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** [[spoiler: [[RapeAsDrama Not-so-attempted]] later on.]]
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* {{Cameo}}: Look for Sergeant Schultz from Series/HogansHeroes in there.
* {{Crossover}}: With Film/InglouriousBasterds and VideoGame/CodenamePanzers.
* {{Crossover}}: With Film/InglouriousBasterds and VideoGame/CodenamePanzers.
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* {{Cameo}}: {{Crossover}}: With ''Film/InglouriousBasterds'' and ''VideoGame/CodenamePanzers''.
* CrossoverCameo: Look for Sergeant Schultz fromSeries/HogansHeroes ''Series/HogansHeroes'' in there.
* {{Crossover}}: With Film/InglouriousBasterds and VideoGame/CodenamePanzers.there.
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* {{Crossover}}: With Film/InglouriousBasterds and VideoGame/CodenamePanzers.
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* [[spoiler: KillEmAll: Virtually everybody in the unit dies, and the deaths of the more important characters, like Welkin's, Isara's or even Alicia's, are mentioned almost off-handedly.]]
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* RareGuns: The M50 Reising submachine gun and M1941 Johnson appear in the fic, seemingly as standard US Army munitions.
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A fanfic concerning a [[AlternateUniverse rewritten history,]] told from the points of view of [[OriginalCharacter Original Characters]] such as Captain Von Groebel, and [[FaceHeelTurn Dishonorably Discharged]] Fredrick "Fritz" Adler, of the German army, and established characters such as Alicia Melchiott, and the occasional [[UsefulNotes/AdolfHitler real life German]] and [[UsefulNotes/BenitoMussolini Italian dictator]], though the former only appeared in the geopolitical setting-up of things.
Read it [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5430641/1/Battlefield_Gallia here]].
Read it [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5430641/1/Battlefield_Gallia here]].
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* CreatorBacklash: From the Author's FF.net page: "Battlefield Gallia sucks. Stop reading it. It was OK back when I was writing it, but now I really regret writing it. I'm going to be remembered as the guy who made the VC/WWII crossover."
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An ongoing fic concerning a [[AlternateUniverse rewritten history,]] told from the points of view of [[OriginalCharacter Original Characters]] such as Captain Von Groebel, and [[FaceHeelTurn Dishonorably Discharged]] Fredrick "Fritz" Adler, of the German army, and established characters such as Alicia Melchiott, and the occasional [[UsefulNotes/AdolfHitler real life German]] and [[UsefulNotes/BenitoMussolini Italian dictator]], though the former only appeared in the geopolitical setting-up of things.
* And I'd damn well better know all this. I'm the guy writing it.
It's now completed, but if you want to read it, be my guest, read it here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5430641/1/Battlefield_Gallia
* And I'd damn well better know all this. I'm the guy writing it.
It's now completed, but if you want to read it, be my guest, read it here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5430641/1/Battlefield_Gallia
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* And I'd damn well better know all this. I'm the guy writing it.
It's now completed, but if you want to read it, be my guest, read
Read it
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* ThoseWackyNazis / StupidJetpackHitler : Hmm...
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* BlondGuysAreEvil: Klaus Werner
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An ongoing fic concerning a [[AlternateUniverse rewritten history,]] told from the points of view of [[OriginalCharacter Original Characters]] such as Captain Von Groebel, and [[FaceHeelTurn Dishonorably Discharged]] Fredrick "Fritz" Adler, of the German army, and established characters such as Alicia Melchiott, and the occasional [[UsefulNotes/AdolfHitler real life German]] and [[BenitoMussolini [[UsefulNotes/BenitoMussolini Italian dictator]], though the former only appeared in the geopolitical setting-up of things.
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* {{Crossover}}: With Film/InglouriousBasterds and CodenamePanzers.
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An ongoing fic concerning a [[AlternateUniverse rewritten history,]] told from the points of view of [[OriginalCharacter Original Characters]] such as Captain Von Groebel, and [[FaceHeelTurn Dishonorably Discharged]] Fredrick "Fritz" Adler, of the German army, and established characters such as Alicia Melchiott, and the occasional [[AdolfHitler [[UsefulNotes/AdolfHitler real life German]] and [[BenitoMussolini Italian dictator]], though the former only appeared in the geopolitical setting-up of things.
