to flirt with her. Starlight Shadow never specifically denies any sort of attraction to Tick Tock, and the 'Chronomancer' title she calls her by, eschewing her real name, can be taken as a bit of a pet name for her. Shadowstep is the only other character that knows Tick Tock's name yet still calls her Chronomancer to her face, hinting that perhaps he too falls under this trope.
* FriendToAllLivingThings: [[InvokedTrope Invoked]] and [[SubvertedTrope subverted]] by Fluttershy, who attempts to tame a [[HybridMonster Gargantuan]]. It nearly gets her killed, and Tick Tock and Havocwing both later insist that Gargantuans are monsters, not animals.
* FriendToAllLivingThings: [[InvokedTrope Invoked]] and [[SubvertedTrope subverted]] by Fluttershy, who attempts to tame a [[HybridMonster Gargantuan]]. It nearly gets her killed, and Tick Tock and Havocwing both later insist that Gargantuans are monsters, not animals.
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* FoeRomanceSubtext: [[InvokedTrope Invoked]] {{Invoked|Trope}} by Tick Tock, who taunts Starlight Shadow's attempts to frighten Twilight's group into submission by a display of power, as her basically showing off in an attempt to flirt with her. Starlight Shadow never specifically denies any sort of attraction to Tick Tock, and the 'Chronomancer' title she calls her by, eschewing her real name, can be taken as a bit of a pet name for her. Shadowstep is the only other character that knows Tick Tock's name yet still calls her Chronomancer to her face, hinting that perhaps he too falls under this trope.
* FriendToAllLivingThings:[[InvokedTrope Invoked]] {{Invoked|Trope}} and [[SubvertedTrope subverted]] {{subverted|Trope}} by Fluttershy, who attempts to tame a [[HybridMonster Gargantuan]]. It nearly gets her killed, and Tick Tock and Havocwing both later insist that Gargantuans are monsters, not animals.
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* IKnowKungFu: Pinkie claims to be skilled in [[Franchise/MetalGear CQC]] and attempts to attack Curaçao using her technique. [[WhatTheFuAreYouDoing Curaçao is not impressed]].
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* IKnowKungFu: Pinkie claims to be skilled in [[Franchise/MetalGear [[VideoGame/MetalGear CQC]] and attempts to attack Curaçao using her technique. [[WhatTheFuAreYouDoing Curaçao is not impressed]].
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* PowerOfTheStorm: Rainbow Dash's power allows her to control and create weather by flying in a certain way. Spinning creates [[BlowYouAway tornadoes]], using static electricity creates [[ShockandAwe lightning]], and so on. We've yet to see anything besides though two, though.
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* PowerOfTheStorm: Rainbow Dash's power allows her to control and create weather by flying in a certain way. Spinning creates [[BlowYouAway tornadoes]], using static electricity creates [[ShockandAwe [[ShockAndAwe lightning]], and so on. We've yet to see anything besides though two, though.
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** Pinkie Pie shows up in an alley to rescue Velvet from some gangsters, [[Film/GuardiansOfTheGalaxy wearing a red leather jacket, dancing to diagetic music from a boombox, and challenging her opponents to a dance-off to distract them.]] It... doesn't go as well as Star Lord's attempt.
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** Pinkie Pie shows up in an alley to rescue Velvet from some gangsters, [[Film/GuardiansOfTheGalaxy [[Film/GuardiansOfTheGalaxy2014 wearing a red leather jacket, dancing to diagetic music from a boombox, and challenging her opponents to a dance-off to distract them.]] It... doesn't go as well as Star Lord's attempt.
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** Chpater 27 is loaded with many of them, such as: ''Literature/CharlieAndTheChocolateFactory'', ''WesternAnimation/ToyStory'', ''Film/BillAndTed'', and ''Series/MysteryScienceTheater3000'' (specifically, the ''Film/SpaceMutiny'' episode).
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** Chpater 27 is loaded with many of them, such as: ''Literature/CharlieAndTheChocolateFactory'', ''WesternAnimation/ToyStory'', ''Franchise/ToyStory'', ''Film/BillAndTed'', and ''Series/MysteryScienceTheater3000'' (specifically, the ''Film/SpaceMutiny'' episode).
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** The Snails {{Expy}} engages in a back-and-forth password guessing game with Rainbow Dash in Chapter 23, and the exchange is pretty much lifted straight from a similar situation by the Machinima/RedVsBlue crew in ''VideoGame/Halo3''.
