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* TheBeard: Mary is implied to have been one to James as its pointed out to him that he enjoyed the fact [[IllGirl that Mary was often too sick to have sex]] and his feelings were platonic not romantic.
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* TheBeard: Mary is implied to have been one to James as its pointed out to him that he enjoyed the fact [[IllGirl that Mary was often too sick to have sex]] sex and his feelings were platonic not romantic.
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* AdultFear: James's father Frank Sunderland having to watch his son spiral into depression and starts acting erratically after his wife's death. When James believes that something is stalking him, Frank disregards him thinking that his son's depression and anxiety is acting up. Frank finds out too late that something really is when James goes to Silent Hill for answers. Because he disregarded his son's fears, his son is taken and never seen again.
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'''WARNING: The fic contains spoilers for VideoGame/SilentHill2. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.'''
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''[[http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600080372 Coming Home]]'' by [[http://members.adult-fanfiction.org/profile.php?no=17030&view=story Chaosdreamer]] is ''VideoGame/SilentHill2'' fanfic with a simple premise: [[FirstEpisodeSpoiler what if James]] [[NotHisSled didn't kill Mary?]]
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''[[http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600080372 Coming Home]]'' by [[http://members.adult-fanfiction.org/profile.php?no=17030&view=story Chaosdreamer]] is ''VideoGame/SilentHill2'' fanfic with a simple premise: [[FirstEpisodeSpoiler [[FirstEpisodeTwist what if James]] [[NotHisSled didn't kill Mary?]]
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* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: It's mentioned in the summary of the story that James didn't kill his wife, Mary.
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* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: FirstEpisodeTwist: It's mentioned in the summary of the story that James didn't kill his wife, Mary.
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* NotIfTheyEnjoyedItRationalization:
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* NotIfTheyEnjoyedItRationalization: James is rather disturbed and disgusted that he started to enjoy [[spoiler: Vatiel and Pyramid Head's physical and sexual abuse of him.]]
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* TramaCongaLine: James' wife dies after years of suffering a terminal illness. Then he gets stalked and attacked at his own home and gets into a car accident during his search for answers. The two people he finds in Silent Hill is either a sexual predator or psychotic. He gets cornered by Pyramid Head and Vatiel [[spoiler: is raped by the both of them and transformed into HumanoidAbomination. He then is forced to deny his father's rescue of him for his father's safety.]]
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* TramaCongaLine: TraumaCongaLine: James' wife dies after years of suffering a terminal illness. Then he gets stalked and attacked at his own home and gets into a car accident during his search for answers. The two people he finds in Silent Hill is either a sexual predator or psychotic. He gets cornered by Pyramid Head and Vatiel [[spoiler: is raped by the both of them and transformed into HumanoidAbomination. He then is forced to deny his father's rescue of him for his father's safety.]]
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* TramaCongaLine: James' wife dies after years of suffering a terminal illness. Then he gets stalked and attacked at his own home and gets into a car accident during his search for answers. The two people he finds in Silent Hill is either a sexual predator or psychotic. He gets cornered by Pyramid Head and Vatiel [[spoiler: is raped by the both of them and transformed into HumanoidAbomination. He then is forced to deny his father's rescue of him for his father's safety.]]
* ATragedyOfImpulsiveness: Frank is quick to dismiss James' fear of a stalker and monster as paranoia and doesn't stop his son from going to Silent Hill to find answers. His actions result in James' monster gloating to him over the phone how he drove James to them and results in James being assaulted and sexually before being forced to stay.
* ATragedyOfImpulsiveness: Frank is quick to dismiss James' fear of a stalker and monster as paranoia and doesn't stop his son from going to Silent Hill to find answers. His actions result in James' monster gloating to him over the phone how he drove James to them and results in James being assaulted and sexually before being forced to stay.
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* AdultFear: James's father Frank Sunderland having to watch his son spiral into depression and starts acting erratically after his wife's death. When James believes that something is stalking him, Frank disregards him thinking that his son's depression and anxiety is acting up. Frank finds out too late that something really is after James just after James left the safety of their home. Because he disregarded his son's fears, his son is taken and never seen again.