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Think of the [[WorldWarTwo most famous conflict of the last century.]]
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Think of the [[WorldWarTwo [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarTwo most famous conflict of the last century.]]
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* {{Cameo}}: Look for Sergeant Schultz from HogansHeroes in there.
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* {{Cameo}}: Look for Sergeant Schultz from HogansHeroes Series/HogansHeroes in there.
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* {{Crossover}}: With InglouriousBasterds and CodenamePanzers.
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* {{Crossover}}: With InglouriousBasterds Film/InglouriousBasterds and CodenamePanzers.
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** Doubles, at least to me, the Author, as a degree of FetishFuel. Come now, there was reasoning behind me giving Marina a German Accent.
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** Doubles, at least to me, the Author, as a degree of FetishFuel.Fetish Fuel. Come now, there was reasoning behind me giving Marina a German Accent.
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Now think of it with [[ValkyriaChronicles some changes.]]
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Now think of it with [[ValkyriaChronicles [[VideoGame/ValkyriaChronicles some changes.]]
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* DidNotDoTheResearch: Averted, and the author is also willing to clear things up.
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* [[GibbsSlap Wade Thunk]]: US Army 501st Infantry Battalion. Sergeant Adam Wade to Harold Maldonado.
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* ShoutOut: The name, to games such as {{Battlefield}} 1942.
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* ShoutOut: The name, to games such as {{Battlefield}} 1942.''VideoGame/{{Battlefield}} 1942''.
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* {{Expy}}: Schneider; He's a [[TeamFortress2 Pyro]], after all.
** Elaborating on this, Oleg Vodnik (the older Vodnik brother, the younger being Sergei) seems to [[CargoShip like his DP Machine Gun,]] [[ICallItVera Ludmilla,]] as though it/she was a person. To add to the squick, [[BrotherSisterIncest he considers it his sister]]. It is quite clear RedShocktrooper plays ''TeamFortress2''.
** Elaborating on this, Oleg Vodnik (the older Vodnik brother, the younger being Sergei) seems to [[CargoShip like his DP Machine Gun,]] [[ICallItVera Ludmilla,]] as though it/she was a person. To add to the squick, [[BrotherSisterIncest he considers it his sister]]. It is quite clear RedShocktrooper plays ''TeamFortress2''.
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* {{Expy}}: Schneider; He's a [[TeamFortress2 [[VideoGame/TeamFortress2 Pyro]], after all.
** Elaborating on this, Oleg Vodnik (the older Vodnik brother, the younger being Sergei) seems to [[CargoShip like his DP Machine Gun,]] [[ICallItVera Ludmilla,]] as though it/she was a person. To add to the squick, [[BrotherSisterIncest he considers it his sister]]. It is quite clear RedShocktrooper plays''TeamFortress2''.''VideoGame/TeamFortress2''.
** Elaborating on this, Oleg Vodnik (the older Vodnik brother, the younger being Sergei) seems to [[CargoShip like his DP Machine Gun,]] [[ICallItVera Ludmilla,]] as though it/she was a person. To add to the squick, [[BrotherSisterIncest he considers it his sister]]. It is quite clear RedShocktrooper plays
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It's a work in progress, but if you want to read it, be my guest, read it here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5430641/1/Battlefield_Gallia
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It's a work in progress, now completed, but if you want to read it, be my guest, read it here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5430641/1/Battlefield_Gallia
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Selvaria is disgusted when a Russian Commisar fires upon ''his own men''.
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* CreatorBacklash: From the Author's FF.net page: "Battlefield Gallia sucks. Stop reading it. It was OK back when I was writing it, but now I really regret writing it. I'm going to be remembered as the guy who made the VC/WWII crossover."
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* [[spoiler: KillEmAll: Virtually everybody in the unit dies, and the deaths of the more important characters, like Welkin's, Isara's or even Alicia's, are mentioned almost off-handedly.]]