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** The Snails {{Expy}} engages in a back-and-forth password guessing game with Rainbow Dash in Chapter 23, and the exchange is pretty much lifted straight from a similar situation by the Machinima/RedVsBlue WebAnimation/RedVsBlue crew in ''VideoGame/Halo3''.
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** In Chapter 31, Red Velvet drops lines from both Machinima/RedVsBlue and Film/SilenceOfTheLambs.
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** In Chapter 31, Red Velvet drops lines from both Machinima/RedVsBlue WebAnimation/RedVsBlue and Film/SilenceOfTheLambs.
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** In Book 3, Applejack, Rarity, and Zyra find themselves doing the same when Zircon and Flathoof partake in some wrestling as part of a training/workout regimen.
** Later, in Book 3, Insipid and Pinkie use a fashion show to distract and defeat a squad of Nihila cultists, combining Pinkie's cartoonish reality-warping abilities with Insipid's ability to copy said abilities.
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* FromDresstoDressing: Red Velvet tears off a stocking to serve as a bandage for Pinkie Pie after the latter is shot.
* GenreShift: The original fanfic (CRISIS: Equestria) was an epic adventure. This changes in this fanfic, which thanks to the divergence becomes a mundane slice of life instead.
* GenreShift: The original fanfic (CRISIS: Equestria) was an epic adventure. This changes in this fanfic, which thanks to the divergence becomes a mundane slice of life instead.
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* FromDresstoDressing: FromDressToDressing: Red Velvet tears off a stocking to serve as a bandage for Pinkie Pie after the latter is shot.
* GenreShift: The original fanfic (CRISIS: Equestria) was an epic adventure. This changes in this fanfic, which thanks to the divergence becomes a mundane slice of lifeinstead.instead, at least in the first and second volumes. The third volume becomes a multi-genre story, with adventure, political intrigue, and war as its major plot elements.
* GenreShift: The original fanfic (CRISIS: Equestria) was an epic adventure. This changes in this fanfic, which thanks to the divergence becomes a mundane slice of life
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* KarmaHoudini: Lord Silvertongue has centuries of atrocities under his belt all done in the name of vanquishing Nihila for good and absorbing her power to take her place as a god. He not only succeeds, but because he is absolutely necessary at this point to send the Mane Six home, they cannot attempt to punish him without putting their own world at risk.
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* KarmaHoudini: Lord Silvertongue has centuries of atrocities under his belt all done in the name of vanquishing Nihila for good and absorbing her power to take her place as a god. He not only succeeds, but because he is absolutely necessary at this point to send the Mane Six home, they cannot attempt to punish him without putting their own world at risk. [[spoiler:He survives all the way through the story, with his final scene shared with Twilight, and she acknowledges that he's escaped punishment for these misdeeds but that she can't rightly judge him for his actions--his reference to Starlight Glimmer serves to remind her that she has forgiven some truly horrible things in the name of friendship.]]
** Averted once the second and third books come about, which deal with much the same stakes as the original and its sequel and become just as violent and dark in many places due to Nihila and her cult. Examples include:
*** A squad of cultists attacking an arcade and killing dozens of civilians in an attempt to kidnap Velvet's wards (and also injuring one of said wards—a young colt—and nearly killing Velvet in the process) before Velvet violently and messily slaughters the lot.
*** A cloaked warship ambushing Blackburn and her family, who are on a diplomatic mission of peace; Blackburn's two foals are with her, as are her husband, their two bodyguards, and a dear family friend. Said family friend, Briarthorn, dies protecting Lockwood and his daughter, and Havoc arrives too late to prevent his death. Havoc, meanwhile, is nearly killed as well, and though she destroys the hostile ship, she loses an eye and has to get several organ transplants.
*** Nihila releasing a monstrous phoenix, who manages to destroy a huge section of New Pandemonium City's Outer District (essentially slums) and kills potentially thousands of innocent ponies in her rampage.
*** A squad of cultists attacking an arcade and killing dozens of civilians in an attempt to kidnap Velvet's wards (and also injuring one of said wards—a young colt—and nearly killing Velvet in the process) before Velvet violently and messily slaughters the lot.
*** A cloaked warship ambushing Blackburn and her family, who are on a diplomatic mission of peace; Blackburn's two foals are with her, as are her husband, their two bodyguards, and a dear family friend. Said family friend, Briarthorn, dies protecting Lockwood and his daughter, and Havoc arrives too late to prevent his death. Havoc, meanwhile, is nearly killed as well, and though she destroys the hostile ship, she loses an eye and has to get several organ transplants.
