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Written by Artimae and Post Script, this story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/165541/cape-and-cowl here.]]
[[Roleplay/CapeAndCowl Not to be confused with the roleplay of the same name.]]
This story now has a become a trilogy which has the following stories, all of which forms the Red Hoof Trilogy:
[[Roleplay/CapeAndCowl Not to be confused with the roleplay of the same name.]]
This story now has a become a trilogy which has the following stories, all of which forms the Red Hoof Trilogy:
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Written by Artimae and Post Script, this ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/165541/cape-and-cowl here.]]
[[Roleplay/CapeAndCowl Not to be confused with the roleplay of the same name.]]
This story now has a become a trilogy which has the following stories, all of which forms the Red ''Red Hoof Trilogy: Trilogy'':
Not to be confused with [[Roleplay/CapeAndCowl the roleplay of the same name.]]
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* TheReveal: Bolt Buck is [[spoiler:Primrose's coltfriend and one of Frost Storm's murderers.]]
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** Bolt Buck is [[spoiler:Primrose's coltfriend and one of Frost Storm's murderers.]]
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* [[TheStoolPigeon The Stool Pigeon - Betrayer Barry:]] Bolt Buck tells Snow Storm who her brother's other murderers are and where they are after he's put into the hospital by her attacking him the night before.
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* [[TheStoolPigeon The Stool Pigeon - Betrayer Barry:]] TheStoolPigeon: Bolt Buck tells Snow Storm who her brother's other murderers are and where they are after he's put into the hospital by her attacking him the night before.
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** Flyntt is more 'LawfulNeutral.' Chapter Three's Murdoc is more [[GoodCopBadCop Bad Cop]], being close to 'LawfulEvil'.
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** Flyntt is more 'LawfulNeutral.' LawfulNeutral. Chapter Three's Murdoc is more [[GoodCopBadCop Bad Cop]], being close to 'LawfulEvil'.LawfulEvil.
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* TheSpeechless: Snow Storm; presumably, the murder of her brother traumatized her to the point that she can't speak. [[spoiler: At the end of the story, she is able to speak when thinking of Frosty speaking to her, who is apparently something from her conscious]]
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* TheSpeechless: Snow Storm; presumably, the murder of her brother traumatized her to the point that she can't speak. [[spoiler: At the end of the story, she is able to speak when thinking of Frosty speaking to her, who is apparently something from her conscious]]conscious.]]
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* ProfessionalKillers: According to Flyntt, Princess Luna had her own group of assassins who formed years ago. They are apparently still active, even after all the years of Luna's imprisonment when she was Nightmare Moon.
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* TheSpeechless: Snow Storm; presumably, the murder of her brother traumatized her to the point that she can't speak. [[spoiler: At the end of the story, she is able to speak when thinking of Frosty speaking to her, who is apparently something from her conscious]]
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their move against Red Hoof. This is considered the conclusion story to the Red Hoof arc.
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punctuation. tried to fix the em dash. turns out it was already an em dash, so I just spaced it out to make it look better.
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This story now has a become a trilogy which has the following stories
* Cape and Cowl II: Puppetmaster- Several months after the events of the first story, Frost Storm as Mare Do Well must take down Red Hoof's criminal empire piece by piece. With dark plans being in store for Mare Do Well, Frost Storm must be able to deal with some of her new allies, or lose everything she holds dear.
* Cape and Cowl II: Puppetmaster- Several months after the events of the first story, Frost Storm as Mare Do Well must take down Red Hoof's criminal empire piece by piece. With dark plans being in store for Mare Do Well, Frost Storm must be able to deal with some of her new allies, or lose everything she holds dear.
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stories:
* Cape and Cowl II:Puppetmaster- Puppetmaster — Several months after the events of the first story, Frost Storm as Mare Do Well must take down Red Hoof's criminal empire piece by piece. With dark plans being in store for Mare Do Well, Frost Storm must be able to deal with some of her new allies, or lose everything she holds dear.
* Cape and Cowl II:
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Cape and Cowl II: Puppetmaster- Several months after the events of the first story, Frost Storm as Mare Do Well must take down Red Hoof's criminal empire piece by piece. With dark plans being in store for Mare Do Well, Frost Storm must be able to deal with some of her new allies, or lose everything she holds dear.
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This story now has a sequel which is in progress named Cape and Cowl II: Puppetmaster. Several months after the events of the first story, Frost Storm as Mare Do Well must take down Red Hoof's criminal empire piece by piece. With dark plans being in store for Mare Do Well, Frost Storm must be able to deal with some of her new allies, or lose everything she holds dear.
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This story now has a sequel become a trilogy which is in progress named has the following stories
Cape and Cowl II:Puppetmaster. Puppetmaster- Several months after the events of the first story, Frost Storm as Mare Do Well must take down Red Hoof's criminal empire piece by piece. With dark plans being in store for Mare Do Well, Frost Storm must be able to deal with some of her new allies, or lose everything she holds dear.
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This story now has a sequel which is in progress named Cape and Cowl II: Puppetmaster. Several months after the events of the first story, Frost Storm as Mare Do Well must take down Red Hoof's criminal empire piece by piece. WIth dark plans being in store for Mare Do Well, Frost Storm must be able to deal with some of her new allies, or lose everything she holds dear.
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This story now has a sequel which is in progress named Cape and Cowl II: Puppetmaster. Several months after the events of the first story, Frost Storm as Mare Do Well must take down Red Hoof's criminal empire piece by piece. WIth With dark plans being in store for Mare Do Well, Frost Storm must be able to deal with some of her new allies, or lose everything she holds dear.