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* AdultFear: James's father Frank Sunderland having to watch his son spiral into depression and starts acting erratically after his wife's death. When James believes that something is stalking him, Frank disregards him thinking that his son's depression and anxiety is acting up. Frank finds out too late that something really is after when James just after James left the safety of their home.goes to Silent Hill for answers. Because he disregarded his son's fears, his son is taken and never seen again.
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* ClosedCircle: James is trapped in Silent Hill after the monsters destroy his car for getting him into a car accident and getting him hurt.
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* ClosedCircle: James is trapped in Silent Hill after the monsters destroy his car for getting him he gets into a car accident and getting him hurt.there. The monsters make sure to destroy his car to make sure that he can't leave.
* DownerBeginning: The story begins during Mary's funeral with James in despair over her death. It doesn't get any better for James.
* DownerBeginning: The story begins during Mary's funeral with James in despair over her death. It doesn't get any better for James.
* KickTheDog: Pyramid Head and the other monster brag during their phone call to Frank that they will sexually assault James when they get their hands on him. Which they do solely to rub it in that Frank is helpless to stop them.
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* NotHisSled: The premise is that
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* NotHisSled: The premise is that Mary died naturally of her illness and James had nothing to do with it.
* PoliceAreUseless: The police do investigate James' disappearance but then dismiss the case believing that James left to get away from an overbearing father.
* PoliceAreUseless: The police do investigate James' disappearance but then dismiss the case believing that James left to get away from an overbearing father.
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''[[http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600080372 Coming Home]]'' by [[http://members.adult-fanfiction.org/profile.php?no=17030&view=story Chaosdreamer]] is ''VideoGame/SilentHill2'' fanfic with a simple premise: [[FirstEpisodeSpoiler what if James]] [[NotHisSled didn't kill Mary?]] Regardless of that, Silent Hill still calls for him; it just uses a different method to get him there.
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''[[http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600080372 Coming Home]]'' by [[http://members.adult-fanfiction.org/profile.php?no=17030&view=story Chaosdreamer]] is ''VideoGame/SilentHill2'' fanfic with a simple premise: [[FirstEpisodeSpoiler what if James]] [[NotHisSled didn't kill Mary?]] Regardless of that, Mary?]]
James is in despair after Mary finally succumbs to her terminal illness despite his hope. His father invites hims to stay with him after Mary's funeral for emotional support which James accepts.
But then James' mourning is interrupted when something dark comes after him. He tries to ignore it, he tries to dismiss it as his imagination. But it does not rest until James goes to SilentHill still calls for him; it just uses a different method to get him there.
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James is in despair after Mary finally succumbs to her terminal illness despite his hope. His father invites hims to stay with him after Mary's funeral for emotional support which James accepts.
But then James' mourning is interrupted when something dark comes after him. He tries to ignore it, he tries to dismiss it as his imagination. But it does not rest until James goes to Silent
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* NotHisSled: The premise
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* NotHisSled: The premisepremise is that
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* AdultFear: James's father Frank Sunderland having to watch his son spiral into depression and starts acting erratically after his wife's death. Frank find out that James is being stalked by a powerful force that is obsessed with him after he didn't believe his son's fears that something was out to get him. Frank finds it would do anything to possess him and outright threatens sexual violence on James to Frank. After his son goes Silent Hill, Frank never sees his son again.
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* AdultFear: James's father Frank Sunderland having to watch his son spiral into depression and starts acting erratically after his wife's death. When James believes that something is stalking him, Frank find out disregards him thinking that James is being stalked by a powerful force that is obsessed with him after he didn't believe his son's fears depression and anxiety is acting up. Frank finds out too late that something was out to get him. Frank finds it would do anything to possess him and outright threatens sexual violence on really is after James to Frank. After just after James left the safety of their home. Because he disregarded his son's fears, his son goes Silent Hill, Frank is taken and never sees his son again. seen again.
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* AgentScully: Frank is hesitant to believe James when he tells him he is being attacked by monsters, but to be fair to Frank his son has been dangerously depressed and suicidal after his daughter-in-law's death.
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* AgentScully: Frank is hesitant to believe James when he tells him he is being attacked by monsters, [[JustifiedTrope but to be fair to Frank his son has been dangerously depressed and suicidal suicidal]] after his daughter-in-law's death.
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* TheCallKnowsWhereYouLive: Quite literally
* CassandraTruth: Frank attempts to involve the police to help him find James, after a search the cops conclude that James simply ran away from the old man.