*** Nihila releasing a monstrous phoenix, who manages to destroy a huge section of New Pandemonium City's Outer District (essentially slums) and kills potentially thousands of innocent ponies in her rampage.
* NonIdleRich: All of Silvertongue's daughters, by virtue of inheriting his immeasurable wealth and influence, are by nature extremely well off; not a one of them would ever need to lift a hoof for the rest of their lives. Despite this, all of them have their own lives and contribute much to their world once they're given the freedom to do so.
** Golden Dawn takes over her father's position and uses the wealth and connections in her possession attempting to better the city (which Nihila would have never allowed Silvertongue to do).
** Havoc uses her wealth and connections to buy a defunct semi-pro skyball team (the one she and Rainbow used to play on), and eventually turns it into a professional team with its own training facility, a youth center, merchandise, and the like. Not just for fun, either, but to provide jobs (as players) for her and Rainbow's old team, all of whom are professional caliber players that caught a bad break.
** Insipid distanced herself entirely from her family's inheritance and became rich and famous entirely through her own charisma and beauty, admittedly with a jumpstart thanks to her father's input. She used her celebrity repute to start a non-profit organization dedicated to helping ponies overcome workplace sexual harrassment.
** Gray Skies also distances herself from her family's inheritance, to a degree, only using her political connections to serve as an ambassador to Hope's Point.
** Curaçao serves behind the scenes helping all of her sisters with their endeavors, but also as a chief spymaster for Golden Dawn to serve the city's interests.
** Red Velvet essentially "adopts" dozens of orphans who were created artificially as part of a supersoldier program her father started (and officially adopts one of them as her legitimate son), and helps convert part of the enigmatic Pandora Tower into a school and dormitory for them. She herself serves as a teacher, and her sisters also participate at times.
** Golden Dawn takes over her father's position and uses the wealth and connections in her possession attempting to better the city (which Nihila would have never allowed Silvertongue to do).
** Havoc uses her wealth and connections to buy a defunct semi-pro skyball team (the one she and Rainbow used to play on), and eventually turns it into a professional team with its own training facility, a youth center, merchandise, and the like. Not just for fun, either, but to provide jobs (as players) for her and Rainbow's old team, all of whom are professional caliber players that caught a bad break.
** Insipid distanced herself entirely from her family's inheritance and became rich and famous entirely through her own charisma and beauty, admittedly with a jumpstart thanks to her father's input. She used her celebrity repute to start a non-profit organization dedicated to helping ponies overcome workplace sexual harrassment.
** Gray Skies also distances herself from her family's inheritance, to a degree, only using her political connections to serve as an ambassador to Hope's Point.
** Curaçao serves behind the scenes helping all of her sisters with their endeavors, but also as a chief spymaster for Golden Dawn to serve the city's interests.
** Red Velvet essentially "adopts" dozens of orphans who were created artificially as part of a supersoldier program her father started (and officially adopts one of them as her legitimate son), and helps convert part of the enigmatic Pandora Tower into a school and dormitory for them. She herself serves as a teacher, and her sisters also participate at times.
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* RecycledScript: The first several chapters of the story and certain other aspects are taken from the original story with only minor modifications until the major divergence event causes things to start changing rapidly going forward.
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* RecycledScript: The first several chapters of the story and certain other aspects are taken from the original story with only minor modifications until the major divergence event causes things to start changing rapidly going forward. The third volume also uses a similar premise as the original story's sequel (the Mane Six return to Equestria-V, where Nihila is attempting a comeback, one party stays at Goldridge for an extended period due to the new weather conditions, and multiple forces unite together to put an end to Nihila's plans).
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** Pinkie Pie shows up in an alley to rescue Velvet from some gangsters, [[Film/GuardiansOfTheGalaxy wearing a red leather jacket, dancing to diagetic music from a boombox, and challenging her opponents to a dance-off to distract them.]] It... doesn't go as well.
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** Pinkie Pie shows up in an alley to rescue Velvet from some gangsters, [[Film/GuardiansOfTheGalaxy wearing a red leather jacket, dancing to diagetic music from a boombox, and challenging her opponents to a dance-off to distract them.]] It... doesn't go as well.well as Star Lord's attempt.
