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An [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7560920/1/Children_of_the_Stars ongoing Drama/Romance Fanfic]] based on the ever popular {{World of Warcraft}} MMORPG.

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An [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7560920/1/Children_of_the_Stars ongoing Drama/Romance Fanfic]] based on the ever popular {{World ''VideoGame/{{World of Warcraft}} Warcraft}}'' MMORPG.

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* {{Bookends}}: The beginning of chapter 14 has Keleria in a nightmare, trapped and sinking into darkness and screaming for Ayuri to help her. At the end, she's having the same nightmare, but Ayuri is there to "keep her safe" and she sleeps peacefully.


* EnemyWithin: [[spoiler: Lexxias's "corruption" acts more like a separate entity only peripherally influenced by her feelings for Keleria, as when it's clear Keleria doesn't want to join her, Lexxias takes great pleasure in attempting to kill her.]]

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* EnemyWithin: [[spoiler: Lexxias's "corruption" acts more like is revealed to be a separate sentient demonic entity only peripherally influenced by that tried to hijack her feelings for Keleria, as when it's clear Keleria doesn't want to join her, Lexxias takes great pleasure in attempting to kill her.body.]]

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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 10 changes the tone of the story very quickly.


* [[ManBitesMan Woman Bites Man]]: Keleria threatens to do this to the throat of a smith who is withholding her equipment (which she previously gave to him for free) which gives her a ''healthy'' dose of AxCrazy to go along with her previously very calm behaviour in the last scene.

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* [[ManBitesMan Woman Bites Man]]: Keleria threatens MindRape: ''Never'' hurt Ayuri or those she cares about. Being a shadow priest allows her to do this to the throat of a smith who is withholding her equipment (which she previously gave to him for free) which gives her a ''healthy'' dose of AxCrazy to go along with a wave of her previously very calm behaviour in the last scene.hand. And she will ruin you until you kill yourself to escape her.


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* [[ManBitesMan Woman Bites Man]]: Keleria threatens to do this to the throat of a smith who is withholding her equipment (which she previously gave to him for free) which gives her a ''healthy'' dose of AxCrazy to go along with her previously very calm behaviour in the last scene.

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** [[spoiler: Chapter 10 reveals Ayuri has one in the form of Revera Blackfang, the spirit of a Kal'dorei magus who fought during the War of the Ancients 10,000 years ago. Revera proceeds to unhinge whatever the hell is inside Keleria, giving her a taste of how Ayuri lives as well.]]

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* {{Gayngst}}: Subverted. Whilst Keleria does repeatedly note that Ayuri is already in a relationship with a male - [[BlatantLies thus totally wouldn't feel attracted to her]] - most of Keleria's pain is caused simply ''because'' she's in love with Ayuri. She inherently feels it is ''wrong'' for her to love Ayuri because the girl is already taken.

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* RelationshipUpgrade: Cemented as of Chapter 9.

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* LoveTriangle: A type 7 with Ayuri having to choose between Servestor and Keleria. Given how the story is tagged with "F/F" it should be obvious who she ultimately chooses. She does feel guilty for betraying Servestor however.

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* CannotSpitItOut: Keleria ''won't'' allow herself to spit it out.

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* LoveHurts: To the point where [[spoiler: Keleria tries to kill herself.]]

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* IncredibleShrinkingMan: Takes up the second half of the outtakes chapter, thanks to the Noggenfogger Elixir.


* {{Kuudere}}: The second chapter shows Ayuri to be this.



* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Keleria has this, missing exactly three years of her life. Granted this could have been an extremely ''severe'' [[HeroicBlueScreenOfDeath blue screen]] considering [[StakingTheLovedOne what happened]] right before it was induced. Too bad ''that'' wasn't the moment she specifically can't remember.



* MasterOfTheMixedMessage: Ayuri, whether intentional or not, bringing vast degrees of confusion and undeserved self-deprecation to Keleria's life.



* OneHeadTaller: Ayuri is relatively short for a Kal'dorei, being 6'6 and making her one head shorter than Keleria.



* RedEyesTakeWarning: There's hints of it in the new first chapter when Keleria [[GroinAttack politely]] convinces a smith to give her back her equipment.
** It tends to happen whenever she enters her bloodrage state.



* TechnicallyASmile: Keleria has this in the third chapter.

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