* CassandraTruth: Frank attempts to involve the police to help him find James, after a search the cops conclude that James simply ran away from the old man.
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* TheBeard: Mary is implied to have been one to James as its pointed out to him that he enjoyed the fact [[IllGirl that Mary was often too sick to have sex]] and his feelings were platonic not romantic.
* TheCallKnowsWhereYouLive: Quiteliterally
literally, the monsters of Silent Hill calls James through his phone to talk to him to make him come to Silent Hill.
* CassandraTruth: When James tells his father that he believes that something is out to get him, Frankattempts to involve dismiss him as being paranoid.
** ContagiousCassandraTruth: Unfortunately by thepolice to help time Frank found out the truth, nobody believes him find James, after a search the cops conclude that James simply ran away from the old man.when he tries to get help.
* TheCallKnowsWhereYouLive: Quite
* CassandraTruth: When James tells his father that he believes that something is out to get him, Frank
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* ForWantOfANail: The forces in Silent Hill have to resort to different methods of making James stay in Silent Hill since he doesn't have his obsession for find Mary.
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* ForWantOfANail: The forces in Silent Hill have to resort to different methods of making James stay in Silent Hill since he doesn't have his obsession for to find Mary.
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* ClosedCircle: James is trapped in Silent Hill after the monster destroy his car for getting him into a car accident and getting him hurt.
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* ClosedCircle: James is trapped in Silent Hill after the monster monsters destroy his car for getting him into a car accident and getting him hurt.
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* [[spoiler: DeusSexMachina]]: James becomes a HumanoidAbomination [[spoiler: after being forced in sex with Pyramid Head and Vatiel]], he even notes that its a plot to a bad porno.
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* [[spoiler: DeusSexMachina]]: James becomes a HumanoidAbomination [[spoiler: after being forced in into sex with Pyramid Head and Vatiel]], he he even notes that its a plot to a bad porno.
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* [[DeusSexMachina]]: James becomes a HumanoidAbomination [[spoiler: after being forced in sex with Pyramid Head and Vatiel]], he even notes that its a plot to a bad porno.
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* [[DeusSexMachina]]: [[spoiler: DeusSexMachina]]: James becomes a HumanoidAbomination [[spoiler: after being forced in sex with Pyramid Head and Vatiel]], he he even notes that its a plot to a bad porno.
* ArmorPiercingQuestion: James's conscience is quick to point that when James is mourning Mary that James doesn't mention loving Mary when he mentions that their marriage was anchor for him and how her death disrupts the established pattern in his life.
* ClosedCircle: James is trapped in Silent Hill after the monster destroy his car for getting him into a car accident and getting him hurt.
* [[DeusSexMachina]]: James becomes a HumanoidAbomination [[spoiler: after being forced in sex with Pyramid Head and Vatiel]], he even notes that its a plot to a bad porno.
* [[spoiler: HumanoidAbomination]]: by the end, James.
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* WantsAPrizeForBasicPremise: Pyramid Head argues that he ''hasn't'' [[spoiler: raped]] James because if he did, James would be [[OutWithABang dead.]]
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* WantsAPrizeForBasicPremise: WantsAPrizeForBasicDecency: Pyramid Head argues that he ''hasn't'' [[spoiler: raped]] James because if he did, James would be [[OutWithABang dead.]]
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* [[spoiler: DownerEnding: James is turned into a demon and is forced to remain in Silent Hill to protect his father and he and Frank will never see each other again]]
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* CassandraTruth: Frank attempts to involve the police to help him find James, after a search the cops conclude that James simply ran away from the old man.
* [[spoiler: DownerEnding: Due to its status as a DeadFic James is turned into a demon and is forced to remain in Silent Hill to protect his father and he and Frank will never see each other again]]
* [[spoiler: DownerEnding: Due to its status as a DeadFic James is turned into a demon and is forced to remain in Silent Hill to protect his father and he and Frank will never see each other again]]
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* NotHisSledNotHisSled: The premise
* WantsAPrizeForBasicPremise: Pyramid Head argues that he ''hasn't'' [[spoiler: raped]] James because if he did, James would be [[OutWithABang dead.]]
* WantsAPrizeForBasicPremise: Pyramid Head argues that he ''hasn't'' [[spoiler: raped]] James because if he did, James would be [[OutWithABang dead.]]
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