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* VitriolicBestBuds: Rainbow and Havoc form this sort of friendship, where they have no qualms with poking fun at one another while still remaining extremely good friends. Havoc learns which buttons aren't okay to push, of course—Rainbow does appreciate being made fun of because she's gay—and Rainbow does likewise (see Virgin Shaming above).
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* TheMeanBrit: Given that Tick is both a {{Jerkass}} and a DeadpanSnarker, complete with a lovable British accent, it only makes sense for her to be considered this. She drops the {{Jerkass}} qualities later in the fic, and while that hardly stops her from continuing to snark at every opportunity it feels like she's doing it more out of love than anything else.
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* {{Whatevermancy}}: Just about every single thing you can do has some sort of type of magic related to it, from handling herbs (Biomancy) or animals (Zoolomancy), to even [[UpToEleven talking]] (Sociomancy).
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* {{Whatevermancy}}: Just about every single thing you can do has some sort of type of magic related to it, from handling herbs (Biomancy) or animals (Zoolomancy), to even [[UpToEleven talking]] talking (Sociomancy).
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: Pinkie Pie, natch. It's how her superpower works, even. Red Velvet, whose fear-inducing power seems to run on the same idea, [[UpToEleven takes this to a new level]], literally corrupting and breaking the document text in Chapter 24.
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: Pinkie Pie, natch. It's how her superpower works, even. Red Velvet, whose fear-inducing power seems to run on the same idea, [[UpToEleven takes this to a new level]], level, literally corrupting and breaking the document text in Chapter 24.
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* BuffySpeak: Tick Tock and Twilight often go into lengthy descriptions of how certain types of magic work; Gilderoy takes this [[UpToEleven even further]], but does a reasonable job of putting it all in layman's terms. When these are referred to again in the future, Rarity is usually able to recite it word-for-word, often adding her own flair to it; Rainbow Dash and Applejack, on the other hand, fall into [[BuffySpeak this]]. [[TheDitz Insipid fills the role for her group]].
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* BuffySpeak: Tick Tock and Twilight often go into lengthy descriptions of how certain types of magic work; Gilderoy takes this [[UpToEleven even further]], further, but does a reasonable job of putting it all in layman's terms. When these are referred to again in the future, Rarity is usually able to recite it word-for-word, often adding her own flair to it; Rainbow Dash and Applejack, on the other hand, fall into [[BuffySpeak this]]. [[TheDitz Insipid fills the role for her group]].
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* DrunkOnTheDarkSide: Red Velvet goes a little nuts in Chapter 16/17 after feasting on the fears of Pinkie Pie and friends. She does it again in Chapter 24, and [[UpToEleven cranks it up a notch]] while singing "Scream", her DarkReprise of Pinkie's "Smile" in Chapter 24, becoming so engorged and confident that she stands up to [[SmugSuper Starlight Shadow]]. And wins.
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* DrunkOnTheDarkSide: Red Velvet goes a little nuts in Chapter 16/17 after feasting on the fears of Pinkie Pie and friends. She does it again in Chapter 24, and [[UpToEleven cranks it up a notch]] notch while singing "Scream", her DarkReprise of Pinkie's "Smile" in Chapter 24, becoming so engorged and confident that she stands up to [[SmugSuper Starlight Shadow]]. And wins.
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* IShallTauntYou: Tick Tock pulls an absolutely [[UpToEleven ridiculous]] one on Starlight Shadow in Chapter 17, goading the hyper-powered unicorn into triggering the conditions for Tick Tock to use her mentor's Time Keeper to freeze time and allow her group to escape. Of course, she underestimates Starlight's [[BerserkButton anger]] being able to overpower the spell, but this trope pops up again in Chapter 21, where Twilight uses it to distract Starlight long enough to save Tick Tock's life.
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* IShallTauntYou: Tick Tock pulls an absolutely [[UpToEleven ridiculous]] ridiculous one on Starlight Shadow in Chapter 17, goading the hyper-powered unicorn into triggering the conditions for Tick Tock to use her mentor's Time Keeper to freeze time and allow her group to escape. Of course, she underestimates Starlight's [[BerserkButton anger]] being able to overpower the spell, but this trope pops up again in Chapter 21, where Twilight uses it to distract Starlight long enough to save Tick Tock's life.
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* InsultBackfire: Rarity's attempt to insult Starlight Shadow's SesquipedalianLoquaciousness by calling her a walking thesaurus fails miserably, as Starlight goes ahead and [[UpToEleven embraces it]]:
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* TeleportSpam: Twilight and Starlight's battle in Chapter 21 utilizes this to its fullest, combined with a healthy dose of DoppelgangerAttack from Twilight just to take it [[UpToEleven a step further]].
