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* SneezeCut: After noticing a look in his mother's eyes after it turned out poor Kuno's PowerInconsistency issues was due to someone going beyond the call of fairness, Minato offers a silent prayer to any soul stupid enough to royally piss her off like that. Coincidentally, several people in the city sneeze at exactly that moment.
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* SneezeCut: After noticing a look in his mother's eyes after it turned out poor Kuno's PowerInconsistency PowerIncontinence issues was due to someone going beyond the call of fairness, Minato offers a silent prayer to any soul stupid enough to royally piss her off like that. Coincidentally, several people in the city sneeze at exactly that moment.
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* MindlinkMates: Sekirei, as usual.It's noted that Minato is becoming more confident as a result of the bonds he has with his Sekirei, and his Sekirei are calmed in turn, though the number of Sekirei in Minato's flock has resulted in the effects being most prominent in him. One example of this in the Sekirei is how Mastu is less likely to go into a rant.
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* MindlinkMates: Sekirei, as usual.It's noted that Minato is becoming more confident as a result of the bonds he has with his Sekirei, and his Sekirei are calmed in turn, though the number of Sekirei in Minato's flock has resulted in the effects being most prominent in him. One example of this in the Sekirei is how Mastu Matsu is less likely to go into a rant.
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** To start, unless a Sekirei is a Single Number, their number says absolute nothing about their true strength.
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** To start, unless a Sekirei is a Single Number, their number says absolute absolutely nothing about their true strength.
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* SmallNameBigEgo: Amebane. He believes that as the Thirteenth Sekirei, he is on the higher end of the power spectrum, but there are two problems with that.
** To start, unless a Sekirei is a Single Number, their number says absolute nothing about their true strength.
** Second and more importantly, the nature of the bond between Sekirei and Ashikabi plays a major role in how strong they are. With Amebane's extremely misogynistic attitude and his Ashikabi's masochistic nature being an extremely unhealthy and self-destructive relationship, not even [[BeginWithAFinisher opening with his Norito]] saw him hopelessly outclassed against Shinna's Death Garden attack.
** To start, unless a Sekirei is a Single Number, their number says absolute nothing about their true strength.
** Second and more importantly, the nature of the bond between Sekirei and Ashikabi plays a major role in how strong they are. With Amebane's extremely misogynistic attitude and his Ashikabi's masochistic nature being an extremely unhealthy and self-destructive relationship, not even [[BeginWithAFinisher opening with his Norito]] saw him hopelessly outclassed against Shinna's Death Garden attack.
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* LostLenore: Takehito Asama for both Miya and [[HeterosexualLifePartners Minaka]]. Minaka even admits that while Takami is intelligent enough for him to find attractive, Takehito was one of, if not the only, the few people he considered his equal.
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* LostLenore: Takehito Asama for both Miya and [[HeterosexualLifePartners Minaka]]. Minaka even admits that while Takami is intelligent enough for him to find attractive, Takehito was one of, of the, if not the only, the few people he considered his equal.
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* RationalFic: Considering the author, it's not a surprise that many characters act more rationally than in canon.
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* LostLenore: Takehito Asama for both Miya and [[HeterosexaulLifePartners Minaka]]. Minaka even admits that while Takami is intelligent enough for him to find attractive, Takehito was one of, if not the only, the few people he considered his equal.
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* LostLenore: Takehito Asama for both Miya and [[HeterosexaulLifePartners [[HeterosexualLifePartners Minaka]]. Minaka even admits that while Takami is intelligent enough for him to find attractive, Takehito was one of, if not the only, the few people he considered his equal.
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* LostLenore: Takehito Asama for both Miya and [[HeterosexaulLifePartner Minaka]]. Minaka even admits that while Takami is intelligent enough for him to find attractive, Takehito was one of, if not the only, the few people he considered his equal.
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* LostLenore: Takehito Asama for both Miya and [[HeterosexaulLifePartner [[HeterosexaulLifePartners Minaka]]. Minaka even admits that while Takami is intelligent enough for him to find attractive, Takehito was one of, if not the only, the few people he considered his equal.
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* LostLenore: Takehito Asama for both Miya and [[HeterosexaulLifePartner Minaka]]. Minaka even admits that while Takami is intelligent enough for him to find attractive, Takehito was one of, if not the only, the few people he considered his equal.
