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don't hide spoilers from a fic's source material, and super don't hide spoilers that are literally only one letter long
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4705891/1/Apples-Equals-Cyanide-Equals-Light Apples Equals Cyanide Equals Light]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/745409/Silver-Pard Silver Pard]] is a ''Manga/DeathNote'' ContinuationFic in which Light becomes a Shinigami after [[spoiler: his death.]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4705891/1/Apples-Equals-Cyanide-Equals-Light Apples Equals Cyanide Equals Light]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/745409/Silver-Pard Silver Pard]] is a ''Manga/DeathNote'' ContinuationFic in which Light becomes a Shinigami after [[spoiler: his death.]]
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* AllForNothing: In the context of this story's events, Near thinks everything he did to [[spoiler: defeat Light]] might be this.
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* AllForNothing: In the context of this story's events, Near thinks everything he did to [[spoiler: defeat Light]] Light might be this.
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* CreepySouvenir: Ryuk collects mementos from humans who owned his notebook. That includes the bullets he dug out of [[spoiler: Light's body.]] Similarly, Kira keeps a finger puppet of [[spoiler: L]] as an earring.
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* CreepySouvenir: Ryuk collects mementos from humans who owned his notebook. That includes the bullets he dug out of [[spoiler: Light's body.]] body. Similarly, Kira keeps a finger puppet of [[spoiler: L]] L as an earring.
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* GhostAmnesia: If [[spoiler: Kira]] has any memories of his human life, they are dormant.
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* GhostAmnesia: If [[spoiler: Kira]] Kira has any memories of his human life, they are dormant.
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* TheseHandsHaveKilled: “No matter how much (Matsuda) scrubs he can't get [[spoiler: Light's]] blood off his hands.”
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* TheseHandsHaveKilled: “No "No matter how much (Matsuda) scrubs he can't get [[spoiler: Light's]] Light's blood off his hands.”"
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* GhostAmnesia: If [[spoiler: Kira]] has any memories of his human life they are dormant.
* GuiltComplex: [[spoiler: Shooting Light]] has taken its toll on Matsuda, and left him feeling very guilty.
* GuiltComplex: [[spoiler: Shooting Light]] has taken its toll on Matsuda, and left him feeling very guilty.
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* GhostAmnesia: If [[spoiler: Kira]] has any memories of his human life life, they are dormant.
* GuiltComplex: [[spoiler: Shooting Light]] has taken its toll on Matsuda, and left him feeling very guilty.dormant.
* GuiltComplex: [[spoiler: Shooting Light]] has taken its toll on Matsuda, and left him feeling very guilty.
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* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: Kira doesn't kill [[spoiler: Matsuda]] with the rest of the [[spoiler: task force]] so that he could spread the story.
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* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: Kira doesn't kill [[spoiler: Matsuda]] with the rest of the [[spoiler: former task force]] so that he could spread the story.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4705891/1/Apples-Equals-Cyanide-Equals-Light Apples Equals Cyanide Equals Light]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/745409/Silver-Pard Silver Pard]] is a ''Manga/DeathNote'' ContinuationFic, and RevengeFic in which Light becomes a Shinigami after [[spoiler: his death.]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4705891/1/Apples-Equals-Cyanide-Equals-Light Apples Equals Cyanide Equals Light]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/745409/Silver-Pard Silver Pard]] is a ''Manga/DeathNote'' ContinuationFic, and RevengeFic ContinuationFic in which Light becomes a Shinigami after [[spoiler: his death.]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4705891/1/Apples-Equals-Cyanide-Equals-Light Apples Equals Cyanide Equals Light]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/745409/Silver-Pard Silver Pard]] is a ''Manga/DeathNote'' ContinuationFic, and RevengeFic in which [[spoiler: Light]] becomes a Shinigami after [[spoiler: his death.]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4705891/1/Apples-Equals-Cyanide-Equals-Light Apples Equals Cyanide Equals Light]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/745409/Silver-Pard Silver Pard]] is a ''Manga/DeathNote'' ContinuationFic, and RevengeFic in which [[spoiler: Light]] Light becomes a Shinigami after [[spoiler: his death.]]
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* GuiltComplex: [[spoiler: Shooting Light]] has taken its toll on Matsuda, and left him with crushing guilt.
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* GuiltComplex: [[spoiler: Shooting Light]] has taken its toll on Matsuda, and left him with crushing guilt.feeling very guilty.
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* GuiltComplex: [[spoiler: Shooting Light]] has taken its toll on Matsuda, and left him feeling very guilty.
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* GuiltComplex: [[spoiler: Shooting Light]] has taken its toll on Matsuda, and left him feeling very guilty.with crushing guilt.
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"''Apples Equals Cyanide Equals Light: Ryuk’s favourite equation. It means the death of boredom, the only death that actually matters.''"
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''"Apples Equals Cyanide Equals Light: Ryuk’s favourite equation. It means the death of boredom, the only death that actually matters."''
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