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* TeleportSpam: Twilight and Starlight's battle in Chapter 21 utilizes this to its fullest, combined with a healthy dose of DoppelgangerAttack from Twilight just to take it [[UpToEleven a step further]].further.
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* RantInducingSlight: Rainbow Dash has an ''amazing'' one in Chapter 22 when she learns that the group is, once again, taking a detour when they are all literally starving.
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* RantInducingSlight: RageBreakingPoint: Rainbow Dash has an ''amazing'' one in Chapter 22 when she learns that the group is, once again, taking a detour when they are all literally starving.
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An audio play was in production by [[https://www.youtube.com/user/BogyleBronies Bogyle Bronies]], with heavy involvement by the writers. The play [[DeadFic has not been updated since 2014]], where it stopped on the second chapter. The VAs released some samples of their lines [[https://soundcloud.com/crisisequestria-1 here]].
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An audio play was in production by [[https://www.youtube.com/user/BogyleBronies Bogyle Bronies]], with heavy involvement by the writers. The play [[DeadFic has not been updated since 2014]], where it stopped on the second chapter. The VAs [=VAs=] released some samples of their lines [[https://soundcloud.com/crisisequestria-1 here]].
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There are also other ponies that don't exactly want to see them make it home and all go to great lengths to keep the Mane Six from their goal. Their primary opponents? A team of suspiciously similar [[EvilCounterpart Evil Counterparts]] -- [[SmugSuper Starlight Shadow]], [[TheSpock Grayscale Force]], [[ConsummateLiar Curaçao]], [[LeeroyJenkins Havocwing]], [[AxCrazy Red Velvet]], and [[TheDitz Insipid]] -- their father [[MagnificentBastard Silvertongue]], and his personal assassin [[PsychoForHire Shadowstep]].
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There are also other ponies that don't exactly want to see them make it home and all go to great lengths to keep the Mane Six from their goal. Their primary opponents? A team of suspiciously similar [[EvilCounterpart Evil Counterparts]] -- [[SmugSuper Starlight Shadow]], [[TheSpock Grayscale Force]], [[ConsummateLiar Curaçao]], [[LeeroyJenkins Havocwing]], [[AxCrazy Red Velvet]], and [[TheDitz Insipid]] -- their father [[MagnificentBastard [[ManipulativeBastard Silvertongue]], and his personal assassin [[PsychoForHire Shadowstep]].
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Also within the CRISIS-verse is an alternate timeline version of the original story called ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/474354/crisis-equestria-divergence CRISIS: Equestria - Divergence]]'', which drastically alters a few key events and adopts a different genre altogether, and which the author is currently treating as their main work. It is complete at 29 chapters and an epilogue, with [[WordOfGod the author claiming to be working on further stories in the new timeline]]; a now completed sequel called [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/487684/crisis-equestria-divergence-book-2 CRISIS: Equestria - Divergence, Book 2]], and another sequel called [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/499569/crisis-equestria-divergence-book-3 CRISIS: Equestria - Divergence, Book 3]]. The prequel story A Royal Affair is still considered canon in this timeline. It now has a kinky spinoff called ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/474933/crisis-equestria-after-hours-volume-2 CRISIS: Equestria: After Hours, Volume 2]]''.
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Also within the CRISIS-verse is an alternate timeline version of the original story called ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/474354/crisis-equestria-divergence CRISIS: Equestria - Divergence]]'', which drastically alters a few key events and adopts a different genre altogether, and which the author is currently treating as their main work. It is complete at 29 chapters and an epilogue, with [[WordOfGod the author claiming to be working on further stories in the new timeline]]; a now completed sequel called [[https://www.''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/487684/crisis-equestria-divergence-book-2 CRISIS: Equestria - Divergence, Book 2]], 2]]'', and another sequel called [[https://www.''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/499569/crisis-equestria-divergence-book-3 CRISIS: Equestria - Divergence, Book 3]].3]]''. The prequel story A Royal Affair is still considered canon in this timeline. It now has a kinky spinoff called ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/474933/crisis-equestria-after-hours-volume-2 CRISIS: Equestria: After Hours, Volume 2]]''.
