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* HugeSchoolgirl: She's a twelve-year-old student, described as gangly and awkward, who—at a confirmed height of 5'11" (slightly over 180cm) and still growing—is already promising to be taller than her adoptive father.  [[spoiler:Not too surprising, considering that her birth mother was 6'8" (203cm)...]]

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* HugeSchoolgirl: She's a twelve-year-old student, described as gangly and awkward, who—at a confirmed height of 5'11" (slightly over 180cm) and still growing—is already promising to be taller than her adoptive father.  [[spoiler:Not too surprising, considering that her birth mother was 6'8" (203cm)...(2.03m)...]]


* HugeSchoolgirl: She's a twelve-year-old student, described as gangly and awkward, who—at a confirmed height of 5'11" (slightly over 180cm) and still growing—is already promising to be taller than her adoptive father.  [[spoiler:Not too surprising, considering that her birth mother was 6'8"...]]

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* HugeSchoolgirl: She's a twelve-year-old student, described as gangly and awkward, who—at a confirmed height of 5'11" (slightly over 180cm) and still growing—is already promising to be taller than her adoptive father.  [[spoiler:Not too surprising, considering that her birth mother was 6'8"...6'8" (203cm)...]]


* HugeSchoolgirl: She's a twelve-year-old student, described as gangly and awkward, who—at a confirmed height of 5'11" and still growing—is already promising to be taller than her adoptive father.  [[spoiler:Not too surprising, considering that her birth mother was 6'8"...]]

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* HugeSchoolgirl: She's a twelve-year-old student, described as gangly and awkward, who—at a confirmed height of 5'11" (slightly over 180cm) and still growing—is already promising to be taller than her adoptive father.  [[spoiler:Not too surprising, considering that her birth mother was 6'8"...]]


* AllThereInTheManual: The story summary discloses the viewpoint character's place of residence, and her name is given as "Hakini" in the tags. The author has also offhandedly revealed other details elsewhere.

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* AllThereInTheManual: The story summary discloses the viewpoint character's place of residence, and [[AllThereInTheScript her name is given as "Hakini" revealed in the tags. tags]]. The author has also offhandedly revealed other details elsewhere.elsewhere.
* AllThereInTheScript: Her name is given as "Hakini" in the work tags.


* TitleDrop: In the second-to-last paragraph; and it doesn't just apply to Hakini.

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* TitleDrop: In the second-to-last paragraph; and it doesn't just apply to Hakini.Hakini:
-->"She’d [[HappilyAdopted asked her parents, once, about the people who’d brought her into the world]]. They [[LockedOutOfTheLoop hadn’t been told names]]—only that they were better off not knowing."


* PlayingWithFire: Hakini is stated to be a firebender. [[spoiler:Yet ''another'' way in which she takes after Mama.]]

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* PlayingWithFire: Hakini is stated to be a firebender. [[spoiler:Yet ''another'' way in which she takes after Mama.her birth mother.]]


* OriginalCharacter: Hakini is one, as are her parents[[spoiler:; "the people who'd brought her into the world," however, are canon antagonists]].

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* OriginalCharacter: Hakini is one, as are [[HappilyAdopted her parents[[spoiler:; parents]][[spoiler:; "the people who'd brought her into the world," however, are canon antagonists]].

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* OriginalCharacter: Hakini is one, as are her parents[[spoiler:; "the people who'd brought her into the world," however, are canon antagonists]].


A [[FlashFiction brief]] SliceOfLife [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3909817 fanfic]] based on ''WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfKorra'', written by {{AO3}} user [=RhazadeWaterbender=].

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A [[FlashFiction brief]] SliceOfLife [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3909817 fanfic]] based on ''WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfKorra'', written by {{AO3}} Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn user [=RhazadeWaterbender=].



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* TitleDrop: In the second-to-last paragraph; and it doesn't just apply to Hakini.

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* TitleDrop: In the second-to-last paragraph; and it doesn't just apply to Hakini.Hakini.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: The title says it all; and it applies not ''only'' to Hakini, but to her adoptive parents as well.



* TitleDrop: In the second-to-last paragraph.  Applied not only to Hakini, but to her adoptive parents as well.

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* TitleDrop: In the second-to-last paragraph.  Applied not only paragraph; and it doesn't just apply to Hakini, but to her adoptive parents as well.Hakini.

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* ElsewhereFic: Although it's roughly concurrent with the Book 3 finale, it's set "somewhere in the Fire Nation." As such, no canon characters actually appear.


* NoInfantileAmnesia: Downplayed. Hakini was born in the [[SeasonalBaggage summer]], but her earliest memory is of "bone-crushing cold."  [[spoiler:Considering her age, she'd have been conceived shortly before the Red Lotus "[[QuirkyMinibossSquad op team]]" were incarcerated and born in [[TailorMadePrison P'Li's cell]]. And ice crevasses, after all, tend to be cold all year round.]]

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* NoInfantileAmnesia: Downplayed. Hakini was born in the [[SeasonalBaggage summer]], but her earliest memory is of "bone-crushing cold."  [[spoiler:Considering her age, she'd have been conceived shortly before the Red Lotus "[[QuirkyMinibossSquad op team]]" were incarcerated and born in [[TailorMadePrison P'Li's cell]]. And cell]]; ice crevasses, after all, crevasses tend to be cold all year round.throughout the year.]]


* AllThereInTheManual: The story summary discloses the viewpoint character's place of residence, and her name is given as "Hakini" in the tags The author has also offhandedly revealed other details elsewhere.

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* AllThereInTheManual: The story summary discloses the viewpoint character's place of residence, and her name is given as "Hakini" in the tags tags. The author has also offhandedly revealed other details elsewhere.


* AllThereInTheManual: The author has offhandedly revealed—among other details not made explicit in the story—the viewpoint character's name, height, and place of residence.

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* AllThereInTheManual: The author has offhandedly revealed—among other details not made explicit in story summary discloses the story—the viewpoint character's name, height, and place of residence.residence, and her name is given as "Hakini" in the tags The author has also offhandedly revealed other details elsewhere.


* GiveHerANormalLife: Implied [[spoiler:, although the choice wasn't made by her biological parents]].

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* GiveHerANormalLife: Implied [[spoiler:, Implied[[spoiler:, although the choice wasn't made by her biological parents]].

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