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Also within the CRISIS-verse is an alternate timeline version of the original story called ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/474354/crisis-equestria-divergence CRISIS: Equestria - Divergence]]'', which drastically alters a few key events and adopts a different genre altogether, and which the author is currently treating as their main work. It is complete at 29 chapters and an epilogue, with [[WordOfGod the author claiming to be working on further stories in the new timeline]]; the [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/487684/crisis-equestria-divergence-book-2 first of these]] has already been released! The prequel story A Royal Affair is still considered canon in this timeline. It now has a kinky spinoff called ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/474933/crisis-equestria-after-hours-volume-2 CRISIS: Equestria: After Hours, Volume 2]]''.
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Also within the CRISIS-verse is an alternate timeline version of the original story called ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/474354/crisis-equestria-divergence CRISIS: Equestria - Divergence]]'', which drastically alters a few key events and adopts a different genre altogether, and which the author is currently treating as their main work. It is complete at 29 chapters and an epilogue, with [[WordOfGod the author claiming to be working on further stories in the new timeline]]; the a now completed sequel called [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/487684/crisis-equestria-divergence-book-2 first of these]] has already been released! CRISIS: Equestria - Divergence, Book 2]], and another sequel called [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/499569/crisis-equestria-divergence-book-3 CRISIS: Equestria - Divergence, Book 3]]. The prequel story A Royal Affair is still considered canon in this timeline. It now has a kinky spinoff called ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/474933/crisis-equestria-after-hours-volume-2 CRISIS: Equestria: After Hours, Volume 2]]''.
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* GenreShift: The original fanfic (CRISIS: Equestria) was an epic adventure. This changes in this fanfic, which thanks to the divergence becomes a mundane slice of life instead.
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** {{Jossed}} in Chapter 25, when after finding out the truth about themselves, Insipid wants nothing to do with Curaçao, as the latter is no longer "perfect" and thus no longer worth imitating or devoting attention to.
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Also within the CRISIS-verse is an alternate timeline version of the original story called ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/474354/crisis-equestria-divergence CRISIS: Equestria - Divergence]]'', which drastically alters a few key events and adopts a different genre altogether, and which the author is currently treating as their main work. It is complete at 29 chapters and an epilogue, with [[WordOfGod the author claiming to be working on further stories in the new timeline]]; the ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/487684/crisis-equestria-divergence-book-2 first of these]]'' has already been released! The prequel story A Royal Affair is still considered canon in this timeline. It now has a kinky spinoff called ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/474933/crisis-equestria-after-hours-volume-2 CRISIS: Equestria: After Hours, Volume 2]]''.
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Also within the CRISIS-verse is an alternate timeline version of the original story called ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/474354/crisis-equestria-divergence CRISIS: Equestria - Divergence]]'', which drastically alters a few key events and adopts a different genre altogether, and which the author is currently treating as their main work. It is complete at 29 chapters and an epilogue, with [[WordOfGod the author claiming to be working on further stories in the new timeline]]; the ''[[https://www.[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/487684/crisis-equestria-divergence-book-2 first of these]]'' these]] has already been released! The prequel story A Royal Affair is still considered canon in this timeline. It now has a kinky spinoff called ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/474933/crisis-equestria-after-hours-volume-2 CRISIS: Equestria: After Hours, Volume 2]]''.
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Also within the CRISIS-verse is an alternate timeline version of the original story called ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/474354/crisis-equestria-divergence CRISIS: Equestria - Divergence]]'', which drastically alters a few key events and adopts a different genre altogether, and which the author is currently treating as their main work. It is complete at 29 chapters and an epilogue, with [[WordOfGod the author claiming to be working on further stories in the new timeline]]. The prequel story A Royal Affair is still considered canon in this timeline. It now has a kinky spinoff called ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/474933/crisis-equestria-after-hours-volume-2 CRISIS: Equestria: After Hours, Volume 2]]''.
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Also within the CRISIS-verse is an alternate timeline version of the original story called ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/474354/crisis-equestria-divergence CRISIS: Equestria - Divergence]]'', which drastically alters a few key events and adopts a different genre altogether, and which the author is currently treating as their main work. It is complete at 29 chapters and an epilogue, with [[WordOfGod the author claiming to be working on further stories in the new timeline]]. timeline]]; the ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/487684/crisis-equestria-divergence-book-2 first of these]]'' has already been released! The prequel story A Royal Affair is still considered canon in this timeline. It now has a kinky spinoff called ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/474933/crisis-equestria-after-hours-volume-2 CRISIS: Equestria: After Hours, Volume 2]]''.
